Wikipedia:Editor review/Cwmhiraeth

Cwmhiraeth
My competency at writing science-related articles has been called into question here on the Administrators' noticeboard where I have reported that I am being harassed by another editor. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 08:22, 1 April 2014 (UTC)

 Questions


 * 1) What are your primary contributions to Wikipedia? Are there any about which you are particularly pleased? Why?
 * I create content and mostly write or expand articles on individual organisms. I have also brought a number of articles to GA and FA standard
 * 1) Have you been in editing disputes or do you feel other users have caused you stress? How have you dealt with it and how will you deal with it in the future? If you have never been in an editing dispute, explain how you would respond to one.
 * I have not been in dispute with other editors but am constantly being criticised for my incompetence by user AfadsBad
 * 1) What do you want to get out of this editor review? Are you thinking of running for adminship? Would you like feedback on a specific area of your editing? Or would you just like a general review of your edits?
 * AfadsBad has stated that I make "multiple mistakes in every article" and that "every one of these articles needs [to be] extensively rewritten to be accurate." I would like a reviewer to look at some of my articles to determine whether the criticisms made by AfadsBad are valid. Thank you.

 Reviews 
 * OK. I think I'm neutral here; as far as I can remember I have not interacted with either editor, and I am also not active at Wikipediocracy. My knowledge of natural sciences is also pretty good.  I would suggest that  gives examples of articles containing errors or misleading information here (together with brief information as to why they consider these articles to be erroneous), whilst  is welcome to submit what they consider to be accurate ones.  We should be able to generate a reasonable discussion from this.  I also suggest that all parties refrain from using terms such as "harassment" and "nonsense".  Cheers, Black Kite (talk) 18:08, 1 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Thank you for taking on this role. Here are a few suggestions Formica incerta, Xyloplax turnerae, Adamussium and Cidaris cidaris, or you could select something else, they are all listed on my user page. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 19:13, 1 April 2014 (UTC)
 * - see discussion at User_talk:Casliber - we've been discussing this edit there. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 20:23, 1 April 2014 (UTC)


 * I will look at the suggested articles, also, if possible. I am just going to do the most recent articles and the most recent edits. Someone feel free to correct my indentation to make this more readable.
 * Glyptonotus antarcticus
 * Description, bad link, found the same source elsewhere. "It is generally woodlouse-like in appearance and has a head with two pairs of unbranched antennae[3]" Period missing from Wikipedia sentence. Description is about the suborder, but you are writing it in the species description. A suborder and a species are not the same thing. Not in source, "woodlouse-like" in appearance, and what does this mean, is it the similar flattening, because I think this giant Antarctic one has terminal appendages that are distinctly not woodlouse-like. Is the two pairs of unbranched antennae a distinguishing characteristic, or is there some reason, of all the information about the suborder in this source you selected this one piece of information to include in the species description? It appears to be original resource and improper weighting. "There is no carapace and the segmented thorax bears seven pairs of pereopods (walking legs). The abdomen has five pleopods (swimming legs with gills) and a single pair of uropods (tail fan) which are large and folded under the abdomen where they protect the pleopods.[3]" This is also from the suborder; the sources says 7 or 6 pairs, not 6 pairs of pereopods (maybe it's six pairs plus the uropods?). Pleopods are not "swimming legs with gills," although this may be true for this taxon (the suborder), but I don't know. It doesn't say "mouthparts" in the source about cuticular microstructures, and this may also significantly alter them meaning conveyed when comparing these to related terrestrial organisms and their microstructure functions. More to come. --(AfadsBad (talk) 20:59, 1 April 2014 (UTC))
 * Also, the pleon in isopods can be a characteristic used for evolutionary relationships, so the number should be exact, if it is, but not, if it isn't. Accuracy may change something about the taxonomy of this organism. --(AfadsBad (talk) 22:11, 1 April 2014 (UTC))
 * "It is thought that these may help to prevent growth of epiphytic organisms on the body surface." This sentence leads us to the fact that scientists think that the Antarctic marine isopod might be able to prevent plants from growing on its body. This is not in the article; the article speculates the projectiles may be able to prevent "forams and larval stages of sessile organisms," not plants. "Epiphyte" has the clue "phyte." Again, not even close to the source. --(AfadsBad (talk) 22:24, 1 April 2014 (UTC))
 * Distribution and habitat "Glyptonotus antarcticus is native to the Southern Ocean and the coasts of Antarctica. Its range includes the Antarctic Peninsula, the Weddell Sea and the Ross Sea.[2] It lives on the seabed at depths ranging from the intertidal zone down to about 580 m (1900 ft).[1]" The Southern Ocean and the coasts of Antarctica? The Southern Ocean is the ocean that runs up to the coasts of Antarctica. How about "Glyptonotus antarcticus is native to the coasts of Antarctica including the Antarctice Peninsula, the Weddell Sea, and the Ross Sea. But, including these three specific locations implies they are specific or important, and omits why they are specific or important, that a single study identified an insignifcant number of unique mitochondrial haplotypes in these three locations.
 * General The article also omits an important piece of information about this organism, it is a model organism for Antarctic marine isopods. And, because it omits this major fact, it omits descriptions of the qualities that make it a model organism. --(AfadsBad (talk) 22:44, 1 April 2014 (UTC))
 * Comment: The source for "woodlouse-like" seems to be this unsourced 2006 edit to the article on Valvifera. I can't readily find a (non-Wikipedia-related) source that makes the same comparison, so it's potentially dodgy. Andreas JN 466 21:37, 1 April 2014 (UTC)
 * I don't know if there is any evolutionary significance to dorsoventral flattening, so, this statement does require a source. Thanks. --(AfadsBad (talk) 22:03, 1 April 2014 (UTC))


 * Reply I started expanding this article on March 30th and it was quite difficult to write because there was limited availability of suitable information, especially a description. The "woodlouse-like" is taken from the appearance of the animal in all the images that I saw. Isopods are mostly dorso-ventrally flattened. This article is quite a good choice of article for AfadsBad to criticise, not yet necessarily being finished! Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:15, 2 April 2014 (UTC)
 * "The "woodlouse-like" is taken from the appearance of the animal in all the images that I saw.": I'm sorry, that falls under original research. Descriptions of physical similarities and evolutionary relationships should be based on sources, not on editors' visual associations. Andreas JN 466 02:07, 4 April 2014 (UTC)


 * A statement
 * I am working on the article Isopoda with a view to GA and I come across mention of Glyptonotus antarcticus and I think, what an interesting animal, a four inch woodlouse-like creature crawling about under the sea ice. I decide to expand the single sentence stub. As I work I begin to realise how little general information is available. In my view, all species articles need a description but I can't find much information on the animal's morphology so I have to tack one together from different sources and resort to a higher level taxon for some basic details. I'm pleased with my detective work. So where does this creature live? Antarctica presumably, and the South Shetland Islands certainly, but does its range extend to Patagonia or elsewhere? I don't know and decide Southern Ocean is probably a safe choice. I also find that it occurs in the Ross Sea, the Weddell Sea and the Antarctic Peninsular so I add these details to my budding article. It's probably known from these locations because there are various marine research stations there, but I can't mention that because it would be OR. I find mention of echinoderms being a large part of the diet and add that. I wonder about adding something about reproduction. All isopods brood their young in chambers under the thorax. Many Wikipedia readers may not know this and I would like to add it, however I can find nothing specific to this species so leave that for the time being. I find some further information on diet which I plan to add, a list of several invertebrate groups that does not include echinoderms. I am going to revise the biology section to change the potentially misleading information on diet but at this stage AfadsBad starts criticising the article so I stop. All my pleasure in researching the species evaporates. Because a topic ban has been suggested and I want to continue to write articles on biology subjects and organisms in particular, I take note of AfadsBad's criticisms and hack bits out of the article so it conforms to that particular editor's view. Is it a change for the better, I think not. Is the article an improvement on the original stub, I think it is. Do I want to go on writing this sort of article, I do, but not with AfadsBad perpetually looking over my shoulder, calling me a vandal and trying to ridicule my every effort. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:55, 10 April 2014 (UTC)


 * Precisely. According to AfadsBad no articles should be written on Wikipedia unless a world authority on the article topic is willing to write it. Our admin system is mostly interested in preening and feathering its own nest, and little support for content builders is going to come from that direction. Content builders who ever write articles on topics where they are not recognised authorities should be cowering in corners. Their only option now is to become admins or abandon Wikipedia. We must put our faith in the massive competence of AfadsBad, who surely now will write the necessary articles himself. --Epipelagic (talk) 07:10, 10 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Based on the problems identified, I do think you need someone looking over your shoulder, because at times you cite very unreliable sources, propagating their errors through Wikipedia. And resorting to a higher-level taxon for species information is problematic, for the reasons stated below. A reader should never be led to think that a comment made in a source on a higher-level taxon was made on a specific species. So if the source says, "Isopods are X", you should never write "Glyptonotus antarcticus is X", citing that source and making it appear to the reader that the source said this about Glyptonotus antarcticus. Andreas JN 466 13:01, 10 April 2014 (UTC)
 * I think your comment on my sometimes using unreliable sources is correct and I agree with your point about higher level taxa. Nor would I in the least mind having someone looking over my shoulder if they provided guidance and were helpful when I make mistakes. AfadsBad does not fit this role. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 13:21, 10 April 2014 (UTC)


 * Atlantic Puffin, which, according to Cwmhiraeth's user page was promoted to FA status not "as a result of collaborative effort." So, I'm assuming she wrote it, reviewed it, and promoted it entirely by herself.
 * Objection Black Kite has banned snide comments like this one from the page. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:26, 2 April 2014 (UTC)
 * So, what should I assume other than that when you say, "I entered (the WikiCup again in 2013 and repeated my success. During the course of the 2013 competition Sea, Starfish, Common Starling, Manta Ray, Crocodilian and Atlantic Puffin were promoted to FA status, all but the last as a result of a collaborative effort. What do you mean by Atlantic Puffin not being a result of collaborative effort? You also say below that someone else provided the cladogram. I picked this based on its being on the main page, but also your statement that it was not the result of collaborative effort, which sounds as if it could not be true considering the amount of work reviewers put into looking at FACs. Maybe you can include a more truthful statement about your ownership of this article, or maybe you mean something else by Atlantic Puffin not being the result of collaborative effort. You chased me away from Desert with your snide response to my correcting science and also let me know you owned that article, too. Was Atlantic Puffin actually a result of collaborative effort? --(AfadsBad (talk) 21:09, 4 April 2014 (UTC))
 * You are talking here about a sentence on my user page. In the articles Sea, Starfish, Common Starling, Manta Ray and Crocodilian I had a formal arrangement with other editors that we should jointly bring the article to FAC. In the case of Atlantic Puffin I had no such arrangement. I expanded the article, nominated it for GA and subsequently for FA. Of course other people edited it along the way, especially during the FA process, but it was not a pre-arranged collaboration. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:14, 5 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Did User Cwmhiraeth expect to do the FAC review on the Atlantic Puffin on her own? Snowman (talk) 14:09, 22 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Taxonomy and etymology "It is placed in the auk family, Alcidae, which includes the guillemots, typical auks, murrelets, auklets, puffins and the Razorbill." A list of tribes, except that the Razorbill is a species in one of the tribes. Why not just list the common names of the tribes as currently taxonomically accepted? This sentence is cited to a source which does not include the tribes, so this tribal plus one species listing is unexplained original research. "The Rhinoceros Auklet (Cerorhinca monocerata) and the puffins are closely related, together composing the subfamily Fraterculini.[4]" The Wikipedia article calls the Fraterculini a tribe, not a subfamily. This contradiction was not sorted out before this article was promoted to FA. The Atlantic Puffin article uses a 1999 source, but the Auk article used a later source for its systematics section. The source used by Cwmhiraeth does not contain the information she included, that it is a member of the subfamily, it calls it a tribe, like the Wikipedia article on Auks. Also, the proper article to use for the taxonomy is not an article describing a newly discovered fossil species, but if that article is used, it must be used accurately. The subfamily is the Fraterculinae. This has the familiar ending for a subfamily, while the tribe name ends in "-ini," as is common in zoology for tribe names. Another not in source for this sentence, "The specific name arctica refers to the northerly distribution of the bird, being derived from the Greek "arktos", the bear, referring to the northerly constellation, the Great Bear.[7]" does not say that the name refers to the northerly distribution of the bird from the bear referring to the northerly constellation, the Great Bear. It's just a Greek-English lexicon with a definition of ἄρκτος. It's unsourced. --(AfadsBad (talk) 0250, 2 April 2014 (UTC))


 * "guillemots, typical auks, murrelets, auklets, puffins and the Razorbill" are a list of the types of birds by English name, not tribes, in the family. So it is not OR as you've asumed the tribe bit not Cwmhiraeth. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 03:32, 2 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Yes, they are types of bird, and typical auks (note the "s"), guillemots (note the "s"), murrelets (note the "s"), auklets (note the "s"), and puffins (note the "s"), are groups of birds, but Razorbill (note the lack of an "s"), is a single species of bird, closely related to the other birds within one of the aforementioned groups. One of these things is not like the other. So, it was just a random list of some common English names of birds in the family? Why? --(AfadsBad (talk) 03:42, 2 April 2014 (UTC))
 * So what are these birds, are they the major, the most familiar, the defining members, a minor subset, or what? This list didn't come from the source attached to the sentence. The Guillemots, several species of birds, the species depending upon your nationality, the typical auks redirects to auk, which gives it as some of the members of a tribe, the murrelets are a genus, the auklets, a tribe, and the puffins, a genus, and the Razorbill a species. Is there some source which lists these particular random common names of species, genera, groups and tribes of birds as the members of the auk family? It's OR; it did not come from the source cited, and it does not appear to be useful. Is it comprehensive? Are some tribes missing? The cladogram is improperly done, so the reader should not be expected to get the information from it. This is the random patchwork of information system. List the tribes, list a familiar member from every tribe, list the most familiar members, list some representative geographic members, but don't provide your OR about the Auk Family. --(AfadsBad (talk) 03:57, 2 April 2014 (UTC))
 * The common names often do not correspond to the same taxonomic units, as you very well know - the common names cover all members of the family - they are used to engage the reader. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 11:52, 2 April 2014 (UTC)
 * It's unsourced, the reason, if any, for this group of names, as is the group of names. --(AfadsBad (talk) 12:00, 2 April 2014 (UTC))


 * Correct on the tribe issue - changed now Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 03:36, 2 April 2014 (UTC)


 * Cladogram Copied incorrectly from the source, should be removed from the article. --(AfadsBad (talk) 03:10, 2 April 2014 (UTC))


 * Chameleon goby
 * "Orangish-grey?" Please don't. It can be orange to grey, but "orangish-grey" is a made-up color, and, even if real, it is not the same as something that varies from orange to grey in color. "Orangish-grey" is not in the source. " It is a demersal fish, living and feeding near the seabed, both in bays and rocky coasts, in brackish water and freshwater lakes. It typically hides in crevices, under stones, in burrows or among seagrasses.[3]" This is confusing, bays can be brackish water, and as you've emphasized brackish water it could be in brackish waters along rocky coasts, but, this fish is also found in marine waters; for a fish that lives in marine, fresh and brackish waters the article should state that instead of contorting something else. "The male prepares a nest in a crevice, a mollusc shell or even a discarded bottle or can. [5]" This is the reproduction of the species in its non-native range. Is it the same in its native range? That needs sourced to its native range. --(AfadsBad (talk) 03:36, 2 April 2014 (UTC))
 * Reply I started expanding this article on 31st March and I am still working on it. About the colouring, the source says "grey to orange stripe" which seems unhelpful to me. I cannot use that exact same phrase in my article for fear of close paraphrasing. I have found little information on the fish in its native range and have therefore had to make use of the material I had. I was careful to say it bred in spring and summer rather than giving a month range, as that information would likely be different in the southern hemisphere. Similarly, its diet probably varies across its range but I have to use the sources I can find. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:37, 2 April 2014 (UTC)
 * This is the one place you should plagiarize. You once changed some crustacean color to avoid plagiarism and applied a characteristic color of a different species. Sometimes these colors are identifying characteristics. You should not copy the flowery language of sunlight in mangroves, though. --(AfadsBad (talk) 14:54, 2 April 2014 (UTC))
 * It is on the main page now. Can you explain why you differentiated only one similar species when the source describes two similar species? This is OR, you decided to not include part of the information, creating an article implying this is all of the information about similar species. It's not. (AfadsBad (talk) 16:21, 7 April 2014 (UTC))
 * The source provides a detailed comparison with T. bifasciatus, which was once considered to be synonymous with it, while only mentioning the other fish in passing. I don't believe omitting something from an article is OR. Even a GA has no need to be comprehensive! Cwmhiraeth (talk) 18:42, 7 April 2014 (UTC)


 * Thank you both; please add anything else you wish to, and give me a little time to analyse what you have shown. Best, Black Kite (talk) 21:12, 1 April 2014 (UTC)

While I haven't looked into Cwmhiraeth's work on here and on the surface it usually looks fine, I am very concerned with the behaviour of AfadsBad which is against the spirit of wikipedia editing. There's nothing wrong with pointing out errors and we should strive for accuracy, but it is a very clear from the way in which AfadsBad approaches the situation and Cwm that this is a form of cyber bullying, victimizing Cwmhiraeth's work, not done in the spirit of collaboration. It's as if AfadsBad exists on wikipedia purely to stalk Cwm's edits. It isn't right, however concerned she is of her work. I'm not sure an editor review is really needed although Cwm is clearly trying to be open to the fact that she might be introducing errors unwittingly. I'd say what is really needed here is some form of arbitration and a topic/user ban on AfadsBad from editing or targeting Cwm and her work on wikipedia.♦ Dr. Blofeld  09:43, 2 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Thankfully, this assessment is completely incorrect. Cwmhiraeth's science writing is full of howlers that would make any self-respecting scientist want to pull their hair out. The readers of this project should be grateful for the fact that someone is actually putting in the effort to identify them rather than just throwing up their hands in disgust and walking away. —  Scott  •  talk  09:55, 2 April 2014 (UTC)

As I said I make no comment on the content of Cwm's work as I haven't looked into it, but my assessment that AfadsBad has been picking on Cwm is hardly "completely incorrect". There is a big difference between constructively pointing out errors and solely targetting the work of one editor and seeming to relish talking down to them and scoffing at their work and driving people away from contributing entirely.♦ Dr. Blofeld  13:47, 2 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Comment Scott's statement may be biased as he appears to be a friend of AfadsBad at the Wikipediocracy forum where he posts under the name of "Hex". Cwmhiraeth (talk) 19:42, 4 April 2014 (UTC)
 * A friend? No. I reserve that label for people I actually know in real life, not random screen names from the internet. Also - biased? No. I choose to only respect genuine subject-matter expertise, which belongs to people like scientists. As opposed to people who pick and choose bits of books to clumsily glue together into articles. Not being a scientist myself, AfadsBad's continuing examination of your work has been illuminating. —  Scott  •  talk  21:09, 4 April 2014 (UTC)
 * While I have no particular objection to being called Hex's friend, I am afraid that I also reserve that moniker for people I have personal relationships with, and Wikipediocracy is not a social network. You obected to other factual errors, below, errors you eventually corrected, by pointing out another editor from Wikipediocracy. I think that ColonelHenry and Blofeld are covering the "it can't be criticism because I don't like her," and you can probably safely just deal with correcting your article errors. Dispraging me, making snide remarks because I pointed out an error, pointing out en.Wikipedia editors in good standing who are also Wikipediocracy posters won't make the cladogram sourced. Correcting and/or properly citing the cladogram will make the Atlantic Puffin article better, though. At least some of your errors have been corrected after my posts on Wikipediocracy. Here, the corrections just get reverted. --(AfadsBad (talk) 21:19, 4 April 2014 (UTC))


 * Thank you Dr. Blofeld. @Scott, you state "Cwmhiraeth's science writing is full of howlers that would make any self-respecting scientist want to pull their hair out." Perhaps you would like to point some of these out, or are you relying completely on AfadsBads' assertions? If what you say is true, it would be more useful if others would point out my errors to me or correct the articles concerned (they are on my watchlist) so I can see where I have gone wrong. Off-wiki harassment and cyber-bullying is very unhelpful. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 11:27, 2 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Although inaccurate. ColonelHenry and Dr. Blofeld are both here because I criticized their articles, although Dr. Blofeld says his were written by two other editors, and he just got credit for them. Cwmhiraeth says I chased another editor away by criticizing their work. And what really exploded ColonelHenry was an extraordinarily bad geology section written by still another editor. So "solely targetting the work of one editor" is not accurate. I don't care who wrote it, but Cwmhiraeth, unlike the editors who wrote Dr. Blofeld's articles, ColonelHenry, and the editor who wrote the horrible geology, has done nothing to prevent future errors.--(AfadsBad (talk) 21:27, 4 April 2014 (UTC))
 * I think that Cwmhiraeth set the ground rules for engagement with the Desert exchange when I removed a couple of howlers there and she reverted one then scolded me for removing the other because it messed up formatting. Sure, make up information and put it on the main page, as long as it is correctly formatted.
 * "Comments by AfadsBad
 * I think this article is pretty good, but it has some major problems, too many and bad information. The most technical sections do not make sense in many places. For example,

"The humidity may be as low as 2 to 5% and because water vapour in the atmosphere acts to trap long wave infrared radiation from the ground, the cloudless desert sky is incapable of blocking sunlight during the day or trapping heat during the night."
 * Moves from low humidity, to water vapor trapping ground lwir, to a conclusion that the cloudless sky can't block sunlight or trap heat. This is all over the place, and what ir trapping has to do with anything is not explained.
 * The weathering section is based on outdated research. Rainfall is used where precipitation should be, snow is the only form of precipitation in some desrerts. The USGS reference is interpreted incorrectly, alluvial fans occur in all deserts, not just non-sandy ones. Same with aridisols, which are just arid land soils.
 * All cacti have not dispensed with leaves, check out Pereskia.
 * The CAM and C4 comment implies C4 plants open their stomata at night; they don't.
 * There are many other problems; here is one: "Most shrubs have spiny leaves and shed them in the coldest part of the year and in some areas, sagebrush covers 85% of the ground.[58]" The plant they are discussing with this area of coverage is Great Basin sagebrush, Artemisia tridentata, which is not a desert plant. It generally requires a rainfall slightly higher than the average desert in its range, and, therefore, doesn't cover 85% of the ground in deserts anywhere. --(AfadsBad (talk) 05:48, 28 September 2013 (UTC))
 * Thank you for your comments, AfadsBad. I will consider the points you raise and make alterations where I think they are required, but please do not remove chunks of sourced information as you did with the sentence on cacti, thereby interrupting the flow of the text. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 11:14, 28 September 2013 (UTC)"
 * That's a real "Don't touch my article" statement if I've ever seen one. Condescending. And, she reverted my removal of bad science. You keep saying I should just improve the articles myself, but Cwmhiraeth has made it clear that I am not welcome to. I remove bad science, and she tells me it messes up the formatting. I remove made up science, and she reverts. Cwmhiraeth established her rules of engagement right away--stay away from articles she owns, don't remove bad science if it messes up the formatting because WP:Looking pretty is more important than WP:Verifiability, and don't remove made up science because she doesn't understand botany (as she claims on Casliber's user talk page) but knows it must be true or something. --(AfadsBad (talk) 16:06, 2 April 2014 (UTC))
 * I don't intend to deal with most of the points raised above because AfadsBad keeps on repeating them ad nauseam and I have discussed most of them elsewhere. Some of the criticisms are valid, others half-truths and inaccuracies and others trivial points that AfadsBad has exaggerated into major failings. As for the "Don't touch my article" statement AfadsBad has bolded above, AfadsBad has misinterpreted it. At the time Desert, the article in question, was undergoing a GA review and AfadsBad had already just disrupted a GA review of another article (Parsnip) so I didn't welcome her following me to Desert. My objection was not about "formatting" but at the complete removal of a reference to cacti as being part of desert flora as shown in this diff without substituting some other statement about cacti. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 08:27, 3 April 2014 (UTC)


 * Apparently pointing out the errors here is not helpful either. Please remove the cladogram from Atlantic Puffin and focus on your science mistakes on Wikipedia. --(AfadsBad (talk) 11:34, 2 April 2014 (UTC))
 * Yes it is - I will take a look at the cladogram now. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 11:52, 2 April 2014 (UTC)


 * Right then - so the two issues with the cladogram are that it is inverted and that the Scripps's Murrelet has been split from the Guadalupe Murrelet. In which case the best might be to remove scripps and append the Guadalupe Murrelet with a footnote explaining that the Scripp's has been split subsequently....unless there is something else? Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 12:04, 2 April 2014 (UTC)
 * I don't think you can invert a cladogram. It is not a formattng error. From above it appears to be a sourcng error. If you synthesize two cladograms into one, either source it properly and explain or don't include it. --(AfadsBad (talk) 14:08, 2 April 2014 (UTC))
 * What? - if you understand cladograms all the branches are the same. Do you deny  that? The two source cladograms in figs 14 and 15 have identical branches WRT Alcidae. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 01:29, 3 April 2014 (UTC)
 * What are you talking about? You said it was "inverted," and I don't have any idea what that means, how a cladogram can be "inverted." The two source cladograms are not the two from the cited article, for the purposes of this article, as the two in the cited source do branch identically, or so it seems at first glance, but the two sources are one of those from the article, and a cladogram from another source that added extra branching not shown in the cited source. It is quite obvious, if you click on the cladogram in the cited source that it is not the cladogram in the Wikipedia article. Wikipedia should not attribute something to a source if it is not in that source, the reader deserves to be able to look at the source to get more in depth information, not a contradiction.--(AfadsBad (talk) 02:17, 3 April 2014 (UTC))
 * Inverted means for whatever reason the bottom and top are flipped i.e. it is upside-down - all the branches are the same. There is one (1) extra species, which I advised a correction as above and below. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 04:17, 3 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Is there significance to top/bottom? I don't think so. --(AfadsBad (talk) 04:51, 3 April 2014 (UTC))
 * - I tried rejigging the cladogram but fucked up the code - I recommend the change be made as I suggested above. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 01:31, 3 April 2014 (UTC)
 * I don't attempt to do cladograms but rely on more knowledgeable people, in this instance IJReid. I asked him to comment on the cladogram and he replied in a post in this review that may have been overlooked. I have moved it to below this. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:17, 3 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Yes, the second cladogram incorporated into the cladogram that is cited in the article. Because IJReid incorporated information from another study, but only cited the one source, comparing the cladogram in the article to its source makes it quickly and obviously appear wrong. So, OR, synthesis, not in source, unsourced. The inversion does not change the information contained in the cladogram. --(AfadsBad (talk) 05:29, 3 April 2014 (UTC))
 * The only thing wrong with the cladogram is the insertion of Sythliboramphus scrippsi, which was not included in the original cladogram, but was named from Xantus's Murrelet, which has been split up. It is not possible to change the format of the cladogram, but wiki cladograms look different on different browsers. Also, it is not "it's own cladogram" just because it doesn't include the clade named from the original source. As the one who included the cladogram, I find the only problem with it is the inclusion of S. scrippsi, which is not that problematic at all. IJReid (talk) 13:39, 2 April 2014 (UTC)
 * So what is this probloem with the cladogram? As far as I can see here, AfadsBad is simply hand waving, without pointing out anything specific. FunkMonk (talk) 10:10, 30 April 2014 (UTC)


 * I'm going to start drafting out some conclusions later today, but I will be off-wiki for the whole of Friday, so I'd expect to be able to write things up on Saturday. Thanks for your patience, and please keep providing any further evidence you think may be useful. Black Kite (talk) 07:33, 3 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Thank you Black Kite. AfadsBad has made various criticisms above but what I would also like you to consider is the truth of the statement "And, no, it's not a few bad articles. It is every single article she has ever written." This is a quote from the Wikipediocracy forum where I have been honoured to have a thread all of my own entitled "Cwmhiraeth, the greatest vandal of them all". Cwmhiraeth (talk) 08:37, 3 April 2014 (UTC)
 * I will be going through more articles, and, since Cwmhiraeth wants to emphasize the "every single article," it is important to go through a large number. I am not picking articles in any particular way, just what she is currently working on, but three is insufficient. And I work full time, so it will take time. --(AfadsBad (talk) 12:05, 3 April 2014 (UTC))
 * That's fine; I can always hang on for a while if you need more time; there is no deadline here. Black Kite (talk) 12:26, 3 April 2014 (UTC)


 * Since this review process started eleven days ago, a number of editors have criticised individual articles (eight I think) which I have started, expanded or worked on. The points they made were mostly good ones and I have tried to deal with them appropriately. You would probably agree with me when I state that no article, not even those successful at FAC, are perfect, and articles nominated there all receive criticism during the review process. Nor do I think any editors could be described as perfect in what they write, they all sometimes make mistakes. So the question is, do I make mistakes in all or most of the articles I work on and are the articles less than competent. You asked AfadsBad to put forward articles of which she was critical and she nominated three. You asked me to put forward examples of my work and I nominated eight.


