Wikipedia:Articles for improvement/Nominations/Archives/2017/1

Lars von Trier
✅. North America1000 13:21, 11 January 2017 (UTC)
 * This page was ruined in late July. It now needs an extensive reworking. AndrewOne (talk) 19:02, 28 December 2016 (UTC)
 * 1) Support - per nom. --BabbaQ (talk) 22:48, 30 December 2016 (UTC)
 * 2) Support - per nom. – Corinne (talk) 20:59, 1 January 2017 (UTC)
 * 3) Support per nom. Rubbish computer (HALP!: I dropped the bass?) 22:33, 4 January 2017 (UTC)

History of art
✅. North America1000 13:23, 11 January 2017 (UTC)
 * (Major intellectual field, with very uneven coverage in subsections) Mortaddams (talk) 12:36, 9 December 2016 (UTC)
 * 1) Support per nom.--BabbaQ (talk) 11:26, 22 December 2016 (UTC)
 * 2) Support per nom. – Corinne (talk) 01:07, 25 December 2016 (UTC)
 * 3) Support per nom. Rubbish computer (HALP!: I dropped the bass?) 10:18, 28 December 2016 (UTC)

Alans
. North America1000 13:22, 11 January 2017 (UTC)
 * This article is of interest to eleven WikiProjects. I think it can be improved, particularly the Archaeology, Language, and Religion sections. – Corinne (talk) 22:52, 10 December 2016 (UTC)
 * 1) Oppose - The article is already under a good stage. The only thing that really needs to be improved is sourcing for a few sections, but that is basically it. The article is already highly developed, and fixing a few sources would be a waste to TAFI. Red olta 📱 Cont ribs 23:33, 24 December 2016 (UTC)
 * 2) Oppose per Redolta's points. Rubbish computer (HALP!: I dropped the bass?) 10:20, 28 December 2016 (UTC)
 * 3) Oppose - per Redolta.--BabbaQ (talk) 22:47, 30 December 2016 (UTC)

William Mariner (writer)
✅. North America1000 13:22, 11 January 2017 (UTC)
 * Interesting article. Has had a tag "This article has multiple issues" since August 2012. – Corinne (talk) 17:00, 29 November 2016 (UTC)
 * 1) Support as is only Start class: room for improvement. Rubbish computer (HALP!: I dropped the bass?) 14:45, 2 December 2016 (UTC)
 * 2) Support - per nom. Red olta 📱 Cont ribs 15:44, 22 December 2016 (UTC)
 * 3) Support - per nom. --BabbaQ (talk) 22:46, 30 December 2016 (UTC)

Persian famine of 1917-1918
✅. North America1000 13:22, 11 January 2017 (UTC)
 * Major world event that is the top link when you google search "Persian famine". The article badly needs improvement. Beejsterb (talk) 20:33, 12 November 2016 (UTC)
 * 1) Support - per nom. Red olta 📱 Cont ribs 03:39, 28 November 2016 (UTC)
 * 2) Support per nom. Rubbish computer (HALP!: I dropped the bass?) 14:44, 2 December 2016 (UTC)
 * 3) Oppose - Article is generally fine and I don't believe anyone would improve this anyway, IMHO this would be a waste of a week. – Davey 2010 Talk 00:17, 5 December 2016 (UTC)
 * 4) Support - Needs improvement. J947 05:52, 9 December 2016 (UTC)
 * 5) Support - per nom. --BabbaQ (talk) 22:47, 30 December 2016 (UTC)

Sun Management Center
✅. North America1000 19:50, 22 January 2017 (UTC)
 * Short, unreferenced article. Google Books searches provide some usable sources. North America1000 13:47, 11 January 2017 (UTC)
 * 1) Support per nom. --BabbaQ (talk) 00:23, 17 January 2017 (UTC)
 * 2) Support per nom. Rubbish computer (HALP!: I dropped the bass?) 14:02, 18 January 2017 (UTC)
 * 3) Support per nom. – Corinne (talk) 19:43, 22 January 2017 (UTC)

Sonoluminescence
(automated closure) No further input after 21 days &mdash;  MusikBot talk 04:39, 26 January 2017 (UTC)
 * This article contains many "citation needed" tags and several red links; the formatting of the images and accompanying captions could be improved; and there may be more up-to-date information that could be added to the article. I may be wrong, but have we taken on any articles on the physical sciences lately? – Corinne (talk) 21:08, 1 January 2017 (UTC)
 * 1) Support per nom. Rubbish computer (HALP!: I dropped the bass?) 22:34, 4 January 2017 (UTC)

Urarina language
✅. North America1000 23:07, 27 January 2017 (UTC)
 * A rare language spoken in Peru. Google Books provides some usable sources for expansion. North America1000 14:08, 11 January 2017 (UTC)
 * 1) Support per nom. Rubbish computer (HALP!: I dropped the bass?) 14:01, 18 January 2017 (UTC)
 * 2) Support per nom. – Corinne (talk) 19:45, 22 January 2017 (UTC)
 * 3) Support - per nom. --BabbaQ (talk) 22:33, 27 January 2017 (UTC)

Javine Hylton
(automated closure) No further input after 21 days &mdash;  MusikBot talk 04:36, 28 January 2017 (UTC)
 * Article needs plenty of improvements with prose, sources and expansion (which is really possible here).--BabbaQ (talk) 11:25, 22 December 2016 (UTC)
 * 1) Support per nom. Rubbish computer (HALP!: I dropped the bass?) 10:18, 28 December 2016 (UTC)
 * 2) Support per nom. – Corinne (talk) 01:07, 6 January 2017 (UTC)