Wikipedia:CARL Medical Editing Initiative/Fall 2020/Talk Page Template

  Article Talk Page Template (share your suggested article changes with other Wikipedia editors)

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Template: Examples of proposed changes. Please modify to fit your proposed improvement
Hello, we are a group of medical students editing this page as part of our class assignment. We have compiled a list of suggestions to improve this article and would appreciate community feedback before we proceed with these edits. Here is a list of our suggestions:

We propose to insert the following content into the Peanut Allergy#Diagnosis section: (quote sentence you plan to add, please remember to paraphrase, no direct quotes permitted). (note: use the PMID tool to insert your reference)

After consulting with MEDMOS we propose to make the following changes to the structure of the article (order of evidence, heading name changes, remove a section, etc)

We propose to create a section called Signs and Symptoms. Our proposed paragraph is as follows: xxx

We noticed that reference # 35 is a primary source/outdated/a weak journal article or weak textbook and the proceeding sentence is not supported by a stronger source. We could not find any WP:MEDRS sources that can be used as a replacement, so we propose to remove reference 35 and the evidence or information shared from it (quote sentence you propose to remove).

Please refrain from sharing assignment questions and content that are not directly related to the text and citations you wish to add to the article.

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