Wikipedia:Ambassadors/Research/Article quality/Completed

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Reviewer:

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Total: 14 –p joe f (talk • contribs) 10:43, 24 May 2012 (UTC)


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Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 6
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Total: 16 sonia  (talk) 02:06, 27 June 2012 (UTC)


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Reviewer:

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Total: 18

Steven Walling &bull; talk   02:48, 27 June 2012 (UTC)

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 * Reviewer 1

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Total: 12 –p joe f (talk • contribs) 10:43, 24 May 2012 (UTC)


 * Reviewer 2

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 6
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 * Readability: 1
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Total: 13 sonia  (talk) 01:59, 27 June 2012 (UTC)


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Total: 12

Steven Walling &bull; talk   02:50, 27 June 2012 (UTC)

New Article

 * Reviewer 1

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 * Comprehensiveness: 6
 * Sourcing: 4
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Total: 15 –p joe f (talk • contribs) 07:52, 21 May 2012 (UTC)


 * Reviewer 2

Reviewer: User:Slaporte

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 7
 * Sourcing: 2
 * Neutrality: 3
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Total: 16 Stephen (talk) 02:21, 27 June 2012 (UTC)


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Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 7
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 * Neutrality: 2
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Total: 19 Accedie  talk to me  03:29, 27 June 2012 (UTC)

New Article

 * Reviewer 1

Reviewer: AndrewN  talk 00:22, 24 May 2012 (UTC)

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 7
 * Sourcing: 2
 * Neutrality: 3
 * Readability: 3
 * Formatting: 2
 * Illustrations: 1

Total: 18


 * Reviewer 2

Reviewer:

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 * Comprehensiveness: 5
 * Sourcing: 1
 * Neutrality: 1
 * Readability: 2
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Total: 11 –p joe f (talk • contribs) 14:40, 18 June 2012 (UTC)


 * Reviewer 3

Reviewer: User:Slaporte

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 6
 * Sourcing: 1
 * Neutrality: 3
 * Readability: 2
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 * Illustrations: 1

Total: 15 Stephen (talk) 03:27, 27 June 2012 (UTC)

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Reviewer:Graeme Bartlett (talk)

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 * Comprehensiveness:1
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 * Neutrality:3
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 * Reviewer 2

Reviewer:

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 * Comprehensiveness: 1
 * Sourcing: 3
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 * Readability: 1
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Total: 8 –p joe f (talk • contribs) 14:13, 18 June 2012 (UTC)


 * Reviewer 3

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Total: 6  Blue Rasberry    (talk)   15:07, 20 June 2012 (UTC)

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Reviewer:Graeme Bartlett (talk)

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 * Comprehensiveness:4
 * Sourcing:3.5
 * Neutrality:3
 * Readability:2.5
 * Formatting: 1.5
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Total:14.5


 * Reviewer 2

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 5
 * Sourcing: 3
 * Neutrality: 2
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 * Formatting: 1
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Total: 13 –p joe f (talk • contribs) 14:13, 18 June 2012 (UTC)


 * Reviewer 3

Reviewer:

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 * Formatting: 1
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Total: 13  Blue Rasberry    (talk)   15:08, 20 June 2012 (UTC)

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Reviewer:Graeme Bartlett (talk)

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 * Comprehensiveness:6
 * Sourcing:5
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 * Readability:2
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 * Reviewer 2

Reviewer:

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 * Comprehensiveness: 6
 * Sourcing: 4
 * Neutrality: 2
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Total: 17 –p joe f (talk • contribs) 14:13, 18 June 2012 (UTC)


 * Reviewer 3

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 7
 * Sourcing: 5
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 0
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Total: 17

Steven Walling &bull; talk   02:30, 27 June 2012 (UTC)

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 * Reviewer 1

Reviewer:Graeme Bartlett (talk)

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness:6
 * Sourcing:5
 * Neutrality:3
 * Readability:2
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 * Reviewer 2

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 6
 * Sourcing: 4
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 2
 * Formatting: 2
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Total: 17 –p joe f (talk • contribs) 14:13, 18 June 2012 (UTC)
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Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 8
 * Sourcing: 6
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 * Readability: 0
 * Formatting: 1
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Total: 19

Steven Walling &bull; talk   02:36, 27 June 2012 (UTC)

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 * Reviewer 1

Reviewer:Graeme Bartlett (talk)

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness:7.5
 * Sourcing:5
 * Neutrality:3
 * Readability:3
 * Formatting: 1.5
 * Illustrations:1

Total:21


 * Reviewer 2

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 7
 * Sourcing: 4
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 2
 * Formatting: 2
 * Illustrations: 2

Total: 19 –p joe f (talk • contribs) 14:13, 18 June 2012 (UTC)


 * Reviewer 3

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 9
 * Sourcing: 4
 * Neutrality: 3
 * Readability: 2
 * Formatting: 2
 * Illustrations: 2

Total: 21

Steven Walling &bull; talk   03:15, 27 June 2012 (UTC)

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 * Reviewer 1

Reviewer:Graeme Bartlett (talk)

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness:8
 * Sourcing:5
 * Neutrality:3
 * Readability:3
 * Formatting: 1.5
 * Illustrations:1

Total:21.5


 * Reviewer 2

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 7
 * Sourcing: 4
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 2
 * Formatting: 2
 * Illustrations: 2

Total: 19 –p joe f (talk • contribs) 14:13, 18 June 2012 (UTC)


 * Reviewer 3

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 9
 * Sourcing: 4
 * Neutrality: 3
 * Readability: 2
 * Formatting: 2
 * Illustrations: 2

Total: 21

Steven Walling &bull; talk   03:21, 27 June 2012 (UTC)

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 * Comprehensiveness: 5
 * Sourcing: 3
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 1
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Total: 12 –p joe f (talk • contribs) 09:50, 18 June 2012 (UTC)


 * Reviewer 2

Reviewer: Mattsenate (talk) 03:23, 27 June 2012 (UTC)

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 5
 * Sourcing: 2
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 2
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 0

Total: 12


 * Reviewer 3

Reviewer: Maximilianklein (talk)

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 8
 * Sourcing: 5
 * Neutrality:3
 * Readability: 2
 * Formatting: 2
 * Illustrations: 0

Total: 20

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 * Sourcing: 3
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Total: 14 –p joe f (talk • contribs) 12:26, 18 June 2012 (UTC)