 * You proposed closing the review on 3rd April. It is more than a week now since AfadsBad asked for more time so that she could point out more erroneous articles. She has not done this, and has provided no evidence at this time to back up her statement "And, no, it's not a few bad articles. It is every single article she has ever written." Nor has she or anyone else criticised the articles I put forward as being examples of my work. I voluntarily submitted my work for editor review as was suggested at AnI, where my complaint of harassment awaits resolution. Please could you draw this review to a close and publish your conclusions. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 10:53, 11 April 2014 (UTC)


 * Given the further evidence emerging, I would kindly ask to not close the review.-- cyclopia speak!  11:41, 11 April 2014 (UTC)

EC


 * You claimed you had caught onto your problems and could fix them, and prevent them in the future, so I proposed you show that by identifying and correcting them in your articles. I offered five, you accused me of picking five that would do you harm. They are articles you wrote.
 * You could have looked through them. Instead, you've continued to add the same problems during this review--you have a sandbox and you use it for articles, why not spare the reader inaccuracies? You have excuses, but you have not shown, by identifying past errors yourself, or by ceasing to add errors, even after you've reached understanding, understanding of your mistakes according to you. In your talk page history, I found that other editors have told you this over the years, that you write badly about taxonomy and evolution, inaccurately, mistakenly. Your defenders have not offered content defense, they have vitriolically personally atracked me--this does not address your content, and no one has defended your content with positive examples. Nothing editors say to you about content has got through to you.
 * Five articles you created. Can they be fixed by you? How many examples do you need of what you did badly, inaccurately? In order for your mistakes to cease, you must be able to identify, correct, and stop creating the errors. Can you give me one article you created that has no major errors of the type you say you can see? How many times will you hear the problems, say you get it, then continue to add the same problems? No one has said anything differently. The problems with your articles and their failure to agree with the sources you use are easy to see, you do not write verifiable articles, and you cannot see this. If you don't stop creating them now, this issue will keep arrising for you and for Wikipedia, simply because Wikipedia does require verifiability. I don't matter--your articles are not appropriate content for an encyclopedia that requires verifiability. You have created over a thousand non-verifiable articles and continue to do so. I think your creating and editing science articles on Wikipedia is seriously detrimental to the project because your articles are inaccurate and wrong. Blame it on me. It won't verify or correct anything you wrote. --(AfadsBad (talk) 12:07, 11 April 2014 (UTC))

From Desert: ---

Cold deserts can be covered with snow or ice for part of the year; frozen water unavailable to plant life. They are found in Greenland, the nearctic ecozone of North America and Antarctica. The mean winter temperature is typically between 4 °C and -2 °C and the annual precipitation between 15 and 26 cm. For example, Cape Dorset on Baffin Island receives annual precipitation averaging 403 mm but this is made up of 144 mm of rainfall and 296 cm of snowfall. The temperature seldom rises above 20 °C in summer and often falls below -30 °C in winter. The soil in cold deserts is often fine silt, saline and heavy. Plants growing there tend to be widely separated, deciduous, low and spiny.

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"They are found in Greenland, the nearctic ecozone of North America and Antarctica." This is stated as though it were an exhaustive list, which it isn't. More importantly though, "The mean winter temperature is typically between 4 °C and -2 °C". That is not the mean winter temperature in Greenland, Antarctica and so on, by a long shot. Next, "the annual precipitation [in cold deserts is] between 15 and 26 cm. For example, Cape Dorset on Baffin Island receives annual precipitation averaging 403 mm". The example of Cape Dorset (403 mm) is well outside the precipitation range indicated in the sentence prior (15–26 cm). As such, it is hardly an "example" of what the previous sentence stated. Moreover, the cited source is specifically about Cape Dorset, not cold deserts. It seems odd for this example to be chosen for this article. The units given change from cm to mm and back for no apparent reason. As for 403 mm (15.9 in) [...] made up of 144 mm (5.7 in) of rainfall and 296 cm (117 in) of snowfall (my emphasis), 144 mm and 296 cm do not add up to 403 mm. Not even 144 mm and 296 mm would (144 + 296 = 440). The reader is given no explanation. Insertion points (May and October 2013):. This is a GA. And it’s not just a GA, but a GA that gets in the region of 100,000 views per month (it ranks 2,850 in traffic on en:WP, and is no doubt used as a source for essays by thousands of schoolchildren). Yet the information is in equal parts wrong, whimsical, and confusing. Andreas JN 466 01:10, 4 April 2014 (UTC)
 * With regard to the temperature, you may notice I use the word "typically". With regard to the precipitation, 144 mm rain and 296 cm snow, different things are being measured and I believe the snow is the depth of snow on the ground rather than its thawed equivalent. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:31, 4 April 2014 (UTC)
 * It doesn't make logical or didactic sense to say, "Xs are typically A; here is an example ...", if the example is not A, but B. More broadly, you're mixing and matching unrelated sources, essentially engaging in WP:SYN and creating novel narratives. That's a policy violation. Andreas JN 466 09:11, 4 April 2014 (UTC)
 * There not being many weather stations in the Arctic I used this one as an example. If you can find a better alternative, please do so. This is an example and I do not think WP:SYN is violated. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 13:11, 4 April 2014 (UTC)
 * May I ask why you have not corrected the false information about the average winter temperature in cold deserts? The range you gave (4 °C to -2 °C) is completely untypical for the locations you mention (Greenland, Antarctica, and the nearctic ecozone), and cold deserts in general. Does it not bother you that since we had the above discussion, around 10,000 people will have viewed this page, and that those who read that paragraph will either have been misled or will have dismissed Wikipedia as unreliable? Andreas JN 466 10:10, 7 April 2014 (UTC)
 * The underlying problem here is that you cited a completely unreliable source, targetstudy.com, an Indian website. The paragraph in the source reads, Cold Deserts - The Deserts that occur in Greenland, Antarctic and the Nearctic realm are called Cold Deserts. These Deserts are characterized by cold winter with snowfall and high overall temperatures throughout the winter and sometimes the summer too. Does this not set off alarm bells immediately? Cold winters with high overall temperatures throughout the winter? It continues, The mean winter temperatures in cold Deserts is [sic] between –2 to 4°C and the mean temperature is between 21–26°C. The mean temperature in cold deserts is between between 21–26°C? What were you thinking? They clearly got their texts mixed up. This is not a properly curated source. It goes on, The mean annual precipitation in cold Deserts range [sic] from 15-26 cm. Are we sure that whoever wrote this sentence in this clearly mangled source was writing about cold deserts at all? Note that Cape Dorset, which may well have a cold desert climate, has an amount of precipitation completely outside this range. The source continues, The soil in this area is salty, silty and heavy. The plants in cold Deserts are widely scattered and vary between 15 cm to 122 cm in height. Plants over a metre tall in Greenland and Antarctica? Please! The main plants in this area are deciduous, most of them having spiny leaves. Note that you have also reproduced the soil info in the article: "The soil in cold deserts is often fine silt, saline and heavy." This is practically plagiarism of a garbled source that I suspect may have been about some entirely different habitat than cold deserts. You are rushing, probably to make some WikiCup target, failing to scrutinise your sources, and adding material to Wikipedia that is not helpful. That is the kindest way I can put it, Cwmhiraeth. Please stop. And, just to be explicit, please go through the article with a fine-toothed comb and strip out all the information cited to this source, and check the reliability of your other sources. A Good Article Reassessment is clearly called for as well, and a note to the original GA reviewer who approved this article may be in order. Perhaps, as this is a level-3 vital article, might be willing to help set that in motion. I do not unfortunately have the time. Andreas  JN 466 11:11, 7 April 2014 (UTC)
 * I must admit, I don't feel comfortable using Target Study as a source, we need a better one, which should be straightforward to find. That source material on cold deserts is weird. I had a suspicion that coniferous plants were hardier at really cold temps but might be wrong on this - this needs a good secondary source, which will likely help address alot of this. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 12:20, 7 April 2014 (UTC)


 * The WP:SYN concern is that you are describing the Cape Dorset climate as a (typical) example of a cold desert climate, but there is no source cited that makes that connection between Cape Dorset and the (sub-)topic of your article, cold deserts. SYN is always a potential problem if you are citing sources that do not mention the article subject. It's best to avoid doing so, and to just give a summary of sources that are specifically on the article subject. This applies equally when you are citing, in an article on a species, sources on a higher-order taxon that do not mention your specific species. If you're writing on a species, cite sources that are directly about the species (unless you are including some very general, brief introductory information on the genus, family or order the species belongs to, according to reliable sources, just to locate the species in the general evolutionary tree). In an article on a species, nothing should be described as specific to the species if it's in fact generic to the entire genus, family, order etc. For example, it would not make sense to say that "a bear is an animal with a vertebral column", even though it is true. When you are describing the above species of crustacean as woodlouse-like (based on nothing more than what the image reminds you of), you are committing a similar error, because the entire order is woodlouse-like. SYN means combining sources to make statements about the article subject that no source has made about that article subject, and there are examples of that in your work. Andreas JN 466 10:34, 7 April 2014 (UTC)
 * I made no change to the article in connection with the temperature in cold deserts issue that you raised because the figures I used were in the source I used. It probably is an unreliable source and I did wonder about the figures quoted, but you did not question the source before and it is only today that you have spattered the article with "unreliable source" tags. I have found a better source and will rewrite the relevant parts of the classification section, but not tonight as it is too late. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 19:45, 7 April 2014 (UTC)


 * Cwmhiraeth, you are saying, "I made no change to the article in connection with the temperature in cold deserts issue that you raised because the figures I used were in the source I used". Yet as far as I can see from the edit history you yourself introduced this source and the information cited to it to the article. You did it in this edit. Your edit summary was: "Added new source". The source was targetstudy.com. Date of the edit: 8 May 2013. Access date for the source: 8 May 2013. You then proceeded to add more material from this source:, , . So I think you must be mistaken, unless you are asserting that someone else operated your account that day. Could you clarify this? Did you add the source or not? (As for my not having questioned this source before, this is not true. I said above, "... between 4 °C and -2 °C"}}. That is not the mean winter temperature in Greenland, Antarctica and so on, by a long shot." I clearly told you that the information derived from this source was false.) Andreas JN 466 20:48, 7 April 2014 (UTC)


 * Upon re-reading your reply above,, I realise that I misunderstood you. Apologies. You were saying that the reason you made no change to the article in response to my complaint was because the information was sourced. But please, think a moment. An average winter temperature of –2 to +4 °C, as you wrote in this GA, is what people experience in many parts of Britain. Is Britain a cold desert? The source also said that in cold deserts, "the mean temperature is between 21–26°C". That's warmer than Athens, Greece, and a range that would include places like Orlando, Florida. There are palm trees there, and people swim in the ocean the whole year round. Plants as tall as 122 cm? Surely you have seen TV programmes of Greenland or the Antarctic. There are no such plants in the cold deserts there. And the ice on Greenland and in the Antarctic would have melted long ago if the average winter temperature were between –2 and +4 °C, because summers are warmer than winters, and if winters are barely below freezing, summers would be above freezing. You need to realise that you have not learnt how to distinguish reliable sources from unreliable sources, Cwmhiraeth, and that you are writing about topics that you have no grasp of. This was a truly elementary mistake, and it has stood in the article for nearly a year now, viewed by a million people, and probably copied by an uncounted number of schoolchildren in their essays. Andreas JN 466 22:36, 7 April 2014 (UTC)
 * As for the "woodlouse-like" bit, though I might agree with you in principle, the only items of information I could find on the description of this species was the length, the divided eye and the cuticular surface. Not even its colour! It is not an article of which I am proud and it was difficult to write, but having started, I did not want to leave it unfinished. I see no harm in adding some general information from a source about a higher taxon, especially as most people wouldn't have much of a clue about what a "benthic marine isopod crustacean in the suborder Valvifera" would look like. In fact I consulted InvertZoo some time ago about the difficulty of writing descriptions of little known organisms and was advised that this practice was permissible. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 19:22, 7 April 2014 (UTC)
 * I am not so fussed about unfinished pages - that happens all the time. I have sometimes left articles I've written for DYK with content holes in them to see if anyone will fill them when an article is mainpaged. Hasn't happened yet though...Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 20:05, 7 April 2014 (UTC)
 * If you do not have access to sources about a species, then my advice to you would be to either refrain from writing an article about it, or to just use what sources you actually do have, and leave it as a stub for someone else to complete. There is no problem with a reliably sourced stub. As for colours, you could for example have included an external link to a colour photograph of the creature. Many such images are available on the internet; Yale University has a good one here for example. Template:External_media is useful in such cases. Mining sources on a family or order for an article on a species is not a good idea. Just mention the family or order, and link to it in the article. Andreas JN 466 20:48, 7 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Oh I don't know - I've found pages half-built and gone on from there. That is the true spirit of collaborative editing and why this place is a little bigger than citizendium and others. Regarding the second point...hmm. need to check that one. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 20:53, 7 April 2014 (UTC)
 * I'm afraid you've lost me there, mate. What are you replying to? I thought I was saying much the same as you: just create a stub with the sources available, and leave it to someone else with better source access to complete. Andreas  JN 466 20:59, 7 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Oh, I think I understand what you mean now with "the second point". To give an example, it is an easily sourced fact that reptiles are tetrapods, and that the basic body plan of a tetrapod includes four limbs. However, to cite such a source in an article on snakes is not a good idea, because while snakes are tetrapods, they do not have four feet. Clearly, no one would do so in this case. We all know what snakes look like. But when you are talking about obscure organisms that have few good sources available, a habit of extrapolating from higher taxa to individual species is bound to introduce misleading information in a non-negligible proportion of cases. And we all know that once something is in Wikipedia, it is copied in myriad places. It's just not a good idea. By all means, briefly describe the higher taxon in an introduction, using sources on the higher taxon, but please don't make the reader believe that what the source said on the higher taxon was said about the particular species. If the source was talking about the order or family, the reader needs to understand that this is information characterising the entire order or family, and not the individual species. Andreas JN 466 21:25, 7 April 2014 (UTC)

Another random sentence from the same article: "Birds have avoided the problem of their feet becoming chilled by maintaining their lower limbs at external temperatures.[69]" Firstly, the sentence is on its face nonsensical. Birds avoid having their feet chilled by allowing them to get as cold as their environment? Secondly, as we have learnt, the environment can be dozens of degrees below freezing. If the temperature of an antarctic bird's feet were maintained at external temperatures, they would be frozen solid! Thirdly, this sentence cites "Scholander, P. F.; Hock, Raymond; Walters, Vladimir; Irving, Laurence (1950). "Adaptation to cold in arctic and tropical mammals and birds in relation to body temperature, insulation, and basal metabolic rate". Biological Bulletin 50 (2): 269–271." Is it a good idea to cite a paper as old as that? Fourthly, there is nothing related to birds having cold feet as an adaptation to living in a cold environment on pages 269–271. In fact, the only sentence that touches on the general topic on page 269 says, "There is no evidence of adaptive low body temperature in arctic mammals and birds, or high body temperature in tropical mammals and birds. ... Equally inadaptive is the body temperature, and the phylogenetic adaptation to cold or hot climate therefore has taken place only through factors that regulate the heat dissipation, notably the fur and skin insulation." This reads more like the exact opposite of what the sentence cited to this source says. Pages 270 and 271 are nothing but a list of literature cited. Why are we citing those pages? There is a sentence on page 262 of the source that says, "The cold legs of arctic aquatic birds and mammals (and probably of the terrestrial forms as well) may be taken as another example of adaptive insulation" (my emphasis). In other words, what the source says is that by not "heating" their feet more than necessary, these birds reduce dissipation of body warmth through their unfeathered feet. By having cold feet, they prevent the rest of their bodies from being chilled. Insertion point. Andreas JN 466 01:39, 4 April 2014 (UTC)
 * That's an interesting point and one not picked up during the very thorough GA review. Why don't you change the article if you think the "random sentence" misleading. However the article Desert was not written by me, only expanded and taken to GA. I did my best to improve it but would readily admit that it is not perfect. If you want to demonstrate my incompetence, it would be better to choose articles that I have started from scratch or have expanded from brief stubs. I'm sure you will be able to find errors if you try hard enough. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:31, 4 April 2014 (UTC)
 * I've only commented on material here that Cmwhiraeth added to the article. Diffs are provided. Andreas JN 466 09:11, 4 April 2014 (UTC)
 * I don't deny that this was a passage written by me. The same meaning was intended but I expressed it badly. I should not have used the phrase "maintaining their lower limbs at external temperatures" when what I meant "not attempting to maintain their lower limbs at a higher temperature than the environment". I have now rephrased it. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 13:11, 4 April 2014 (UTC)
 * The way you have phrased it above is still wrong, as birds obviously do maintain their lower limbs at a higher temperature than the environment (if they allowed their feet to freeze solid, they would suffer frost bite and gangrene and would die). The way you have corrected it in the article however is fine. Thank you. May I ask you why you didn't correct the citation? The article still cites pp. 269–271, and the information is not found on those pages (pp. 270–271 is merely a list of cited literature). Andreas JN 466 10:14, 7 April 2014 (UTC)
 * corrected source pagerange now. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 11:43, 7 April 2014 (UTC)
 * I have rewritten the paragraphs on desert classification that you tagged as having an unreliable source. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 11:24, 8 April 2014 (UTC)


 * Note Cwmhiraeth has made a couple of comments about errors I have missed. My error reports are not exhaustive or methodical. Other editors will be able to find errors that I have missed in her articles. I will begin posting my list ASAP. No article I include should be considered error free after the errors I list are corrected because I will continue to do non-methodical error lists.. --(AfadsBad (talk) 12:49, 5 April 2014 (UTC))

Gastrotrich etc.

 * While waiting for AfadsBad to track down some more of my howlers, here are a few more articles with which I am quite pleased, each from a different branch of the animal kingdom. Red-cheeked salamander, Eurasian Wryneck, Natterer's bat, Crocodylus novaeguineae and Gastrotrich. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 18:20, 5 April 2014 (UTC)


 * Gastrotrich "The gastrotrichs (commonly referred to as hairybacks) are members of the phylum Gastrotricha ...." They are not "members of," they are the phylum Gastrotricha. It's a synonym, this may be splitting hairs, but it would be polite to the reader to let them unambiguously know this in the first sentence. --(AfadsBad (talk) 14:58, 12 April 2014 (UTC))
 * Have a look at the article Arthropod where you will find similar opening remarks. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:58, 13 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Other stuff exists
 * "They are mostly benthic and form part of the periphyton, the layer of tiny organisms and detritus that is found on the seabed and the bed of other water bodies." Your definition of periphyton is unsourced. I use the term in limnological studies, where it is common, but it needs a source that fixes it both in marine and freshwater ecosystems as you define it here.
 * Periphyton is both wikilinked and explained and I don't believe it needs a citation. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:58, 13 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Please source your definition of periphyton as part of the benthos and clear up the rest of the sentence as to your meaning.
 * The multilayers epicuticle is important in all the zoology and taxonomy texts on the clade that I can find, but is not mentioned at all in the article; its structure is unique, and it is not described in the article. The pharynyx is also an important evolutionary feature, and, although mentioned a number of times, a discussion of the unique characteristics of it are not mentioned in the article. An organism article missing descriptions of real or highly contested derived characteristics is incomplete.
 * I regard the source I used, Invertebrate Zoology by Ruppert, Fox and Barnes, as an extremely reliable source. It did not emphasize the importance of the epicuticle or the uniqueness of the pharynx. I don't choose to waste my time seeking out evidence to contradict what a reliable source states. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:58, 13 April 2014 (UTC)
 * If your source does not agree with the major journal research, then it's inaccurate. The fact remains that you appear to have either ignored or missed or not understood the significance of the major journal research. Please do a simple Google search on the taxon plus epicuticle.
 * "The relationship of gastrotrichs to other phyla is unclear. Morphology suggests that they are close to the Gnathostomulida, the Rotifera, or the Nematoda. On the other hand, genetic studies place them as close relatives of the Platyhelminthes, the Ecdysozoa or the Lophotrochozoa. As of 2011, around 790 species have been described.[4]" The article is on species richness, and it contains none of the information in the three sentences preceding its citation, except, of course, for the species count. This may be an omitted source?
 * Indeed, there was a missing citation which I have now added. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:58, 13 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Our article now says, "On the other hand, genetic studies place them as close relatives of the Platyhelminthes, the Ecdysozoa or the Lophotrochozoa.[4]" But the source says, "On the other hand, a re-examination of the "Aschelminthes" phylogeny based on the SSU rRNA gene sequence analysis showed the Gastrotricha as the sister taxon of the Platyhelminthes, while later studies placed them close to the Ecdysozoa, the Lophotrochozoa, or neither one." This does not say that "genetic studies place them as close relatives of the .. the Ecdysozoa or the Lophotrochozoa," but says that genetic some genetic studies placed them as "close to the Ecdysozoa, the Lophotrochozoa, or neither one." This is a very different statement than what you added the reference to.
 * "The phylum contains a single class, divided into two orders: the Macrodasyida, all of whose members are marine, and the Chaetonotida, some of which are marine and some freshwater.[5]": There are numerous sources found through a Google search, including journal articles, books, and web sites which indicate that most but not all of the Macrodasyida are marine; a few are freshwater. If your source on marine/freshwater is accurate, then you should catch and explain why so many sources consider it to be mostly marine, while Wikipedia is saying it is entirely marine.
 * This statement comes from the above mentioned Invertebrate Zoology. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:58, 13 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Then it's too old, and it's inaccurate, and it should be removed completely as a source from the article. The source you just added to incorrectly cite the sister taxa says, "Macrodasyida, with 310 strap-shaped species, all but two of which are marine or estuarine, and Chaetonotida with 455 tenpin shaped species, three-fourth of which are freshwater."


 * This article is a GA. It was reviewed by an experienced editor and promoted in February this year. AfadsBad has put a "disputed" tag on it but has not mentioned on the article talk page what factual accuracy is questioned. I do not believe any of the points raised by AfadsBad in reviewing it above could in anyway be described as a "Howler". Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:58, 13 April 2014 (UTC)
 * It's still disputed. You cite a book as accurate which disagrees with your web source which disagrees with what you say in the article. --(AfadsBad (talk) 20:14, 14 April 2014 (UTC))
 * I started a GA Review on this; it is not one of the best of en.Wikipedia when even the highest level of the taxonomy is incorrect, and the article uses two sources that apparently disagree with each other, while the editor simply picked, without explanation, to use information from one source or the other. --(AfadsBad (talk) 20:38, 14 April 2014 (UTC))
 * Removed "howler" section name. Although when I ctrl-F'd, I happened to notice that you, Cwmhiraeth, used the word "howler" yourself on 18:20, 5 April ... EDIT: ok nvm... Scott was the first one to say "howler"... starship.paint   "YES!" 07:07, 13 April 2014 (UTC)


 * Red-cheeked salamander
 * You write, "The imitator salamander (Desmognathus imitator) is thought to be a mimic and is very similar in appearance but has a pale line joining jaw to eye and more robust hind legs." This implies that D. imitator has "more robust hind legs" than P. jordani, but, this is what the source says, "Unlike the Jordan’s salamander, the back legs of the imitator salamander are also much stockier than the front legs." This is not the same thing.
 * In my dictionary, "stocky" is defined as "short and strongly built; thickset" and "robust" as "strong and sturdy". I think this is a quibble. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:38, 13 April 2014 (UTC)
 * The source compares the back legs and front legs of the imitator salamander, it does not compare the back legs of the imitator salamander to the back legs of the Jordan's salamander, which you did in the article by adding the contrast of the "pale line joining the jaw to the eye and more robust hind legs."
 * "The main populations are along the border between North Carolina and Tennessee but a separate population occurs in Rabun County, Georgia." The source says, " A more southern set of populations occurs in Rabun County in extreme northeastern Georgia." A population is very specific in biology, and if the source says "set of populations" this is not the same as "a separate population." --(AfadsBad (talk) 16:03, 12 April 2014 (UTC))
 * Thank you for making this alteration to the article. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:38, 13 April 2014 (UTC)
 * "The altitude range is 210 to 1950 metres (700 to 6400 ft) but few specimens are found below 600 metres (2,000 ft)." The sources says no such thing as "few specimens are found below 600 metres," but says, "They occur at elevations from 213–1,951 m (...), but usually to elevations above 600 m (...)." It only states, awkwardly, that they are usually to elevations above 600 m without a quantification such as "few specimens." This could mean something different such as seasonal, foraging, breeding. As a stylistic point, the species is endemic to the US, and metres should be spelled "meters."
 * If they are usually above 600 m then not many are found below that elevation. If I had also cited the AmphibiaWeb source, it mentions elevations of over 853 m in the Great Smoky Mountains. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:38, 13 April 2014 (UTC)
 * "The whole range is within the boundaries of the Great Smoky Mountains National Park." This is not said in the cited source. This may be because of the populations in Georgia which are not in the Great Smoky Mountains National Park, which is a park that straddles the border of Tennessee and North Carolina.
 * You probably know the geography of the United States better than I do, but the source states "This species is protected from the detrimental effects of clear-cutting (Ash 1997, Petranka, Eldridge and Haley 1993, Petranka 1998, Ash and Pollock 1999) by occurring completely within the Great Smoky Mountains National Park" Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:38, 13 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Then you again have inaccurate sources. Because the Great Smoky Mountains National Park straddles the border of two states. And neither of those states is Georgia. So, you, as the editor of the article, should not be adding contradictory information. Instead of doing so, you have to figure out which sources are correct. It can't both be a species found in three states and the entire population is only in two. If two sources contradict each other, you don't just pick one and give that information, then pick the other for different information. Figure out why they have contradictory information. Also, if the information you write from a source contradicts prior information, there is a problem with it.
 * "The red-cheeked salamander conceals itself during the day under rocks and in or under rotten logs. It has extensive shallow burrows through which it can move about. At night and during rain it emerges onto the surface to forage. Each salamander has a small home range outside which it seldom wanders. This is about 11 square metres (120 sq ft) for a male and 2.8 square metres (30 sq ft) for a female. When displaced by a distance of 300 metres (980 ft), most salamanders managed to return to their home. The red-cheeked salamander feeds on small invertebrates including worms, snails, springtails, spiders, insects and insect larvae.[2]"
 * What the source says, "Jordan's salamanders inhabit burrows or other subterranean passageways under rocks, logs, and other cover objects during warmer months." These sentences in our article are difficult to understand, but appear to contradict the source information, which clearly states that they live in burrows and etc., under various objects, during "warmer months," not "during the day."
 * I have added an additional source which states that "This highly-terrestrial species is often found under rocks, logs, or debris on the forest floor. These salamanders are most easily detected at night, especially under wet conditions, as individuals wander the forest floor in search of food." Cwmhiraeth (talk) 09:01, 13 April 2014 (UTC)
 * "Individuals home after displacements of over 300 m (Madison, 1969, 1972)." Our statement says "300 m," rather than "over 300 m," and these are different numbers, but it also seems to be a generally accepted statement in our article that contradicts it "seldom wander(ing)" outside of its home range, which I cannot find in the source. Can you provide a copy and paste quote for that statement?
 * Your 300 m point is a quibble. The definition of a home range is "Home range is the area in which an animal lives and travels." I will remove the phrase you object to. It is superfluous. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 09:01, 13 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Weller's article is only about the North Carolina and Tennessee populations, this information should be clarified or a source about the feeding habits of the Georgia populations added, or a statement about general feeding habitats of salamanders, with a source.
 * I haven't used Weller's article as a source. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 09:01, 13 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Yes, you did use information taken from Weller and from other authors that is summarized into the web page. The web page author cites his/her sources.


