Wikipedia:Cleanup Taskforce/Second Industrial Revolution

Second Industrial Revolution
This isn't terrible, but it needs a little work. Could use some more context and better explanations of some concepts for laymen; also the tone is not encyclopedic in some areas. &middot; Katefan0(scribble) 23:18, Apr 22, 2005 (UTC)
 * Referred to User:Apwoolrich. &middot; Katefan0(scribble) 23:18, Apr 22, 2005 (UTC)