Wikipedia:Article assessment/Extinct mammals/Mammoth

Assessment of an article under the topic Extinct mammals.

Article: Mammoth

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Review by violet/riga

 * Coverage and factuality: 7
 * Poor referencing; does not go into detail about its position in the food chain, but seems to cover most other things


 * Writing style: 8
 * Some informal language


 * Structure: 7
 * The lead is too short and needs to summarise the article; the sections need rearranging to group things together, using more levels


 * Aesthetics: 7
 * Could do with one or two more images


 * Overall: 7

Needs some rearranging, but is generally fairly good. violet/riga (t) 20:55, 27 February 2006 (UTC)

Review by HereToHelp

 * Coverage and factuality: 5
 * References are not inlined; general references are non-existant.


 * Writing style: 8
 * Could use some disambiging of a few technical terms, but otherwise pretty good.


 * Structure: 8
 * Couldn't find many problems but it didn't jump out at me as fantastic either. Headers could use a little tweaking.


 * Aesthetics: 8
 * Standard taxobox. Two images seem a bit on the skimpy side making the article seem a little arid with text.

Seems mediocre except for the references, which bring this down a lot.--HereToHelp (talk • contribs) 13:57, 4 March 2006 (UTC)
 * Overall: 6.5

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