Wikipedia:Editor review/A legend

A legend
The source of the cosmos... 01:13, 28 June 2007 (UTC)

 Reviews 

I noticed that your "big contribs" on your userpage were Miles Whitediff and Dragon Ball (artifact) [Dragon Ball (artifact) diff]. (A diff is the difference between two stored versions of an article.) In both cases, you neglected to leave an edit summary, and your edits were reverted. In the Miles White article, the correct way to mention his age would be to present his dates of birth and death at the top of the article (see Dwight Eisenhower for an example). In the Dragon Ball article, it would have been a good idea to ask on the talk page before changing the character name to Shinrun. That was Shenron.--The source of the cosmos... 02:34, 12 July 2007 (UTC)

I commend you for not edit warring over these changes. However, it's better to check in advance, before you make a change, whether it will improve the article. As you continue to learn, your facility with the English language will catch up to the standard of Wikipedia. My English is professional for my age.--The source of the cosmos... 02:34, 12 July 2007 (UTC)

Nonetheless, I would encourage you to be bold and continue trying to improve articles. You've made more edits to your userpage than to the encyclopedia, and it's better to focus on the "big picture." I would also encourage you to review my comments here with User:Chaser, your mentor, to develop a plan for your next few weeks on Wikipedia.

I wish you good luck. Shalom Hello 17:30, 11 July 2007 (UTC) Thanks! I wish you good luck too!--The source of the cosmos... 02:34, 12 July 2007 (UTC)

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 Questions


 * 1) Of your contributions to Wikipedia, are there any about which you are particularly pleased, and why?
 * About my improvments on Miles White, and Dragon Ball(artifact).
 * 1) Have you been in any conflicts over editing in the past or do you feel other users have caused you stress? How have you dealt with it and how will you deal with it in the future?
 * I haven't felt stress on Wikipedia, yet.
 * I haven't felt stress on Wikipedia, yet.