 * Reviewer 2

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 5
 * Sourcing: 5
 * Neutrality: 3
 * Readability: 1
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Total: 17

Steven Walling &bull; talk   01:35, 27 June 2012 (UTC)


 * Reviewer 3

Reviewer: Graeme Bartlett (talk)

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 4
 * Sourcing: 4
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 1.5
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 1

Total: 13.5

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Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 5
 * Sourcing: 4
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 1
 * Formatting: 2
 * Illustrations: 1

Total: 15 –p joe f (talk • contribs) 12:26, 18 June 2012 (UTC)


 * Reviewer 2

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Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 5
 * Sourcing: 5
 * Neutrality: 3
 * Readability: 1
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Total: 17

Comment: 2 citations added, otherwise no substantial changes. Steven Walling &bull; talk   01:35, 27 June 2012 (UTC)


 * Reviewer 3

Reviewer: Graeme Bartlett (talk)

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 4
 * Sourcing: 4
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 1.5
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 1

Total: 13.5

New Article

 * Reviewer 1

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 3
 * Sourcing: 2
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 1
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Total: 10 –p joe f (talk • contribs) 12:26, 18 June 2012 (UTC)


 * Reviewer 2

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 3
 * Sourcing: 2
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 1
 * Formatting: 1
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Total: 10


 * Reviewer 3

Reviewer: Kaldari (talk) 02:10, 27 June 2012 (UTC)

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 2
 * Sourcing: 1
 * Neutrality: 3
 * Readability: 2
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 0

Total: 9

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Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 6
 * Sourcing: 2
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 * Readability: 1
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Total: 13 –p joe f (talk • contribs) 11:58, 18 June 2012 (UTC)


 * Reviewer 2

Reviewer: Dcoetzee 01:01, 27 June 2012 (UTC)

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 3
 * Sourcing: 3
 * Neutrality: 0
 * Readability: 2
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 1

Total: 10


 * Reviewer 3

Reviewer: User:Slaporte

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 4
 * Sourcing: 1
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 2
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 0

Total: 10 Stephen (talk) 01:06, 27 June 2012 (UTC)

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Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 4
 * Sourcing: 3
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 1
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 0

Total: 11 –p joe f (talk • contribs) 11:58, 18 June 2012 (UTC)


 * Reviewer 2

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness:3
 * Sourcing:2
 * Neutrality:2
 * Readability:2
 * Formatting: 1
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Total:10  Blue Rasberry    (talk)   16:08, 19 June 2012 (UTC)


 * Reviewer 3

Reviewer: Dcoetzee 01:54, 27 June 2012 (UTC)

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 4
 * Sourcing: 6
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 3
 * Formatting: 2
 * Illustrations: 0

Total: 20

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Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 6
 * Sourcing: 3
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 2
 * Formatting: 1
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Total: 14 –p joe f (talk • contribs) 11:58, 18 June 2012 (UTC)


 * Reviewer 2

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness:5
 * Sourcing:2
 * Neutrality:2
 * Readability:2
 * Formatting: 2
 * Illustrations:0

Total:13  Blue Rasberry    (talk)   16:10, 19 June 2012 (UTC)


 * Reviewer 3

Reviewer: Dcoetzee 01:54, 27 June 2012 (UTC)

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 10
 * Sourcing: 2
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 2
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 0

Total: 17

New Article

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Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 5
 * Sourcing: 2
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 1
 * Formatting: 1
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Total: 11 –p joe f (talk • contribs) 11:58, 18 June 2012 (UTC)


 * Reviewer 2

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 4
 * Sourcing: 2
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 2
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 0

Total: 11


 * Reviewer 3

Reviewer: Kaldari (talk) 02:28, 27 June 2012 (UTC)

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 4
 * Sourcing: 1
 * Neutrality: 3
 * Readability: 2
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 0

Total: 11


 * Reviewer 4

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 3
 * Sourcing: 0
 * Neutrality: 1
 * Readability: 1
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Total: 5

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Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 4
 * Sourcing: 3
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 1
 * Formatting: 2
 * Illustrations: 0

Total: 12 –p joe f (talk • contribs) 09:44, 18 June 2012 (UTC)


 * Reviewer 2

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness:4
 * Sourcing:3
 * Neutrality:1
 * Readability:1
 * Formatting: 2
 * Illustrations:0

Total: 11  Blue Rasberry    (talk)   18:22, 19 June 2012 (UTC)


 * Reviewer 3

Reviewer: Maggie Dennis (WMF) (talk)

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 4
 * Sourcing: 4
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 1
 * Formatting: 2
 * Illustrations: 0

Total: 13 --Maggie Dennis (WMF) (talk) 23:49, 26 June 2012 (UTC)

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 * Comprehensiveness: 5
 * Sourcing: 3
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 1
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 0

Total: 12 –p joe f (talk • contribs) 09:44, 18 June 2012 (UTC)


 * Reviewer 2

Reviewer:

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 * Sourcing:3
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Total: 12 The student made substantial improvements to content and sourcing and also rearranged content thoughtfully. I added a point to comprehensiveness to show a relative change but.  Blue Rasberry   (talk)   18:35, 19 June 2012 (UTC)


 * Reviewer 3

Reviewer: Maggie Dennis (WMF) (talk)

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 4
 * Sourcing: 3
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 1
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 0

Total: 11 (While this article is expanded in some interesting directions, I don't feel its comprehensiveness is substantially improved and I'm afraid formatting and sourcing both suffered for me. I don't know how to find "Alcaide, J. et al., 2012" and the material in the lead has no sourcing at all. One whole section lacks footnotes.) --Maggie Dennis (WMF) (talk) 23:57, 26 June 2012 (UTC)

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 * Sourcing: 3
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 1
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Total: 12 –p joe f (talk • contribs) 09:44, 18 June 2012 (UTC)


 * Reviewer 2

Reviewer: Maximiliankleinoclc (talk)

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 7
 * Sourcing: 4
 * Neutrality: 1
 * Readability: 2
 * Formatting: 2
 * Illustrations: 0

Total: 16


 * Reviewer 3

Reviewer: Graeme Bartlett (talk)

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 6
 * Sourcing: 4
 * Neutrality: 1.5
 * Readability: 2
 * Formatting: 1.5
 * Illustrations: 0.5

Total: 15.5

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 * Reviewer 1

Reviewer:Graeme Bartlett (talk)

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness:2
 * Sourcing:3
 * Neutrality:1
 * Readability:2
 * Formatting: 1.5
 * Illustrations:0

