Wikipedia:Copyright problems/2011 September 25

Copyright investigations (manual article tagging)

 * Nakuru Boys High School ([ history] · [ last edit]) from http://www.nakuruhigh.ac.ke/about-us and perhaps http://nakuruhigh.ac.ke/sports. this revision looks like a copyvio addition. Minima  ©  ( talk ) 20:18, 17 September 2011 (UTC)
 * Relisted from 17th after contributor notified. January  ( talk ) 11:24, 25 September 2011 (UTC)
 * Pictogram voting keep.svg Article cleaned by investigator or others. No remaining infringement. --Moonriddengirl (talk) 18:52, 10 October 2011 (UTC)


 * American Society for the Prevention of Cruelty to Animals ([ history] · [ last edit]) from (History section),  (Medicine for Animals, ASPCA Adoption Center),  (Cruelty Investigations),  (ASPCA and legislation), introduced by IP editor on 7 September. Relisted from 17th, contributor not notified and more found than originally reported.  January  ( talk ) 11:58, 25 September 2011 (UTC)
 * Pictogram voting keep.svg Article cleaned by investigator or others. No remaining infringement. Whoa. Revert to prior to *that* run, but I found more as well from an earlier contributor, now also warned. --Moonriddengirl (talk) 19:04, 10 October 2011 (UTC)


 * Jean-Louis Vincent ([ history] · [ last edit]) from http://www.cicm-asm.org.au/index.php?view=speakers. January  ( talk ) 12:53, 25 September 2011 (UTC)
 * Marie-Leontine Tsibinda ([ history] · [ last edit]) from Presumptive blanking per WP:COPYVIO. CCI: S710. MER-C 04:49, 17 September 2011 (UTC)
 * The template was removed by a contributor out of process. While he asserts that it is not a copyvio, he doesn't really provide a good explanation why. I've asked him directly here and relisted. Since the article was created with three links, two of which are dead, it will be difficult to determine that this is clear of concerns. --Moonriddengirl (talk) 22:12, 25 September 2011 (UTC)
 * Pictogram voting keep.svg Article cleaned by investigator or others. No remaining infringement. Stubbed. --Moonriddengirl (talk) 19:11, 10 October 2011 (UTC)


 * Tourism in Balochistan, Pakistan ([ history] · [ last edit]) from http://www.balochistan.gov.pk/index.php?option=com_content&task=category&sectionid=4&id=29&Itemid=492, possibly othe sources. I am considering that WP:CCI may be needed here, although the most prevalent issues I am seeing are unattributed splits. See (and subsequent sections) and . Moonriddengirl (talk) 14:04, 25 September 2011 (UTC)
 * I've asked the contributor to work a bit further on the rewrite, User_talk:Mar4d. --Moonriddengirl (talk) 11:21, 4 October 2011 (UTC)
 * He has not. Will somebody else please evaluate this one? --Moonriddengirl (talk) 20:24, 10 October 2011 (UTC)
 * First of all, a government brochure promoting business investment is really not a good source on which to base an entire article. If perfume was traded 2500 years ago, then surely there will be a scholarly article discussing trade links. Not that that has anything in particular to do with tourism, and off-topic for the purpose of this page. The first paragraph looks OK (barring the odd typo), though more to do with geography than tourism, but doesn't appear to have been lifted from elsewhere. The 2nd and 3rd paragraphs are minimal "copy/reshuffle/synonymize"s of the source material, much too close in my judgement. The 4th paragraph, first and last sentences look OK, the middle sentences are basically uncritical copying from the source. This whole thing should be redone from multiple sources, rather than just reading down through one brochure - or since the editor is showing no interest, removed. Franamax (talk) 00:43, 14 October 2011 (UTC)
 * Thanks. I've removed the problematic paragraphs and sentences. --Moonriddengirl (talk) 19:00, 16 October 2011 (UTC)