Wikipedia:Articles for improvement/Nominations/Archives/2015/10

Gulf of Suez


Unapproved. North America1000 06:55, 19 October 2015 (UTC)
 * An expandable start-class article about a significantly important body of water. Some new and relatively newer sources about the region include, , , , among others. North America1000 02:12, 2 September 2015 (UTC)
 * 1) Support - Expansion possible. sources etc.--BabbaQ (talk) 17:30, 10 September 2015 (UTC)
 * 2) Support per above points, as well as reasonably high page views and High Importance in WikiProject Egypt. --Rubbish computer 18:04, 10 September 2015 (UTC)

Organized religion
Approved. North America1000 07:21, 19 October 2015 (UTC)
 * Extremely important article. Surprised it's so bare when compared with religion. Coin945 (talk) 08:49, 8 October 2015 (UTC)
 * 1) Support per nom. Rubbish computer 16:33, 8 October 2015 (UTC)
 * 2) Support per nom as well.--BabbaQ (talk) 16:54, 8 October 2015 (UTC)
 * 3) Support per nom -- Aryan fromHindustan (talk) 10:13, 15 October 2015 (UTC)

Larry Paul Kelley
Unapproved. North America1000 06:57, 19 October 2015 (UTC)
 * Currently a C Class article with opportunities improvement, per remarks left at Talk (DYK nomination) by a newbie.--Doug Coldwell (talk) 12:58, 9 September 2015 (UTC)
 * 1) Support - per nom. Opportunities to improve article.--BabbaQ (talk) 17:31, 10 September 2015 (UTC)
 * 2) Support per above points: is also Mid Importance in WikiProjects Gemology and Jewelry, Business and Chemistry. --Rubbish computer 18:19, 10 September 2015 (UTC)
 * 3) Oppose – because Shelby Gem Factory was recently approved and is on the Articles for improvement board. Kelley is a co-founder of Shelby Gem Factory. As such, we would have two articles about this highly interrelated topical area. North America1000 06:45, 14 September 2015 (UTC)
 * 4) Oppose per Northamerica1000. --Rubbish computer 16:05, 22 September 2015 (UTC)

The Tao of Pooh
Unapproved. North America1000 06:57, 19 October 2015 (UTC)
 * On the New York Times bestseller list for 49 weeks, the book provides an introduction to the Eastern belief system of Taoism for Westerners, and is used as required reading in some college courses North America1000 18:22, 10 September 2015 (UTC)
 * 1) Support per nom, page views and being only Start class. --Rubbish computer 18:31, 10 September 2015 (UTC)
 * 2) Oppose: I have changed my mind as I am not convinced as to the significance of this particular article. --Rubbish computer 16:07, 22 September 2015 (UTC)

Omakase

 * Article could need expansion, c/e, better sourcing. Views are high for a food subject with about 5000 views a month.
 * Comment This is a difficult one. I am not sure how much more can be said on the topic. I have removed a couple of things from the article which I felt didn't belong, including the photo which belongs to a completely different topic (see the talk page). I thought the Japanese wikipedia article on the topic might provide some further sources or inspiration, but I instead discovered that there isn't even a Japanese article on the subject. AtHomeIn神戸 (talk) 02:34, 19 October 2015 (UTC)
 * Still a article with a high number of hits each month, so if for anything TAFI could help expand on this topic.BabbaQ (talk) 17:47, 19 October 2015 (UTC)

Approved. North America1000 01:58, 26 October 2015 (UTC)
 * 1) Support per page view stats, Mid Importance on WikiProject Food and Drink and its only being Start class. --Rubbish computer (HALP!: I dropped the bass?) 20:21, 21 October 2015 (UTC)
 * 2) Support per Rubbishcomputer. I'm unable to find a wealth of sources, but I imagine they'd all be in Japanese.--Coin945 (talk) 17:15, 22 October 2015 (UTC)
 * 3) Support I'll support because I would love to see it improved. Currently it sounds like it is only used in American sushi restaurants. Of course, it originated in Japanese sushi shops. There are plenty of blogs available in Japanese dealing with people's experiences, but reliable sources that can actually add something may be a problem. AtHomeIn神戸 (talk) 00:55, 23 October 2015 (UTC)

History of American football positions
Approved. North America1000 01:08, 27 October 2015 (UTC)
 * Article needs significant cleanup. Cake (talk) 03:31, 12 October 2015 (UTC)
 * 1) support - per importance, and overall article quality.--BabbaQ (talk) 22:29, 26 September 2015 (UTC)
 * 2) Support per severe lack of referencing, general awfulness and it being High importance in WikiProject College Football: also has significant page view stats. --Rubbish computer 16:23, 27 September 2015 (UTC)
 * 3) Support per nom.--Coin945 (talk) 16:58, 22 October 2015 (UTC)

