Wikipedia:Article assessment/African countries/Senegal

Assessment of an article under the topic African countries.

Article: Senegal

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Review by User:Tom harrison

 * Coverage and factuality: 3 - Coverage is only fair. There seem to be no citations at all. 'Economy' is not up to date. The coverage of the culture is inadequete.
 * Writing style: 4 - There are some grammatical errors. The writing is poorly organized and jumps from topic to topic. 'Demographics' is notably better than the rest of the article.
 * Structure: 7 - Good; it seems to me that 'politics' would more naturally follow history. Maybe this (or something else) should be standardized across all of our articles. 'History' is too much about recent politics, making 'politics' repetitive. Coverage of colonial and pre-colonial history is minimal.
 * Aesthetics: 8 - Good maps, charts, and pictures. Layout is good.
 * Overall: 5