Wikipedia:Article assessment/Extinct mammals/Neanderthal

Assessment of an article under the topic Extinct mammals.

Article: Neanderthal

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Review by violet/riga

 * Coverage and factuality: 6
 * Poor referencing and does not seem to cover everything (such as theories about their extinction)


 * Writing style: 8
 * Generally well written


 * Structure: 7
 * Could do with reordering and resectioning


 * Aesthetics: 7
 * The "popular culture" section is too large and does not add to the article particularly well; the images are good


 * Overall: 6

A disappointing article - I would have thought it would be of a higher standard given its encyclopedic importance. violet/riga (t) 20:10, 1 March 2006 (UTC)

Review by HereToHelp
5. It all looks okay (but I am not an anthropologist), but there are very few references, and there are not inlined. 8. Flows well, but there are few awkward places and some arid technical terms. 9.5. Flows pretty well, but it could always improve. 7 Nice images, but you'd expect more for a topic like this (link to Commons template?). 7. Mostly because of the (lack of) references, and there are plenty.
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