 * Once again, you have added a "disputed" tag to the article, nor do I think you have identified any howlers. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 09:01, 13 April 2014 (UTC)


 * Eurasian Wryneck
 * "This species breeds in temperate regions of Europe and Asia. Most populations are migratory, wintering in tropical Africa and in southern Asia from Iran to the Indian Subcontinent, but some are resident in northwestern Africa." If they are "resident in northwestern Africa" they probably breed there, rather than in temperate Europe or Asia.
 * Good catch! I added the word "mainly" to the first sentence. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 09:21, 13 April 2014 (UTC)
 * "The Picidae family has four subfamilies, the Picinae (woodpeckers), the Picumninae (piculets), the Jynginae (wrynecks) and the monotypic Nesoctitinae (Antillean Piculet).[4] Historically, based on morphology and behaviour, the Picumninae was considered to be the sister clade of the Picinae. This has now been confirmed by phylogenetic analysis and the Jynginae has been placed basal to the Picinae + Picumninae because the behaviours of drilling holes and communicating via drumming, present in these two subfamilies, is not present in the Jynginae. The Nesoctitinae are considered to be a monotypic subfamily which shares some derived characteristics with the Picinae but lacks others. The evidence suggested that the Picidae originated in the Old World but it is unclear whether this was in Africa or in Asia.[4]"
 * This is a species article. This description of the subfamilies adds no specific information. However, what the source says is not the same as what is "summarized" in the en.Wikipedia article. The source says, "Historical taxonomic treatments, based largely on phenotypic and behavioral characters, have considered the piculets (Picidae: Picumninae; ...) (...) as the sister clade to the Picinae, while the wrynecks (Picidae+Jynginae ...) have been placed basal to the Picinae+Picumninae. This sub-familial arrangement has seen recent confirmation from molecular phylogenetic analyses." Our article says that historically the Picumninae was considered to be sister to the Picinae, and that information was confirmed by phylogenetic analysis, and in addition to confirming the first part, the phylogenetic analysis led to the basal placement of Jynginae. This is not true. Both the sister clades and the basal placement of the Jynginae were historically accepted and both were confirmed. The confirmation was molecular, but our article implies that the confirmation was behavioral ("drilling holes and communicating via drumming), an incorrect synthesis of the article.
 * As you know, I find taxonomy sections quite difficult to write. Please feel free to change this section if you think the information is incorrect. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 09:21, 13 April 2014 (UTC)
 * If you find taxonomy sections so difficult, then please create them in user space and have them thoroughly checked by someone before putting them into article space. You know how to create and use sandboxes, and they would be ideal for this. I'm not interested in Avian taxonomies. This information is inaccurate and should not sit on en.Wikipedia collecting page views. Also, why bother writing a taxonomy section for the family, if you struggle with taxonomies, and the article is about the species? It does not even belong in the article to begin with.


 * No "disputed" tag here yet! Cwmhiraeth (talk) 09:21, 13 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Added a "disputed-section" template. Would you like me to look for more to dispute in the article. As with all my other looks at your articles, I am not doing an exhaustive search, just finding quick and obvious errors that. --(AfadsBad (talk) 20:54, 14 April 2014 (UTC))


 * Crocodylus novaeguineae
 * Our article says this crocodile is found "... primarily nocturnal crocodile is to be found in the freshwater swamps and lakes of New Guinea," but the source says it is found "... extensively in freshwater swamps, marshes and lakes." The summary potentially omits a major habitat, as swamps and marshes are not the same thing, and if there is some reason to list only swamps, but not marshes, this should be stated and source.
 * Turning back to my dictionary (Concise Oxford), the definition of a "swamp" is "A piece of waterlogged ground; a bog or marsh". It could be that the word has a different definition in American English. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 10:06, 13 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Isn't the point that these are habitats with specific meaning, and not general synonyms in a dictionary? My take is that a swamp is densely wooded whilst a marsh is not. John lilburne (talk) 17:07, 13 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Now that you know that you can correct the article to fit an international audience. This may or may not be a matter of regional English; I've always used the terms very specifically for freshwater wetlands ecology. Generally, though, it is helpful to speak to an international audience, as the source might have been doing to begin with by saying swamp and marsh, rather than assuming the source was just saying "swamp and swamp." Technical writing generally gives clues. There is no reason to list the same term twice; if it is listed twice, there may be a reason for it. That they are using the two different terms for very specific meanings is highly likely.
 * Our article says, "Although tolerant of saltwater, it is rarely to be found in brackish coastal waters, and never in the presence of the competing saltwater crocodile (C. porosus).[2]" But I can't find mention of saltwater tolerance in the source. Can you provide a copy and paste quote? I also can't find brackish anywhere--coastal waters are not necessarily brackish.
 * I have removed the word "brackish" to please you, but if a predominantly freshwater animal sometimes moves into seawater, would you not have thought it was bound to encounter brackish water on the way? Cwmhiraeth (talk) 10:06, 13 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Does it say it "sometimes moves into seawater?" The source says, "Found extensively in freshwater swamps, marshes and lakes. Very rarely found in coastal areas, and then never with Crocodylus porosus, whose range it overlaps...." It does not say "that it sometimes moves into seawater." Can you find a copy and paste quote for that?
 * "At one time it was thought that there were two subspecies, C. n. novaeguineae, the New Guinea crocodile native to Papua New Guinea, and C. n. mindorensis, the Philippine crocodile, native to several islands including .... Most authorities now consider that the Philippine crocodile is an entirely separate species.[2]" This species confusion has been updated in 2009, so you should not be using descriptions from 1982 books. Also, the article is not about the once misidentified subspecies, so a list of the specific Philippine islands it inhabits is not part of the topic.
 * I think you will find the book was published in 1992 and not 1982 and I was not aware of the 2009 study. Perhaps you could provide details so that I can update the article. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 10:06, 13 April 2014 (UTC)
 * 1992 is still problematic date-wise for genetic issues. You source the length to this 1982 source, "Groombridge, Brian, ed. (1982). "New Guinea crocodile". The IUCN amphibia-reptilia red data book (Fully rev., expanded ed.). Gland, Switzerland: IUCN. pp. 355–362." The 2009 source is yours, " Britton, Adam (2009-01-01). "New Guinea Crocodile". Crocodilians: Natural History & Conservation. Florida Museum of Natural History. Retrieved 2013-10-22."
 * Our article says "The body is gray-brown in colour, with dark brown or black bandings on the tail which become less noticeable as the animal grows." But the source says, "Body colouration is brownish to grey, with darkish banding on the body and tail which is more apparent in younger animals." This could mean it is brown or it is grey or it is brown-gray; it does not mean it is gray-brown. "Darkish banding" does not define it as "dark brown or black," a completely different color range. Also, "more apparent in younger animals," does not mean they become less noticeable as the animal grows, which somewhat implies that they change with growth. This might be too picky, though. If the information agrees with the older source, which I do not have handy, but not to the newer source this is a problem for the reason mentioned, that the older source may be summarizing characteristics of a Philippine islands subspecies along with the New Guinea species, which would make the information incorrect.
 * I try to avoid close paraphrasing when eliciting information from a source. The book source was a library book so I do not have it to hand at the moment. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 10:06, 13 April 2014 (UTC)
 * "Two populations of C. novaeguineae are known on the island, separated by the mountain range that runs along the centre of the island." Runs east-west along the center of the island would be good basic information.
 * True. I think that the book source mentioned that and I omitted it to prevent close paraphrasing. I see that another source has been added to the article in the last few days. I will better format the new reference and see what information the source provides. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 10:06, 13 April 2014 (UTC)
 * "The animal was first described from the Sepik River area in the north of Papua New Guinea but a separate population is found in the south of the island, from southeastern Papua New Guinea to the Indonesian provinces of Papua and West Papua.[4][5] DNA analysis has revealed these to be genetically separate populations.[6]" I can't find the information about genetically separate populations in 6. Is this in one of the other sources or did you find it somewhere else? If it is in 6, can you provide a copy/paste quote.
 * I will look into this, but we are back with my library book source for the first sentence. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 10:06, 13 April 2014 (UTC)


 * I see no particular problems with the matters you raise above. No "disputed" tag yet I see. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 10:06, 13 April 2014 (UTC)


 * From ANI

Since I am indeed a biologist and an editor, I think I can give my 0.02 $ on this ugly mess. Yes, Afadsbad is right, Cwmhiraeth is sloppy. Sometimes she is very sloppy, sometimes she's just doing clumsy OR/SYN (e.g. by making descriptions up from pictures), sometimes she mixes things up. That is bad, and I'm glad there is an editor review on. And it is good that Afadsbad put attention on it -this kind of poor quality editing has to be noticed and fixed, that's the very point of the project. Cwmhiraeth should listen and take more care, perhaps asking for advice when she is not sure of what is writing about. It is also good that pitfalls in the GA process came to light. Conversely, however, Afadsbad's attitude on the matter is appalling. Obsessive harassment of Cwmhiraeth both off and on wiki (calling her "the greatest vandal of them all" on WO), incessantly reminding of a couple bad edits/contents like they were the end of the world, conflating very minor inaccuracies with major errors to make them all seem a larger mess than it is etc., is not tolerable. Two wrongs don't make one right. Yes, Cwmhiraeth editing is questionable, but in good faith. Clumsy as she might have been, she does not deserve such a treatment -I hope Afadsbad has no students, because if I treated my students like she's treating Cwmhiraeth, I'd be fired on the spot (and trust me, I've had bad students). Therefore I'd like for Afadsbad to keep pointing to errors, whoever is the editor who does that, but to change attitude completely. --cyclopiaspeak! 13:47, 8 April 2014 (UTC)


 * Yes, Afadsbad is right, Cwmhiraeth is sloppy. Sometimes she is very sloppy, sometimes she's just doing clumsy OR/SYN (e.g. by making descriptions up from pictures), sometimes she mixes things up.
 * Whatever the result, I am not the only editor who has noticed this, because it is real. Cwmhiraeth is currently forum shopping editor talk pages and expressed an issue with my full time job requiring me to work five days in a row. This may be outrageou for Wales and other parts of the world, but normal in the US. I have access while monitoring, but no time until tomorrow. --(AfadsBad (talk) 20:20, 8 April 2014 (UTC))
 *  Afadsbad's attitude on the matter is appalling. Obsessive harassment of Cwmhiraeth both off and on wiki (calling her "the greatest vandal of them all" on WO), incessantly reminding of a couple bad edits/contents like they were the end of the world, conflating very minor inaccuracies with major errors to make them all seem a larger mess than it is etc., is not tolerable. Two wrongs don't make one right.
 * If you are going to highligh an editors comments, like you have just done above Afadsbad, in such a crass and unkind manner, then at least add the balancing comments such as I have just done for you. --Epipelagic (talk) 09:22, 9 April 2014 (UTC)

I'm also a biologist and an editor, and I endorse what Cyclopia has said. Looking over the general flow of AfadsBad's criticism, the errors she's denouncing seem to me to fall into three categories: Because AfadsBad describes all three categories with OMG WORST THING EVAR shrieking outrage, it's difficult to take her claims about the scope of errors at anything other than a substantial discount. Nonetheless, I think there are enough errors of the first category turning up to warrant a more substantive response from Cwmhiraeth than "Oh, OK, I'll fix that." Back in fall 2012, there was a similar but more restrained debate (see Talk:Tree/Archive 2) where essentially the same point was raised: that she seems to be persistently working on scientific material that's just a bit too far over her head, and winds up regularly committing factual errors as a result.
 * 1) Genuine, unambiguous errors of fact.
 * 2) Poorly or ambiguously written material, which AfadsBad has insisted on construing as a definite error of fact. (e.g., the argument over the bat echolocation sentence)
 * 3) Complaints which are essentially stylistic, e.g., the idea that it's wrong to write a new article if you haven't harmonized all the articles that it links to.

I would like to see Cwmhiraeth explain how she's going to avoid committing these kind of errors in the future, not just agree that she'll fix them as they arise. The source of the criticism may be unpalatable, but this is not the first time she's been told she's botching science articles. Wikipedia will always be a collaborative process wherein we fix one another's errors, but if you're consistently generating extra work for people, you need to be thinking of ways to avoid doing so. And I would like to see AfadsBad find something else to scrutinize, because at this point, the usefulness of her technical knowledge in these critiques has been negated by her histrionics and lack of discrimination.

On a more general note, there's been some implication that the current situation has arisen because Cwmhiraeth is connected with the right people or projects and her critics are not. I am not convinced this is proven, simply because, in my experience, Wikipedia has an extremely high tolerance for editors who are productive, good-faith—and regularly make mistakes. In one case where I was peripherally involved, an editor was creating a large number of very short articles with various stylistic infelicities and periodic errors due to a failure to do basic cross-checking of a single source. He wasn't particularly well socially connected, as far as I can tell, and he wasn't doing it for DYK/GA/FA. But whenever other editors in the area got upset with his work, he refused to engage with their criticism, and someone always turned up to say "Look at all the work he does! You can't sanction him just because you don't like..." This dragged on for four years, with increasingly personal animosity between the editor and his critics, before ArbCom sanctioned him and admonished one of his principal critics for (self-admitted) misbehavior. For better or for worse, this kind of tolerance is endemic here, and trying to attribute it to a single small clique is not likely to be accurate. Choess (talk) 05:27, 9 April 2014 (UTC)


 * I am beginning to see what you are all getting at and in that way this editor review may be quite helpful to me. Unfortunately AfadsBad has been shouting at me for such a long time that I have stopped taking any notice. She has done it on a blog that I ceased reading and a forum that I didn't even know existed. She lacks communication skills and, with a very few exceptions, has never explained precisely what she was objecting to in my articles.


 * I completely rewrote the article Tree referred to above, using a book as my main source. It became apparent later that the book was not reliable. I used it because my education included zoology but not botany and I did not know enough about plants. The "tree episode" was a salutary lesson. I now seem to be criticised for trying to make an article more comprehensive and comprehensible by adding unsuitable taxon-level information or descriptive words like woodlouse-like that are not in a written source (I have amended the article Glyptonotus antarcticus). Now that it has been brought to my attention, I can stop doing these things and can try to be more discerning in my choice of sources. I believe I am able to change my ways now that the problems with my articles are rather clearer. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 10:33, 9 April 2014 (UTC)
 * If you don't know enough about botany, why did you revert me on the C4 statement, saying again, in one of Wikipedia's top articles that plants with C4 photosynthesis open their stomata at night. I told you directly they don't, you simply reverted me, and now you say I never explained precisely. That's not true. When I explained precisely you reverted and scolded me. Or ignored the problem and left the article as is. How much time should I expend looking through your articles? Will you correct them all? -(AfadsBad (talk) 11:10, 9 April 2014 (UTC))
 * I will correct all the ones you find where you clearly state what the problem is. Are we entering a new era of cooperation here? Cwmhiraeth (talk) 12:41, 9 April 2014 (UTC)


 * " I believe I am able to change my ways now that the problems with my articles are rather clearer."
 * Can you demonstrate this by fully correcting five of your articles not discussed here, find the errors, explain them, correct them? What should en.Wikipedia do about the other 1300 articles with errors that you created? --(AfadsBad (talk) 11:25, 9 April 2014 (UTC))
 * I could deal with 5 articles as you suggest, but I don't admit to your "1300 articles with errors" statement. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 12:41, 9 April 2014 (UTC)
 * I think the best way for you to show you can change your ways is to simply show you recognize your errors and know how to correct them, rather than my pointing them out. I will find five articles, basically at random from your articles created, plus maybe a GA or FA, to include a plant, vertebrate, an invertebrate. I can do it tonight. I won't pick articles that I know have errors, just a sample of articles. I don't really care about insubstantial errors, just errors that change information, or that mislead, or text that is imprecise. --(AfadsBad (talk) 20:47, 9 April 2014 (UTC))
 * Note, Black Kite or Casliber could also do this. I am just getting the articles created list and using a random number generator until I have a sample across time and organisms, probably not stubs, plus add the FAs and GAs and pick one of them, eliminate ones already error-identified. --(AfadsBad (talk) 20:51, 9 April 2014 (UTC))

For a start, you can begin with Atriolum robustum, a DYK from February 2014 (so fairly recent, and an article you considered good enough to have on the main page), which contains some facts which are clearly contradicted by the sources you use to support them. I'm not qualified to judge everything in the article, so others may do a more thorough check, but at least one error is obvious enough to be found without expert scientific background. Oh, and I don't think you should ever use Whatsthatfish as a source, it's as far as I can tell a wiki, not a reliable source. Fram (talk) 09:17, 10 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Agree that that is not a good source to use. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 09:34, 10 April 2014 (UTC)
 * I expect you are referring to the depth range. Looking for information on the species I came upon this source and used the depth range that site gave, 5 to 18 metres. Later I found the DORIS site which was a better source but did not change the depth range figures. That's an explanation, not an excuse. I have now changed the article and removed the unreliable source you have identified above. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 12:31, 10 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Not only that, you gave "but in New Caledonia it is known from as deep as 300m", while the source you used states: "La petite synascidie-urne a été observée dès 12 m jusqu’à 300 m de profondeur, sur substrat* dur. En Nouvelle-Calédonie, elle n'est commune qu'au-delà de 40 m de profondeur." (shortened translation: "has been observed from 12m until 300m depth. In Nouvelle Caledonie, it's only common beneath 40m"). The 300m and the "New Caledonia" are from two different sentences, the first indicating that 300m is the general max depth, the second giving specific info on New Caledonia which doesn't discuss the 300m. Combining these two like you did was wrong (by removing this, you of course solved it, but it is important that you also understand where you went wrong). But thanks for the swift change. Like I said, I don't know whether the article is now correct, but the problems I found are now gone. It would be better if you could look at the conversions as well though, 1.5 cm really isn't one inch, and on the other hand an approximate value like "300m" shouldn't be converted to 984ft but to 1000ft. Fram (talk) 13:09, 10 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Further to Fram's comments above, reefguide.com is not a reliable source. It is a self-published website (please review WP:SPS to see why citing such sources is against very longstanding policy) that carries an explicit disclaimer: "Disclaimer: I am not a taxonomist, just a recreational scuba diver with a keen interest in underwater photography and species identification. Therefore it is possible that some of the species identifications on this website are incorrect. I rely primarily on popular field guides and web resources, and there is also some limitation in identifying organisms exclusively from images. If you spot any mistakes please let me know, it will be appreciated." Such websites contain more errors than scholarly sites. Referencing such websites in Wikipedia propagates their errors at the level of the internet's top Google link for the topic, supplanting more reliable information available online and thus effectively impairing rather than enhancing access to the sum of human knowledge.
 * I also note that at the time you added the 5–18 m depth range, you did not cite the unreliable source that you had got the false information from; you only cited marinespecies.org (at the end of the sentence following). As some editors use paragraph-end rather than sentence-level citation, this would have created the impression that the information came from marinespecies.org (which is a reliable source), when in fact marinespecies.org does not say anything about the depth range of the species. Reliable sourcing and verifiability are very important if Wikipedia is supposed to work as intended. Andreas JN 466 14:03, 10 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Yes indeed. My French translation skills let me down, or at least the fact that I failed to notice the period. I agree with you about the conversions and will change them. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:36, 11 April 2014 (UTC)


 * Natterer's bat seems to have been left out. I don't claim to be a natural scientist of any color stripe, elongated shape, or phylum, but I did notice a couple of things. Maybe I'll find others later. I also ... did my best to correct them (shock, horror). Which, may, of course have introduced yet new error (see sentence 2), but I believe that it is only by actually trying to fix things that we can approach truth. So put me as somewhere between the "pillory Cwmhiraeth" and "praise her" camp, I see both her work and AfadsBads as valuable ... (and can find flaws with each, but am too busy removing the beam from my own eye to worry about the specks in theirs).
 * Lead said "It is found across most of the continent of Europe, parts of the Near East and North Africa, but is considered rare in the United Kingdom." No citation. I didn't see any reason to mention one country, UK, in the lead alongside continents and multi-country areas, especially if the critter is rare therein. What's more, I'm not so sure it is rare. I found this which quoth "They are considered widespread and fairly common in Northumberland", which I'm guessing is occasionally considered part of the UK. So I removed that.
 * Lead also said "This bat was named in honour of the Austrian naturalist Johann Natterer", which seems correct enough, but wasn't enough for me - did he identify it and name it? and  says he did, but I didn't buy it, and found three seemingly more reliable sources that said he didn't; so I wrote and cited that. --GRuban (talk) 14:54, 14 April 2014 (UTC)

A random five
These are five for Cwmhiraeth to find and correct errors.


 * Ancylomenes pedersoni


 * Termitotrox cupido


 * Cyclosalpa bakeri


 * Phormosoma placenta


 * Halophila decipiens


 * Salt Birth (This may have been repaired already. There are extensive edits with edit histories such as, "This is a GA article? Seriously? The editors who screwed this up shouldn't even be allowed to operate a shit pump," and calling a GAR "even more worthless than I thought.") How about Birth? Or we could just list the edits that were required to correct this after the GAR designation and you could explain why the edits were necessary to show your understanding and future abilities. I will think about this, also open to suggestions. Looking at the diffs, they appear to be mostly stylistic. Let's go with Birth--I picked back ups with the random draw, but I did not realize that I should have checked the edit history. I'm too busy, now.

I blew one, adding two invertebrates and omitted the plant but don't recall which invertebrate was randomly generated specifically for this or why I was looking at the other.

--(AfadsBad (talk) 12:46, 10 April 2014 (UTC))
 * To be fair to Cwmhiraeth, those harsh comments seem to be completely out of order for the that were being performed by the editor who made them. —  Scott  •  talk  15:10, 10 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Yes, the remarks appear to be out of line and deal with very trivial stylistic changes, at least one of which I think was incorrect and potentially confusing to readers. Stick with salt or move on to birth? Doesn't matter to me. I will probably look at both. --(AfadsBad (talk) 15:16, 10 April 2014 (UTC))
 * I don't think your chosen articles are random at all, I'm sure they are specially selected to trap me. Nevertheless, I will have a go at them. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 19:18, 10 April 2014 (UTC)


 * Tthey appear to be mostly written by you, and you say you feel comfortable monitoring and correcting your errors, so I have no idea how they could "trap" you? Do you think I spent time looking for articles that have bad and obvious errors? Your finding and correcting them could only benefit en.Wikipedia. Would you like BlackKite to generate a different list of five random articles, the same general parameters to cover breadth of time editing Wikipedia, organisms, and hit DYKs plys a GA or FA? --(AfadsBad (talk) 19:40, 10 April 2014 (UTC))
 * Suggestion How about if we ask Black Kite or Casliber to generate a list, a DYK plant, vertebrate, invertebrate insect and mollusc, plus one of your uncommented GAs or FAs, that cover different periods of your editing, as the random five, so you don't feel I've picked articles to "trap" you? It only took about ten minutes, having to check that they were mostly yours. --(AfadsBad (talk) 19:48, 10 April 2014 (UTC))
 * No Cwmhiraeth, I don't think you should "have a go" at these vague accusations when you have been given no indication of what you should be looking for. AfadsBad is trying to publicly shame you and bludgeon you into insensibility by using techniques that convict you in advance. The Inquisitor Heinrich Kramer would have been wringing his hands in excitement had he been able to see AfadsBad at work. It seems AfadsBad is finding it difficult to come up with specific examples, and unless she does come up with specifics, you should just ignore her. --Epipelagic (talk) 22:49, 10 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Please desist from trying to derail this process. You are not helping here one bit. —  Scott  •  talk  23:04, 10 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Specifics are appropriate Scott. Not vague innuendoes. Confronting Cwmhiraeth with five random articles and demanding that she "find and correct errors" is not a fair way to go about this. AfadsBad needs to establish her claim that Cwmhiraeth is making grievous errors in "every article". That means there must be many thousands of serious errors. It would be a start if AfadsBad listed a representative sample of, say, 100 serious errors, surely a simple task given the scale of the problems she claims are there. But so far she has come up with very little. --Epipelagic (talk) 23:18, 10 April 2014 (UTC)
 * It is true that AfadsBad is behaving more in a bullying than a constructive way. Yet there is evidence that the problem is real. See the article below. I just reviewed it randomly, as Cwmhiraeth herself pointed me to it. It was rife with inaccuracies and half-fabricated information. And when I point it to her, she does not see what is wrong. Nasty as AfadsBad attitude might be (and I'm all for making such attitude stop), I fear she has a point. -- cyclopia speak! 10:40, 11 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Epipelagic - AfadsBad's hypothesis is that all of Cwmhiraeth's articles contain errors. That hypothesis is being tested right here, and so far, it's 100% accurate. If you have a differing hypothesis, then bring some evidence of its validity (namely, a Cwmhiraeth article free of the types of error so far discussed) to the table; otherwise, you're doing nothing to disprove AfadsBad's contention. —  Scott  •  talk  14:04, 11 April 2014 (UTC)

Boring clam
I don't really know how to do an editor review, so apologies if my comment is somehow not following some proper process. I just wanted to notice that Cwmhiraeth pointed me to her expansion of Boring clam in a chat on my talk page. She did her last edit after the beginning of this editor review, yet I already found a few inaccuracies there. There are a few examples of inaccuracies in the way she extracts information from sources. All this material has been added by Cwmhiraeth (see this diff and history).
 * Source states that T.crocea is the smallest of Tridacnidae, but in the taxobox the species is assigned to Cardiidae (and Tridacnidae, as far as I understand, downranked as subfamily Tridacninae). Therefore the previous sentence in the article The boring clam is the smallest clam in its family is at least incompatible with source/taxonomy. Should be fixed, even if I'd like someone to check that Tridacnidae and Tridacninae are the same group, regardless of taxonomic rank.
 * This is a good point. When I started enlarging the article, the first thing I did was to check WoRMS about the classification. It stated that Tridacnidae was no longer valid and that the giant clams were now part of the subfamily Tridacninae in the family Cardiidae. So I changed the taxobox. My statement would have been correct if I had said subfamily. The source stated "It is the smallest of the giant clams" and at the time the source was written, the giant clams were classified as Tridacnidae. I'm not allowed to use the same wording, its close paraphrasing, so I substituted the word family. This was a mistake. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 18:58, 10 April 2014 (UTC)