Total:9.5


 * Reviewer 2

Reviewer:

Scores:
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 * Sourcing: 3
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 1
 * Formatting: 1
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Total: 9 –p joe f (talk • contribs) 09:21, 18 June 2012 (UTC)


 * Reviewer 3

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 2
 * Sourcing: 4
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 2
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 0

Total: 11 --Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 10:52, 18 June 2012 (UTC)

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 * Sourcing: 5
 * Neutrality: 2
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 * Formatting: 1
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Total: 15 Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 16:33, 26 May 2012 (UTC)


 * Reviewer 2

Reviewer:

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 * Sourcing: 3
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 1
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 0

Total: 12 –p joe f (talk • contribs) 16:46, 18 June 2012 (UTC)


 * Reviewer 3

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 7
 * Sourcing: 3
 * Neutrality: 3
 * Readability: 3
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 0

Total: 17 Accedie  talk to me  02:23, 27 June 2012 (UTC)

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 * Sourcing: 1
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 2
 * Formatting: 1
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Total: 7 Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 16:17, 26 May 2012 (UTC)


 * Reviewer 2

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 1
 * Sourcing: 3
 * Neutrality: 1
 * Readability: 1
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 0

Total: 7 –p joe f (talk • contribs) 16:46, 18 June 2012 (UTC)


 * Reviewer 3

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 1
 * Sourcing: 2
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 3
 * Formatting: 2
 * Illustrations: 0

Total: 10 Accedie  talk to me  02:32, 27 June 2012 (UTC)

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 * Sourcing: 3
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 2
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 0

Total: 11 Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 00:10, 25 May 2012 (UTC)


 * Reviewer 2

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 3
 * Sourcing: 2
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 1
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 0

Total: 9 –p joe f (talk • contribs) 14:37, 18 June 2012 (UTC)


 * Reviewer 3

Reviewer: Maximilianklein (talk)

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 3
 * Sourcing: 2
 * Neutrality: 1
 * Readability: 1
 * Formatting: 2
 * Illustrations: 0

Total: 9

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Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 8
 * Sourcing: 2
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 2
 * Formatting: 2
 * Illustrations: 2

Total: 18 --JayJasper (talk) 17:45, 15 June 2012 (UTC)


 * Reviewer 2

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 5
 * Sourcing: 3
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 1
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 1

Total: 13 –p joe f (talk • contribs) 11:24, 16 June 2012 (UTC)


 * Reviewer 3

Reviewer: Maximilianklein (talk)

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 6
 * Sourcing: 4
 * Neutrality: 1
 * Readability: 2
 * Formatting: 2
 * Illustrations: 0

Total: 15

New Article

 * Reviewer 1

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Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 5
 * Sourcing: 2
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 2
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 1

Total: 13 –p joe f (talk • contribs) 17:47, 17 June 2012 (UTC)


 * Reviewer 2

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 6
 * Sourcing: 4
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 2
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 0

Total:15 James of UR (talk) 01:22, 27 June 2012 (UTC)


 * Reviewer 3

Reviewer: User:Slaporte

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 8
 * Sourcing: 2
 * Neutrality: 3
 * Readability: 2
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 1

Total: 17 Stephen (talk) 02:50, 27 June 2012 (UTC)

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 * Reviewer 1

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Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 5
 * Sourcing: 4
 * Neutrality: 3
 * Readability: 2
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 0

Total: 15 Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 10:40, 15 June 2012 (UTC)


 * Reviewer 2

Reviewer: The Interior  (Talk) 22:45, 16 June 2012 (UTC)

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 6
 * Sourcing:4
 * Neutrality:3
 * Readability:2
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations:0

Total:16


 * Reviewer 3

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 3
 * Sourcing: 3
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 2
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 0

Total: 11 –p joe f (talk • contribs) 17:21, 18 June 2012 (UTC)

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Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 5
 * Sourcing: 4
 * Neutrality: 3
 * Readability: 2
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 0

Total: 15 Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 10:43, 15 June 2012 (UTC)


 * Reviewer 2

Reviewer: The Interior  (Talk) 22:53, 16 June 2012 (UTC)

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness:6
 * Sourcing:4
 * Neutrality:3
 * Readability:2
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations:0

Total: 16

Comment: Only addition was a short update to the subject's career. Cited, readable - but only a minor improvement. The Interior (Talk) 22:53, 16 June 2012 (UTC)


 * Reviewer 3

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Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 4
 * Sourcing: 3
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 2
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 0

Total: 12 –p joe f (talk • contribs) 17:21, 18 June 2012 (UTC)

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 * Sourcing: 2
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 1
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Total: 10 –p joe f (talk • contribs) 09:30, 18 June 2012 (UTC)


 * Reviewer 2

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness:4
 * Sourcing:1
 * Neutrality:2
 * Readability:1
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations:0

Total:9  Blue Rasberry    (talk)   18:06, 19 June 2012 (UTC)


 * Reviewer 3

Reviewer: Maggie Dennis (WMF) (talk)

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 4
 * Sourcing: 1
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 1
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 0

Total: 9 Maggie Dennis (WMF) (talk) 23:12, 26 June 2012 (UTC)

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 * Comprehensiveness: 4
 * Sourcing: 2
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 1
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 0

Total: 10 –p joe f (talk • contribs) 09:30, 18 June 2012 (UTC)


 * Reviewer 2

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Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness:4
 * Sourcing:1
 * Neutrality:2
 * Readability:1
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations:0

Total: 9 One sentence of moderate quality was added. No real change.  Blue Rasberry   (talk)   18:09, 19 June 2012 (UTC)


 * Reviewer 3

Reviewer: Maggie Dennis (WMF) (talk)

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 4
 * Sourcing: 1
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 1
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 0

Total: 9 (Left the article better than he or she found it - like especially the expansion to the lead sentence - but the second sentence badly needs context.) --Maggie Dennis (WMF) (talk) 23:15, 26 June 2012 (UTC)

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Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 4
 * Sourcing: 4
 * Neutrality: 3
 * Readability: 2
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 2

Total: 16 Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 00:05, 25 May 2012 (UTC)


 * Reviewer 2

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Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 4
 * Sourcing: 2
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 1
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 1

Total: 11 –p joe f (talk • contribs) 09:30, 18 June 2012 (UTC)


 * Reviewer 3

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness:5
 * Sourcing:3
 * Neutrality:2
 * Readability:1
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations:1