Grease (song)
Approved. North America1000 00:22, 30 October 2015 (UTC)
 * Famous song from Grease (film). Coin945 (talk) 08:32, 26 October 2015 (UTC)
 * 1) Support - a popular song that even appeals to the generations down from those who seen it when it was in the cinema. Donnie Park (talk) 11:03, 26 October 2015 (UTC)
 * 2) Support Potential for expansion and improvement. --Rubbish computer (HALP!: I dropped the bass?) 19:29, 26 October 2015 (UTC)
 * 3) *Comment: I have changed the article's class to Start as it appeared too lengthly to be a stub, a rating automatically assigned to it. Rubbish computer (HALP!: I dropped the bass?) 19:29, 26 October 2015 (UTC)
 * 4) Support - per nom.--BabbaQ (talk) 20:48, 28 October 2015 (UTC)

Fame (Irene Cara song)
Approved. North America1000 00:23, 30 October 2015 (UTC)
 * Famous song from Fame (1980 film). Coin945 (talk) 08:32, 26 October 2015 (UTC)
 * 1) Support - without argument is it, it still gets airplays and a dance class favorite. Donnie Park (talk) 11:12, 26 October 2015 (UTC)
 * 2) Support Potential for expansion and improvement. --Rubbish computer (HALP!: I dropped the bass?) 19:33, 26 October 2015 (UTC)
 * 3) *Comment: I have changed the article's class to Start as it appeared too lengthly to be a stub, a rating automatically assigned to it. Rubbish computer (HALP!: I dropped the bass?) 19:33, 26 October 2015 (UTC)
 * 4) Support - per nom.--BabbaQ (talk) 20:48, 28 October 2015 (UTC)

Choreography

 * A major art form. I was surprised that our article on it is so short. — Mr. Stradivarius  ♪ talk ♪ 09:50, 26 October 2015 (UTC)

Approved. North America1000 00:36, 29 October 2015 (UTC)
 * 1) Support I wholeheartedly agree. :D--Coin945 (talk) 09:59, 26 October 2015 (UTC)
 * 2) Support Per above points. --Rubbish computer (HALP!: I dropped the bass?) 19:38, 26 October 2015 (UTC)
 * 3) Support - per nomination.--BabbaQ (talk) 20:50, 28 October 2015 (UTC)

Circular reporting
Very pertinent to Wikipedia due to citogenesis, and also a really bad article atm.--Coin945 (talk) 17:17, 16 October 2015 (UTC) Approved. North America1000 00:37, 29 October 2015 (UTC)
 * 1) Support There should be some academic sources available to expand this topic, which is both important and interesting. AtHomeIn神戸 (talk) 01:18, 20 October 2015 (UTC)
 * 2) Support Easy to expand, current article is minimal. --Rubbish computer (HALP!: I dropped the bass?) 19:51, 21 October 2015 (UTC)
 * 3) Support - per nomination.--BabbaQ (talk) 20:51, 28 October 2015 (UTC)

No such thing as a stupid question
Interesting topic.--Coin945 (talk) 10:39, 22 October 2015 (UTC) Approved. North America1000 00:38, 29 October 2015 (UTC)
 * 1) Support as is only Start class. --Rubbish computer (HALP!: I dropped the bass?) 19:54, 25 October 2015 (UTC)
 * 2) Support – A well-known phrase and expression that is interesting. Receives a decent number of page views per month. North America1000 02:06, 26 October 2015 (UTC)
 * 3) Support - per nomination.--BabbaQ (talk) 20:53, 28 October 2015 (UTC)

Astrid Lindgren
Article needs c/e, citations on several places. Expansion is possible. Possibly the worlds best known childrens book writers and her article is just not up to shape. --BabbaQ (talk) 22:18, 17 October 2015 (UTC) Approved. North America1000 01:06, 27 October 2015 (UTC)
 * 1) Support per nomination. AtHomeIn神戸 (talk) 02:16, 19 October 2015 (UTC)
 * 2) Support Also High Importance in WikiProjects Sweden and Children's literature. --Rubbish computer (HALP!: I dropped the bass?) 19:55, 21 October 2015 (UTC)
 * 3) Support per nom.--Coin945 (talk) 16:58, 22 October 2015 (UTC)

Aaron Fechter
Approved. North America1000 01:06, 27 October 2015 (UTC)
 * Needs some serious clean up and sourcing. Could be further expanded. Ladysif (talk) 22:27, 24 August 2015 (UTC)
 * 1) Support - per nom.--BabbaQ (talk) 18:01, 25 August 2015 (UTC)
 * 2) Support per nom: is also only Stub class. --Rubbish computer 18:21, 10 September 2015 (UTC)
 * 3) Support per nom and Rubbish computer.--Coin945 (talk) 16:58, 22 October 2015 (UTC)