 * Source states: The shell is often slightly to moderately elongate, article stated The general shape of each valve is roundish or a slightly-elongated oval. No mention of an oval shape is ever made in the source; this is completely made up. Fixed here, hopefully.
 * The exact words "slightly to moderately elongate" is used in the source and to use it in the article is close paraphrasing. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 18:58, 10 April 2014 (UTC)
 * But nowhere it mentions an oval. That word is completely made up. In fact, there is no trace of an oval shape whatsoever in the shell of Tridacna. -- cyclopia speak! 19:13, 10 April 2014 (UTC)-- cyclopia speak!  19:13, 10 April 2014 (UTC)
 * So how would you phrase it without close paraphrasing? Cwmhiraeth (talk) 20:19, 10 April 2014 (UTC)
 * I don't know: 'prolonged, either weakly or averagedly' is what using a thesaurus gives me. But this is beside the point. The point is that you made up an oval that exists nowhere. The point is that, to put it bluntly, you fabricated false information and you don't even recognize it.-- cyclopia speak! 20:35, 10 April 2014 (UTC)
 * "Mildly elongated." --(AfadsBad (talk) 20:51, 10 April 2014 (UTC))
 * Here are various ways of summarising The shell is often slightly to moderately elongate:
 * The shell often has a somewhat elongated shape.
 * In many individuals, the shell is mildly or moderately elongated.
 * The shell is frequently somewhat elongated.
 * It is common for the shell to have a somewhat elongated shape.
 * The shell often tends to be a little or moderately elongated. Andreas JN 466 01:46, 11 April 2014 (UTC)


 * Source states: The shell is also typically grayish-white, but is sometimes tinted with yellow, orange or pinkish-orange, too. These colors may also form an obvious band at the shell’s upper margin, particularly on its inner surface. - article stated The colour of the valves is generally greyish-white and there may be a band of pinkish, yellow or orange colour near the margin, especially visible on the interior surface.. These describe two different things (colour is not necessarily a band, one of the hues listed is not merely pinkish but pinkish-orange). Fixed here. I am also unsure reefkeeping.com is a reliable source.
 * Close paraphrasing issues do not allow me to use the exact words used in the source. I think my phraseology is perfectly acceptable and this is a quibble. As to the reliability of the source, I gave the matter some consideration. The "Invertebrate corner" is well referenced and is part of an "online magazine for the marine aquarist" that was produced monthly from 2002 to 2009 as far as I can see. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 18:58, 10 April 2014 (UTC)
 * No, it is not acceptable. You described a different thing from what the source describes. The source describes something which all around can feature a yellow, orange or pinkish-orange coloration, which sometimes forms a band at the upper margin. It became something that is always is greyish-white, except that sometimes has a coloured band (which can be pink, but not pink-orange, in your wording), and that band is at the margin of the shell (upper, lower, you don't say). These are two different things - really different. Shells which show a pink-orange color away from the margin do not exist in your description, but they may very well be common according to the source. If you don't understand why they are different, then you really have issues understanding language. This is very worrying.-- cyclopia speak! 19:13, 10 April 2014 (UTC)
 * I wrote "The colour of the valves is generally greyish-white and there may be a band of pinkish, yellow or orange colour near the margin, especially visible on the interior surface." The source stated "The shell is also typically grayish-white, but is sometimes tinted with yellow, orange or pinkish-orange, too. These colors may also form an obvious band at the shell’s upper margin, particularly on its inner surface." I omit to mention the "sometimes tinted" bit but then I am summarising the source, ie I don't include every detail, I give the typical colouring and omit the occasional tinting in this instance. What do other people think about this? Cwmhiraeth (talk) 20:19, 10 April 2014 (UTC)
 * The problem is these colorations, even "sometimes tinted" are usually being taken from tertiary sources. If the tertiary source is reliable, it may already have summarized the primary identifying features of a species, and by omitting something or changing something, you may have removed or altered a primary identifying characteristic. I can't find the article in my watch list, but you did this with a shrimp-like creature once, changing pink to orangish-pink or vice versa, and, without realizing it, you had changed a species characteristic to that of a different species. This requires major judgment on the part of the writer to know what is removable or not. Is this a species defining characteristic, that it can sometimes be tinted? If it is, the omission is not correct. Also, if it is important to describe the color of the valves, inaccurately describing them is not correct. Cyclopia is a biologist, and I am not, so my tendency would be to agree that his judgment on whether you can omit the tint is correct, and that you should be including it in the article if you are describing the valves. --(AfadsBad (talk) 20:31, 10 April 2014 (UTC))
 * Just for the record, I am a molecular biologist. While I have a soft spot for zoology, taxonomy, and even paleontology, it is not my bread and butter, so my judgement on these matters might not be optimal. Maybe the shell colour may be left out altogether, even if I would expect some description of it. My point is different: it is that Cwmhiraeth apparently, by attempting to avoid close paraphrasing, ends up writing stuff which is different in meaning from the source. She seems to be in good faith, but this is even worse: she seems simply blind to such differences of meaning.-- cyclopia speak! 20:39, 10 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Okay, I did sidestep your point, although it is one I have made many times. As a molecular biologist you may not know what can be omitted in the color details, and neither do I. But, in this case, without expert knowledge, and such a claim has no validity on Wikipedia, we must go by what the source says, and, yes, what is in the article is not what is in the source. --(AfadsBad (talk) 20:48, 10 April 2014 (UTC))
 * Cwmhiraeth, are you kidding me? It's not a matter of omitting details, it's a completely different meaning . Do you seriously, in good faith, do not realize this? If it is so, then you need edit restrictions now.-- cyclopia speak! 20:35, 10 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Here is a way the source statement could be expressed in different words, without changing the information:
 * Source: The shell is also typically grayish-white, but is sometimes tinted with yellow, orange or pinkish-orange, too. These colors may also form an obvious band at the shell’s upper margin, particularly on its inner surface.
 * Summary: The predominant shell colour is greyish-white. In some individuals, however, this is mixed with a yellow, orange or pink-orange hue, which may also be concentrated in a distinct band along the top margin of the shell, especially on the inside. Andreas JN 466 01:46, 11 April 2014 (UTC)
 * By the way, if something is really hard to paraphrase, it's always permissible to use it verbatim, enclosed in quotation marks, and with in-text attribution to the source. See WP:Plagiarism (intro). So you could write, According to source X, the shell is typically coloured greyish-white, "but is sometimes tinted with yellow, orange or pinkish-orange, too. These colors may also form an obvious band at the shell’s upper margin, particularly on its inner surface.". Andreas JN 466 03:46, 11 April 2014 (UTC)

I am a bit worried that even after the beginning of the review Cwmhiraeth is still pouring inaccuracies in articles. This seems the general pattern, constant little but piling-up inaccuracies, over and over. -- cyclopia speak! 14:50, 10 April 2014 (UTC)

Cwmhiraeth posted on my talk page; here I answer to avoid disgregating the discussion in multiple parallel threads.
 * When writing an article you have to summarise the source without close paraphrasing. This means words and sentence structure have to differ from the source. Your "slightly to moderately elongate" is identical to the source and is close paraphrasing. Finding a different way of saying it is challenging. You did not like my attempt. - The problem, again, is that you added the word "oval" out of the blue. The word does not exist in the source (I checked, feel free to prove me wrong). And in fact, just for the record, as far as I can see the shell does not look at all like an oval. You did not paraphrase the source, you changed the meaning of it. That is the point. You can't use paraphrasing as an excuse, because you do not paraphrase, you change the meaning.
 * If I get topic banned after making a complaint about being harassed, it will be a victory for AfadsBad, and imagine the jubilation on the Wikipediocracy forum! I don't like Wikipediocracy and they don't like me; I lurk the forum but I comment there very rarely. I also do not like the attitude of AfadsBad at all, which is problematic. Yet, even if AfadsBad often exaggerates the magnitude of issues she finds, it is correct that you are regularly introducing factual errors while "paraphrasing". You are often terribly sloppy. You read things that have different meanings as the same. You do not think anything of introducing made up information if this helps you "paraphrase". This is the problem. It pops out in many of the content you added -not all, probably, and not even all articles, but it is a regular pattern. Even if several of your articles turn out to be 100% correct, the fact they rely often on offline sources (which is normally allowed, of course) makes them suspicious. It is a problem. Stop making up excuses, act responsibly and acknowledge it, if you understand it; and if you don't, well, then AfadsBad is sadly right in thinking there are WP:COMPETENCE issues.-- cyclopia speak! 19:57, 10 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Whoa. I am no scientist, but what cyclopia pointed out is worrying. Elongated doesn't paraphrase to oval, in that case I would rather re-use the word elongated than use oval. I also concur that the omission of other colored shells was a wrong decision. Cwmhiraeth, accuracy is much more important than paraphrasing. As Andreas has pointed out above, use quotes if necessary. I also urge Cwmhiraeth to refrain from adding more content to Wikipedia for the time being. Perhaps it would be better for you to go back and double check articles you have already edited. starship.paint   "YES!" 04:15, 11 April 2014 (UTC)


 * It is very unfair to criticise in this way an unfinished article that I had only just started expanding. The description section was only a few hours old. If you look at my "Statement" above in connection with Glyptonotus antarcticus you will see how discouraging such actions are. As I continued with the article it is likely I would have changed the text to which your first two points refer as I got to find out more about the animal. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:21, 11 April 2014 (UTC)
 * I'm sorry, but I do not think it's unfair. You started editing the article on 10 April while this editor review was in full swing. You added the reefkeeping / Fatheree source into the article while adding the content of the oval and non-existence of other colored shells. Therefore, you should have read the source properly and paraphrased it properly the first time. There should be no need for you to "get to find out more" when you've already seen that source and tried to add content. Come on, you are on editor review, if you want to continue expanding articles during this time then you better do it correctly instead of giving your opponents more ammunition. starship.paint   "YES!" 07:35, 11 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Indeed. It is even more worrying that she sidesteps the issue as one of wording, or something that has to do with an unfinished state. Granted, I think we all made mistakes during edits, maybe we've added stuff from one source before understanding that it was actually out of date, or stuff like that. The real problem is that Cwmhiraeth does not understand she is wrong, so instead of fixing the errors once pointed, she just doesn't get it. This is serious.-- cyclopia speak! 10:35, 11 April 2014 (UTC)

Millepora alcicornis
This is apparently a GA, and Cwmhiraeth edits are still standing, since January 2012. I am now going to fix this.-- cyclopia speak! 12:13, 11 April 2014 (UTC)
 * I can't find any trace of this concept: It shows a variety of different morphologies depending on its location, which led to it being given a number of scientific names by different authorities. in the source referred. Perhaps I just missed it but I'd like someone to check.
 * Another colour description is slightly factually messed up: The cylindrical branches usually grow in a single plane and are cream-coloured, yellowish or light brown with paler tips., while the source states: Brown to light creamy yellow, with white branch tips.
 * Article states The dactylzooids have hairlike tentacles covered in cnidoblasts. These release cnidocytes when prey is in close proximity. Stings from the cnidocytes immobilize an item of prey - No mention of cnidoblasts/cnidocytes is made in the source. Is this made up? From my superficial knowledge of Coelenterata it may make sense, but... Also, cnidoblast and cnidocyte are apparently synonimous (and indeed the two wikilinks redirect to the same page!) so what does it mean that one releases the other? Probably she meant they release a cnidocyst.
 * She now removed one of the unsourced sentences (and fixed a grammar slip of mine). However on my talk page it seems she still doesn't get it. I am worried.-- cyclopia speak! 13:24, 11 April 2014 (UTC)
 * I see in this edit you have removed some information from the lead. Does not reference #4 cover this point? Cwmhiraeth (talk) 12:48, 12 April 2014 (UTC)
 * It is not the reference that was attached to that sentence. Yep, from my reading of that source, it seems you can put it back with the correct source at the end of the sentence (I also find it quite annoying that the leads of articles you write never have inline sources, this makes it very hard to understand what comes from what. Also entire paragraphs are sourced only at the end. At least every sentence or two should be supported by a source, IMHO, unless a whole block is supported by a single source -perhaps there's some MOS contradicting this, but if so, it is a problem.)-- cyclopia speak! 13:00, 12 April 2014 (UTC)
 * I don't see it in the source, which is rather long. Can one of you provide a page and paragraph before returning the sentence and citing it to this paper? --(AfadsBad (talk) 13:24, 12 April 2014 (UTC))
 * @Cyclopia. This is contrary to my understanding of the MoS. On this page it states: "Citations are also often discouraged in the lead section of an article, insofar as it summarizes information for which sources are given later in the article, although such things as quotations and particularly controversial statements should be supported by citations even in the lead." It also states: "An inline citation means any citation added close to the material it supports, for example after the sentence or paragraph, normally in the form of a footnote." I have found at GA and FA we are told to put the citation at the end of the paragraph rather than cluttering up the text with repeated citations to the same source.
 * Our article now says, "In 1898, Hickson decided that the variations in morphology were due to environmental factors and that Millepora alcicornis was the valid name for all these species.[4]" This implies to the reader that the later paper verifies Hickson 1898. I have only read the introduction, but the source you cite appears to say the opposite. Can you povide a page and paragraph, or explain your inclusion of this material? --(AfadsBad (talk) 13:49, 12 April 2014 (UTC))
 * I have amended the paragraph. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 19:17, 12 April 2014 (UTC)
 * In this page it states: "Despite the need to attribute content to reliable sources, you must not plagiarize them or violate their copyrights. Articles should be written in your own words while substantially retaining the meaning of the source material." That is exactly what I try to do with regard to such things as the colour description for this fire coral. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 13:29, 12 April 2014 (UTC)
 * If the "not getting it" continues, this may need to be escalated. Given the facts that are emerging here (as opposed to assertions, which have been well-known for months), it's certainly too early for this editor review to be closed. —  Scott  •  talk  14:08, 11 April 2014 (UTC)
 * @Cyclopia. I was pleased with this article which I think was my second GA. I started it from scratch and am considering whether to take it on to FA, perhaps you would be able to help me? I will work on your first point, but I think you will find the source information you mention in your third point if you look at the correct citation. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 08:14, 12 April 2014 (UTC)
 * I have now removed the unsuitable citation from the lead and the information is now cited in the body of the text. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 09:28, 12 April 2014 (UTC)
 * @Scott. Your interventions are always so helpful ! Since you tell us you are not a friend of AfadsBad, why is it that you are editing her talk page and removing another person's post which was headed "Warning"? Cwmhiraeth (talk) 08:14, 12 April 2014 (UTC)
 * That's interesting (RE: Scott) - though you could be a little less caustic, Cwmhiraeth. starship.paint   "YES!" 08:28, 12 April 2014 (UTC)
 * I think you will see why Scott is not my favourite editor from this posting, also on AfadsBad's talk page. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 09:28, 12 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Honestly from this action (and the previous dismissal of Happy Attack Dog) I expect a bit better from an admin, on this front at least. starship.paint   "YES!" 09:34, 12 April 2014 (UTC)

Pteria sterna
Another random DYK from February 2014. Checked one section, and soon found a clear factual error (you can try to correct it, or you can ask me to point it out, whichever you prefer). Checking further revealed an unrelated but even bigger error. I stopped my check after that second error. While I doubt that the assertion that all your articles have factual errors will turn out to be true, it seems clear to me from my checks and the rest of this discussion that you make too many small and large errors in articles which you consider to be finished (in the sense that your editing is done, not that they are FA-eligible of course). Coupled with the rather deficient DYK, GA and FA checks (Not related to your work, but I have this week alone pulled two approved hooks from DYK, and just corrected a third one, and that's what short cursory checks reveal), this means that loads of problematic articles grace our main page and that a lot of incorrect information gets spread by us. The problems of DYK e.a. can't be solved by you, but you are responsible for the articles you create and the ones you present for the main page. Some kind of mentoring, perhaps by a project or some willing experts, may help, but continuing without improvements is not really an option. Fram (talk) 14:57, 11 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Please point it out the errors (so that we can assess it) and if possible fix them (so that no misinformation stays). Just stating that it is wrong is not very helpful. -- cyclopia speak! 15:27, 11 April 2014 (UTC)
 * In any case, I had a look and immediately found it needed this fix. Cwmhiraeth mixed up females for males when taking information from this abstract, added a "height" where nowhere it was to be found. This is surely not a matter that can be justified by "paraphrasing". -- cyclopia speak! 15:34, 11 April 2014 (UTC)
 * In Cwmhiraeth's defense, "height" can possibly be explained. Source: The size at first maturity was determined at 117.1 mm SH - I don't know what is SH here, but I was nearly tricked into thinking "Shell Height". However, if this wasn't the case here, "paraphrasing" size to height is a grevious error indeed. starship.paint   "YES!" 03:35, 12 April 2014 (UTC)
 * I saw SH as well and that was the reason I used "height". Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:03, 12 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Why not then correct this in the text to "shell height?" There is no advantage to not using the correct nomenclature when it works for the general reader, and this addresses both the precision and paraphrasing badly out of fear of plagiarism criticisms. If the jargon is tricky or unusual, then explain it parenthetically, but if it is straight forward and you know it, then use it direcly to benefit the reader moving between multiple artices on the same topic. --(AfadsBad (talk) 13:38, 12 April 2014 (UTC))
 * Found another error. 1586 (source) became "three years later" than 1535, apparently. How this happened I have no idea, can't even be a typo.-- cyclopia <sup style="color:red;">speak! 15:40, 11 April 2014 (UTC)
 * First one you corrected was the first one I found as well, second one I hadn't even checked yet. The one you didn't find yet is IMO the most serious though. I'm logging off now, if no one has found it I'll post it on Monday! Fram (talk) 15:49, 11 April 2014 (UTC)
 * The lead says the oyster's range extends to northern Peru, but this fact is not referenced, and the word "Peru" does not appear in the article body, therefore this claim is unsourced. The article also mentions "the tropical Pacific coast of America", but File:World map indicating tropics and subtropics.png suggests Baja California is north of the Tropic of Cancer, and hence "tropical" is inaccurate. A genuinely "tropical" entity might extend from central Mexico to northern Argentina. (bit nitpicking that one, I know, but you asked for errors and I think it is one). Ritchie333  <sup style="color:#7F007F;">(talk)  <sup style="color:#7F007F;">(cont)   15:53, 11 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Thanks, but I noticed you didn't fix it. Please fix errors as soon as you find them. Otherwise this is a sterile exercise. I do not understand why is making this a treasure hunt: the ultimate aim of this review is to have accurate articles.-- cyclopia <sup style="color:red;">speak!  16:36, 11 April 2014 (UTC)
 * I'm afraid I don't know how to fix it - this isn't my area of expertise. The best thing I could do is put cn on it, and since the article has an overall disputed tag, there is no need to add any more as the reader has already been cautioned. If I were conducting the DYK review, I would have flagged both of my two queries above and expected a response from the nominator. Ritchie333  <sup style="color:#7F007F;">(talk)  <sup style="color:#7F007F;">(cont)   16:42, 11 April 2014 (UTC)
 * It does occur in northern Peru and I have added a reference for this fact. There were indeed some bad inaccuracies in the article and criticism of it is wholly justified. I can understand the reason behind some of them, but will not burden you with explanations. I would welcome some form of mentoring as suggested by Fram. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:03, 12 April 2014 (UTC)

First, let me state that I didn't list or correct errors because I thought the intention was to see whether Cwmhiraeth could spot the errors, and correct them.

Second, the worst error of the two I found apparently hasn't been found yet, so I'll explain it now. The article states
 * "Spawning is synchronised in any one locality and depends on the water temperature and the availability of food."

However, spawning for Pteria sterna isn't generally synchronized. According to, a source used by Cwmhiraeth to support his statement, says: " In general, a single synchronized spawning is known to occur per year in the summer in cold climates (high latitudes) (Giese & Pearse 1974), whereas two peaks may occur in temperate climates, and a continuous spawning takes place throughout the year in tropical climates, although not with the same intensity (Sastry 1979, Mackie 1984). [...] The Gulf of California populations display an asynchronous reproductive cycle, with a continuous gametogenesis throughout the year (Hernandez 1993, Arizmendi-Castillo 1996, Diaz & Buckle-Ramirez 1996; Saucedo & Monteforte 1997); whereas in the Ojo de Liebre lagoon, a synchronic reproductive cycle was observed, with gametogenesis being restricted to a specific period of the year, triggered by a rise in water temperature."

So, basically, Cwmhiraeth has taken a characteristic of one specific research group in one place, and has generalized that for the whole species, even though it is explicitly contradicted in the source used. This is not simply misunderstanding the science, this is worse. I suppose it is caused by only using the abstract and not the whole article, but that's hardly an excuse. Fram (talk) 08:17, 14 April 2014 (UTC)
 * While this is a serious content issue indeed, I suppose that if she was not having access to the whole article (or did not find it), this can, indeed, be an excuse. If anything this is just a lesson on being careful when using mere abstracts as sources. This is an error many could have made. I am more worried about the constant confusion she has between paraphrasing -when she does not realize she changes meanings, or interpolates OR. -- cyclopia <sup style="color:red;">speak! 13:34, 14 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Yes indeed, I only had access to the abstract. It stated "The reproductive cycle of P. sterna is synchronic and is influenced by temperature and food availability." Using this as my source, I wrote "Spawning is synchronised in any one locality and depends on the water temperature and the availability of food." Am I still damned? Cwmhiraeth (talk) 09:29, 15 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Yes. The title of the abstract was "Reproductive Cycle of the Pearl Oyster Pteria Sterna (Pteriidae) in the Ojo de Liebre Lagoon, B.C.S., Mexico", with as first line "The reproductive cycle of a wild population of the oyster pearl Pteria sterna living in the Ojo de Liebre lagoon was analyzed from February 2001 to February 2002." (emphases mine) You took the abstract of a study about the reproductive cycle in one location, and generalized this for the whole population. Incorrectly, as it turned out after a short search. You did the same for their size, taking the results from one local study and writing them down as if they were the sizes for the species everywhere. Fram (talk) 09:55, 15 April 2014 (UTC)
 * That's right, I wrote "The sexes are separate in Pteria sterna and the oysters become mature at a shell height of around 117 mm (4.6 in) for males and 106 mm (4.2 in) for females. Spawning is synchronised in any one locality and depends on the water temperature and the availability of food. In Ojo de Liebre lagoon it takes place between October and April, commencing as the water temperature falls" being careful to qualify the last sentence as to the breeding period. I was delighted to find some information on size, being previously unable to find much information on the animals appearance. I don't usually write articles with the assumption that morphology and dimensions vary between different locations, one set of figures from a reliable source seeming adequate to me, and I did include the qualifier "around". Cwmhiraeth (talk) 12:38, 15 April 2014 (UTC)
 * "I don't usually write articles with the assumption that morphology and dimensions vary between different locations, one set of figures from a reliable source seeming adequate to me, and I did include the qualifier "around"." I hope that you have changed your assumption now? It is clear that many, even major asoects can vary wildly depending on the location. At the bottom of the full article are some pointers to other studies, with completely different shell heights at maturity. E.g. 40mm is not "around" 105mm. Fram (talk) 13:12, 15 April 2014 (UTC)

Conopeum seurati
Here we go again.
 * I don't much like this prejudicial opening remark, made solely for the amusement of other editors. What you imply is that you have been victorious and found another of my articles to criticise. As a matter of interest, do you keep a tally of any articles that you inspect but think unexceptional, or are all my articles bad? Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:48, 12 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Let's say the ones I am reporting are beyond 50% of what I've checked. Notice also that I report stuff where I can pick up inaccuracies in a few minutes -the low hanging fruits, so to say.-- cyclopia <sup style="color:red;">speak! 10:29, 12 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Don't read into this too much. I didn't. cyclopia's not AfadsBad. starship.paint   "YES!" 06:41, 12 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Indeed, Cyclopia is a great asset to Wikipedia and in my opinion, AfadsBad is not. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 08:31, 12 April 2014 (UTC)


 * Fixed statement that talked of colonies being sometimes "unattached balls". Unfortunately, while sources referenced, talk of sphere-like colonies, no one of them is "unattached" at all -we're talking of a sessile species, after all. Perhaps I'm wrong but I can't find a reference about free-floating balls of this bryozoan.
 * I made an assumption that a spherical colony was unattached but Cyclopia made the assumption that because Bryozoa in general are attached, this one cannot exist as an unattached ball. Is not this just the sort of argument that you are condemning me for, going from the general to the specific? I have come across at least one species of encrusting coral that sometimes form detached discs or balls. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:48, 12 April 2014 (UTC)
 * I don't have the scientific knowledge, but why did you assume it was unattached and write it so? If it was not stated in the source then you should neither say "attached" nor "not attached"! starship.paint   "YES!" 06:41, 12 April 2014 (UTC)
 * It is difficult to imagine any colonial organism like this described as a sphere unless it was unattached because otherwise there would have to be some structure attached to the substrate, and this would make the description spherical inaccurate. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 08:31, 12 April 2014 (UTC)
 * This is utter WP:OR. The fact that this specific species is sessile is sourced, instead, and nowhere it talks about it being free-floating. Here is another example where you made up false information .-- cyclopia <sup style="color:red;">speak! 10:29, 12 April 2014 (UTC)


 * Fixed misleading sentence "is native to the coasts of northern Europe and the Mediterranean Sea. It has spread to the Atlantic coast of Florida and to New Zealand". Actually one of the sources states that the range of the species is unknown, and both agree that it is just mainly recorded from Mediterranean and Europe. And also "it has spread" implies that it manages to get there by itself; it is instead regarded as introduced, according to the source. -- cyclopia <sup style="color:red;">speak! 20:42, 11 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Well I think the word "introduced" sounds as if the introduction is purposeful so I try to avoid it. With regard to distribution, typical phrases I use are "native to", "occurs in" and "found in". It is helpful to use "native to" when there is general agreement among the sources that that is the region from which it originated. The complete range may be unknown but it does occur in the locations mentioned so I think that is worth mentioning. As for how it spreads, that is difficult to establish but it could be attached to floating debris so I think the use of the word spread is appropriate. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:48, 12 April 2014 (UTC)
 * What you think about the word "introduced" is wrong, given that in biology introduced species is a technical concept. It means the species has been transferred there by humans, while saying "it is native from X and spread to Y" implies that the species has arrived there by its own means. -- cyclopia <sup style="color:red;">speak! 10:58, 12 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Is there any source that said that it is the region where the species originated or is native from, as opposed to simply "it is regularly found here"? Granted, it is plausible that it is native from there, but to state so is WP:OR -- cyclopia <sup style="color:red;">speak! 10:36, 12 April 2014 (UTC)
 * I'm afraid you have not explained why you left out that the full range was unknown. That's important to me at least. starship.paint   "YES!" 06:41, 12 April 2014 (UTC)
 * I could have included it and it probably would have been a good idea, however I guess that the full range of the vast majority of marine organisms is unknown. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 08:31, 12 April 2014 (UTC)

