Wikipedia:Articles for improvement/Nominations/Archives/Archive 5

Sadomasochism
Approved
 * High number of page views. The article is in very bad shape, with 13 citation needed tags, 4 original research tags, and many maintenance templates. There had been a proposal to redirect the article to BDSM, but this was not done due to insufficient consensus, and the article remained in this shape. sovereign°sentinel (contribs) 12:35, 2 September 2015 (UTC)
 * 1) Support per nom and page views. Rubbish computer 14:17, 2 September 2015 (UTC)
 * 2) Support per nom.--BabbaQ (talk) 17:32, 10 September 2015 (UTC)
 * 3) Support per nom; some potential for a minefield given the subject matter but political correctness is not the answer, btw. -- Quis separabit? 14:27, 23 September 2015 (UTC)

Gulf of Suez


Unapproved. North America1000 06:55, 19 October 2015 (UTC)
 * An expandable start-class article about a significantly important body of water. Some new and relatively newer sources about the region include, , , , among others. North America1000 02:12, 2 September 2015 (UTC)
 * 1) Support - Expansion possible. sources etc.--BabbaQ (talk) 17:30, 10 September 2015 (UTC)
 * 2) Support per above points, as well as reasonably high page views and High Importance in WikiProject Egypt. --Rubbish computer 18:04, 10 September 2015 (UTC)

Organized religion
Approved. North America1000 07:21, 19 October 2015 (UTC)
 * Extremely important article. Surprised it's so bare when compared with religion. Coin945 (talk) 08:49, 8 October 2015 (UTC)
 * 1) Support per nom. Rubbish computer 16:33, 8 October 2015 (UTC)
 * 2) Support per nom as well.--BabbaQ (talk) 16:54, 8 October 2015 (UTC)
 * 3) Support per nom -- Aryan fromHindustan (talk) 10:13, 15 October 2015 (UTC)

Larry Paul Kelley
Unapproved. North America1000 06:57, 19 October 2015 (UTC)
 * Currently a C Class article with opportunities improvement, per remarks left at Talk (DYK nomination) by a newbie.--Doug Coldwell (talk) 12:58, 9 September 2015 (UTC)
 * 1) Support - per nom. Opportunities to improve article.--BabbaQ (talk) 17:31, 10 September 2015 (UTC)
 * 2) Support per above points: is also Mid Importance in WikiProjects Gemology and Jewelry, Business and Chemistry. --Rubbish computer 18:19, 10 September 2015 (UTC)
 * 3) Oppose – because Shelby Gem Factory was recently approved and is on the Articles for improvement board. Kelley is a co-founder of Shelby Gem Factory. As such, we would have two articles about this highly interrelated topical area. North America1000 06:45, 14 September 2015 (UTC)
 * 4) Oppose per Northamerica1000. --Rubbish computer 16:05, 22 September 2015 (UTC)

The Tao of Pooh
Unapproved. North America1000 06:57, 19 October 2015 (UTC)
 * On the New York Times bestseller list for 49 weeks, the book provides an introduction to the Eastern belief system of Taoism for Westerners, and is used as required reading in some college courses North America1000 18:22, 10 September 2015 (UTC)
 * 1) Support per nom, page views and being only Start class. --Rubbish computer 18:31, 10 September 2015 (UTC)
 * 2) Oppose: I have changed my mind as I am not convinced as to the significance of this particular article. --Rubbish computer 16:07, 22 September 2015 (UTC)

Omakase

 * Article could need expansion, c/e, better sourcing. Views are high for a food subject with about 5000 views a month.
 * Comment This is a difficult one. I am not sure how much more can be said on the topic. I have removed a couple of things from the article which I felt didn't belong, including the photo which belongs to a completely different topic (see the talk page). I thought the Japanese wikipedia article on the topic might provide some further sources or inspiration, but I instead discovered that there isn't even a Japanese article on the subject. AtHomeIn神戸 (talk) 02:34, 19 October 2015 (UTC)
 * Still a article with a high number of hits each month, so if for anything TAFI could help expand on this topic.BabbaQ (talk) 17:47, 19 October 2015 (UTC)

Approved. North America1000 01:58, 26 October 2015 (UTC)
 * 1) Support per page view stats, Mid Importance on WikiProject Food and Drink and its only being Start class. --Rubbish computer (HALP!: I dropped the bass?) 20:21, 21 October 2015 (UTC)
 * 2) Support per Rubbishcomputer. I'm unable to find a wealth of sources, but I imagine they'd all be in Japanese.--Coin945 (talk) 17:15, 22 October 2015 (UTC)
 * 3) Support I'll support because I would love to see it improved. Currently it sounds like it is only used in American sushi restaurants. Of course, it originated in Japanese sushi shops. There are plenty of blogs available in Japanese dealing with people's experiences, but reliable sources that can actually add something may be a problem. AtHomeIn神戸 (talk) 00:55, 23 October 2015 (UTC)