Total: 13  Blue Rasberry    (talk)   18:12, 19 June 2012 (UTC)

Post

 * Reviewer 1

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 4
 * Sourcing: 2
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 1
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 2

Total: 12 –p joe f (talk • contribs) 09:30, 18 June 2012 (UTC)


 * Reviewer 2

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness:4
 * Sourcing:2
 * Neutrality:2
 * Readability:1
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations:1

Total: 11 The student removed referenced content without explanation. Good content was lost.  Blue Rasberry   (talk)   18:20, 19 June 2012 (UTC)


 * Reviewer 3

Reviewer: Maximilianklein (talk)

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 6
 * Sourcing: 4
 * Neutrality: 3
 * Readability: 2
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 1

Total: 17

Pre

 * Reviewer 1

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 4
 * Sourcing: 2
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 1
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 2

Total: 12 –p joe f (talk • contribs) 09:30, 18 June 2012 (UTC)


 * Reviewer 2

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 3
 * Sourcing: 1
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 2
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 1

Total: 10


 * Reviewer 3

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness:3
 * Sourcing:1
 * Neutrality:2
 * Readability:2
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations:1

Total: 10  Blue Rasberry    (talk)   14:23, 20 June 2012 (UTC)

Post

 * Reviewer 1

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 4
 * Sourcing: 3
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 2
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 1

Total: 13 –p joe f (talk • contribs) 09:30, 18 June 2012 (UTC)


 * Reviewer 2

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 5
 * Sourcing: 4
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 2
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 1

Total: 15


 * Reviewer 3

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness:4
 * Sourcing:2
 * Neutrality:2
 * Readability:2
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations:1

Total: 12  Blue Rasberry    (talk)   14:25, 20 June 2012 (UTC)

Pre

 * Reviewer 1

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 3
 * Sourcing: 2
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 1
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 0

Total: 9 –p joe f (talk • contribs) 12:28, 18 June 2012 (UTC)


 * Reviewer 2

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 2
 * Sourcing: 1
 * Neutrality: 1
 * Readability: 1
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 0

Total: 6


 * Reviewer 3

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 4
 * Sourcing: 2
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 2
 * Formatting: 2
 * Illustrations: 0

Total: 12 Steven Walling &bull; talk   00:49, 27 June 2012 (UTC)

Post

 * Reviewer 1

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 3
 * Sourcing: 2
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 1
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 0

Total: 9 –p joe f (talk • contribs) 12:28, 18 June 2012 (UTC)


 * Reviewer 2

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 2
 * Sourcing: 1
 * Neutrality: 1
 * Readability: 1
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 0

Total: 6 Comment: There was only one minor change made to this article.


 * Reviewer 3

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 4
 * Sourcing: 2
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 2
 * Formatting: 2
 * Illustrations: 0

Total: 12

Comment: Change was minor Steven Walling &bull; talk   00:57, 27 June 2012 (UTC)

Pre

 * Reviewer 1

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 4
 * Sourcing: 3
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 2
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 0

Total: 12 –p joe f (talk • contribs) 12:21, 18 June 2012 (UTC)


 * Reviewer 2

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 4
 * Sourcing: 3
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 2
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 0

Total: 12 Smallman12q (talk)


 * Reviewer 3

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 4
 * Sourcing: 2
 * Neutrality: 1
 * Readability: 2
 * Formatting: 0
 * Illustrations: 0

Total: 9 Accedie  talk to me  00:49, 27 June 2012 (UTC)

Post

 * Reviewer 1

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 6
 * Sourcing: 3
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 2
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 0

Total: 14 –p joe f (talk • contribs) 12:21, 18 June 2012 (UTC)


 * Reviewer 2

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 7
 * Sourcing: 4
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 2
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 0

Total: 16


 * Reviewer 3

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 8
 * Sourcing: 4
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 2
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 0

Total: 17 Accedie  talk to me  01:01, 27 June 2012 (UTC)

New Article

 * Reviewer 1

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 3
 * Sourcing: 3
 * Neutrality: 1
 * Readability: 1
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 0

Total: 9 –p joe f (talk • contribs) 12:21, 18 June 2012 (UTC)


 * Reviewer 2

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 5
 * Sourcing: 4
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 2
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 0

Total: 14


 * Reviewer 3

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 5
 * Sourcing: 2
 * Neutrality: 3
 * Readability: 2
 * Formatting: 2
 * Illustrations: 0

Total: 14 Accedie  talk to me  01:22, 27 June 2012 (UTC)

New Article

 * Reviewer 1

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 3
 * Sourcing: 3
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 1
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 0

Total: 10 –p joe f (talk • contribs) 11:50, 18 June 2012 (UTC)


 * Reviewer 2

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness:3
 * Sourcing:2
 * Neutrality:2
 * Readability:1
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations:0

Total: 9  Blue Rasberry    (talk)   16:04, 19 June 2012 (UTC)


 * Reviewer 3

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 6
 * Sourcing: 2
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 1
 * Formatting: 2
 * Illustrations: 0

Total: 13

Steven Walling &bull; talk   01:09, 27 June 2012 (UTC)

New Article

 * Reviewer 1

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 3
 * Sourcing: 2
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 2
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 0

Total: 10 –p joe f (talk • contribs) 11:50, 18 June 2012 (UTC)


 * Reviewer 2

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 4
 * Sourcing: 2
 * Neutrality: 1
 * Readability: 1
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 0

Total: 9

Steven Walling &bull; talk   01:12, 27 June 2012 (UTC)


 * Reviewer 3

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 3
 * Sourcing: 3
 * Neutrality: 1
 * Readability: 1
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 0

Total: 9 Accedie  talk to me  01:28, 27 June 2012 (UTC)

Pre

 * Reviewer 1

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 4
 * Sourcing: 3
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 1
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 2

Total: 13 –p joe f (talk • contribs) 09:56, 18 June 2012 (UTC)


 * Reviewer 2

Reviewer: User:Slaporte

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 4
 * Sourcing: 1
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 2
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 1

Total: 11 Stephen (talk) 00:47, 27 June 2012 (UTC)


 * Reviewer 3

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 5
 * Sourcing: 2
 * Neutrality: 3
 * Readability: 1
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 2

Total: 14

Steven Walling &bull; talk   01:20, 27 June 2012 (UTC)

