Wikipedia:Article assessment/1980s comedy films/Bill & Ted's Excellent Adventure

Assessment of an article under the topic 1980s comedy films.

Article: Bill & Ted's Excellent Adventure

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Review by Cedars
Interesting insights into various aspects of the film though sometimes you get the feeling the article drifts too far from its focus. Could also use a brief discussion of Bill and Ted as stoners and maybe even of the film's influence on and similarities to later movies such as Dude, Where's My Car?. Difficult to read in parts. Overuses parenthesises. Rapidly and unexpectedly shifts focus in some sections breaking the article's flow. Contains many single sentence paragraphs. Plot, cast, trivia, see also, external links, wikiquote box and film box all present. Long lead though with much content that could be better presented in other sections. Other structural problems stemming from that previously discussed. No problem though from a casual inspection you can see how the parenthesises clutter the writing
 * Coverage and factuality: 7
 * Writing style: 4
 * Structure: 6
 * Aesthetics: 7
 * Overall: 6

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