Wikipedia:Articles for improvement/Further collaboration/Archive 1

This is the archive page for TAFI's Further collaboration page.

Solar activity
Collaboration started 25 Aug, 2014
 * Being discussed for DYK at Did you know nominations - Solar activity. NorthAmerica1000 01:54, 15 September 2014 (UTC)
 * Update below. NorthAmerica1000 03:59, 21 September 2014 (UTC)

Raven Tales
Collaboration started 1 Sept, 2014
 * Posted by NorthAmerica1000 15:30, 9 September 2014 (UTC)
 * Peer review received at Peer review/Raven Tales/archive1 (transcluded below) - Evad37 &#91;talk] 23:30, 22 September 2014 (UTC)
 * Well, that was incredibly positive feedback. I hope has a chance to look at this. -- Nick  Penguin ( contribs ) 23:35, 22 September 2014 (UTC)
 * Thanks guys. Yep, I saw it Nick. :)  I actually hadn't been back on Wikipedia until last night for several days and am still quite ruffled over the recent issues that I was dealing with a couple weeks ago but I poke my head in to check messages..
 * I'll be replying on the review page in a moment and have added a banner to the article notifying any random editors of it's impending activity. I may not get to it until late in the week or potentially even until this weekend, but as the reviewer recommended, I will nominate the article for WP:GA, pending some further editing of the article to address his points and any other points which may be mentioned in the review.  I've also left a new comment on the talk page of WikiProject Indigenous peoples of North America under it's original TAFI banner in hopes of getting some more people to review and offer feedback.  If anyone would like to work on the article with me, please feel free, I just request that you please review the comments in it's peer review and actively collaborate on the review discussion or on the articles talk page so as to avoid any conflicting edits or edits which could potentially degrade the overall quality of the article. David Condrey (talk) 04:21, 23 September 2014 (UTC)
 * Can an article be nominated as a Good Article and a Featured List or is it necessary to pick one or the other? If so, which would you guys recommend?  If planning to nominate as a good article I'd like to set a goal based on the approaching start of WikiProject_Good_articles/GA_Cup and have any further edits completed and a nomination prepared in time for that launch in hopes of attracting the most attention.  If going for Featured Article it may take me longer because I'm not familiar with guidelines on list articles.. Its somewhat ironic I've always actually tended to avoid lists. David Condrey (talk) 04:43, 23 September 2014 (UTC)

Consumer electronics
Collaboration started 8 Sept, 2014
 * Presently being discussed at it's talk page regarding merging or splitting the article's timeline sections. NorthAmerica1000 01:40, 15 September 2014 (UTC)
 * Timeline content was moved into Timeline_of_electrical_and_electronic_engineering, that article could use a lot of help now. -- Nick Penguin ( contribs ) 21:56, 7 October 2014 (UTC)

Java Man
Collaboration started 14 June, 2014
 * Currently undergoing GAN (oct 10) -- Nick Penguin ( contribs ) 07:13, 11 October 2014 (UTC)


 * There is a whole page of comments by a, uh, thorough reviewer, here: Talk:Java_Man/GA1. Mostly small things that need to be addressed or explained. Madalibi has been handling this alone and the reviewer found more and more stuff. Please help.-- Melody Lavender  19:34, 4 November 2014 (UTC)

Animatronics
Collaboration started 4 Aug, 2014
 * Posting here per discussion at WT:TAFI. This was a TAFI selection beginning on on 1 July 2013 and 4 August 2014, for a period of one week (respectively). NorthAmerica1000 01:46, 15 September 2014 (UTC)
 * Presently being discussed for DYK at Did you know nominations - Animatronics. NorthAmerica1000 01:51, 15 September 2014 (UTC)
 * Update below. NorthAmerica1000 13:08, 21 September 2014 (UTC)


 * Now that the peer review has been closed, will this article be nominated for FA? I feel that it meets all the relevant criteria. -- Nick Penguin ( contribs ) 14:53, 31 October 2014 (UTC)
 * Just started GA nom. since my other nom. of International Airport looks to be nearly complete. I think I screwed it up tho. grrr  David Condrey   log talk  10:47, 18 November 2014 (UTC)

Game design

 * Collaboration started December 8. -- Nick Penguin ( contribs ) 19:06, 15 December 2014 (UTC)
 * That article needs some help with the Sports section. I only added a tiny bit in. Qwertyxp2000 (talk) 03:32, 7 January 2015 (UTC)

Dishwashing liquid

 * Collaboration started since 21st March 2015


 * Posted by Qwertyxp2000.
 * This article can be improved just a little more. Qwertyxp2000 (talk) 06:09, 21 March 2015 (UTC)
 * Do you reckon this article deserves to be a DYK? Qwertyxp2000 (talk) 06:15, 16 May 2015 (UTC)
 * Do you reckon this article deserves to be a DYK? Qwertyxp2000 (talk) 06:15, 16 May 2015 (UTC)

Aerophone

 * Collaboration started since 16th May 2015


 * Posted by Qwertyxp2000.


 * This article had been improved quite quickly with TAFI. Do you reckon this article deserves to be a DYK? Qwertyxp2000 (talk) 06:15, 16 May 2015 (UTC)

Deep frying

 * Collaboration started since May 2015


 * Posted by Bananasoldier.
 * We're working toward GA. -- Bananasoldier  (talk) 09:33, 25 May 2015 (UTC)

Berry
Successful collaboration - with more work, this could become a B-class, GA, or even a FA. Esquivalience t 00:47, 17 August 2015 (UTC)