Barbershop quartet
Important topic. Sad article.--Coin945 (talk) 09:47, 30 October 2015 (UTC) Approved. North America1000 15:08, 5 November 2015 (UTC)
 * 1) Support – Well known topic; receives a decent number of page views. North America1000 17:05, 1 November 2015 (UTC)
 * 2) Support – per nom.--BabbaQ (talk) 19:20, 2 November 2015 (UTC)
 * 3) Support This article needs support. Lots of different institutions (schools ect) have a barbershop quartet. Catmando999   Check out his talk page!  05:10, 5 November 2015 (UTC)

Grease (song)
Approved. North America1000 00:22, 30 October 2015 (UTC)
 * Famous song from Grease (film). Coin945 (talk) 08:32, 26 October 2015 (UTC)
 * 1) Support - a popular song that even appeals to the generations down from those who seen it when it was in the cinema. Donnie Park (talk) 11:03, 26 October 2015 (UTC)
 * 2) Support Potential for expansion and improvement. --Rubbish computer (HALP!: I dropped the bass?) 19:29, 26 October 2015 (UTC)
 * 3) *Comment: I have changed the article's class to Start as it appeared too lengthly to be a stub, a rating automatically assigned to it. Rubbish computer (HALP!: I dropped the bass?) 19:29, 26 October 2015 (UTC)
 * 4) Support - per nom.--BabbaQ (talk) 20:48, 28 October 2015 (UTC)

Fame (Irene Cara song)
Approved. North America1000 00:23, 30 October 2015 (UTC)
 * Famous song from Fame (1980 film). Coin945 (talk) 08:32, 26 October 2015 (UTC)
 * 1) Support - without argument is it, it still gets airplays and a dance class favorite. Donnie Park (talk) 11:12, 26 October 2015 (UTC)
 * 2) Support Potential for expansion and improvement. --Rubbish computer (HALP!: I dropped the bass?) 19:33, 26 October 2015 (UTC)
 * 3) *Comment: I have changed the article's class to Start as it appeared too lengthly to be a stub, a rating automatically assigned to it. Rubbish computer (HALP!: I dropped the bass?) 19:33, 26 October 2015 (UTC)
 * 4) Support - per nom.--BabbaQ (talk) 20:48, 28 October 2015 (UTC)

Choreography

 * A major art form. I was surprised that our article on it is so short. — Mr. Stradivarius  ♪ talk ♪ 09:50, 26 October 2015 (UTC)

Approved. North America1000 00:36, 29 October 2015 (UTC)
 * 1) Support I wholeheartedly agree. :D--Coin945 (talk) 09:59, 26 October 2015 (UTC)
 * 2) Support Per above points. --Rubbish computer (HALP!: I dropped the bass?) 19:38, 26 October 2015 (UTC)
 * 3) Support - per nomination.--BabbaQ (talk) 20:50, 28 October 2015 (UTC)

Fire sprinkler
Approved. North America1000 17:09, 1 November 2015 (UTC)
 * Fire sprinklers are used as safety devices in many offices, hotels and storage facilities. Lbertolotti (talk) 14:55, 28 October 2015 (UTC)
 * 1) Support - per nomination.--BabbaQ (talk) 20:50, 28 October 2015 (UTC)
 * 2) Support per nom.--Coin945 (talk) 09:20, 30 October 2015 (UTC)
 * 3) Support – Globally-renowned topic; article receives many page views. North America1000 17:08, 1 November 2015 (UTC)

Circular reporting
Very pertinent to Wikipedia due to citogenesis, and also a really bad article atm.--Coin945 (talk) 17:17, 16 October 2015 (UTC) Approved. North America1000 00:37, 29 October 2015 (UTC)
 * 1) Support There should be some academic sources available to expand this topic, which is both important and interesting. AtHomeIn神戸 (talk) 01:18, 20 October 2015 (UTC)
 * 2) Support Easy to expand, current article is minimal. --Rubbish computer (HALP!: I dropped the bass?) 19:51, 21 October 2015 (UTC)
 * 3) Support - per nomination.--BabbaQ (talk) 20:51, 28 October 2015 (UTC)

No such thing as a stupid question
Interesting topic.--Coin945 (talk) 10:39, 22 October 2015 (UTC) Approved. North America1000 00:38, 29 October 2015 (UTC)
 * 1) Support as is only Start class. --Rubbish computer (HALP!: I dropped the bass?) 19:54, 25 October 2015 (UTC)
 * 2) Support – A well-known phrase and expression that is interesting. Receives a decent number of page views per month. North America1000 02:06, 26 October 2015 (UTC)
 * 3) Support - per nomination.--BabbaQ (talk) 20:53, 28 October 2015 (UTC)

The Sims (video game)
One of the best-selling video games of all time.--Coin945 (talk) 16:50, 22 October 2015 (UTC) Approved. North America1000 18:01, 1 November 2015 (UTC)
 * 1) Support per nom, also has page view stats, High Importance in WikiProject Video games and is only Start class. --Rubbish computer (HALP!: I dropped the bass?) 20:24, 25 October 2015 (UTC)
 * 2) Support - per nomination.--BabbaQ (talk) 20:56, 28 October 2015 (UTC)
 * 3) Support per nom with a global notability. Donnie Park (talk) 16:10, 30 October 2015 (UTC)