I'm afraid a pattern of poor "paraphrasing" is becoming apparent, in an attempt to avoid plagiarism Cwmhiraeth was seemed to produced content that is simply... a little different from what the source said (once you consider the article as a whole). But a little different just doesn't cut it. starship.paint  "YES!" 03:44, 12 April 2014 (UTC)
 * In this case, I do not think Cyclopia's reasons for trashing the article are very good, they are mostly a matter of opinion. Cyclopia is a more experienced and knowledgeable editor than I am and I can see that I am going to be condemned as being a rotten editor whether I respond to the criticisms or not. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:48, 12 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Sorry but to completely make up out of thin air that a sessile organism creates "unattached" spherical colonies is not a "matter of opinion". You basically wrote the bryozoan equivalent of "this species of tree sometimes goes and takes a walk".-- cyclopia <sup style="color:red;">speak! 10:34, 12 April 2014 (UTC)
 * I have no idea whether cyclopia is a member of Wikipedocracy, but I sure am not. I don't think everybody here is waging a war against you. We're trying to remove the factual inaccuracies here, not here to "trash your articles" or condemn you as being rotten. An assumption of "unattachedment" and not saying "full range is unknown" aren't opinions. starship.paint   "YES!" 06:41, 12 April 2014 (UTC)
 * I have a Wikipediocracy account but I basically never post there. We dislike each other quite a lot, with very few exceptions. The owner of the WO domain (I think Kohs is) once called me "reprehensible scum", so if I have any bias, it is against WO. -- cyclopia <sup style="color:red;">speak! 10:34, 12 April 2014 (UTC)

Philaethria dido

 * Other inaccuracies. The description of the range was a bit misleading but perhaps not formally incorrect. However, despite the source referred in the paragraph describing three subspecies clearly, with a clear geographic range, the article explicitly stated that only two exist, and described ranges somewhat accordingly.-- cyclopia <sup style="color:red;">speak! 10:55, 12 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Apparently made up information. I can't find any mention of this peculiar feeding habit in any of the sources. Can someone double check if I missed it? -- cyclopia <sup style="color:red;">speak! 11:15, 12 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Update: Apparently she wasn't the editor adding such information, my apologies to Cwmhiraeth - I didn't check the right diff. She did add sources apparently corroborating this information, without checking if it was unsourced or contrasting with it. However, I repeat, she didn't make up such information. Apologies again. -- cyclopia <sup style="color:red;">speak! 11:26, 12 April 2014 (UTC)


 * Thank you. I decided to expand this article a little because one of the images was to be "Picture of the day" on April 8th and the article was a bit stubby. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 12:23, 12 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Still, how didn't you notice that sources were contradicting the unsourced info in the article?-- cyclopia <sup style="color:red;">speak! 13:02, 12 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Are you referring to the statement that you removed about the western subspecies? I guess you are, and yes, I should have put the citation after the previous sentence. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 13:44, 12 April 2014 (UTC)
 * But how did you miss the source was talking of 3 subspecies, very obviously (it lists them) when editing? Sure, it is a lesser sin (by omission, not by action) but quite perplexing. -- cyclopia <sup style="color:red;">speak! 17:04, 12 April 2014 (UTC)
 * It's quite amusing really. It was you who made the edit that added the third subspecies but left the word two at the beginning of the sentence. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 18:15, 12 April 2014 (UTC)
 * An error corrected two edits later.  Andreas  JN 466 20:54, 12 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Two edits and two days later. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 08:29, 14 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Yep., we all do mistakes. The problem is not that. Auditing my edits would probably find out a remarkable number of mistakes as well. Auditing almost every editor would do. The problem is that 1)your mistakes are systematic 2)they often follow a worrying pattern of changing the meaning of sources in an attempt to paraphrase them 3)they are spread potentially over hundreds of obscure articles 4)most importantly, you often just don't recognize them as mistakes. -- cyclopia <sup style="color:red;">speak! 21:16, 13 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Did you see my comment under Millepora alcicornis above where I point out that your interpretation of "No original research" is just plain wrong in at least some of the places you have been criticising me. I also comment there on your lack of knowledge of the MoS guidelines on referencing. You say my "mistakes are systematic" (systemic?), but that is because you are making an error in insisting that they are mistakes in the first place. (I'm talking here about some of your accusations of original research.) Cwmhiraeth (talk) 08:29, 14 April 2014 (UTC)
 * - Uh, honestly I still don't see such a comment above. I didn't accuse you of OR about Millepora alcicornis, after all -only that I couldn't find a statement in the provided source (it turned out it was indeed not in the source indicated after the sentence, but in another one, and deeper digging turned it out it was not so uncontroversial after all (see below). About the MOS, I have no doubt you are correct in applying it - I just disagree with it. As for that is because you are making an error in insisting that they are mistakes in the first place. - this is the worrying part about your editing. If you can't see that (for example) boldy declaring a sessile species as forming unattached colonies, just because you can't conceive of a sphere-like object being attached to substrate, is an extreme case of WP:OR, how can we expect you to improve in the future?-- cyclopia <sup style="color:red;">speak! 10:12, 14 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Here is the diff. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 10:24, 14 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Where are you saying that my interpretation of WP:OR is wrong, in that diff? About what you try to do with regard to such things as the colour description for this fire coral.: Do you still not understand that you are not merely using your own words, you are changing the meaning of the sources? Paraphrasing and using your own words is good -it is what is expected. But you cannot change the meaning, making stuff up. -- cyclopia <sup style="color:red;">speak! 11:27, 14 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Article previously said cream-coloured, yellowish or light brown with paler tips while the source states Color: Brown to light creamy yellow, with white branch tips. These are different and it's a mistake. Cwmhiraeth - for heaven's sake, please never paraphrase colours again. Damn. I would simply write ...and have a range of colours from light creamy yellow to brown, while the branch tips are white-coloured. starship.paint   "YES!" 13:16, 14 April 2014 (UTC)

Outsider's view
I'm a complete outsider to all of this, though I have followed this thread, and the related ones on Wikipediocracy, and I think one of the real problems here is that I don't think there is enough proper fact checking at GAs, and citing offline sources can be used by editors to game the system (whether by malice or incompetence) and sail through the review. What tends to happen then is that there is too much trust that the nominator is correct in their choice of sources. I think I put a only half joking remark in WP:Wikispeak that writing  sends out a huge "I know WP policies inside out and I am more clueful on this topic than you" regardless of whether the information actually matches the source.

I would not conduct a GA review unless I had a reasonable background understanding of the topic - without it, it's impossible to truly know what is inaccurate or misleading, and all the sources in the world won't tell you if major facts are missing from an article. And from what I can tell, that's what's caused this whole argument to erupt. The "blue number disease" is a serious problem on WP, but it's one so incredibly subtle and easily disguised that it hard to spot and correct. Writing FAs, real proper FAs that stand up to proper scrutiny to the world at large, not just a select number of Wikipedia editors, is a hard task and one has to ask the question - if you're so good at writing articles, why isn't somebody paying you to do so?

As for what to do with the work here, the topics are well outside of my area of expertise, but that makes it even more important that they are correct, because I trust the green blob at the top of an article to mean "this is true, and complete". I think the articles mentioned here have been sufficiently called into question that I would advise Cwmhiraeth in the short term to stop work completely and utterly, down tools, and do one of the many things life offers that doesn't have anything to do with sitting in front of a computer terminal. There's a wide world out there - go and enjoy it. Have fun. Ritchie333 <sup style="color:#7F007F;">(talk)  <sup style="color:#7F007F;">(cont)   13:44, 11 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Hello Ritchie333, what you say of GAs and FAs is true. A biology-ralated article at GA is listed in the "Biology and medicine" section and is usually reviewed by someone who edits in that part of the project but there is still a degree of trust in the article's content. At FAC the reviewers may come from a wider range of interests but the article concerned is usually reviewed at least in part by editors in that field. But your statement "I trust the green blob at the top of an article to mean "this is true, and complete"" is not correct. GAs are required to be broad in their coverage and address the main aspects of the topic, but are not required to be comprehensive, a criterion only required at FA.


 * With regard to my own editing, I spend a lot of time on Wikipedia because I love finding out about organisms and writing articles on them. The article mentioned above, Millepora alcicornis, was started from scratch by me and later brought to GA by me. Cyclopia made three points, one on the fire coral's colour, one based on Cyclopia selecting the wrong citation to question the contents of the article, and one other, now resolved, where a citation in the lead should not have been there but where the relevant information was cited in the body of the text. Are you seriously suggesting that Wikipedia would be the better if I had not written the article and the information on this species was still missing from Wikipedia? Cwmhiraeth (talk) 10:27, 12 April 2014 (UTC)
 * I will note here that the second point raised by Cyclopia actually did lead to the correction of an error. You cited a 1948 paper by Boschma for the assertion, "In 1898, Hickson decided that the variations in morphology were due to environmental factors and that Millepora alcicornis was the valid name for all these species." You left it at that, giving the reader the impression that Hickson's conclusion over a hundred years ago was the last word on the matter. Yet the whole point of the 1948 paper you cited was to refute Hickson's conclusion, which it did at some length, producing copious evidence that Hickson's 1898 conclusion was wrong, and there were in fact a fair number of separate species. In short, you left the reader with the state of science as it was in 1898, while citing a source from 50 years later that contradicted it. The change you have made now has updated the article to the state of science in 1948. What has happened in the 66 years since?
 * Wikipedia is invariably the top Google link for articles like this. I believe more than half of all Google users only click the top Google link. Rather than asking whether Wikipedia is better off for having the article, we should ask whether the public is better off having the Wikipedia article at the top of Google, because this project's mission is to serve the public. Any errors and inaccuracies present in Wikipedia are immediately propagated on dozens of mirror sites and often enter other sources. Updates and corrections like those you made just now may take some time filter through to mirrors; in some cases, they never do. The page Wikipedia displaced from the top of Google is http://animaldiversity.ummz.umich.edu/accounts/Millepora_alcicornis/ – an academically curated site that may well have been more reliable than the Wikipedia article. The fact is that errors or outdated information in Wikipedia actually harm Wikipedia's professed mission.
 * I will also note here that while Cyclopia acquiesced above, AfadsBad didn't, thus bringing this error to light, and leading to the article being corrected. It's not true that AfadsBad is not contributing anything of value here. Everyone is better off if you welcome her subject matter input. Andreas JN 466 20:46, 12 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Indeed I made the change to the article after AfadsBad drew to my attention to the matter in a polite and helpful manner. I do not deny that AfadsBad could be a useful contributor to the project and I welcome her subject matter input but only when it is constructive as in this instance. If she would change her attitude to one of collaboration rather than constantly trashing my contributions and attempting to ridicule me, I would be delighted. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:18, 13 April 2014 (UTC)

Another outsider's view
I have read this thread and the ANI as well. I am appalled at the tone and the pile-on of attacks I am seeing on a good faith editor and decent human being. AfadsBad, as far as I can tell, Wikipedia is a place where people need to cooperate and collaborate; this editor review fells more like sharks in a feeding frenzy and seems to be doing little to improve anything. To the extent that Cwmhiraeth's work has actual errors, the solution is to collaborate - if there is a problem with the editor doing a fix, then do research and find citations to high-quality sources that can be added to articles, lend a hand. To the extent that there are different views on matters that are merely stylistic differences of opinion (orange-gray is a perfectly adequate description, for example) other ways to phrase a concept are questions of style and form, not expertise and are subject to WP:NPA, This review is not doing that, it's just running down a person and trying to build up the ego of a bunch of bullies at the expense of someone who is actually doing the work. Montanabw (talk) 20:43, 12 April 2014 (UTC)

Gerda's view
I have not read this. I can't believe it. How many articles could have written with that amount of writing skill. Prepare to die. Put things in perspective. - I approved several articles by Cwmhiraeth for DYK with no problem, --Gerda Arendt (talk) 06:32, 13 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Hush Gerda, be patient. Any time now AfadsBad is going to reveal the massive list of real and most grievous errors she has been assembling in the background. The current nit pickers are just teasers, an aperitif. --Epipelagic (talk) 07:11, 13 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Epipelagic, do you have a forecast that hell is about to freeze over? ;-)  Montanabw (talk) 19:43, 13 April 2014 (UTC)
 * I don't understand where you saw impatience. I look at death. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 08:04, 13 April 2014 (UTC)

Jim's view
Cwmhiraeth and I jointly brought Common Starling to FA, and I found her a careful and considerate editor. Her edits to pages that are on my watchlist have never caused me concern, and Atlantic Puffin, another FA, was reviewed at FAC by a number of editors including content reviewers. We all make mistakes, but this whole thing is a result of personal attacks and harassment by a WP:NOTHERE editor who has nothing better to do than target Cwmhiraeth for personal attacks <b style="font-family:chiller; color:red;"> Jimfbleak - </b> talk to me?  09:40, 13 April 2014 (UTC)
 * I do not deny that there has been harassment by AfadsBad, and if it continues, sanctions should be in order. But the problem she uncovered, alas, is real.-- cyclopia <sup style="color:red;">speak! 21:17, 13 April 2014 (UTC)
 * While AfadsBad does bring content knowledge to the table, the harassment is unacceptable. An apology and promise of better future behaviour is needed. Any future harassment needs to be dealt with swiftly and harshly. starship.paint   "YES!" 01:14, 14 April 2014 (UTC)


 * I believe that I agree with Jim and Starship Paint. I am concerned that AfadsBad has no real credibility due to her off-wiki attack pages and general ranting hyperbole.  Maybe she has found a few actual errors, but she's also ranting about things that are mere stylistic disputes or making mountains out of molehills.  This editor is unwilling to explain why she thinks she is such a genius, makes broad accusations with minimal evidence and seems unwilling to do any substantive editing.  I keep saying SOFIXIT and I mean it; if you see an error, instead of bitching about it, just get a source that's better, make an actual edit, do it properly and join the ranks of the content editors who actually build the encyclopedia. Cwmhiraeth is putting herself on the line with every article; it's way easier to sit back and criticize than it is to get off your ass and do something.    Montanabw (talk) 02:30, 14 April 2014 (UTC)
 * This I can agree with, but again, the problem is real.-- cyclopia <sup style="color:red;">speak! 07:47, 14 April 2014 (UTC)
 * It just means we have two problems and must solve both, one with AfadsBad and one with Cwmhiraeth. We can have two solutions. starship.paint   "YES!" 12:59, 14 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Agreed. That is what I have supported since when I got involved. -- cyclopia <sup style="color:red;">speak! 13:09, 14 April 2014 (UTC)

Stats
I recently found it interesting to review the relative popularity of the pages which I have created and worked upon. It may help to observe which of Cwmhiraeth's pages are the most popular and, per the Pareto principle, it seems sensible to focus our attention upon these. Here's a table which I have prepared, showing the pages with the most hits over the last 30 days. The cut-off was a hit rate of 1 per hour. I analysed over a thousand pages altogether but these 92 pages get 90% of the traffic - a total of about 1.4 million hits in those 30 days - about two thousand per hour. For comparison, my most popular page, flip teaching, gets about 30 hits per hour and it's good to see someone working on the really popular and most vital pages like sugar and salt.

Andrew (talk) 12:33, 13 April 2014 (UTC)


 * I agree that the articles with most viewers should be the highest priority. Your list should contain the Poultry article which Cwmhiraeth greatly expanded for the recent Core Contest. That article gets somewhat more than 30 hits per hour. As a judge for the Core Contest, I thought the article improvement work performed by Cwmhiraeth was very valuable. Binksternet (talk) 16:04, 13 April 2014 (UTC)
 * I would be interested to know how User:Andrew Davidson generated this list. Snowman (talk) 20:09, 22 April 2014 (UTC)

Poultry
Binksternet, as a judge for the Core Contest, were you aware of Template:Did you know nominations/Poultry? Nikkimaria (talk) 00:46, 14 April 2014 (UTC)
 * No, I was not aware of that DYK nom. I did not look at the Poultry article until after March 9 when the contest ended. It appears that Cwmhiraeth fixed the too-close paraphrasing by the time I was judging the article. I did see one sentence with two parts, supported by a reference, but only the first part of the sentence was found in the reference. The second part of the sentence says that domesticated turkeys "are increasingly becoming part of the everyday diet in many parts of the world," which I don't think is quite true. According to the Ag Marketing Resource Center, the USDA says that turkey-as-food is increasing in the USA, but the world is not mentioned. A paper published in Nutrients says that per capita poultry consumption is on the increase "in many parts world," but turkey is not broken out separately from chicken etc. I did not assess this lapse as being a significant failure, since the expansion and reorganization work performed by Cwmhiraeth was otherwise so good. The article was logically organized for the first time, and it was expanded 11x with text and references. It really was an astonishing demonstration of what can be done with crappy vital articles. Binksternet (talk) 01:27, 14 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Looking through the reference section, FN 12 should be replaced. Alot of others are tertiary sources but ok given the general nature of the topic material. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 09:50, 14 April 2014 (UTC) thx for changing. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 01:37, 15 April 2014 (UTC)

Black Kite's view
Obviously I haven't looked through all the 1300+ articles written or expanded by Cwmhiraeth, but my initial views are as follows;
 * User:AfadsBad's claim that there are "multiple mistakes in every article" is clearly hyperbole. Some that I have looked through (where I am familiar with the subject) are fine. Of these, however, I would suggest that Cwmhiraeth uses a wider range or sources on some articles (especially birds). She has clearly also worked with other editors to create and expand other articles to a good status. However...
 * ...there are equally clearly issues with many of the articles written or expanded by Cwmhiraeth. Whilst I completely understand the problems with sources for many of these articles, if one cannot create an article without synthesising, original resourcing, or in some cases clearly not being familiar with the subject, one should not be writing these articles. Having no information on a subject is better than having incorrect information. My suggestion would be that Cwmhiraeth refrains from writing anything that is not clearly and unambiguously sourced to a high-quality reliable, timely, source. And if she's not sure if that is the case, then to ask advice from more expert editors.
 * The GA/DYK/WikiCup process, yet again, appears to be responsible for many of these issues. Having "prizes" for achieving these goals is fine, but is rendered utterly irrelevant when the people that are reviewing these processes are in some cases not competent to do so. I do not go anywhere near GA/GAR, but as part of my admin duties I have in the past "fixed" dubious DYK nominations or responded to the ERRORS board. The community as a whole should really be looking at reforming a process that instead of producing a number of consistent high quality articles, produces high volumes of articles which are sometimes (but clearly not consistently) good. Encyclopedic accuracy is far more important than pretty stars on editors' userpages. Black Kite (talk) 16:12, 13 April 2014 (UTC)
 * I think you are right that this is a process issue rather than one of an individual. Too often in the above mention is made of close paraphrasing, or not using the exact words in source, when the words being changed are elemental facts. A process that has led a well meaning contributor into such errors is flawed. It is a shame that those involved in the FA/GA/DYK process are unable to distinguish between a theater review and the description of a species and its habit. John lilburne (talk) 17:13, 13 April 2014 (UTC)
 * It's a catch-22 between close paraphrasing and changed meaning, one that trips up a lot of people and in the case of some particularly tendentious editors becomes a no-win situation. I'd also like to add the point that for longtime editors, our earlier stuff, when standards were not as tight, is going to be inferior to newer material.  I disagree that lack of personal expertise should be a total exclusion - if you can find and use reliable sources, that's the point.  If people can tap the expertise of one another, (instead of, as here, a self-proclaimed "expert" steps in, does little to help but just attacks the original editor, which does NOTHING to improve the actual article) collaboration is supposed to catch errors. Heck - I've only been in the Sip 'n Dip Lounge once in my life and I've never had the "fishbowl" even while there, but I wrote the article anyway!  I also am not a gemologist or a geologist, but collaborated with five people to get Yogo sapphire to FA.  So this debate is really quite silly.  We need to improve the GA review process, perhaps, we might want to look at the wikicup point system (4 points for a GAN review versus 30 for a GA - I suggest bumping up the points for reviewers - along with the length requirement for a thorough review!) But we do not need to keep beating up on Cwmhiraeth!  Enough is enough!  Montanabw (talk) 19:40, 13 April 2014 (UTC)
 * It is not catch-22. You are all taking the published work of others and copying it onto some website. In doing so you need to be able to distinguish between the bare facts in the source and the prose in the source. You are meant to copy the facts but not the prose. If someone is unable to adequately distinguish between the two then you end up with either a plagiarism/copyright violation or you end up making claims that the source does not make. This is particularly so in technical subjects as the language tends to be specialized, and does not readily accept synonym substitution. Think of it in terms of a English to French translation where if one isn't careful the choice of word renders the meaning unintelligible. For example I've seen a translation of 'port' in this context Cylinder head porting given the French word havre. Messing about with point systems really isn't going to fix the problem. John lilburne (talk) 23:01, 13 April 2014 (UTC)
 * is that a typo where you said Having no information on a subject is worse than having incorrect information?
 * Oops, yes, thanks for pointing that out. I reversed the sentence and not the adjective. Black Kite (talk) 10:18, 14 April 2014 (UTC)
 * I agree with John lilburne - "close paraphrasing" of scientific facts is clearly a problem. starship.paint   "YES!" 01:02, 14 April 2014 (UTC)
 * I am not sure the above two statements are actually in agreement; injecting your own opinions and saying that your opinion agrees with someone else's isn't the same thing as a meeting of the minds. Montanabw (talk) 02:24, 14 April 2014 (UTC)

That said, you dismiss too lightly the problem of skillfully balancing writing for a general audience AND writing with complete precision; there is always a need to lean a bit one way or the other, It is not easy, it is a gift, and I am trying to point out that this balance takes time and skill; and even the most skillful editors are going to not be 100% all the time. Here we have an editor who has written excellent articles and probably has some that were written in a bit tighter of a timeframe and either painted with a bit too broad a brush or used older reference material or simply extrapolated a bit more than is ideal; this does not mean we dismiss the editor as a human being. Frankly, those of you stating "someone" ought to review over a thousand articles has clearly never even participated in something like a big CCI investigation - I have - and reviewing hundreds of articles takes several people and often many months. Are you going to volunteer? I doubt it- because that would mean you put your own work on the line and up for the same criticism that you are so eagerly dishing out here at poor Cwmhiraeth! It is time to shut down this review because it's getting tl;dr and generating more heat than light. Montanabw (talk) 02:24, 14 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Once again this is a process issue not an issue with an individual. The system that is in place, is responsible for the generation of these errors. This is demonstrated by the fact that those involved in the FA/GA/DYK process are not seeing, or dismissing the problems. You are all too caught up with detecting close paraphrasing in the reviews that you aren't seeing that the manipulation has changed the factual information. That is the damn problem not any one particular editor, because I suspect that many articles coming through this system by other editors have similar issues, Cwmhiraeth just happens to have created more, but remove Cwmhiraeth and in six months time it will be someone else. I suggest the reason for this is that detecting 'close paraphrasing' is easier to spot by none experts than garbled factual information, however the focus should be on the factual information and the the close paraphrasing should be of lower importance. John lilburne (talk) 06:46, 14 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Thorough reviewing is something that is needed more of throughout wikipedia. Yes walking the tightrope between too-close paraphrasing and OR is difficult but it can be done. I can see Liliburne's point in staying closer rather than further from the original text is the lesser of two evils. The FA review process is usually exacting on sources, and some reviewers are more exacting than others. Maybe some blanket statements urging tighter review of sources at the relevant boards would be helpfulCas Liber (talk · contribs) 09:07, 14 April 2014 (UTC)


 * When you started your review, you suggested that AfadsBad gave examples of articles containing errors or misleading information while I gave details of articles I considered to be good and accurate. We provided this "evidence" but when stating your view you have made generalisations but not specific comments on the "evidence". I have made a table below and listed these articles. Please could you add comments, a score (1 to 10 with 1 being "extremely bad" and 10 being "perfect") and whether you think the article has multiple mistakes. Please add any other articles you have inspected in detail to the table and score them too. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 10:16, 14 April 2014 (UTC)
 * No, sorry, I'm not going to do that for two reasons. One, I'm not qualified to do so for many of the articles. Atlantic Puffin or Eurasian Wryneck fine, but for many of the others I would be placing myself in the same position as many others reviewing the articles whose knowledge does not extend to being able to confirm how well-written the articles are.  Two, I think this editor review has spread to a wider forum, that of how scientific articles are dealt with generally in WP, especially the issues of DYK etc., and for this I don't think reviewing individual articles is worthwhile.  I said above that I thought AfadsBad's claims were hyperbole and I stand by that, but equally I also stand by my analysis that there are a number of articles that have serious issues. Black Kite (talk) 16:17, 14 April 2014 (UTC)

