Wikipedia:Cleanup Taskforce/The Office

The Office
The grammar in the opening section (and possibly later on, but I couldn't bring myself to read any further) is appalling - this is largely because of the authors' "knowing" (but inept) references to series in-jokes which have no place in an encyclopaedia article (and least not with that staggering level of stylistic ineptitude).


 * Referred to myself. &middot; Katefan0(scribble) 16:39, May 2, 2005 (UTC)
 * Took a first crack at cleanup. Wasn't too bad.  Grammar and structure problems that I fixed, some tense issues also.  Shouldn't be too much left to do here. &middot; Katefan0(scribble) 21:00, May 2, 2005 (UTC)
 * General tidying. I'm all done. &middot; Katefan0(scribble) 22:19, May 3, 2005 (UTC)