Post

 * Reviewer 1

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 4
 * Sourcing: 3
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 1
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 2

Total: 13 –p joe f (talk • contribs) 09:56, 18 June 2012 (UTC)


 * Reviewer 2

Reviewer: Slaporte

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 4
 * Sourcing: 1
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 1
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 1

Total: 10 Stephen (talk) 00:52, 27 June 2012 (UTC)


 * Reviewer 3

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 5
 * Sourcing: 2
 * Neutrality: 3
 * Readability: 1
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 2

Total: 14

Comment: Minimal change. Steven Walling &bull; talk   01:21, 27 June 2012 (UTC)

Pre

 * Reviewer 1

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 1
 * Sourcing: 3
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 1
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 0

Total: 8 –p joe f (talk • contribs) 09:56, 18 June 2012 (UTC)


 * Reviewer 2

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 1
 * Sourcing: 2
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 1
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 0

Total: 7 Smallman12q (talk) 14:09, 18 June 2012 (UTC)


 * Reviewer 3

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 1
 * Sourcing: 1
 * Neutrality: 1
 * Readability: 3
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 0

Total: 7 Stephen (talk) 01:00, 27 June 2012 (UTC)

Post

 * Reviewer 1

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 5
 * Sourcing: 2
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 2
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 0

Total: 12 –p joe f (talk • contribs) 09:56, 18 June 2012 (UTC)


 * Reviewer 2

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 6
 * Sourcing: 2
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 2
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 0

Total: 13 Smallman12q (talk) 14:09, 18 June 2012 (UTC)


 * Reviewer 3

Reviewer: User:Slaporte

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 4
 * Sourcing: 1
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 2
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 0

Total: 10 Stephen (talk) 01:06, 27 June 2012 (UTC)

Pre

 * Reviewer 1

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 3
 * Sourcing: 3
 * Neutrality: 1
 * Readability: 1
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 1

Total: 10 –p joe f (talk • contribs) 09:36, 18 June 2012 (UTC)


 * Reviewer 2

Reviewer: Maggie Dennis (WMF) (talk)

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 3
 * Sourcing: 3
 * Neutrality: 1
 * Readability: 2
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 1

Total: 11 Maggie Dennis (WMF) (talk) 23:30, 26 June 2012 (UTC)


 * Reviewer 3

Reviewer: Kaldari (talk) 00:55, 27 June 2012 (UTC)

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 6
 * Sourcing: 5
 * Neutrality: 3
 * Readability: 3
 * Formatting: 2
 * Illustrations: 1

Total: 20

Post

 * Reviewer 1

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 6
 * Sourcing: 4
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 2
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 1

Total: 16 –p joe f (talk • contribs) 09:36, 18 June 2012 (UTC)


 * Reviewer 2

Reviewer: Maggie Dennis (WMF) (talk)

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 7
 * Sourcing: 5
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 2
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 1

Total: 18. --Maggie Dennis (WMF) (talk) 23:41, 26 June 2012 (UTC)


 * Reviewer 3

Reviewer: Kaldari (talk) 00:55, 27 June 2012 (UTC)

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 9
 * Sourcing: 6
 * Neutrality: 3
 * Readability: 3
 * Formatting: 2
 * Illustrations: 1

Total: 24

Pre

 * Reviewer 1

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 5
 * Sourcing: 3
 * Neutrality: 1
 * Readability: 1
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 1

Total: 12 –p joe f (talk • contribs) 09:36, 18 June 2012 (UTC)


 * Reviewer 2

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 4
 * Sourcing: 4
 * Neutrality: 1
 * Readability: 2
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 1

Total: 13


 * Reviewer 3

Reviewer: Kaldari (talk) 01:27, 27 June 2012 (UTC)

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 4
 * Sourcing: 3
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 2
 * Formatting: 2
 * Illustrations: 0

Total: 13

Post

 * Reviewer 1

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 6
 * Sourcing: 4
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 2
 * Formatting: 2
 * Illustrations: 2

Total: 18 –p joe f (talk • contribs) 09:36, 18 June 2012 (UTC)


 * Reviewer 2

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 8
 * Sourcing: 5
 * Neutrality: 3
 * Readability: 2
 * Formatting: 2
 * Illustrations: 2

Total: 22


 * Reviewer 3

Reviewer: Kaldari (talk) 01:27, 27 June 2012 (UTC)

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 9
 * Sourcing: 5
 * Neutrality: 3
 * Readability: 3
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 1

Total: 22

New Article

 * Reviewer 1

Reviewer: Gobōnobo  + c

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 4
 * Sourcing: 4
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 2
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 0

Total: 13


 * Reviewer 2

Reviewer: The Interior  (Talk) 22:23, 16 June 2012 (UTC)

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness:5
 * Sourcing:3
 * Neutrality:1
 * Readability:2
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations:0

Total:12


 * Reviewer 3

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 4
 * Sourcing: 3
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 2
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 0

Total: 12 –p joe f (talk • contribs) 17:11, 18 June 2012 (UTC)

Post

 * Reviewer 1

Reviewer: --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus&#124; reply here 12:57, 15 June 2012 (UTC)

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 7
 * Sourcing: 4
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 2
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 0

Total: 16


 * Reviewer 2

Reviewer:Graeme Bartlett (talk)

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness:4
 * Sourcing:5
 * Neutrality:1.5
 * Readability:2.5
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations:0

Total:14


 * Reviewer 3

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 4
 * Sourcing: 3
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 2
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 0

Total: 12 –p joe f (talk • contribs) 17:09, 18 June 2012 (UTC)

New Article

 * Reviewer 1

Reviewer: --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus&#124; reply here 13:04, 15 June 2012 (UTC)

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 7
 * Sourcing: 6
 * Neutrality: 3
 * Readability: 2
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 0

Total: 18


 * Reviewer 2

Reviewer:Graeme Bartlett (talk)

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness:4
 * Sourcing:5
 * Neutrality:1
 * Readability:2
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations:0

Total:13


 * Reviewer 3

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 4
 * Sourcing: 2
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 2
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 0

Total: 11 –p joe f (talk • contribs) 17:04, 18 June 2012 (UTC)

New Article

 * Reviewer 1

Reviewer: --<sub style="border:1px solid #228B22;padding:1px;">Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus&#124; reply here 13:08, 15 June 2012 (UTC)

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 5
 * Sourcing: 4
 * Neutrality: 3
 * Readability: 2
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 0