Cwmhiraeth's view

 * Black Kite took on the review but his efforts were largely swamped by the comments of other users. He asked for "evidence" to be provided by AfadsBad and me in the form of specific articles we either thought bad or good. In his conclusions he did not evaluate this evidence, and when I asked him to do this, he stated that with the exception of Atlantic Puffin and Eurasian Wryneck, he did not feel competent to judge them. Thank you Black Kite for volunteering for this difficult job.
 * AfadsBad unsurprisingly featured heavily in the review. I thought her efforts at producing "evidence" rather feeble. Her crony, Scott, followed along with comments but added nothing of substance to the review. Both are enthusiastic members at Wikipediocracy.
 * I understand that Andreas JN466 is a regular member of the Wikipediocracy forum and therefore I viewed his intervention in my review with some suspicion. His comments at AnI seem to have a slight negative bias but are on the whole fair enough. He first proposed on AnI that I sought a review which I did. On this review, he identified three specific errors in Desert, one of which turned out to be incorrect and now appears hidden in this review under the heading "I misunderstood". He popped up here and there, always in a negative capacity.
 * Cyclopia and Fram have both unearthed a number of articles to criticize. I do not think they have been unfair in their criticisms, but both seem to have arrived with a mission, not to evaluate my work but to find examples of incompetence. This prejudging of the issue is exemplified by the opening statement of Cyclopia when creating a new subsection on AnI entitled "WP:COMPETENCE issues of User:Cwmhiraeth". Cyclopia stated in this "Her answers to the points I raised on a review of a random article of hers ... make me worry that some of the unpleasant frustration of AfadsBad could be justified". This so-called "random" article was Boring clam, an article I had started expanding the day before and which was criticised in its unfinished state within hours of the time I wrote the offending passage. Hardly random and hardly fair, I would say. Cyclopia has been vociferous in complaint. Some criticisms I regard as fair comment, but if I query any of them, this fact is evinced as evidence that I "just don't get it". Cyclopia also used the remark "Here we go again." to introduce a new section on another article criticised. Fram seems on a mission to find further examples of my incompetence and will no doubt succeed if the search continues.
 * Several other users such as Casliber, Starship.paint and Jimfbleak have made useful contributions to the review and have sought to oversee fair play in what has become largely a Cwmhiraeth-bashing process. Other users have been kind enough to praise my work or to offer well-argued critical comments for which I thank them. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:31, 15 April 2014 (UTC)
 * What, if anything, are you going to change in your approach to article writing and sourcing, in light of this editor review? Fram (talk) 07:43, 15 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Forget my question, I just read your comments of last evening at the ANI discussion, and they match nicely with what you complained about here: "Some criticisms I regard as fair comment, but if I query any of them, this fact is evinced as evidence that I "just don't get it". Yes, you just don't get it, and I fear you never will, if you still felt the need to ask others to check the change at Spicara maena, caused by my check of your DYK nomination. If you can't see what's wrong with your original text there, even after it had been explained repeatedly, then you should refrain from creating articles on scientific subjects (or at least from writing anything but the most basic facts about them). Fram (talk) 08:04, 15 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Fram I will take a look at this - just started reading Template:Did you know nominations/Spicara maena when RL happened. Back later. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 08:18, 15 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Thanks. At the DYK, I thought he (or she) finally got it, but apparently the edit was only done to appease me and get the DYK on the front page, and Cwmhiraeth doesn't believe there was anything wrong with the initial text in the article (or the DYK). This moves the problem from not being careful to not being competent, and that's why my question above is no longer valid. Fram (talk) 08:41, 15 April 2014 (UTC)
 * In most animals at a stage in their life when they are growing, the animal's size increases as it grows older. Note the use of the word grow in the previous sentence. I don't believe the proposed hook "... that both the picarel and the blotched picarel change sex as they grow?" implies that the change occurs at a certain size, just that young individuals are female and older ones are male and that the change takes place at some point in their life. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 10:27, 15 April 2014 (UTC)
 * The hook itself was ok, but as I tried to explain at ANI, the article itself did indeed imply that the change occurs at a certain size . Adrian J. Hunter(talk•contribs) 10:54, 15 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Reading one of the sources what I took from it is that there were both males and females in the earlier ages and the sex change from female to male occurs after the female has spawned a couple of times, that size was an incidental factor of that. Now the source didn't say that, but it is a line of research that I would have taken to ascertain the real cause as size/age alone as a vector seems to be somewhat lacking. John lilburne (talk) 11:16, 15 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Cwmhiraeth, are you really trying to defend yourself by equalling "as they grow" with "as they grow older"? Apart from that, your sentence simply doesn't make sense at all: "In most animals at a stage in their life when they are growing, the animal's size increases as it grows older." Yes, usually, when you are growing, your size increases, and the most accepted meaning of "growing" is from an earlier point in life to a later point in life; the reverse is more commonly called "shrinking". So, what your sentence says, is "Most animals grow at some stage in their life". Some, apparently, don't? If the hook didn't want to imply that the sex change was related to their growth, then the addition was meaningless and confusing. I haven't seen an explanation why you thought adding "as they grow" would in any way improve the hook. And I haven't seen an indication why you still thought that the article as originally written by you was correct. But I love your final line "that the change takes place at some point in their life." No kidding? They don't change sex before birth or after death? Please, if you can't make a coherent defense, or better still, just admit that you were wrong, then don't bother replying. You are not helping yourself. Fram (talk) 11:34, 15 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Cwmhiraeth, the point is making is about aligning the text with the sources - the Fishbase source only uses the phrase "Are protogynous hermaphrodites" and hence the text in the article has to align with the phrase. Now having looked at the sources I can understand the thinking, and would recommend adding about Soykan and colleagues finding that sex inversion occurred between 14.5 and 15.0 cm total length in a study off the coast of Izmir, but we can't generalise as they themselves note that "Salekhova (1979) reported that sex inversion occurred between 12.1 and 15.0 cm in the Lampedusa Island population, and Dulčić et al. (2000) reported that sex reversal occurred between 17.5 and 18.0 cm total length." they also make some notes at the end about regional differences. Now the next issue was Fram calling it Original Research, which it wasn't - sentence two of No original research the states "The phrase "original research" (OR) is used on Wikipedia to refer to material—such as facts, allegations, and ideas—for which no reliable, published sources exist" - you had identified a source but hadn't ascribed it to that section (although we can't generalise the finding). Incidentally it is feasible that organisms mature but not grow during certain stages, but I digress as it is not the case in this fish. Given the pejorative nature of the term OR, I can see that there was some lack of Good Faith on Fram's part, yet were it me I might have tweaked it the sentence before. I also understand Fram's (and others') exasperation at DYK, and he understands my frustration at editors who contribute little content yet heavily criticise others and we have discussed this previously. Polarising debates are problematic and tend to make the opposition angry rather than "learn" them. Sigh. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 20:46, 15 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Thank you Casliber for the amendments you made to the article. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:57, 16 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Cwmhiraeth, come on. What I hatted above under the heading 'I misunderstood'" had nothing to do with anything I said about your article being incorrect, and you know it. Let's recap: I identified two, not three, issues in Desert. Both of these involved obvious absurdities.
 * The first issue concerned the paragraph in which you stated that the average winter temperature in cold deserts like Greenland and Antarctica was between –2 and +4 °C. (!!!!!!!!!!!!) That stayed in this top-3,000, million-views-a-year article for almost a year.
 * The second issue was that you wrote that birds in cold deserts avoid "the problem of their feet becoming chilled by maintaining their lower limbs at external temperatures". Penguins' feet would freeze solid if they dropped to –30 °C. The poor critters would die of frostbite and gangrene.
 * What I said I misunderstood was your explanation of why you didn't change the average winter temperature right away when I told you it was nonsense . At first I thought you'd said "It wasn't me" who'd inserted that info. So I wrote a long response with diffs proving that it was you. Upon re-reading your reply, however, I understood what you'd really said: that you hadn't changed it "because the figures [you] used were in the source [you] used" . So I hatted my first response. Okay? That's what was hatted. Nothing to do with any incorrect statement of mine about the accuracy of the article.
 * Now, I find it most alarming that you would recount what happened between you and me here in terms that are so far removed from the truth. I was similarly alarmed when I saw you trying to deflect attention from the point made by at AN/I. It seemed to me that you seized on a mix-up in what he'd written to avoid acknowledging the actual content point he was making to you (which was the same point  and  had made before him). If you carry on like this, you'll end up with lots of people who are as distressed as AfadsBad!
 * To me the crux of the matter, sadly, is this: I wouldn't trust anyone to write science articles who's happily asserted, in a Good Article, that the average winter temperature in places like Greenland and Antarctica is between –2 and +4 °C, and who, when it was pointed out to them, still kept that in the article just because they could point to a website that said so – a website that had no business being cited in Wikipedia. And that this slipped through the GA review, and stayed in the article for almost a year, is equally alarming. Andreas JN 466 10:55, 15 April 2014 (UTC)

Cwmhiraeth, could you please answer this? What have you learnt about your editing through this editor review? Have you realised any problems or mistakes? If so, how are you going to change to ensure that these mistakes aren't made any more? starship.paint  "YES!" 12:03, 15 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Well, I have learnt that there are some editors who define " no original research" in a different way from me and I am considering whether I should adopt their approach. I have learnt that I should be more selective in the sources I use and I accept Andreas criticism, because I did think the temperatures mentioned in the source seemed rather unlikely. On his second point, I explained that I had expressed badly the point I was trying to make. I have learnt that if you say something over and over again, as AfadsBad has done, people jump to the conclusion it must be true. I have learnt that if you have written 1300 articles, as AfadsBad asserts (I don't know where the figure came from), people are pleased to point out the errors in a small number (15?) and extrapolate from that to assume the rest are all bad. I await Casliber's verdict on Spicara maena with interest and also the results of any reviews of my articles that take place as a result of requests at the relevant WikiProjects. Let's not prejudge the issue. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 13:08, 15 April 2014 (UTC)
 * How about your paraphrasing? I think I have stated more than once here about my opinion in your supposed errors of paraphrasing leading to inaccuracies. This issue is partly related to "no original research". Do you have an opinion on that? starship.paint   "YES!" 13:33, 15 April 2014 (UTC)
 * I have learnt that if you have written 1300 articles, as AfadsBad asserts (I don't know where the figure came from), people are pleased to point out the errors in a small number (15?) and extrapolate from that to assume the rest are all bad. - That's basic statistics. If I have a bowl with an unknown, huge number of black and white candies, and I pick up a dozen black candies and a couple white ones, it is plausible that most candies will be black. Sure, one can have been really unlucky, but still, the pattern begins to show. Also because each article with problems features multiple problems. As for defining "original research", it is very simple: do not make assumptions that are not written down in the source. I wonder however if you really understand why we find many of your paraphrases incorrect. Are you still convinced that your colour descriptions are correct? If yes, I can try to explain more clearly. -- cyclopia <sup style="color:red;">speak! 14:57, 15 April 2014 (UTC)

from Faendalimas
I became aware of this from the link posted on the Reptile and Amphibian Portal. Have spent the last hour reading all of it through. My own specialty is that I am a Zoologist (Taxonomist/ Paleontologist) specialising in turtles, Museum based. I am very busy but will try to have a look at the Crocodylus page listed above. I did however want to comment also. As a scientist I find the style of the attacks in here by some, the tone and methods a little unfair. I have of course had to attack and discredit other work in the course of my career, but it is done in a way that is respectful, I attack the work not the person. In saying that when your work is criticised it must not be taken personally. It seems that choice of resources has also been an issue, books are usually only editorially reviewed, not fact checked so using books is not the best practice, unless you have knowledge of the author. But your preference in science should be first class peer reviewed journal articles. It does not mean there are not good factual books out there, identifying which is which is the issue. Faendalimas talk 15:59, 15 April 2014 (UTC)
 * ok well the page ´´Crocodylus novaeguineae´´ I think this article is reasonable, not innaccurate nor missrepresentative of the greater knowledge base for the species. That is its fine. My main criticisms would be I feel the classification could be done better since the species is a member of the sub-family Crocodylinae etc. It could also use a synonymy which is useful and can easily be checked on the Reptile Database. References cited could include some of the first class literature and it only took a few searches to find some of this material available online, in particular on the systematics and ecology of the species. These criticisms are just ommisions I feel the article could use, its not a bad article for WP. This is not a well known species such as the Nile or Saltwater Crocodiles, so information is a little harder to find. So in summary could use a few things added, and a better use of the primary literature. Cheers Faendalimas  talk 18:12, 15 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Sorry, did you check the exact consistence of the article with the sources? That's where Cwmhiraeth problems lie. Here is for example: Source says Body colouration is brownish to grey, with darkish banding on the body and tail which is more apparent in younger animals. The article instead says The body is gray-brown in colour, with dark brown or black bandings on the tail which become less noticeable as the animal grows., which is subtly different but different. The source talks of a range of colours (from brownish to gray) while "gray-brown" to me seems a single colour. Also, "darkish banding" does not readily translate into "dark brown or black" - black is nowhere to be found. These are very subtle, minor inaccuracies, but they keep on confirming the pattern. -- cyclopia <sup style="color:red;">speak! 18:19, 15 April 2014 (UTC)~
 * Yep problem is the choice of the source. I am assuming the source got its information from Hall (1989) but without clarification. Cwmhiraeth has cited a web page that has not clearly stated its sources. So what are we to believe. This is another example of my point, go to original sources so it can be done right. For an encyclopaedic article its an adequate following of the sources, not great but adequate. Having seen the species in question, as well as C. johnstoni and C. mindorensis that description is not unreasonable for any of them. But we need sources that back that up. Also the act of writing an entire paragraph, with multiple statements and then citing only at the end of the paragraph your sources, is a little dubious since we dont know which statements come from which source. Wether gray-brown represents a single color or a range is unclear, same is true in the source also. Faendalimas  talk 18:39, 15 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Thank you for your fair comments, Faendalimas. The reason that there are citations only at the end of the paragraph is that the description is a synthesis of information from the two sources. I have seen this approach recommended because otherwise the text gets cluttered up with citations, and adding and correctly attributing information in the middle of the paragraph becomes a nightmare. The point that Cyclopia makes on the animal's colouring shows that Cyclopia is still failing to understand the necessity of using your own words as per this page where it states: "Despite the need to attribute content to reliable sources, you must not plagiarize them or violate their copyrights. Articles should be written in your own words while substantially retaining the meaning of the source material." I'm hoping that Nikkimaria is going to clarify this point for you. Another point you seem to fail to understand is that different sources often give information that varies significantly between themselves, sometimes dramatically so, and this means that just blindly following one may be misleading. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:37, 16 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Hi Cwmhiraeth. You've identified a key policy quote about appropriate practice: "Articles should be written in your own words while substantially retaining the meaning of the source material". This can be very difficult to do, particularly where a source is dense, technical, or otherwise difficult to understand; as a result, it's quite easy to fall too far to either side of the OR/CV balance. There are of course techniques to deal with the problem - rephrasing where possible, quoting where not, etc. Nikkimaria (talk) 00:13, 17 April 2014 (UTC)
 * You are welcome. I understand your point of not cluttering the text with citations, but you don't want to go the other extreme where it is unclear what is cited. A balanced method is needed. I have also seen this approach recommended and have urged careful use of this then also. Yes you cannot copy word for word, you must paraphrase and cite. But you cannot loose the meaning doing so either, its a difficult skill to master. Trust me as a professional scientist, am well aware that different sources have different views. The reason that I recommend peer reviewed articles is that as they have been vetted by other scientists in that field in order to get published you can have a little more faith in what is said in the article. I have to deal with this issue, also when writing WP pages but also my own peer reviewed journal articles. That of course constantly leads me to the issue of NPOV in articles I write of WP, such as if I have to cite my own publications. Cheers, Faendalimas  talk 06:37, 16 April 2014 (UTC)
 * - the point that Cyclopia makes on the animal's colouring shows that Cyclopia is still failing to understand the necessity of using your own words. No. I understand very well you have to use your own words. But, with different words, you have to say the same things. You must change the words, you must not alter the meaning. What is not clear about this concept? Do you understand the difference between using your own words and making stuff up?-- cyclopia <sup style="color:red;">speak! 08:55, 16 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Yes I do understand. And I think your objection is petty and trivial. The reviewer said of the article "That is its fine", and then mentioned various ways in which it could be further improved. Why don't you just shut up, and if independent reviewers with knowledge of what they are reviewing say an article is acceptable, leave it at that? I think the answer to my question is that you have appointed yourself as chief prosecutor and are determined to get me topic banned or otherwise punished and that you are not prepared to give up. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 10:02, 16 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Yes I do understand. - Then explain me how "darkish bands" translates as "dark brown or black". Dark brown I can understand, but black? And explain me how a range (from grey to brown) became a single mixed coloration (gray-brown). These two things are not the same of your paraphrase, not in wording, but in meaning. Do you recognize this? Granted, this is quite a tiny inaccuracy, compared with others: but it confirms the pattern.
 * And I think your objection is petty and trivial. - So you think that inserting inaccurate or even false information in articles is "petty and trivial"?
 * The reviewer said of the article "That is its fine" - Reviewers may miss things. I missed things that other reviewers found, above (see Fram and the oyster article, who found an inaccuracy I didn't find).
 * Why don't you just shut up M'lady, you are not in the position of telling me to "shut up". You are being reviewed, and I am reviewing (and even if you weren't under editor review, I could point to article errors all the same, all the time). You are free to disagree (digging your hole even deeper), but you are not free to tell me to "shut up".
 * I think the answer to my question is that you have appointed yourself as chief prosecutor Not at all. I am just worried, maybe more than others, about what is going on with your edits. Not all of them, not all articles, but many of them. Too many to just let it go.
 * and are determined to get me topic banned or otherwise punished I am indeed determined to do that in the case you keep maintaining an uncollaborative and defensive approach, and refuse to admit your mistaken concept of paraphrasing, for start. I would much, much prefer however not to lose a good faith and prolific contributor, if you can instead understand what is wrong with many of your paraphrases and inaccuracies and help fixing them. -- cyclopia <sup style="color:red;">speak! 10:42, 16 April 2014 (UTC)
 * But you are trying to make someone who approved the article change his mind and I don't think that's fair. And now I come to look at it, the bit you are challenging was not even my own work, but has been in the article since 2006! Ha ha, well done! Cwmhiraeth (talk) 13:06, 16 April 2014 (UTC)
 * But you are trying to make someone who approved the article change his mind and I don't think that's fair. - Why not? What does "fair" mean in this context? This is not a game. This is about ensuring accuracy.
 * And now I come to look at it, the bit you are challenging was not even my own work, but has been in the article since 2006! - Fair enough, in this case apologies if I assumed it was your work (well, you yourself assumed it was yours, until you looked at the chronology). Yet you seem to think that such a paraphrase is correct. Do you think it is? I agree that between this and the Philaetria dido article, where inaccurate edits preceded your ones, there seems to be a more general problem in science articles, and that you are just a tip of the iceberg. But it would be appreciated if you begun to understand what this problem is. Do you? -- cyclopia <sup style="color:red;">speak! 14:40, 16 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Well to be fair to cyclopia, I dont think it was an attempt to change my mind but check if I looked at that facet. As an editor and reviewer thats a reasonable question to ask of me, as long as its done respectfully. As WP editors we are responsible for producing what is in effect an Encyclopaedia, that means we have to try to be presenting good information. We all make make mistakes, it happens. @Cwmhiraeth maybe collaborating on these science articles would help help you. Many scientists do not have the time to devote to mass editing on a project such as WP but are willing to help in other ways. You are aware that if you are writing an article on a particular species and need a reference, a quick email to the corrosponding author (first or is highlighted in some way) of a journal paper will usually at least get you a pdf of the paper in question, if you have a specific question you can get explanation. Scientists are not going to ignore you they are just very busy, so you have to keep it straightforward with quick requests. @cyclopia I get that you are trying to make an improvement here, I agree with the sentiment. But do remember people co-operate better when not sitting in the inquisitors chair. Basic stats does make a point here, on average number of mistakes would have a correlation, and hence the more edits done, the more mistakes. That does not make this editor worse than anyone else, benefit of the doubt goes a long way. Cheers Faendalimas  talk 15:34, 16 April 2014 (UTC)
 * I am sorry if I was too aggressive. What frustrates me (and I guess what frustrated other editors) is not so much the errors themselves -many are very minor issues- but the inability to recognize them as such. Everybody makes mistakes, me first. But if someone points that I wrote something which doesn't have the same meaning of the source, or added OR, I feel I would be willing to recognize it. That it doesn't happen here and that it is all still justified with the "that is just paraphrasing" excuse is what makes me worried. -- cyclopia <sup style="color:red;">speak! 17:31, 16 April 2014 (UTC)

Review from Sasata
Per a request at the WikiProject Fungi talk page, I checked out one article of Cwmhiraeth's, Amanita nivalis, which was created by her (and was on the front page as a DYK), and which I feel comfortable assessing critically. After checking every statement against its source, I conclude that the article is mostly fine. There are some minor things I would have written differently (e.g. using "stem" as a synonym for the technicaly accurate "stipe", but I used to do that too…). Two of the website sources used should be replaced (both of the foreign-language sites don't seem to qualify as reliable sources), and I would ask them to be changed if this were a GAN, but they're tolerable for a start-class article on an obscure mushroom species. I did not find any errors (only omissions that one would expect in a start-class article). I may check some more articles and report back if time permits. Sasata (talk) 17:14, 15 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Indeed, this seems mostly fine to me as well.-- cyclopia <sup style="color:red;">speak! 17:19, 15 April 2014 (UTC)
 * One swallow does not make a summer. Snowman (talk) 11:42, 16 April 2014 (UTC)
 * It is a fungus article not a bird one. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 12:04, 16 April 2014 (UTC)

Andrew's view
The general issue here seems to be perfectionism but perfect is the enemy of good. It is natural for us to want our work to be perfect but the structure and methods of Wikipedia do not emphasise this. Instead, it is explicit policy that articles may be imperfect and that we should not agonize about making mistakes. This seems sensible because we are all fallible; we are not paid for our work; and readers are given fair warning in the disclaimer that "WIKIPEDIA MAKES NO GUARANTEE OF VALIDITY".

Given the large volume of Cwmhiraeth's work, it does not seem that their rate of error is especially significant or greater than the general average. It's not clear what that average is but, as an example, I took a quick look at the work of Cwmhiraeth's antagonist, AfadsBad. The first article I looked at was the Ten Standard Firefighting Orders. This seems to reproduce those orders exactly but without clear attribution or quotation marks. There are plenty of editors who agonise about copyright violation and plagiarism in such cases so I can understand why Cwmhiraeth takes some care to change the language used. The second article I looked at was America Burning. In this there is a statement, "One of the outcomes of the report was the practice of architects and engineers including fire safety in the design of buildings." This seemed far-fetched so I checked the source which is cited for this. This source does not support the statement. Instead, if anything, the source indicates that architects and engineers still have more to do in incorporating the latest thinking about fire safety into their professional training. So, it seems easy to find debatable work in those articles.

My main conclusion is that this review is sufficient oversight to keep Cwmhiraeth's standards up. She knows that she is being watched and will not want to give more ammunition to her critics. Those critics should themselves look to their own work and consider the parable of the Mote and the Beam — "Judge not, that ye be not judged.".

I also have a specific suggestion. Most of the articles in question are about particular species. In many cases, these are part of a large family with common characteristics. For example, the delightfully boring clam is a bivalve and there are many thousands of bivalve species. Because they are similar, there is a set of standard terms which are used to describe their morphology. For example, if the two valves (shells) are symmetrical they are said to be equivalved. They have particular teeth patterns and gill structures which are described with standard words like pachyodont and filibranch. So, when working upon members of such a family, one could develop a checklist of standard morphological features which could be filled in using a template such as an infobox. By using such a checklist, the editor would separate the distinctive facts from the prose of the sources used. Plain facts are not subject to copyright and so this process would filter them out in a safe way. Of course, producing lists of facts rather than elegant prose then conflicts with our general style guide but this again shows that the editorial process is a matter of balance and compromise between priorities rather than a matter of absolute right and wrong.

Andrew (talk) 12:42, 16 April 2014 (UTC)


 * What you say about AfadsBad's articles is interesting; I did not know she had written any. Although this review is about my editing and not AfadsBad's actions, I will mention that a form of harassment adopted in the last month or so is the trashing by her on the DYK nominations page of any articles I nominate. Here is an example. I particularly commend AfadsBad's comments on 31st March for your amusement but the whole is quite illuminating. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:11, 17 April 2014 (UTC)

From Snowmanradio
I have a formal training in science and so I tend to be interested in some of the science content on the Wiki. Nevertheless, I tend to edit bird articles as a hobby rather than editing articles relevant to my career. Snowman (talk) 12:48, 16 April 2014 (UTC)


 * I guess that User Cwmhiraeth is a high profile editor here partly because she has won the Wiki Cup twice and was runner up in the 2013 Stub Contest. I have never been a fan of editing contests on the Wiki, mostly because of the apparent conflict between quality and quantity; nevertheless, I did enter and win the 2013 Stub Contest. I think that when editors participate in editing contests they lay there work open to scrutiny. My aim in the 2013 Stub Contest was to do edits without making a mistake; however, I did make some mistakes and I corrected all the mistakes prior to the end of the competition as far as I am aware. I understand the temptation to rush when participating in editing competitions. Snowman (talk) 12:48, 16 April 2014 (UTC)


 * Some time ago I had a look at the "Sea" article brought by User Cwmhiraeth to GA and subsequently FA. I participated in the FAC review of the Sea article. It seems to me, that this article at the time that it was awarded GA contained many awful mistakes and ambiguities centered around anything to do with science. I became concerned about User Cwmhiraeth's writing on technical issues at that time. The FAC review corrected many terrible mistakes seen in the GA and so the FA is reasonable, in my opinion. All the evidence is in buckets in the FAC review. Snowman (talk) 12:48, 16 April 2014 (UTC)


 * I participated in a small way in the GA review of the "Salt" article, which covered some medical aspects of salt in the diet. The whole section on health and diet was rewritten mostly after the conscientious GA reviewer asked from help from WP:Medicine. I think that the GA reviewer did the right thing in asking for help and I think that the outcome of the GA review and the GA article was satisfactory.  Personally speaking, I would have thought that User Cwmhiraeth should not have presented the article for GA review without a meaningful peer review or assistance from someone who was in a position to understand the medical evidence holistically, if she has not studied the relevant heath issues in depth. Unfortunately, I think that GA reviewers tend to work on their own and a situation may arise too often when one GA reviewer is reviewing a topic he or she does not know anything about written by the GA nominator who also does not know anything about the topic. Perhaps, the GA rules need addressing to avoid the possibility of editors taking on complex topics too hastily. Nevertheless, it would be sensible for editors to exercise a conscientious approach when writing about complex topics. Snowman (talk) 12:48, 16 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Quick links: Talk:Sea/GA1, Featured article candidates/Sea/archive1, Talk:Salt/GA1. —  Scott  •  talk  13:29, 16 April 2014 (UTC)


 * At the least, I would encourage User Cwmhireath to liaise more when adding complex content to the Wiki, particularly technical and scientific content. I would also suggest that User Cwmhireath had a break from contests. Snowman (talk) 12:48, 16 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Fair comment, and liaising more with others for more technical topics would probably be a good idea. I do not actually think my work is the worse for taking part in the WikiCup because, for example, the length of my new start class articles submitted to DYK in order to accumulate points, is usually well over the minimum length for DYK and I try to write reasonably balanced articles. As for the Stub Contest, trying to improve the maximum number of stub articles to start class in a set period of time does not encourage high quality editing. And then there is the Core Contest, which I think has a worthwhile objective. I am currently competing in this year's WikiCup, but may choose to "retire" afterwards to give others a chance. ;-) Cwmhiraeth (talk) 13:28, 16 April 2014 (UTC)
 * As far as I am aware, when User Cwmhireath has liaised she has been effective at liaising, so I am somewhat puzzled about why things have apparently gone wrong and why my remarks on the mistakes in the Sea article after GA made on the WikiCup talk page appear to have fallen on stony ground at that time. Snowman (talk) 13:50, 16 April 2014 (UTC)
 * I would think that DYKs are about making articles suitable to be shown on front page and being read by about 5000 readers or sometimes more, so I think ideally a DYK article needs extra qualities above an equivalent article that is not shown on the front page. Snowman (talk) 13:50, 16 April 2014 (UTC)


 * I made some helpful and constructive criticism in October 2013 about inappropriate content present in the Sea article at GA level, and User Cwmhireath's responded; see User Cwmhireath's reply of Oct 2013. If I understand User Cwmhireath's reply correctly, it applies the unsatisfactory excuse that User Cwmhireath did not know the "sea" article would contain complex science when she started to add to it. User Cwmhireath also appears to say that the gross mistakes in the GA do not matter because they were ironed out during subsequent editing [the FAC review], which I also think is an unsatisfactory reply. If or when editors became aware of complex science that is relevant to an article and outside of the editors natural area of interest or competence, then I think that one responsible approach would be to ask for expert assistance to improve the article.  I would hope that subsequent constructive criticism of User Cwmhireath's editing on the en Wiki by a number of editors, who I presume care about the Wiki, would tend to help User Cwmhireath to focus on what went wrong in the Sea article at GA level, and perhaps more explanation about the state of the Sea article at GA level could be provided by User Cwmhireath at this juncture. Snowman (talk) 11:32, 17 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Those 4 mistakes (of which the first 3 are more easily understood) which made it to the FAC review should never have made it into the article in the first place. I'm not sure how many Wikipedia readers are actually aware of the GA/FA symbols and article statuses. It doesn't matter when they were weeded out, if they were ever present, someone would have read it and gotten inaccurate information. I'm not sure if there is any higher priority for science articles than not having inaccuracies. starship.paint   "YES!" 13:01, 17 April 2014 (UTC)
 * With regards to the articles Salt, now a GA, and Sea, an FA, I would point out that both are articles covering a wide range of topics, some scientific and some not. Few people (except perhaps AfadsBad) will claim to have expertise in all these. Wikipedia is rightly concerned that any health-related matters mentioned in an article are valid and I worked with others to finalise a version of the Diet and Health section of Salt.


