Wikipedia:Articles for improvement/Nominations/Archives/2016/5

Pondicherry
✅. North America1000 14:23, 30 April 2016 (UTC)
 * There are quite a few tags at the top of the article, which clearly needs work. More information could be added to the article. – Corinne (talk) 02:31, 26 April 2016 (UTC)
 * 1) Support – A major urban agglomeration and municipality in India. Can be improved. North America1000 04:01, 26 April 2016 (UTC)
 * 2) Support as is only Start class. --Rubbish computer (HALP!: I dropped the bass?) 20:06, 28 April 2016 (UTC)
 * 3) Support - per nom.--BabbaQ (talk) 11:56, 30 April 2016 (UTC)

Diurnality
✅. North America1000 14:23, 30 April 2016 (UTC)
 * There is a tag asking for more citations at the top of the article that dates from January 2009. I think a lot more could be added to this article. – Corinne (talk) 02:10, 23 April 2016 (UTC)
 * 1) Support - as there could be more sources and more of content. Note: diurnality is the opposite of nocturnality. Qwertyxp2000 (talk &#124; contribs) 06:48, 25 April 2016 (UTC)
 * 2) Support as is only a Stub and has significant page views. --Rubbish computer (HALP!: I dropped the bass?) 20:07, 28 April 2016 (UTC)
 * 3) Support - per nom.--BabbaQ (talk) 11:56, 30 April 2016 (UTC)

The Arts
✅. North America1000 14:24, 30 April 2016 (UTC)
 * Is one of the top 10 most important articles on Wikipedia, but on a c level. This can be improved. ThePlatypusofDoom (talk) 22:10, 9 April 2016 (UTC)
 * 1) Support – Per nom. I see several things that could be improved:
 * the formatting of the article, punctuation, etc.;
 * illustrations;
 * perhaps at least a mention of the arts used in therapy, and of art for and by disabled people; and
 * more information on avant-garde/cutting edge arts. – Corinne (talk) 02:19, 23 April 2016 (UTC)
 * 1) Support per above. --Rubbish computer (HALP!: I dropped the bass?) 20:09, 28 April 2016 (UTC)
 * 2) Support - per nom.--BabbaQ (talk) 11:57, 30 April 2016 (UTC)

Chicken as food



 * Expandable and improvable; common topic that may appeal to a variety of editors; high page views. North America1000 12:32, 1 May 2016 (UTC)
 * 1) Support per nom. --Rubbish computer (HALP!: I dropped the bass?) 14:20, 1 May 2016 (UTC)
 * 2) Support - per nom. Do note that Chicken (food) redirects there. Qwertyxp2000 (talk &#124; contribs) 08:35, 3 May 2016 (UTC)
 * 3) Support -per nom. Important topic. ThePlatypusofDoom (Talk) 21:10, 6 May 2016 (UTC)
 * ✅  09:11, 7 May 2016 (UTC)

Mona Sahlin

 * Article needs improvements in all areas. At risk of losing its C-grade. Better sourcing, formatting, expansion needed in several areas. Top-field politician in Sweden.--BabbaQ (talk) 12:24, 30 April 2016 (UTC)
 * 1) Support per nom. --Rubbish computer (HALP!: I dropped the bass?) 15:44, 30 April 2016 (UTC)
 * 2) Support per nom. ThePlatypusofDoom (Talk) 21:11, 6 May 2016 (UTC)
 * 3) Support per nom. – Corinne (talk) 02:11, 7 May 2016 (UTC)
 * ✅  09:13, 7 May 2016 (UTC)

Industry

 * A very poorly written article, but very important. Only start class, but a level-2 vital article. ThePlatypusofDoom (talk) 17:56, 26 April 2016 (UTC)
 * 1) Support per nom. --Rubbish computer (HALP!: I dropped the bass?) 20:07, 28 April 2016 (UTC)
 * 2) Support per nom.--BabbaQ (talk) 12:02, 30 April 2016 (UTC)
 * 3) support - still can be improved, and some sections are not good enough. Qwertyxp2000 (talk &#124; contribs) 08:34, 3 May 2016 (UTC)
 * ✅  09:13, 7 May 2016 (UTC)

Peru Two
✅. North America1000 03:02, 11 May 2016 (UTC)
 * Poorly written crime article that regularly gets a high number of views. There are plenty of potential for improvements and expansion.--BabbaQ (talk) 12:02, 30 April 2016 (UTC)
 * 1) Support per nom. --Rubbish computer (HALP!: I dropped the bass?) 15:46, 30 April 2016 (UTC)
 * 2) Support per nom ThePlatypusofDoom (Talk) 21:11, 6 May 2016 (UTC)
 * 3) Support – per nom   09:16, 7 May 2016 (UTC)
 * 4) Support – per nom. --Vinegarymass911 (talk) 05:18, 9 May 2016 (UTC)

Gunilla Persson
✅. North America1000 05:12, 16 May 2016 (UTC)
 * Article that could be expanded, improved overall. International modelling career could be expanded.--BabbaQ (talk) 12:20, 30 April 2016 (UTC)
 * 1) Support per nom and its only being Start class. --Rubbish computer (HALP!: I dropped the bass?) 15:45, 30 April 2016 (UTC)
 * 2) Support per nom. – Corinne (talk) 01:02, 14 May 2016 (UTC)
 * 3) Support this is actually more of a stub than a start class article. Could use some work. Omni Flames   let's talk about it  23:08, 14 May 2016 (UTC)

Performing arts
✅. North America1000 05:12, 16 May 2016 (UTC)
 * Level 2 vital article which is only at start class. Receives an average of 668 views a day. Could seriously use some help. Omni Flames   let's talk about it  11:16, 7 May 2016 (UTC)
 * 1) Support per nom. Start class article, but important. ThePlatypusofDoom (Talk) 16:07, 7 May 2016 (UTC)
 * 2) Support per nom. I'm a little puzzled by the relationship between performing arts and Performance art. Perhaps the latter could be covered a bit in this article. – Corinne (talk) 01:08, 14 May 2016 (UTC)
 * 3) Support - per nom.--BabbaQ (talk) 14:29, 14 May 2016 (UTC)