Total: 15


 * Reviewer 2

Reviewer:Graeme Bartlett (talk)

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness:5
 * Sourcing:4
 * Neutrality:2.5
 * Readability:2
 * Formatting: 1.5
 * Illustrations:0

Total:15


 * Reviewer 3

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 5
 * Sourcing: 3
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 2
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 0

Total: 13 –p joe f (talk • contribs) 17:04, 18 June 2012 (UTC)

Pre

 * Reviewer 1

Reviewer: Graeme Bartlett (talk)

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness:2
 * Sourcing:4
 * Neutrality:3
 * Readability:2
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations:1

Total:13


 * Reviewer 2

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 1
 * Sourcing: 4
 * Neutrality: 3
 * Readability: 2
 * Formatting: 2
 * Illustrations: 1

Total: 13 Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 17:27, 17 June 2012 (UTC)


 * Reviewer 3

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 1
 * Sourcing: 5
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 1
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 1

Total: 11 –p joe f (talk • contribs) 17:01, 18 June 2012 (UTC)

Post

 * Reviewer 1

Reviewer: Graeme Bartlett (talk)

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness:3
 * Sourcing:3
 * Neutrality:3
 * Readability:3
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations:1

Total:14
 * The students actually did more than the post diff. increasing comprehensiveness to 4


 * Reviewer 2

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 2
 * Sourcing: 4
 * Neutrality: 3
 * Readability: 1
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 1

Total: 12 Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 17:31, 17 June 2012 (UTC)


 * Reviewer 3

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 2
 * Sourcing: 3
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 1
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 1

Total: 10 –p joe f (talk • contribs) 17:01, 18 June 2012 (UTC)

New Article

 * Reviewer 1

Reviewer:Graeme Bartlett (talk)

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness:5
 * Sourcing:3
 * Neutrality:3
 * Readability:2.5
 * Formatting: 2
 * Illustrations:0

Total:15.5


 * Reviewer 2

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 4
 * Sourcing: 3
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 2
 * Formatting: 2
 * Illustrations: 0

Total: 12 Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 00:18, 17 June 2012 (UTC)


 * Reviewer 3

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 5
 * Sourcing: 3
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 2
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 0

Total: 13 –p joe f (talk • contribs) 16:58, 18 June 2012 (UTC)

New Article

 * Reviewer 1

Reviewer:Graeme Bartlett (talk)

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness:4
 * Sourcing:5
 * Neutrality:3
 * Readability:2
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations:0

Total:15


 * Reviewer 2

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 4
 * Sourcing: 6
 * Neutrality: 3
 * Readability: 1
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 0

Total: 15 Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 17:22, 17 June 2012 (UTC)


 * Reviewer 3

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 4
 * Sourcing: 3
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 1
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 0

Total: 11 –p joe f (talk • contribs) 16:58, 18 June 2012 (UTC)

New Article

 * Reviewer 1

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 6
 * Sourcing: 4
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 2
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 2

Total: 17 –p joe f (talk • contribs) 09:51, 18 June 2012 (UTC)


 * Reviewer 2

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness:6
 * Sourcing:4
 * Neutrality:3
 * Readability:2
 * Formatting:2
 * Illustrations:2

Total:19 - This would be an impressive article from anyone, but as first article from a new user this is exemplary.  Blue Rasberry   (talk)   15:54, 19 June 2012 (UTC)


 * Reviewer 3

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 7
 * Sourcing: 5
 * Neutrality: 3
 * Readability: 2
 * Formatting: 2
 * Illustrations: 2

Total: 21

Pre

 * Reviewer 1

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 2
 * Sourcing: 2
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 1
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 1

Total: 9 –p joe f (talk • contribs) 11:34, 16 June 2012 (UTC)


 * Reviewer 2

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 2
 * Sourcing: 3
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 2
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 1

Total: 11


 * Reviewer 3

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness:1
 * Sourcing:1
 * Neutrality:1
 * Readability:2
 * Formatting: 2
 * Illustrations:1

Total: 8  Blue Rasberry    (talk)   14:18, 20 June 2012 (UTC)

Post

 * Reviewer 1

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 6
 * Sourcing: 3
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 2
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 1

Total: 15 –p joe f (talk • contribs) 11:34, 16 June 2012 (UTC)


 * Reviewer 2

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 5
 * Sourcing: 3
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 2
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 1

Total: 14


 * Reviewer 3

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness:5
 * Sourcing:3
 * Neutrality:2
 * Readability:2
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations:1

Total: 14  Blue Rasberry    (talk)   14:22, 20 June 2012 (UTC)

New Article

 * Reviewer 1

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 2
 * Sourcing: 2
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 1
 * Formatting: 0
 * Illustrations: 0

Total: 7 –p joe f (talk • contribs) 11:43, 16 June 2012 (UTC)


 * Reviewer 2

Reviewer: Maggie Dennis (WMF) (talk)

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 1
 * Sourcing: 6
 * Neutrality: 1
 * Readability: 2
 * Formatting: 0
 * Illustrations: 0

Total: 10 (misleading score; it's not hard to source two sentences) --Maggie Dennis (WMF) (talk) 23:05, 26 June 2012 (UTC)


 * Reviewer 3

Reviewer: Maximiliankleinoclc (talk)

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 2
 * Sourcing: 1
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 2
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 0

Total: 8

Post

 * Reviewer 1

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 6
 * Sourcing: 4
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 2
 * Formatting: 2
 * Illustrations: 1

Total: 17 –p joe f (talk • contribs) 12:31, 16 June 2012 (UTC)


 * Reviewer 2

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 4
 * Sourcing: 5
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 2
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 1.5

Total: 15.5


 * Reviewer 3

Reviewer:Graeme Bartlett (talk)

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness:5
 * Sourcing:4
 * Neutrality:1.5
 * Readability:1
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations:1.5

Total:14

Pre

 * Reviewer 1

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 5
 * Sourcing: 1
 * Neutrality: 3
 * Readability: 2
 * Formatting: 2
 * Illustrations: 0

Total: 13 -- Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 19:16, 13 May 2012 (UTC)


 * Reviewer 2

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 4
 * Sourcing: 1
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 2
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 0

Total: 10 –p joe f (talk • contribs) 17:51, 14 May 2012 (UTC)


 * Reviewer 3

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 5
 * Sourcing: 1
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 2
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 0

Total: 11 --JayJasper (talk) 18:51, 15 May 2012 (UTC)