 * As for the Sea, the tides and waves are very complex subjects and if I got something wrong in the article, it is not really surprising. Pbsouthwood was very helpful in sorting out the basic science problems. During the course of the review you, Snowmanradio, demonstrated a lack of basic understanding on a scientific topic as can be seen here. You undertook a very thorough but seemingly interminable FAC review, frequently changing the article yourself. In the end, after you had left the article in a mess, I got exasperated and asked you to stop editing it. The delegate passed the article as an FA three hours later. I actually think that both these articles and their reviews show that I am prepared to collaborate and work with others to improve articles. I do however accept Snowmanradio's advice that I seek expert assistance if I am working on an article with complex scientific issues that are beyond my competence. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:33, 18 April 2014 (UTC)
 * May I suggest that User Cwmhiraeth's reply is written to sound superficially good here and has a noticeable lack of acknowledgement of the mistakes and omissions that I found in the "Sea" article during the FAC review. I really think that User Cwmhiraeth's reply is rather unbecoming. The article did not even contain mention of the nitrogen cycle, water cycle, nor carbon cycle, until I pointed that these were important omissions. May I also suggest that User:Cwmhiraeth is demonstrating that she does not understand the "Music of the Spheres" and has no insight into her predicament. The Earth rotates more than one complete revolution in 24 hr and 50 minutes, so I was correctly indicating the the quote is ambiguous and I was concerned that it would be difficult for anyone to learn about the general principals from it. Celestial mechanics is rather complicated and I do not understand the equations, but the Wiki article on the Moon gives an indication of the complexities. The Moon article says; "The Moon's orbit is subtly perturbed by the Sun and Earth in many small, complex and interacting ways. For example, the plane of the Moon's orbital motion gradually rotates, which affects other aspects of lunar motion." I suspect there are complexities here that User Cwmhiraeth is not aware. I suspect that the complexities of the celestial mechanics of the Solar system imply that the Moon will not be in the exact position in the sky the next day nor at any time in the following week nor in a much longer period of time relative to any given position on the Earth's surface. The Moon may be in nearly in the same position, but not exactly in the same position for a long time. On the separate matter of one mistake that I made, I would like to explain I made corrections to ambiguities in a section of the article, but someone called me away from my computer unexpectedly and I think that had to leave something without a final proof reading. I think that User Cwmhiraeth took too much advantage of this one error then and now. Anyway, I am not frightened to say that I accidentally made one mistake albeit due to being called away from my computer by a persuasive relative.  Shall we treat User Cwmhiraeth's mistakes as harshly as she is treating a single mistake of mine? Snowman (talk) 18:23, 18 April 2014 (UTC)
 * (Edit conflict with following comment) What I said about you final edit to the article before it was promoted may have been a bit harsh, and I am pleased to hear there were special circumstances involved, because much of your input into the article was useful. Nevertheless, the subject of the article was the Sea and you spent weeks searching out possible omissions and minor changes you thought important. Although the tides are obviously very important to the subject, some of the other topics you mention above are peripheral to an article you already had stated you considered too long. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:16, 19 April 2014 (UTC)
 * the tides and waves are very complex subjects and if I got something wrong in the article, it is not really surprising - not very heartened by this "dismissal", in my opinion. It shouldn't take until an FAC review to consult others - if that part is complex, you should be consulting as you are adding/changing content to the article. Then inaccuracies won't be introduced at all. starship.paint   "YES!" 04:57, 19 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Yes, I think that User Cwmhiraeth's attitude about writing about complex science [quoted above] is disappointing especially at a time such as now, when I would have thought she would have gained a little more insight into her mode of writing. If this continues to be her view in her comments or implied by her actions, then should the Wiki do anything in defense? I have thought for a long time that User Cwmhiraeth tends to rely too much on GA or FA reviewers to fix errors, omissions, and ambiguities in articles. Snowman (talk) 14:27, 19 April 2014 (UTC)
 * I think that User Cwmhiraeth has made another unbecoming comment above. The FAC review lasted about seven weeks and the FA delegates could have closed it at any time after the first four weeks, but they left it open for that length of time while reviewers were listing issues with the article and while issues were being resolved. I recall that discussion in the FAC review lead to amendments to ambiguities and errors about tides and also about power and energy. I reiterate that discussion in the FAC review also lead to expansion to include the water, carbon, and nitrogen cycles. I recall saying that I thought the article was too long and that I was in a minority in thinking that the article should be split. Snowman (talk) 22:23, 19 April 2014 (UTC)


 * Re Desert. I would be grateful if someone would double check the lines on water of metabolism. I have started a discussion on this topic on the article's talk page. In humans, fat and protein and carbohydrate are all metabolized to produce water and other products. I would guess that something similar would happen in desert animals rather than only fat being metabolized to produce water as suggested by the article. Snowman (talk) 17:51, 17 April 2014 (UTC)
 * The reference in that line of the article is actually disputing the use of fat as a water source (and is actually incorrect - see many more recent studies). Fat, protein and carbohydrates all yield water when metabolized, something which some desert species make use of. HCA (talk) 21:40, 17 April 2014 (UTC)
 * I would guess that anyone who has studied basic biochemistry would know about water of metabolism, so I think this would be a topic that many editors would be able to give advice on. I know about water of metabolism mainly with reference to human metabolism, and to me the line in the article about dessert animals using only fat to produce water of metabolism sounds odd, but I do not have knowledge of comparative biochemistry extending to desert animals. I made a quick on-line check and confirmed from a modern book [in google books] that fat, protein, and carbohydrates are all metabolized to from water of metabolism and other products in humans.  Also, the inline ref in the article is from 1942, which to me sounds too old for a biochemistry source. Snowman (talk) 18:40, 18 April 2014 (UTC)
 * No one replied to my comments on the Desert talk page for six days, so I went ahead and amended the article's text on water of metabolism. I removed the 1942 ref and added two extra refs. My amendments might no be perfect, but I think that I have removed basic ambiguities or errors about water of metabolism. I also noticed that "metabolism" was used where "basal metabolism" should have been used, and I have fixed this as well. Snowman (talk) 14:17, 22 April 2014 (UTC)

Re Sugar. I would guess that contributors of the article have sparse medical knowledge and this did not stop them writing about the medical use of sugars: Snowman (talk) 20:42, 18 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Section on medicinal uses has important omissions. No mention parental use in ivi. No mention of bolus iv use in DM hypoglycemia, nor oral use in DM hypo. Snowman (talk) 20:41, 18 April 2014 (UTC)
 * I have asked for collaboration at WP:Medicine regarding using the MailOnline as an reference for an unconventional therapy used in Africa. I have heard of honey being used on wounds in the West, but not granulated sugar as described in the article. Snowman (talk) 20:41, 18 April 2014 (UTC)
 * The badly sourced section on "medical use" of sugar has now been deleted with the edit summary "trimmed very poor quality sources per WP:MEDRS" probably prompted by my comment at WP Medicine. I think that the section was a liability to the Wiki. I would guess that the main editors of the article do not much about Medicine nor did the reviewer. Why did neither the main editors nor the reviewer ask for assistance? Snowman (talk) 21:19, 18 April 2014 (UTC)


 * Article does not mention glycogen. Snowman (talk) 20:41, 18 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Major omission; no mention of lactulose. Snowman (talk) 21:30, 19 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Note that my plans for a GAR on the "Sugar" article has some concordance on the WP Medicine talk page owing to inappropriate sourcing. Snowman (talk) 21:32, 19 April 2014 (UTC)

I would think that reviewing articles that have been selected for review here by User Cwmhiraeth would be interesting. I would also think that it would be interesting to review her input to other articles. I have started looking at the "Sugar" and "Desert" articles above. I have started making a few comments in my section above, but it is going to take a longer to look at them and other articles in depth. I am often busy out-of-doors and away from my computer at this time of year during our Spring and Summer. Snowman (talk) 14:52, 19 April 2014 (UTC)


 * Birth; says "Humans produce a single offspring at a time." (see diff) However, about 1 in 80 births are twins, with regional variation across the world. Snowman (talk) 08:56, 25 April 2014 (UTC)
 * "Each sac [amniotic sac] contains enough oxygen for the puppy to survive for about six minutes after birth." (see diff) I do not know where this came from. It is a misunderstanding of what is in the in-line ref, so I have re-written it. Snowman (talk) 21:14, 25 April 2014 (UTC)


 * Two errors introduced to the birth article by User AslanEtropy; see this edit.
 * Confusion between abdominal muscle contractions (as in pushing) and uterine contractions Snowman (talk) 12:58, 25 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Extraction of information from ref about relaxation of soft tissues of the birth canal in cattle (I guess probably similar to ripening of the cervix and so on in humans) transcribed into relaxation of pelvic ligaments only. Snowman (talk) 12:58, 25 April 2014 (UTC)


 * Well, Snowman, when I completely rewrote the previously much-tagged article Birth nine months ago you were there immediately afterwards making extensive edits and alterations. So much so that I asked you whether you would like me to add your name as a co-contributor when I nominated the article for DYK. In the intervening period, many other people have edited the article. Is it not a bit late now to start blaming me for the "errors" you condoned at the time. And by the way, the changes you made yesterday about the birth process in dogs were not an improvement to the article. You chopped out some useful, sourced information, left an unreferenced paragraph and created an incomplete section on dogs which did not adequately explain the birth process and contained the ridiculous word "introitus" to replace vulva. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:22, 26 April 2014 (UTC)

Snowmanradio, I'm sure that on one level the concerns you are raising are legitimate. However, given the dire context Cwmhiraeth has been placed in, would you mind explaining how your contributions to this review, taken in their totality, are distinguishable from bullying? You seem to be placing a lot of blame on Cwmhiraeth and accepting no responsibility for your own involvement in the development of the articles you are so heavily critiquing. --Epipelagic (talk) 06:38, 26 April 2014 (UTC)
 * First of all I would like to apologize for accidentally listing two items above that I now know are actually errors introduced by User:AslanEntropy into the "Birth" article. I plan to provide him or her with polite feedback on his or her user page. I have put the two items in a collapsing box, but could delete them from the list if requested. I spent some time following the contribution history of the Birth article. Snowman (talk) 13:49, 26 April 2014 (UTC)
 * I immediately apologized for listing two items in the birth article as soon as I realized my mistake in not realizing that they were introduced by another editor. Throughout this review, I have been trying to be helpful and objective. My aim is to improve the experience of readers of the Wiki and make honest comments about User Cwm's editing, which she has invited reviewers to do in this editor review. I see no reason why I should not continue to try to improve the Birth article at this juncture. Snowman (talk) 17:53, 26 April 2014 (UTC)
 * In August 2013 I made amendments to the birth article mainly relating to the "Human birth" section and the introduction; however, my editing was not extensive throughout the whole page. User Cwm did offer to share the DYK nomination with me in Aug 2013, but I declined to share the DYK nomination saying that I was uneasy about it and I stated at that time that I was puzzled by some of the contents, which should have alerted User Cwm to make further checks and balances for the article before presenting it to DKY. My reply to User Cwm's request back in Aug 2013 is this diff. User Cwm's claim that "I condoned errors in Aug 2013" is clearly false, because there is proof that I informed her that I was puzzled by some of the content. The simple fact is that I informed User Cwm in Aug 2013 that I was puzzled by some of the content that she had added to the Birth article prior to DYK, but she nominated it anyway. The content that puzzled me has persisted in the article until recently, when I looked at the article again and I did some reading about the topic and made some amendments, which I would have thought people would have been grateful for. I note that other editors have also made amendments to the article recently, mostly about types of animals that I do not know much about. Two errors that User Cwm brought to the article are listed above. I could reasonably expect User Cwm and User Epipelagic to realize that did not condone User Cwm's errors in the Birth article now that they can see the relevant diff from Aug 2013. Clearly, the diff shows that I did not condone her errors and that I stated that I was puzzled by what she had written and uneasy about the DYK nomination. My opinion of the Birth article is entirely my own. I have no idea what other people might have said or did not say about the birth article. Snowman (talk) 13:49, 26 April 2014 (UTC)


 * Lists below specifically indicate that the "Birth" article is awaiting review. I would think that my partial review of this article is helpful to this editor review. Snowman (talk) 15:50, 26 April 2014 (UTC)
 * In the sections above, did user Cwm mislead User Epielagic into thinking that I condoned her errors in the Birth article back in Aug 2013? The fact is that in Aug 2013 I informed User Cwm that I was puzzled by parts of the "Birth" article and I was uneasy about the DYK nomination; see this diff. Snowman (talk) 14:19, 27 April 2014 (UTC)
 * I will ask WP Vets about the use of the word "introitus". Perhaps, it is more of a medical word. I plan to think about the page organization and recent change to the Birth article again hopefully in collaboration with interested editors and amicable discussion on the article's talk page. I have just started a discussion over there. Snowman (talk) 13:49, 26 April 2014 (UTC)


 * "Introitus" is, indeed, not the right term in the way it was used to describe both cattle and dog births, where the sources cited both clearly used the term "vulva."  I am not a veterinarian, but the sources used were reliable ones and basically if someone wants to use a word like "Introitus" then sources using that term need to be found.  All I can find are references to uterine prolapse, not cattle or dog birth.   Montanabw (talk) 08:56, 27 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Excuse me, "introitus" is a word commonly used in obstetrics to mean the "vaginal introitus", and I had no idea anyone would have a problem with it. I am not a vet either. Snowman (talk) 14:19, 27 April 2014 (UTC)


 * I have changed the emphasis of the Wiki article on "birth" to imply that the mother dog has a higher priority to lick and stimulate the puppy to breath for the first time than to eat the placenta, as explained in the ref. Any comments? Snowman (talk) 14:19, 27 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Discussion of that article belongs there, not here. That said, if the above example is evidence of your own ability to review sources and edit to those sources, then I suggest taking a very long look in the mirror before you post here and criticize Cwmhiraeth for OR or SYNTH or anything else.  Pot-->Kettle.   Montanabw (talk) 00:10, 28 April 2014 (UTC)
 * "Bark-->Wrong tree". "Shoot-->Messenger". Snowman (talk) 00:52, 28 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Is User Montanabw talking about the word change I made from "vulva" to "introitus" in the birth article? Snowman (talk) 01:16, 28 April 2014 (UTC)


 * Anatomy article: "Smooth muscle is found in the inner linings of organs" (diff from June 2013). This grossly misleading bit has persisted in the article until today, when I amended it saying that smooth muscle is found in walls of the intestines, uterus, bladder, blood vessels, stomach, esophagus and so on. I used common knowledge rather than a ref. Snowman (talk) 10:21, 30 April 2014 (UTC)


 * Anatomy article: "The latter [peripheral nervous system] consists of sensory nerves that transmit information from sense organs and motor nerves that stimulate muscles to contract." (diff from June 2013). Grossly misleading, because some autonomic nerves cause muscles to relax (think sphincters and beta-2 adrenergic receptors) and the autonomic nervous system deserves specific mention. This has been corrected in the last 48 hrs (see discussion on the articles talk page). Snowman (talk) 23:05, 1 May 2014 (UTC)


 * Anatomy article: "Angiography is a process in which blood vessels are visualized after being injected with an opaque dye, X-rays and magnetic resonance imaging being used for this purpose. " (diff from June 2013). Three errors: (1) Contrast media for MRI are paramagnetic substances and not opaque in the same sense as radio-opaque material is for X-rays. (2) Contrast media not always used in MRI angiography, see magnetic resonance imaging. (3) The in-line source is given as the introduction page to the 1918 on-line version of Gray's Anatomy. Note that the Wiki MRI article says that MRI was invented in 1952. Snowman (talk) 22:51, 2 May 2014 (UTC)

From Casliber

 * I can see you're dedicated and have written some material which reads well and worked well with other editors. However I've seen enough here to make me feel uneasy, but I concede that I have goofed at times too. Big/broad articles are extremely challenging to get through review processes so a hefty FAC is not unusual for a large article. I disagree to some degree with Black Kite in that I think it was the imperfectness rather than absence of material which brought many of us here and encouraged us to build and perfect it, and my feeling is that the positives outweigh the negatives overall. However this comes with some caveats - I agree with Snowman about concerns over the GA process, and would recommend Cwmhiraeth use Peer Review as a way of liaising before GA or even after GA if the article was passed quickly (part of me likes it when my articles are passed easily but another part of me often feels uneasy and wishes I was grilled more). I use Peer Review from time to time and have found it helpful - especially if one asks for specific issues to be looked at. I have also noted issues with references raised and do recommend Cwmhiraeth asks others if unsure about the reliability of a source, particularly a web-based one. Also agree on some issues with writing what the source says. This can be more difficult than it looks initially, especially if one has an assumption already. And prioritise fixing items people raise quickly. This can be hard sometimes if the asker has adopted a terse tone and come across as antagonistic, but you really have to. I am sure many of us here will be happy to chip in and help. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 14:07, 16 April 2014 (UTC)


 * At the end of the section Cwmhiraeth's view I was asked by Starship.paint what I had learned through the review process and I replied. But you see, I really feel rather angry. I made a harassment complaint at AnI and many people agreed that there had been unacceptable harassment. Then along comes Cyclopia and starts a "WP:COMPETENCE issues of User:Cwmhiraeth". Nobody bothers to start a section on any sanctions that AfadsBad should face. So the complaint gets closed rather abruptly at AnI and the result was that AfadsBad faced no sanctions because there was no consensus. I don't know what is happening at the Wikipediocracy thread now but I daresay it is continuing as before. I did not want AfadsBad blocked, but I would have liked an undertaking that she would close the thread and stop harassing me.


 * So I'm not feeling in a very cooperative mood. AfadsBad gets no sanctions and I get a gruelling editor review where many of the points raised are exceedingly trivial. I see now that it would have been better not to have made the complaint in the first place. I have asked Nikkimaria to help with the disagreement between Cyclopia and me about close paraphrasing but she may choose not to do so. Meanwhile I haven't done anything pleasurable or useful in Wikipedia for about ten days because I am constantly having my work trashed by others, and I know they are looking at everything I do, ready to expose my faults, and even prepared to criticise a partially written article where the word "oval" was only used temporarily until I found a better description of the shell. I noticed a fault in an article on a sea anemone yesterday that Cyclopia would describe as original research, and in this instance I would concur, but I did not change the article because it would draw attention to it and there would be heaps more criticism.


 * Having said that, your advice about peer review is excellent, also consulting with others if I try to tackle things that may be beyond my competence. There are plenty of organisms that I am perfectly capable of creating but I like to write rounded articles that cover all the main aspects, and sometimes an unreliable source is the only place to find a description. And Faendalimas had a sensible suggestion on how to obtain full-length papers. So yes, I would like to improve my editing along the lines outlined in this review, but the glee with which "they" were finding faults, making comments like "Here we go again", and the threat of sanctions, really put my back up. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 19:21, 16 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Are peer reviews helpful for medical topics? Snowman (talk) 22:54, 19 April 2014 (UTC)
 * I don't see why they wouldn't be if you alert editors familiar with editing medical articles. In this case I would advise alerting the wikiproject noticeboard or approaching some editors individually. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 00:52, 20 April 2014 (UTC)
 * I think I would agree that a peer review about an article that covers medical topics of some sort is much more likely to be helpful if it includes participation by editors with relevant medical knowledge and this may involve recruiting such expertise. Snowman (talk) 20:31, 20 April 2014 (UTC)

From olive
Thank you Cwmhiraeth for subjecting yourself to a review. I am seeing slight shifts in meaning which comes with paraphrasing. However, I have seen on multiple occasions so-called experts make errors that were much, much worse. If we were to choose almost any editor I know we would at some point in their work come up with the same kind of errors and would become embroiled in contentious discussion over what was the "right" phrasing. This is no way lets anyone off the hook in terms of editing. Our articles must be accurate. We are focusing on one editor out of many simply because someone happened to shed a light on her. I suspect we could find the same problems with others. There are some things that will happen on a collaborative project and this is one. This isn't sanctionable as far as I'm concerned.

If an editor works in an area where he or she she isn't an expert, it makes sense  to ask an expert to come in and check the article and its language. No one is expected to be an expert in all the articles we can edit so asking for help is sensible.

I think there's helpful advice on this page for any editor; its a practical exercise seems to me that with open mindedness can only make any of us reading this page including Cwmhiraeth better editors.

At the same time, while I understand frustration, I don't condone the attacks against this editor.

I hope I don't sound patronizing. Just hoping to see this in the most useful light as possible, to help out a prolific, well- intentioned editor, and once again suggest there is no place on Wikipedia for vicious attacks nor matter what the conditions. My opinion of course.


 * Add: Having read recent posts above some thoughts:

Descriptions must be specific to the smallest detail. Very slight differences can mark a poisonous plant from one that is none poisonous. Birds may be differentiated by very slight colour changes. For example: While tan is a tint of brown, it isn't brown. A painter makes tan by adding brown to white, they aren't the same; one is a subset of the other. So tan can't be substituted for brown or vice versa.

If a word can't be found that is very specific to words used in the source, either quote the source or don't use the information at all. Its better to leave something out than to use words that create inaccuracy.

Synonyms found in dictionaries may not be specific enough to  accurately substitute the words used within a discipline. Disciplines have their own language, developed over time. For an outside-of-the sciences example: People working outside the discipline of gymnastics might describe a movement as a somersault by which they mean a roll on the floor, but a somersault is actually a movement performed in the air. In this case the very specific word used in the discipline is the only word that can be used that is specific enough to describe that movement.

It is generally permissible within academia to use one or two words directly from a source without quoting. Sometimes there is only one word we can use to assure accuracy. (I assume this is the same here. Maybe someone could verify.)

While a scientist might look at a bird or a picture of a bird or other organism, for example, and describe the bird from what he sees; we in an encyclopedia cannot do that. The source describes the bird and then we use the source. No description in source, no description in Wikipedia. And we don't guess or assume or draw conclusions. Close is not good enough because its not accurate enough to portray the subtleties we are describing. (Close is only good enough with grenades apparently :O)(Littleolive oil (talk) 10:48, 23 April 2014 (UTC))

.(Littleolive oil (talk) 19:10, 16 April 2014 (UTC))

On OR. There is an important distinction between a research paper and an encyclopedia and its easy to find them intersecting when they shouldn't. Wikipedia isn't really the sum of all knowledge its the sum of all verifiable, RS, published knowledge. If a concrete, direct description isn't in a source,it isn't in the article. No extrapolations. In a research paper one might extrapolate somewhat, but not here.(Littleolive oil (talk) 19:26, 16 April 2014 (UTC))
 * Thank you for pouring oil on troubled waters. I actually wrote my reply to Casliber before I read what you said and we edit conflicted. I really think an editor review should be a more positive process than this has been. Almost everything said has been critical of my work and has made me defensive and less likely to cooperate. I describe the process as my war, and I didn't accompany my husband to a family funeral yesterday because I felt I had to be here to defend myself from the ongoing attack. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 19:37, 16 April 2014 (UTC)
 * There is a very easy way to defend yourself from "the ongoing attack": acknowledge and fix your mistakes. If you were willing to do that, everything would change and I'd be the first to help you constructively. But this can't be done unless you understand that what you do, often, is not merely rewording.-- cyclopia <sup style="color:red;">speak! 00:59, 17 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Cyclopia, thanks for your help in this process. However, I think we're to the point where comments like the above have hit the point of diminishing returns.  This set of articles is getting plenty of expert scrutiny and I'm confident the problem won't recur.  Asking for anything more than that at this point isn't going to move the process along any faster.  Lesser Cartographies (talk) 01:32, 17 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Cyclopia... I'm afraid that Cwmhiraeth is especially not going to listen to you. After what she has said to be several months of harassment by AfadsBad, naturally she will be on the defensive towards more criticism, as well as the fact that you pointed out supposed WP:COMPETENCE issues in the AN/I thread meant for AfadsBad. Perhaps you should take a step back from here.
 * Cwmhiraeth, despite what I've said to Cyclopia, I actually fully agree with Cyclopia on your paraphrasing issues, and I don't think they are trivial. My advice to you on this point is, on the fine line between (inaccuracy-paraphrasing-plagiarism), you need to lean towards plagiarism to correct your current tendency towards "inaccuracy". I just hope that you will be more open-minded towards this criticism. starship.paint   "YES!" 01:55, 17 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Before making the changes suggested by Cyclopia and others, I wanted to make sure that the changes were in agreement with Wikipedia policy. Nikkimaria has now commented:-
 * "Hi Cwmhiraeth. You've identified a key policy quote about appropriate practice: "Articles should be written in your own words while substantially retaining the meaning of the source material". This can be very difficult to do, particularly where a source is dense, technical, or otherwise difficult to understand; as a result, it's quite easy to fall too far to either side of the OR/CV balance. There are of course techniques to deal with the problem - rephrasing where possible, quoting where not, etc."
 * I am quite willing to make the necessary changes to articles and of course others can and have been doing so. I also note Cyclopia's offer to help me constructively. Does that mean you are offering ongoing support on future articles I write, Cyclopia? Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:46, 17 April 2014 (UTC)
 * I would be glad to help if I can. I also apologize for my tone.-- cyclopia <sup style="color:red;">speak! 09:05, 17 April 2014 (UTC)
 * That's OK. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 10:53, 17 April 2014 (UTC)

Are all my articles bad?
When Black Kite took on this review, he asked AfadsBad and me to submit names of articles we were dissatisfied or satisfied with respectively. We duly did this, right at the beginning of this review. When he came to give his view, Black Kite made no reference to these articles, later stating that he was "not qualified to" judge many of the articles. There are editors taking part in this review now who are competent to judge the articles in question so I am listing them below in the hope that you may be able to review them and find some merit in my work.

You might like to concentrate on matters other than original research as AfadsBad has stated there are multiple errors in every article. I have never given much thought to original research, thinking that the term referred to such a situation as adding a new location to a cited distribution range on the grounds of having seen the animal there yourself. With the different definition of original research that you are all advocating (such as adding an explanatory bit of information that is correct but is not included in the cited source) I can see that many of my articles may be criticised for this fault. So perhaps you could concentrate on other faults. There is discussion near the beginning of this review on all of the articles listed below except the first four. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 08:57, 17 April 2014 (UTC)


 * Formica incerta - Awaiting review.


 * Xyloplax turnerae - Awaiting review.


 * Adamussium - Awaiting review.


 * Cidaris cidaris - Reviewed, thank you.


 * Glyptonotus antarcticus - Reviewed, thank you.


 * Atlantic Puffin Cscr-featured.svg - Awaiting review.


 * Chameleon goby - Awaiting review.


 * Gastrotrich - Partially reviewed, thank you.


 * Red-cheeked salamander - Reviewed, thank you.


 * Eurasian Wryneck - Awaiting review.


 * Crocodylus novaeguineae - Reviewed, thank you.