Nuuk

 * Bit too bare-bones for a national capital.  Rcsprinter123    (blab)  20:24, 29 October 2015 (UTC)

Approved. North America1000 21:31, 8 November 2015 (UTC)
 * 1) support - per nom.--BabbaQ (talk) 20:32, 29 October 2015 (UTC)
 * 2) Strong Support – This article about a topic of international interest (the capital and largest city of Greenland) has received 22,620 page views in the last 30 days and has good potential to be expanded. North America1000 18:33, 1 November 2015 (UTC)
 * 3) Support - Make it greener!--Sige &#124;д･) 16:41, 5 November 2015 (UTC)

List of aqueducts in the Roman Empire
Approved. North America1000 21:32, 8 November 2015 (UTC)
 * Quite expandable, such as by adding descriptions, sources, images, and perhaps reformatting the article into a table format to organize new content that could be added. North America1000 04:44, 27 October 2015 (UTC)
 * 1) Support despite my reservations regarding how easy it is to edit possibly indiscriminate lists (like List of cheeses from a while back.--Coin945 (talk) 05:08, 27 October 2015 (UTC)
 * 2) Support - per nomination.--BabbaQ (talk) 20:58, 28 October 2015 (UTC)
 * 3) Support - Yep--Sige &#124;д･) 22:51, 5 November 2015 (UTC)

Isabel Adrian
Approved. North America1000 16:59, 1 November 2015 (UTC)
 * An stub article that could easily be expanded. c/e and better sources needed as well. Has an international career which could be expanded plenty.--BabbaQ (talk) 22:26, 28 October 2015 (UTC)
 * 1) Support per nom.Lbertolotti (talk) 00:10, 29 October 2015 (UTC)
 * 2) Support per nom. Donnie Park (talk) 16:08, 30 October 2015 (UTC)
 * 3) Support per nom.  Rcsprinter123    (message)  22:37, 31 October 2015 (UTC)

Josephine Bornebusch
Approved. North America1000 16:59, 1 November 2015 (UTC)
 * An stub article that could easily be expanded. Better sourcing, c/e. International career. --BabbaQ (talk) 21:52, 28 October 2015 (UTC)
 * 1) Support per nom.Lbertolotti (talk) 00:10, 29 October 2015 (UTC)
 * 2) Support per nom. Donnie Park (talk) 16:07, 30 October 2015 (UTC)
 * 3) Support per nom.  Rcsprinter123    (message)  22:37, 31 October 2015 (UTC)

Astrid Lindgren
Article needs c/e, citations on several places. Expansion is possible. Possibly the worlds best known childrens book writers and her article is just not up to shape. --BabbaQ (talk) 22:18, 17 October 2015 (UTC) Approved. North America1000 01:06, 27 October 2015 (UTC)
 * 1) Support per nomination. AtHomeIn神戸 (talk) 02:16, 19 October 2015 (UTC)
 * 2) Support Also High Importance in WikiProjects Sweden and Children's literature. --Rubbish computer (HALP!: I dropped the bass?) 19:55, 21 October 2015 (UTC)
 * 3) Support per nom.--Coin945 (talk) 16:58, 22 October 2015 (UTC)

Aaron Fechter
Approved. North America1000 01:06, 27 October 2015 (UTC)
 * Needs some serious clean up and sourcing. Could be further expanded. Ladysif (talk) 22:27, 24 August 2015 (UTC)
 * 1) Support - per nom.--BabbaQ (talk) 18:01, 25 August 2015 (UTC)
 * 2) Support per nom: is also only Stub class. --Rubbish computer 18:21, 10 September 2015 (UTC)
 * 3) Support per nom and Rubbish computer.--Coin945 (talk) 16:58, 22 October 2015 (UTC)

SWOT analysis
Approved. North America1000 01:07, 27 October 2015 (UTC)
 * This topic receives a lot of daily hits and according to the page view page is "ranked 942 in traffic on en.wikipedia.org" However, the contents are a fairly hodge-podge pile of WP:HOWTO instructions. There is little encyclopedic description of the topic, such as its history. The page is semi-protected, so I assume it has been subject to spamming before. If someone is brave enough to tackle this, I wish them luck. I would love to completely re-write it myself from scratch but don't know where to start. AtHomeIn神戸 (talk) 02:55, 14 October 2015 (UTC)
 * 1) Support per nom. --Rubbish computer (HALP!: I dropped the bass?) 16:01, 16 October 2015 (UTC)
 * 2) Support per nom.--BabbaQ (talk) 22:18, 17 October 2015 (UTC)
 * 3) Support. As a marketing student, I know how highly regarding this concept is. Article deserves expansion.--Coin945 (talk) 16:58, 22 October 2015 (UTC)