Wikipedia:Ambassadors/Editing Fridays/06-05-2011

Student articles needing cleanup:

Alwasat (Bahraini newspaper)
 * 
 * <-- very nice.

California Smog Check Program
 * Removed about 50% as unref'd, see
 * Copied unref'd to talk page; can be added back w/ refs if possible
 * Cleaned ->

Conservation Effects Assessment Project
 * needs lists turned into prose

Excessive bail
 * I have done some. It needs references badly.

Native American Fish and Wildlife Society Done all I could stomach:
 * Totally unreferenced, so it's hard to justify investing any more time in it for now.
 * Changed to 'unreferenced'
 * Per above - unref'd...can't do anything. Needs rewriting from sources, obv

Telecommunications policy of the United States this article seems as if it was intentionally padded for length. *** COPYVIO *** ? e.g. google "Telecommunications policy is concerned with the" "deemed essential that we have in place a dedicated network" +close paraphrase e.g.

(Dec 9, 2010, verbatim copy)


 * Needs thorough check of copyvio / close-paraphrasing; some may predate current edits
 * that explains why the writing seemed terribly inconsistent

United Nations Foundation

Utility-possibility frontier
 * Someone more knowledgeable on economics should probably read this over in a bit

Added some refs; honestly I'm too tired to learn this :P
 * Wikipedia_talk:WikiProject_Economics