SWOT analysis
Approved. North America1000 01:07, 27 October 2015 (UTC)
 * This topic receives a lot of daily hits and according to the page view page is "ranked 942 in traffic on en.wikipedia.org" However, the contents are a fairly hodge-podge pile of WP:HOWTO instructions. There is little encyclopedic description of the topic, such as its history. The page is semi-protected, so I assume it has been subject to spamming before. If someone is brave enough to tackle this, I wish them luck. I would love to completely re-write it myself from scratch but don't know where to start. AtHomeIn神戸 (talk) 02:55, 14 October 2015 (UTC)
 * 1) Support per nom. --Rubbish computer (HALP!: I dropped the bass?) 16:01, 16 October 2015 (UTC)
 * 2) Support per nom.--BabbaQ (talk) 22:18, 17 October 2015 (UTC)
 * 3) Support. As a marketing student, I know how highly regarding this concept is. Article deserves expansion.--Coin945 (talk) 16:58, 22 October 2015 (UTC)

Växjö

 * Article needs help with sourcing, formatting, expansion etc.--BabbaQ (talk) 20:36, 21 August 2015 (UTC)

approved. North America1000 03:59, 6 October 2015 (UTC)
 * 1) Support per nom: also High Importance on WikiProject Sweden. Rubbish computer 21:01, 21 August 2015 (UTC)
 * 2) Support per nominator.--Doug Coldwell (talk) 18:19, 10 September 2015 (UTC)
 * 3) Support per nom; "Notable locations" & "Environmental policy" sections are in particularly bad shape. Quis separabit?  14:29, 23 September 2015 (UTC)

Princess Leia
Probably one of the worlds best known fictional characters. The article is C class but is poorly sourced, needs c/e and expansion is possible. The article is not up to standard for such a known character. And the article has a high amount of hits each month.--BabbaQ (talk) 20:49, 21 September 2015 (UTC) approved. North America1000 04:00, 6 October 2015 (UTC)
 * 1) Support per nom. --Rubbish computer 15:59, 22 September 2015 (UTC)
 * 2) Support as there is clearly the potential for this article to be much better, and based on its popularity, it should be. Safehaven86 (talk) 15:38, 23 September 2015 (UTC)
 * 3) Support per that of Safehaven86. Much interest in this character and there should be much participation to improve and expand this article.--Doug Coldwell (talk) 18:14, 23 September 2015 (UTC)
 * 4) Support as per reasons mentioned above. Corinne (talk) 22:46, 26 September 2015 (UTC)

Marie Serneholt
approved. North America1000 04:00, 6 October 2015 (UTC)
 * Article could be expanded . c/e needed, better sourcing, high number of hits each month so the article could need a shape-up. (One of Swedens most famous media personalities). --BabbaQ (talk) 09:47, 13 September 2015 (UTC)
 * 1) Support per nom. Is a famous Sweden media personality. Article could use improvement on sourcing.--Doug Coldwell (talk) 21:49, 17 September 2015 (UTC)
 * 2) Support per above points and article only being Start class. --Rubbish computer 16:03, 22 September 2015 (UTC)
 * 3) Support as better sourcing is readily available and article could be significantly improved given available sourcing. Safehaven86 (talk) 15:40, 23 September 2015 (UTC)

Paul Anka
approved. North America1000 04:00, 6 October 2015 (UTC)
 * Expansion is very possible. c/e needed, high number of hits in only a few days time. For such a high number of visitors the article should (in my opinion) be in better shape.--BabbaQ (talk) 21:31, 10 September 2015 (UTC)
 * 1) Support per nominator. Would appeal to the baby boomers. The quality could be much improved.--Doug Coldwell (talk) 17:10, 11 September 2015 (UTC)
 * 2) Support per nom and being Mid importance to WikiProjects Musicians and Lebanon (see Talk.) --Rubbish computer 16:05, 22 September 2015 (UTC)
 * 3) Support per nominator and the other comments. Corinne (talk) 22:50, 26 September 2015 (UTC)

Alice Bah Kuhnke
approved. North America1000 04:00, 6 October 2015 (UTC)
 * Article about an politician and television personality. Television career could be expanded, and the biography section overall, better sourcing as well. Article could need c/e. High number of hits monthly (more than the rest of the Löfven cabinet). --BabbaQ (talk) 20:42, 10 September 2015 (UTC)
 * 1) Support - per nom. Opportunities to expand article as there seems to be much online about her.--Doug Coldwell (talk) 10:57, 13 September 2015 (UTC)
 * 2) Support article is already on its way, but more sourcing and editorial structuring/copy-edits could significantly improve it. Safehaven86 (talk) 15:42, 23 September 2015 (UTC)
 * 3) Support per it being Start Class, in addition to the above points: plenty of potential for improvement. --Rubbish computer 16:51, 24 September 2015 (UTC)