Post

 * Reviewer 1

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 5
 * Sourcing: 2
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 1
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 0

Total: 11 –p joe f (talk • contribs) 17:51, 14 May 2012 (UTC)


 * Reviewer 2

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 6
 * Sourcing: 2
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 1
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 0

Total: 12


 * Reviewer 3

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness:
 * Sourcing:
 * Neutrality:
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Total:

New Article

 * Reviewer 1

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 4
 * Sourcing: 4
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 2
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 0

Total: 13 –p joe f (talk • contribs) 17:51, 14 May 2012 (UTC)


 * Reviewer 2

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 3
 * Sourcing: 4
 * Neutrality: 3
 * Readability: 1
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 0

Total: 12 --Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library)


 * Reviewer 3

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 4
 * Sourcing: 4
 * Neutrality: 3
 * Readability: 2
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 0

Total: 14 --JayJasper (talk) 18:47, 16 May 2012 (UTC)

New Article

 * Reviewer 1

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 4
 * Sourcing: 3
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 1
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations:0

Total: 11 –p joe f (talk • contribs) 17:51, 14 May 2012 (UTC)


 * Reviewer 2

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 4
 * Sourcing: 2
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 2
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 1

Total: 12 --JayJasper (talk) 18:55, 16 May 2012 (UTC)
 * Reviewer 3

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 3
 * Sourcing: 6
 * Neutrality: 3
 * Readability: 2
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 1

Total: 16 Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 10:34, 27 May 2012 (UTC)

Pre

 * Reviewer 1

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 6
 * Sourcing: 2
 * Neutrality: 3
 * Readability: 1
 * Formatting: 0
 * Illustrations: 0

Total: 12 -- Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 18:17, 13 May 2012 (UTC)


 * Reviewer 2

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 5
 * Sourcing: 2
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 2
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 0

Total: 12 –p joe f (talk • contribs) 06:58, 14 May 2012 (UTC)


 * Reviewer 3

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 5
 * Sourcing: 2
 * Neutrality: 3
 * Readability: 2
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 0

Total: 13--JayJasper (talk) 21:13, 14 May 2012 (UTC)

Post

 * Reviewer 1

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 6
 * Sourcing: 3
 * Neutrality: 3
 * Readability: 1
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 0

Total: 14 -- Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 18:19, 13 May 2012 (UTC)


 * Reviewer 2

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 7
 * Sourcing: 4
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 2
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 0

Total: 16 –p joe f (talk • contribs) 07:04, 14 May 2012 (UTC)


 * Reviewer 3

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 6
 * Sourcing: 4
 * Neutrality: 3
 * Readability: 2
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations:

Total: 16--JayJasper (talk) 21:17, 14 May 2012 (UTC)

Pre

 * Reviewer 1

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 3
 * Sourcing: 3
 * Neutrality: 3
 * Readability: 2
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 1

Total: 13 -- Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 18:56, 13 May 2012 (UTC)


 * Reviewer 2

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 2
 * Sourcing: 2
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 1
 * Formatting: 0
 * Illustrations: 1

Total: 8 –p joe f (talk • contribs) 14:07, 14 May 2012 (UTC)


 * Reviewer 3

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 3
 * Sourcing: 3
 * Neutrality: 3
 * Readability: 1
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 1

Total: 12 --JayJasper (talk) 21:25, 14 May 2012 (UTC)

New Article

 * Reviewer 1

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 5
 * Sourcing: 2
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 2
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 1

Total: 13 –p joe f (talk • contribs) 14:07, 14 May 2012 (UTC)


 * Reviewer 2

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 7
 * Sourcing: 2
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 2
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 1

Total:15 --JayJasper (talk) 21:43, 14 May 2012 (UTC)


 * Reviewer 3

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 5
 * Sourcing: 4
 * Neutrality: 3
 * Readability: 2
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 1

Total: 16 --Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 01:23, 15 May 2012 (UTC)

Pre

 * Reviewer 1

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 3
 * Sourcing: 2
 * Neutrality: 3
 * Readability: 2
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 0

Total: 11 -- Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 18:59, 13 May 2012 (UTC)


 * Reviewer 2

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 2
 * Sourcing: 1
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 1
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 0

Total: 7 –p joe f (talk • contribs) 15:31, 14 May 2012 (UTC)


 * Reviewer 3

Reviewer:

Scores: Total: 8 --JayJasper (talk) 18:19, 15 May 2012 (UTC)
 * Comprehensiveness: 3
 * Sourcing: 1
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 1
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 0

Pre

 * Reviewer 1

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 3
 * Sourcing: 2
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 1
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 0

Total: 9 –p joe f (talk • contribs) 15:31, 14 May 2012 (UTC)


 * Reviewer 2

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 4
 * Sourcing: 2
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 1
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 0

Total: 10 --JayJasper (talk) 18:43, 15 May 2012 (UTC)


 * Reviewer 3

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 1
 * Sourcing: 1
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 2
 * Formatting: 0
 * Illustrations: 0

Total: 6 --Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library)

Post

 * Reviewer 1

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 5
 * Sourcing: 3
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 1
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 1

Total: 13 –p joe f (talk • contribs) 11:40, 15 May 2012 (UTC)


 * Reviewer 2

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 8
 * Sourcing: 3
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 2
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 1

Total: 17 --JayJasper (talk) 18:26, 18 May 2012 (UTC)


 * Reviewer 3

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 4
 * Sourcing: 4
 * Neutrality: 0
 * Readability: 1
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 1

Total: 11 Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 23:47, 24 May 2012 (UTC)

Pre

 * Reviewer 1

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 5
 * Sourcing: 4
 * Neutrality: 3
 * Readability: 2
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 2

Total: 17 -- Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 20:18, 13 May 2012 (UTC)


 * Reviewer 2

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 4
 * Sourcing: 2
 * Neutrality: 1
 * Readability: 1
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 2

Total: 11 –p joe f (talk • contribs) 14:21, 15 May 2012 (UTC)


 * Reviewer 3

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 5
 * Sourcing: 3
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 1
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 2

Total: 14 --JayJasper (talk) 23:01, 20 May 2012 (UTC)

Pre

 * Reviewer 1

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 2
 * Sourcing: 0
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 1
 * Formatting: 0
 * Illustrations: 0

Total: 5 –p joe f (talk • contribs) 18:34, 15 May 2012 (UTC)


