Wikipedia:Article assessment/African countries/Sudan

Assessment of an article under the topic African countries.

Article: Sudan

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Review by User:Danaman5
Good coverage on a lot of areas. Needs expansion in administrative divisions, geography, economy, culture, and education. Has a few inline citations, but needs more.
 * Coverage and factuality: 8

Good writing style, maybe a little more formality in some of the political sections is needed.
 * Writing style: 8

Good, except that the history section could use some subdivisions. Lead needs to be lengthened.
 * Structure: 9

Lots of good pictures, but some positioned awkwardly or overlapping with text.
 * Aesthetics: 8


 * Overall: 8.5

Definitely a good article, with some expansion and fixes, it will be great. --Danaman5 20:32, 15 March 2006 (UTC)

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