Gustaf Skarsgård
approved. North America1000 04:00, 6 October 2015 (UTC)
 * Article about actor. Needs help with sources, c/e, expansion etc. High number of views each month.--BabbaQ (talk) 17:52, 10 September 2015 (UTC)
 * 1) Support per the high page views. --Rubbish computer 18:07, 10 September 2015 (UTC)
 * 2) Support as there seems to be a lot of sources on him.--Doug Coldwell (talk) 18:24, 10 September 2015 (UTC)
 * 3) Support a BLP with high page views but in need of work. AtHomeIn神戸 (talk) 14:18, 30 September 2015 (UTC)

Anna Lindh
approved. North America1000 04:00, 6 October 2015 (UTC)
 * The article could need better sourcing, c/e and much overall help by the TAFI project. Important politician, high number of hits each month. --BabbaQ (talk) 23:29, 29 August 2015 (UTC)
 * 1) Support per nom. --Rubbish computer 18:20, 10 September 2015 (UTC)
 * 2) Support per nom. --Doug Coldwell (talk) 18:19, 23 September 2015 (UTC)
 * 3) Support it appears this article will receive a lot of hits each September around the anniversary of her murder. Can hopefully be improved in time for next year. AtHomeIn神戸 (talk) 14:26, 30 September 2015 (UTC)

Bill Skarsgård
approved. North America1000 04:00, 6 October 2015 (UTC)
 * Article with a high number of hits, could be expanded, some c/e etc. Article needs help.--BabbaQ (talk) 17:18, 22 August 2015 (UTC)
 * 1) Support - per nom. Ladysif (talk) 19:17, 25 August 2015 (UTC)
 * 2) Support per nom [although it no longer needs copyediting.] --Rubbish computer 18:26, 10 September 2015 (UTC)
 * 3) Support BLP of an actor that gets plenty of hits but needs work. AtHomeIn神戸 (talk) 14:22, 30 September 2015 (UTC)

Yolanda Saldívar
approved. North America1000 04:00, 6 October 2015 (UTC)
 * A page with several thousand page views each month, but overall poorly formatted, poorly sourced etc. An article that gets many hits each month with people wanting to read about this highly profiled murderer of a beloved singer needs to be good in my opinion. Could need help.--BabbaQ (talk) 19:59, 21 August 2015 (UTC)
 * 1) Support per above points, also only Start class. --Rubbish computer 18:28, 10 September 2015 (UTC)
 * 2) Support per nom - as this subject of the murder is well known and a popular subject.--Doug Coldwell (talk) 18:31, 23 September 2015 (UTC)
 * 3) Support per nom. The "early life" paragraph is entirely unsourced. AtHomeIn神戸 (talk) 06:23, 30 September 2015 (UTC)

Carl XVI Gustaf of Sweden
approved. North America1000 04:00, 6 October 2015 (UTC)
 * A B-class article that is in risk of becoming a C-class article without some c/e, better sourcing etc. --BabbaQ (talk) 19:52, 21 August 2015 (UTC)
 * 1) Support per nom, page views and general significance of subject. --Rubbish computer 18:30, 10 September 2015 (UTC)
 * 2) Support per that of User:Rubbish computer.--Doug Coldwell (talk) 18:23, 23 September 2015 (UTC)
 * 3) Support per nominator and other comments. Corinne (talk) 22:55, 26 September 2015 (UTC)

Molly Sandén
approved. North America1000 04:00, 6 October 2015 (UTC)
 * Article need c/e and plenty of more help.--BabbaQ (talk) 12:43, 15 August 2015 (UTC)
 * 1) Support per nom: also needs additional references, is start class and has several thousand page views per month. --Rubbish computer 08:56, 21 August 2015 (UTC)
 * 2) Support per nom and there seems to be plenty online to bounce off from.--Doug Coldwell (talk) 18:38, 10 September 2015 (UTC)
 * 3) Support per nominator and the other comments. Corinne (talk) 23:30, 26 September 2015 (UTC)

Kerobokan Prison
approved. North America1000 04:03, 6 October 2015 (UTC)
 * Article with hits up to 8000 or more at some months, that needs c/e, definitely needs expansion and it is possible to do. Has housed several notable prisoners that could be expanded on as well. The article could also need better sourcing. It is currently a stub.--BabbaQ (talk) 15:55, 11 September 2015 (UTC)
 * 1) Support per nom as it appears there are many book sources as well as online. Interesting subject and there will be spin-offs of additional articles (i.e. notable prisoners).--Doug Coldwell (talk) 16:48, 11 September 2015 (UTC)
 * 2) Support per DC and its Stub class. --Rubbish computer 16:09, 22 September 2015 (UTC)
 * 3) Support per nom and otherwise lengthy treatment of the Bali Nine. Cake (talk) 23:42, 26 September 2015 (UTC)