 * Reviewer 2

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 2
 * Sourcing: 1
 * Neutrality: 1
 * Readability: 1
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 0

Total: 6 --Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library)


 * Reviewer 3

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 2
 * Sourcing: 0
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 1
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 0

Total: 6 --JayJasper (talk) 23:18, 20 May 2012 (UTC)

Pre

 * Reviewer 1

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 3
 * Sourcing: 1
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 2
 * Formatting: 0
 * Illustrations: 0

Total: 8 --JayJasper (talk) 04:34, 15 June 2012 (UTC)


 * Reviewer 2

Reviewer: --<sub style="border:1px solid #228B22;padding:1px;">Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus&#124; reply here 13:14, 15 June 2012 (UTC)

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 1
 * Sourcing: 1
 * Neutrality: 3
 * Readability: 1
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 0

Total: 7


 * Reviewer 3

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 2
 * Sourcing: 1
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 1
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 0

Total: 7 –p joe f (talk • contribs) 11:24, 16 June 2012 (UTC)

Post

 * Reviewer 1

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 8
 * Sourcing: 4
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 2
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 0

Total: 17 --JayJasper (talk) 04:41, 15 June 2012 (UTC)


 * Reviewer 2

Reviewer: --<sub style="border:1px solid #228B22;padding:1px;">Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus&#124; reply here 13:14, 15 June 2012 (UTC)

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 4
 * Sourcing: 2
 * Neutrality: 3
 * Readability: 2
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 1

Total: 14


 * Reviewer 3

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 6
 * Sourcing: 3
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 1
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 1

Total: 14 –p joe f (talk • contribs) 11:24, 16 June 2012 (UTC)

Pre

 * Reviewer 1

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 3
 * Sourcing: 1
 * Neutrality: 3
 * Readability: 2
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 0

Total: 10 Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 10:17, 15 June 2012 (UTC)


 * Reviewer 2

Reviewer: Graeme Bartlett (talk)

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 3
 * Sourcing:1
 * Neutrality:2
 * Readability:2
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations:1

Total:10


 * Reviewer 3

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 2
 * Sourcing: 1
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 1
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 1

Total: 8 –p joe f (talk • contribs) 11:34, 16 June 2012 (UTC)

Post

 * Reviewer 1

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 3
 * Sourcing: 2
 * Neutrality: 3
 * Readability: 2
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 1

Total: 12 Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 10:22, 15 June 2012 (UTC)


 * Reviewer 2

Reviewer: Graeme Bartlett (talk)

Scores: Total:14
 * Comprehensiveness:4
 * Sourcing:4
 * Neutrality:2
 * Readability:2
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations:1


 * Reviewer 3

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 5
 * Sourcing: 2
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 1
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 2

Total: 13 –p joe f (talk • contribs) 11:34, 16 June 2012 (UTC)

Pre

 * Reviewer 1

Reviewer: The Interior  (Talk) 22:10, 16 June 2012 (UTC)

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness:6
 * Sourcing:3
 * Neutrality:2
 * Readability:2
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations:1

Total:15


 * Reviewer 2

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 5
 * Sourcing: 3
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 1
 * Formatting: 2
 * Illustrations: 1

Total: 14 –p joe f (talk • contribs) 17:14, 17 June 2012 (UTC)


 * Reviewer 3

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 5
 * Sourcing: 4
 * Neutrality: 3
 * Readability: 2
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 1

Total: 16 Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 18:43, 17 June 2012 (UTC)

Post

 * Reviewer 1

Reviewer: The Interior  (Talk) 22:15, 16 June 2012 (UTC)

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness:6
 * Sourcing:2
 * Neutrality:2
 * Readability:1
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations:1

Total: 13


 * Reviewer 2

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 6
 * Sourcing: 3
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 2
 * Formatting: 2
 * Illustrations: 1

Total: 16 –p joe f (talk • contribs) 17:14, 17 June 2012 (UTC)


 * Reviewer 3

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 5
 * Sourcing: 4
 * Neutrality: 3
 * Readability: 2
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 1

Total: 16 Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 18:43, 17 June 2012 (UTC)

Pre

 * Reviewer 1

Reviewer: Gobōnobo  + c

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 3
 * Sourcing: 2
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 2
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 1

Total: 11


 * Reviewer 2

Reviewer:Graeme Bartlett (talk)

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness:3
 * Sourcing:3
 * Neutrality:2
 * Readability:2
 * Formatting: 2
 * Illustrations:1

Total:13


 * Reviewer 3

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 4
 * Sourcing: 3
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 2
 * Formatting: 2
 * Illustrations: 1

Total: 14 –p joe f (talk • contribs) 17:19, 17 June 2012 (UTC)

Post

 * Reviewer 1

Reviewer: Gobōnobo  + c

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 3
 * Sourcing: 2
 * Neutrality: 1
 * Readability: 1
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 1

Total: 9


 * Reviewer 2

Reviewer:Graeme Bartlett (talk)

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness:3.5
 * Sourcing:3
 * Neutrality:2
 * Readability:2
 * Formatting: 1.5
 * Illustrations:1

Total:13


 * Reviewer 3

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 5
 * Sourcing: 4
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 2
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 1

Total: 15 –p joe f (talk • contribs) 17:19, 17 June 2012 (UTC)

New Article

 * Reviewer 1

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness:4
 * Sourcing:5
 * Neutrality:1.5
 * Readability:3
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations:0

Total:10.5


 * Reviewer 2

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 5
 * Sourcing: 2
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 2
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 1

Total: 13 –p joe f (talk • contribs) 09:18, 18 June 2012 (UTC)


 * Reviewer 3

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 5
 * Sourcing: 4
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 2
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 0

Total: 14 --Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 11:07, 18 June 2012 (UTC)

New Article

 * Reviewer 1

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 6
 * Sourcing: 2
 * Neutrality: 2
 * Readability: 2
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 1

Total: 14 –p joe f (talk • contribs) 09:18, 18 June 2012 (UTC)


 * Reviewer 2

Reviewer:Graeme Bartlett (talk)

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness:5
 * Sourcing:4
 * Neutrality:2
 * Readability:2
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations:0

Total:14


 * Reviewer 3

Reviewer:

Scores:
 * Comprehensiveness: 7
 * Sourcing: 6
 * Neutrality: 3
 * Readability: 2
 * Formatting: 1
 * Illustrations: 0

Total: 19 --Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 11:02, 18 June 2012 (UTC)