Wikipedia:Article assessment/Natural disasters/Emergency preparedness

Assessment of an article under the topic Natural disasters.

Article: Emergency preparedness

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Review by violet/riga (t)

 * Coverage and factuality: 5
 * No references at all


 * Writing style: 5
 * Far too many one or two sentence paragraphs


 * Structure: 5
 * Not a particularly obvious section order


 * Aesthetics: 4
 * My first impression of the article is that it's a little dull, and some images would be very nice


 * Overall: 4


 * Sorry but it is not a very appealing article, and needs a good cleanup. Looking at the history there have been very few recent edits, which may be both a symptom and a cause of this.  violet/riga (t) 15:47, 19 February 2006 (UTC)

Review by DMurphy
No sources. Reads like a government policy rough draft... needs to be rewritten to be more encyclopaedic. Could use some re-working. No pictures or diagrams makes a very boring article indeed.
 * Coverage and factuality: 5
 * Writing style: 4
 * Structure: 6
 * Aesthetics: 2
 * Overall: 4
 * I have to agree with violet/riga, this article is dry and very unencyclopaedic. The title itself seems like it needs a change to something more informative and less vague (ie Emergency preparation techniques).  -DMurphy 21:29, 25 February 2006 (UTC)

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