Cwmhiraeth (talk) 10:53, 17 April 2014 (UTC)


 * "adding an explanatory bit of information that is correct but is not included in the cited source" Can you give an example of where you did this and where someone complained about it (about it being wrong, not simply unsourced)? Fram (talk) 11:15, 17 April 2014 (UTC)
 * I did not mean that anyone had compained only that they might have been justified in doing so. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 15:32, 17 April 2014 (UTC)
 * I would like to comment on the bird articles in the list. These were reviewed at GA and FA and many editors participated and the resulting articles are good examples of FAs in my opinion. What might be more relevant here is some of the discussion in the FAC reviews and what sort of things were amended. Snowman (talk) 11:53, 17 April 2014 (UTC)
 * By all means review Eurasian Wryneck, Snowmanradio, but not Atlantic Puffin. I ask this because you took a major part in the FA review and therefore might lack the necessary objectivity. I would also ask that anyone taking on the review of Atlantic Puffin should look at its present state and not its pre-GA or FA state. After all, I was working with reviewers to bring it to its present state of perfection! Cwmhiraeth (talk) 15:32, 17 April 2014 (UTC)
 * I might have a conflict of interest in commenting on bird articles partly because I edit and review bird articles as a hobby; nevertheless, I would think that the two bird articles are examples of when User Cwmhiraeth worked well in a collaborative effort to raise the quality of article content. Please note that I am not an expert on ornithology. Snowman (talk) 17:21, 17 April 2014 (UTC)
 * I reviewed both Red-cheeked salamander and Crocodylus novaeguineae, as they're the only ones in the list within my area of expertise. The former contained no factual errors, and the latter only contained a single error (traced to an edit by Cwmhiraeth) - the use of "canines" and "molars" to describe the teeth in the anterior and posterior regions of the crocodile's jaws, when in fact those terms aren't used outside mammals.  I should note that the principle underlying the statement is correct - crocodilians will use the better leverage of posterior teeth to crush tough prey items, and in some species these teeth are blunter than anterior teeth. I've corrected the mistake. HCA (talk) 15:50, 17 April 2014 (UTC)


 * I am particularly interested in the article Gastrotrich because it concerns a higher level taxon of which I knew nothing before I started work on the article. It is my intention to expand other articles on such taxa and had been working on Isopod, until I got distracted by my AN/I harassment complaint and this subsequent review. I would like to point out that looking at Cyclopia's contribution record around April 8th, it is not apparent that Cyclopia had previously been paying attention to any of the articles associated with me before the first intervention of Cyclopia at AN/I, later copied to this editor review: "Since I am indeed a biologist and an editor, I think I can give my 0.02 $ on this ugly mess. Yes, Afadsbad is right, Cwmhiraeth is sloppy. Sometimes she is very sloppy, sometimes she's just doing clumsy OR/SYN (e.g. by making descriptions up from pictures), sometimes she mixes things up. That is bad, and I'm glad there is an editor review on."


 * You will notice that Cyclopia had already become convinced that AfadsBad is right. A few hours later, Cyclopedia had already made up his/her mind about me and wrote "What I would do, if I were running this place, is: 1)Restrict Cwimhraeth new article creation and article-space editing until a comprehensive review on her edits has finished 2)Put some accuracy warning tag on all articles Cwimhraeth has created, so that at least we can warn readers." This seems a rather sweeping, non evidence-based assessment of my editing. Do you still maintain this view, Cyclopia? In the period since April 8th, when Cyclopia joined the fray, he/she has made a few trivial alterations to the Gastrotrich article and should be in a position to form a view on its qualities. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 09:20, 19 April 2014 (UTC)
 * I was interested in reviewing that article, but real life is keeping me from doing it. Problem is, it is complicated: there are lots of sources to collate and check to see if everything is factually correct. It is more time consuming than other ones, where one can quickly check if a source is consistent with the text. I found no obvious inaccuracies so far, however. -- cyclopia <sup style="color:red;">speak! 11:38, 19 April 2014 (UTC)


 * I think that the heading "Are all my articles bad?" is inappropriate, because it wrongly tends to indicate ownership of the articles. In my opinion, many good aspects of the Atlantic Puffin article were forged in the GA and FAC reviews and I think that there was a lot of teamwork in writing this article. There is probably no need to review the Atlantic Puffin article again, because the article development is cataloged in the GA and FA reviews, and of course discussion about the amendments needed to bring the article to FA status can be seen in the GA and FA reviews. One gross error that was not put right until the FA review was a caption of an image showing Puffins in breeding plumage swimming near land, but unfortunately the original caption said that they were swimming far out at sea [when the birds can be expected to have winter plumage]. Also, undue weight was put on one man's observations of one burrow at a time before video cameras and the emphasis was not changed until the FA review. Please note that I contributed to the FAC review, so I may have a conflict of interest, but I am trying my best to be objective. Snowman (talk) 21:07, 19 April 2014 (UTC)
 * I expect the title came from exasperation. Afadsbad did criticise some sourcing in Atlantic Puffin, but i found her criticism on that article on the whole unfounded - there were a couple of minor tweaks needed but that was/is all. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 21:26, 19 April 2014 (UTC)
 * I have not seen what User Afadsbad has said about the Puffin article. Where is it written? Snowman (talk) 21:38, 19 April 2014 (UTC)
 * I note that exasperation means bitterness/malignity/anger/irritation in the Oxford English Dictionary. Is that what you meant? Snowman (talk) 22:37, 19 April 2014 (UTC)
 * More like halfway between "exhausted" and "fed up" Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 00:50, 20 April 2014 (UTC)
 * It might not be as negative as that. Snowman (talk) 22:21, 21 April 2014 (UTC)
 * True - I generally think of "exasperated" as a little milder. Anyway, back to the edits. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 07:13, 22 April 2014 (UTC)

Cidaris cidaris

 * Mostly very minor stuff (there was an "often" out of nowhere in the colour description, but okay). But I would be happy to understand from how this thing I've removed could be found in this source, and/or where it was sourced actually.-- cyclopia <sup style="color:red;">speak!  10:43, 22 April 2014 (UTC)
 * This was a year ago and I can't remember where the information came from. I don't speak Spanish but, because of its format, I could not copy this particular source material and paste it into Google Translate and I may have misunderstood the sentence that states "No es muy abundante en el Cantabrico" but I think it probably came from somewhere else. Do you notice that the Spanish source gave a depth range of 30 to 300 metres while another source gave the depth range as 50 to 1800 metres. That is the sort of problem you face when you write about a little known organism. I probably added the word "often" to the green-tipped spines because none of the images I saw had this particular feature. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 12:48, 22 April 2014 (UTC)
 * If you can't speak Spanish and can't translate the statement, then it is probably best not to use it. But you hardly need Spanish language skills to understand the "en el Cantabrico" part: this was a statement on one location or region only, not something you should generalize. Note how e.g. this source states that Cidaris cidaris is "common in the Mediterranean and Eastern Atlantic", so your statement was not supported by the source you gave and flatly contradicted by other sources. Fram (talk) 13:13, 22 April 2014 (UTC)

Glyptonotus antarcticus

 * This (already reviewed above, apparently, but I'm parsing the list Cwmhiraeth has given) seems mostly fine, except for this information, which again doesn't seem to appear in the linked source, to my (admittedly quick) reading. -- cyclopia <sup style="color:red;">speak! 11:48, 22 April 2014 (UTC)
 * The statement about it being an exceptionally large isopod could be sourced to my Invertebrate Zoology which states that "Most isopods are 5 to 15 mm in length." Thank you for reviewing this article and Cidaris cidaris and including them in my editor review despite finding little wrong with them. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 13:04, 22 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Sure. As I told you, there is no conspiracy here, at least not on my part. I focused on where I found problems before, but you are right a fair assessment should include all the sampling. -- cyclopia <sup style="color:red;">speak! 13:56, 22 April 2014 (UTC)
 * About the edit: could be sourced to my Invertebrate Zoology which states that "Most isopods are 5 to 15 mm in length." - That could be considered synthesis. However it could have been understandable, if sourced with the Invertebrate Zoology. It is a bit difficult if you put references which are not the ones which refer your facts. Also, to avoid synthesis, I would have written something like "This isopod is X cm long (ref 1) ; for comparison, most isopods are ... to ... in length (ref 2)". No synthesis (after all, while most isopods are in a range, it may well be that larger species are quite common as well) and more information to the reader.-- cyclopia <sup style="color:red;">speak! 14:00, 22 April 2014 (UTC)

Comments by FunkMonk
I've reviewed several of Cwmhiraeth's nominated articles, and obviously I approved of them, since I, and many other reviewers, passed them. This point seems to be forgotten here, if these "errors" are so obvious and disastrous, every reviewer is at fault for letting them pass. But as far as I see on these pages, the issues are as much disagreement in wording as actual (trivial) mistakes, and why Cwmhiraeth has been targeted seems arbitrary. It could be anyone. But I guess it all comes down to weird obsession connected to the Wikicup. Every featured Wikipedia article has some issues if you look closely at them, and a review like this for any editor would find many small things that could be changed, in the opinion of other editors. Another point is that many of the articles Cwmhiraeth worked on were absolute crap before, so the trade off between this, and a long, great article, with perhaps one issue that could be discussed and usually is ironed out during review, is no problem.

It is great that Cwmhiraeth is responding so well to the attacks on her, and agreeing to evaluate her edits, but so should the attackers, and even some admins, whose behaviour is utterly uncivil. Yes, nitpicking is good, but never attacks and insults. Editors who are experts in their field can of course write articles with more authority, but if others want to try at stuff outside their field, we should help them, not intimidate them. Admins should be examples to others. If they set bad examples, they shouldn't be admins anymore. FunkMonk (talk) 12:31, 17 April 2014 (UTC)

Comment by Epipelagic
It is way overdue now for the instigators of this debacle to back up their allegations. So far they have delivered little more than nitpicking. Cwmhiraeth has produced an enormous volume of work. If there was any real substance to the accusations of serious systemic errors it would be easy to find evidence. Two Wikipedia admins have been at the forefront of these assaults. It is particularly time for them, if they are to retain any credibility in any capacity, to demonstrate that these serious errors actually exist and exist in volume. --Epipelagic (talk) 03:10, 20 April 2014 (UTC)
 * I would not only agree but move that this be closed. I think the points have been made. I think Cwmhiraeth is aware of some improvements that she can make, I think some of the people calling for this have also acknowledged they made mistakes. There have been numerous reviewers that have found little to be concerned about. I think this can be closed and we can move on. I hope that Cwmhiraeth will continue to contribute to WP. Cheers Faendalimas  talk 04:30, 20 April 2014 (UTC)


 * Clearly if some of my articles are of a satisfactory standard, as mentioned by independent reviewers who are experts in their fields, the statements made by AfadsBad that I make "multiple mistakes in every article" and that "every one of these articles needs [to be] extensively rewritten to be accurate." must be false. It seems you can libel people on the internet with impunity and the Wikipediocracy thread entitled "Cwmhiraeth, the greatest vandal of them all" continues relentlessly, with a running commentary on this review, but it looks like at least some of the folks there are less than impressed with AfadsBad's continuing rantings.
 * I also would like this review to be closed, but first I would like some authoritative person to make some sort of final statement such as that no evidence of serious systemic errors in my articles had been found. I ask this in case I have the need to return to the AN/I in the future if the harassment continues. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:50, 20 April 2014 (UTC)


 * Cwmhiraeth, you are talking as though you seem to think Wikipedia is organised in some civilised way. No "authoritative person" is empowered to make "some sort of final statement". We have instead hundreds of loose cannon admins empowered to express idiosyncratic opinions at whim. The anarchy needs to be countered with a set of guiding principles about the role of Wikipedia and a panel of users empowered to protect and discipline content builders. There is no such body, and no will in the admin community to create such a body. The admin system as a whole shows little interest in protecting or facilitating content builders. The fun is in sanctioning them. As you will see Cwmhiraeth, nothing will be done to protect you or other content builders from further depredation. The admins who attacked you will be left free to make unsubstantiated attacks again. Wikipedia has become an admin playground and a content builder graveyard. --Epipelagic (talk) 06:42, 20 April 2014 (UTC)
 * I'm less pessimistic than Epipelagic: maybe someone uninvolved and respected will write a neutral summary, or maybe not. It would be a lot to read through.  But, if you want to end this now, my suggestion would be to write a closing statement summarising what you've learned and what you'll do differently in the future, and close this yourself.  If anyone's really unsatisfied, they can initiate a RfC/U.  But my guess is that if your closing statement is sincere, honest, and thorough, and you make an effort to fix past mistakes (eg check all your past descriptions of organisms' colours), and you heed all the advice you've been given in future edits, you'll be able to put all this behind you. Adrian J. Hunter(talk•contribs) 17:38, 20 April 2014 (UTC)

If there was any real substance to the accusations of serious systemic errors it would be easy to find evidence. - Uh, isn't the above enough evidence? Floating sessile organisms and fake colours, is that not enough? While I admit I might have been too aggressive, and I'm glad to help and review constructively Cwmhiraeth further contributions when I can, please do not underestimate the scale of such "nitpicking". They are subtle errors perhaps, apparently, but they are a pattern.-- cyclopia <sup style="color:red;">speak! 14:29, 20 April 2014 (UTC)


 * No of course that is not enough to establish there are serious systemic errors across 1300 articles. You say you found two "subtle errors". Shouldn't you be awarding Cwmhiraeth an accolade for such a low error rate? --Epipelagic (talk) 17:00, 20 April 2014 (UTC)
 * (ec with Epipelagic) Cyclopia, you're talking about one of Wikipedia's most prolific editors, someone who's made 12,388 article edits.  writes above, "Given the large volume of Cwmhiraeth's work, it does not seem that their rate of error is especially significant or greater than the general average.  It's not clear what that average is..."  Well, one way we can estimate the general average is with external professional reviewers.  The Nature study of December 2005 (requires subscription) reviewed 42 hard sciences articles and found an average of around 4 errors per article.  Correct me if I'm wrong, but I can't see that anyone's pointed out more than 4 errors in any one of Cwmhiraeth's articles.   reviewed two articles and found one error;  reviewed one article and found no errors; like Andrew, I see no objective evidence that Cwmhiraeth's error rate is higher than that of the average Wikipedian.  Adrian J. Hunter(talk•contribs) 17:38, 20 April 2014 (UTC)


 * Thank you for these various bits of advice. As I mentioned above, Cyclopia started off with an assumption " Yes, Afadsbad is right, Cwmhiraeth is sloppy. Sometimes she is very sloppy, sometimes she's just doing clumsy OR/SYN (e.g. by making descriptions up from pictures), sometimes she mixes things up. That is bad, and I'm glad there is an editor review on." and then went searching for the evidence to back up the claim. The first article he/she found was Boring clam, an unfinished article I had just started expanding. I would hate to have you as a judge in a case where I was the defendant, Cyclopia, announcing the verdict before hearing the evidence! Fortunately there are some more fair-minded people around here.


 * I have of course learnt a lot from this review and will try to put it into practice. In particular, I need to be careful to choose only reliable sources rather than relying on a less reliable source to provide information, like a description, in order to give a more balanced article. As a matter of interest, how does a review like this get closed? Cwmhiraeth (talk) 18:14, 20 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Normally these get closed by bots 30 days after creation, but if you could close it yourself using archive top and archive bottom. The former accepts a <tt>|results=</tt> parameter that's useful for concluding remarks. Adrian J. Hunter(talk•contribs) 06:23, 21 April 2014 (UTC)
 * If some people think that this editor review is inconclusive, then reviewers should have more time to do more reviews. I have only done a few reviews so far, and it seems to me that a pattern may be beginning to emerge from my reviews of User Cwmhiraeth tending not to write holistically about science with ambiguities, omissions and using some sources that are inappropriate on the Wiki. Another pattern may be that User Cwmhiraeth tends not to liaise when writing about scientific topics prior to GA or FAC reviews, which can be a problem if she is not familiar with relevant disciplines. Snowman (talk) 20:00, 20 April 2014 (UTC)
 * I do not know why User Epipelagic does not seem to be aware of serious problems I have described above in the Sea, Desert, Salt, and Sugar articles above. I would think that errors can not get more serious than those errors that give the wrong emphasis about medical topics. I hope reviewers are aware of the higher sourcing standards set out at Manual of Style/Medicine-related articles for medical topics. Snowman (talk) 20:04, 20 April 2014 (UTC)


 * Snowman, you are heavy on innuendo and light on facts. Please examine the terms of this review. They are set out at the top of the page. According to AfadsBad, Cwmhiraeth makes "multiple mistakes in every article" and "every one of these articles needs [to be] extensively rewritten to be accurate". These are the claims that are under review. So far not one reviewer, including AfadsBad, seems to have offered even one article that supports AfadsBad's claims.
 * The four general articles you refer to, Sea, Desert, Salt, and Sugar, are joint productions by many editors other than Cwmhiraeth. No one editor is going to be expert on every aspect of such wide-ranging topics. You refer to historic difficulties with Cwmhiraeth during the building of the articles. You appear to share some of the responsibility for the articles yourself.  And you refer to  what you consider to be omissions from the articles, apparently holding Cwmhiraeth responsible. Why? Where are you pointing to serious errors in the current articles? That is what this review is about. I agree that "errors can not get more serious than those errors that give the wrong emphasis about medical topics". But where have you established that with Cwmhiraeth's articles? --Epipelagic (talk) 22:32, 20 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Personally speaking, from your reply it sounds to me that you are completely wrong about your assumptions about the Sea, Desert, Salt, and Sugar articles. I participated in the FAC review of Sea article during which time the article was improved to a satisfactory level. This does not excuse that the article contained gross errors after it was awarded GA. The problems could have been avoided if User Cwmhiraeth had collaborated more for the preparation of the article before its GA review. I think that User Cwmhiraeth should not have dumped such a poor quality article on the GA reviewer. I have only just become aware of the Sugar article and numerous problems there. Also, I have just noticed a problem in the Desert article, and I have stated a discussion on its talk page about water of metabolism. I participated in a small way in the Salt article GA review as soon as I became aware of problems there and I helped to fix problems about salt intake and health in humans, and I would like to question why User Cwmhiraeth went it alone in writing about this health topic. As far as I am aware, this review is to help User Cwmhiraeth with her editing and this is best done with reference to the truth about her editing. Snowman (talk) 14:58, 21 April 2014 (UTC)

, No of course that is not enough to establish there are serious systemic errors across 1300 articles. You say you found two "subtle errors". Shouldn't you be awarding Cwmhiraeth an accolade for such a low error rate? - No. I've found many more, and other editors uncovered even more. See the above review. Also, while misleading colour descriptions may be minor errors, writing that a sessile organism walks around is not a subtle error, unless you consider "Apple trees sometimes wander through the countryside" as a trivial inaccuracy when talking of apple trees. There was an article where she mixed up male and female sized and where she made a date completely out of the blue. Moreover, a comparison with our average error rate of 9 years ago doesn't seem especially flattering. The pattern is in her difficulties with paraphrasing without changing the meaning. On my talk page she asked me for advice (which is good! not because she asked me, but because she is becoming more aware of possible errors) and I quickly found two other inaccurate/misleading paraphrases in her current article draft. Good that we catched them before, and that's also thanks to this review. -- cyclopia <sup style="color:red;">speak! 11:45, 21 April 2014 (UTC)
 * The trouble with Cyclopia is that while he/she demands 100% accuracy in the articles I write, he/she makes false, inaccurate or exaggerated statements his/herself (I think I will assume that Cyclopia is male for ease of reading). I did not write "that a sessile organism walks around" I wrote "This bryozoan can also form unattached spherical clusters" which I derived from the source stating "The colony form varies from brownish-white lace-like sheets, irregular encrustations to spherical balls of zooids." A "sphere" to me is a ball-shaped object and a ball-shaped object is unattached. If it were attached, then a stalk or other form of attachment should have been mentioned. And Cyclopia's statement (made somewhere else) that all Bryozoans are sessile is in fact incorrect, some Phylactolaemata may be unattached. The statement he made then was "Perhaps I'm wrong but I can't find a reference about free-floating balls of this bryozoan." Not quite the same as accusing me now of "writing that a sessile organism walks around". And then he stated above "I quickly found two other inaccurate/misleading paraphrases in her current article draft." This is untrue, there was a single issue about whether the whitefly's eggs being laid "in the form of a spiral, usually on the underside of a leaf" was misleading because it did not make it clear that it was always on a leaf but usually on the underside. It is difficult to demonstrate my competence when editors like Cyclopia are  so determined to see me in a bad light, perhaps merely to justify his original statement about me being sloppy. (Bickering about these points is such a waste of time!) Cwmhiraeth (talk) 13:08, 21 April 2014 (UTC)
 * , sorry but your defence is only making things worse. Point by point:
 * I did not write "that a sessile organism walks around" I wrote "This bryozoan can also form unattached spherical clusters" - Do you see unattached trees living and thriving around? No? Then that's basically the same.
 * which I derived from the source stating "The colony form varies from brownish-white lace-like sheets, irregular encrustations to spherical balls of zooids." A "sphere" to me is a ball-shaped object and a ball-shaped object is unattached. If it were attached, then a stalk or other form of attachment should have been mentioned. - And here it is, utter (and incorrect) original research. Why "ball shaped objects" should be unattached, is unfathomable. I can take a tennis ball and glue it to a table: here is a ball attached to a substrate. Why should they mention "a stalk or other form of attachment"? In the name of what? Of your lack of imagination? Unless explicitly stated otherwise, that species is sessile, and that spherical ball of zooids is attached to a substrate.
 * And Cyclopia's statement (made somewhere else) that all Bryozoans are sessile is in fact incorrect - Never claimed that as far as I remember (I am hardly an authority on bryozoans). That bryozoan however is sourced as sessile, if I remember correctly in the very same source where it talks about colonies.
 * The statement he made then was "Perhaps I'm wrong but I can't find a reference about free-floating balls of this bryozoan." Not quite the same as accusing me now of "writing that a sessile organism walks around". - Kind of the same instead. If you can't see that they are the same, then, again, you should think twice before writing science articles.
 * And then he stated above "I quickly found two other inaccurate/misleading paraphrases in her current article draft." This is untrue - This is true, as anybody can check on the thread on my talk page.
 * Yes do look at this thread on the talk page, folks. I ask about the way to express the colour and Cyclopia raises another point. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 18:39, 21 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Indeed. And these were just the first two things. I didn't even check the rest of the draft.-- cyclopia <sup style="color:red;">speak! 22:47, 21 April 2014 (UTC)


 * It is difficult to demonstrate my competence when editors like Cyclopia are so determined to see me in a bad light, perhaps merely to justify his original statement about me being sloppy. - My original statement came from a wealth of evidence that AfadsBad had shown, and it is now reinforced by further evidence, included your post now. I am not determined to "see you in a bad light", I am determined in avoiding to pile up more inaccuracies in our science articles. Again, I think you are a valuable and good faith contributor, but some things seem to be definitely over your head: you seem to simply not understand the fine line between paraphrasing and changing meaning, and you have a penchant to use your own judgement and imagination to "fill gaps" in sources -that is, original research. Would you please slow down your writing for a while and concentrate on understanding all of this? It would help you and the encyclopedia, and would show you in a very good light. -- cyclopia <sup style="color:red;">speak!  13:23, 21 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Ah, you relied on the "wealth of evidence that AfadsBad had shown" not on your own judgement. Now we are getting somewhere. You were already convinced by AfadsBad's rhetoric before starting to review my articles, keen to reinforce the conclusion you had already come to. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 18:39, 21 April 2014 (UTC)
 * AfadsBad's exaggerated the issue a lot and bullied you nastily, no question, but he also has shown some worrying facts, no question about this either. There is a huge difference between "rhetoric" and "evidence". From evidence, then I form a judgement, and my judgement based on such evidence was (and still is) that you are often sloppy in your editing work, and that you have difficulties becoming aware of that. That the same pattern AfadsBad pointed then popped out regularly when looking at a few of your articles means that there was more evidence. Cwmhiraeth, that your edits tend to show wrong paraphrases, source mix-ups and original research is a fact, shown above, by tons of evidence. The sooner you just admit this, the better. You were now on the right path, asking for help before editing. Why don't you keep going on this path, instead of complaining that there is some mysterious conspiracy against you? It's not about you as a person. Again, I ask: did you understand why your paraphrases noted above are wrong? Did you understand why that "unattached" is worrying? Because that is the key: understanding.-- cyclopia <sup style="color:red;">speak! 22:45, 21 April 2014 (UTC)
 * There are two articles mentioned in this editor review that I consider were badly wrong. One was the section of Desert about cold deserts pointed out by Andreas where I used an unreliable source and still relied on it, even though I could see the temperature figures looked odd. The other was Pteria sterna, pointed out by Fram. I used a Google book source about pearl oysters which included several species and I muddled information about two different species and confounded this with some more errors. It was a bad article and I admitted as much at the time it was criticised. When this review is finished, I might rewrite it from scratch.
 * The other articles criticised are largely on the basis that I have made unwarranted deductions from the source material (the unattached spherical balls) or that I have changed the wording used in the source and have, for example, chosen to express the source's "yellow to tan" with yellowish-brown. In the former instance I agree that it would have been better had I not used the word unattached. In the latter, Cyclopia is very insistent that what I do is wrong. I understand the point Cyclopia is making and I can change my practice in future, but I would still like to know what other, independent-minded editors think about this issue, the changes in wording that I use, primarily so as not to close paraphrase the source?
 * are largely on the basis that I have made unwarranted deductions from the source material, you say it like it is a trivial hiccup. It is not. It is a major problem. It means you add and/or alter information based your own ideas. It is exactly the kind of things for which we have no original research policy. Sometimes the deduction can be right. Sometimes it can just be a trivial alteration. Sometimes it can be seriously wrong. In all cases, you are putting yourself above sources and give readers a false sense of security, by saying that something comes from a source while instead comes out of your hat.
 * In the latter, Cyclopia is very insistent that what I do is wrong. I understand the point Cyclopia is making and I can change my practice in future - Okay, can you explain with your own words the point I am making in those cases? For example, take the boring clam article. Did you understand that what you described and what the source described are actually two different ensembles of possible things (even if overlapping)? I just want to be sure that at least what I say is understood (regardless of you agreeing with it or not). -- cyclopia <sup style="color:red;">speak! 09:00, 22 April 2014 (UTC)


 * I also think that the Wiki should be protected from users who do not know their own limitations. User Cwmhiraeth made multiple and gross errors in the physics relevant to the "Sea" article and I raised this on one of the WikiCup talk pages in October 2013 (described more fully under "From Snowmanradio" above). I have also noticed problems with her writing about complex science in other articles including errors about basic medical sciences and medicine.  Of course, other reviewers may be more aware of her writing in other disciplines. My assumption is that User Cwmhiraeth is gaining some insight into the problems she is causing; however, this appears to be taking some time. One aspect that I do not currently understand and would like to understand better about User Cwmhiraeth predicament is that she says that her participation in the WikiCup has nothing to do with her mode of writing. The WikiCup is effectively a race to see who can accumulate the most points for participating in articles as they reach certain article milestones. I would have thought that the WikiCup race would present competitors with the temptation to rush or take short cuts in order to make article superficially look good. Is there no connection between User Cwmhiraeth's high score in the WikiCup and the editing issues being discussed here?  Snowman (talk) 14:33, 21 April 2014 (UTC)
 * I have used the bonus scoring system to my advantage. It is the importance of the articles rather than their number that I have used to score points in the WikiCup. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:30, 22 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Just saying, Cwmhiraeth, maybe you shouldn't react too defensively to Cyclopia or Snowman, I for one don't think they're in a conspiracy against you. starship.paint   "YES!" 06:40, 22 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Yeah. I am a bit frustrated that she makes it all personal, and tries to sway the discussion out of the main point. If she just disagreed with what I said,like, "no, in my opinion this paraphrase is right because..." I would be concerned but at least there would be some rational ground on which to discuss. But when I try to explain in detail why and how something is not correct in my opinion, she usually ignores that, as she ignores my repeated calls at checking if the point I and others have raised have been understood. A more rational approach would have ended this ordeal ages ago. -- cyclopia <sup style="color:red;">speak! 09:05, 22 April 2014 (UTC)
 * I hope that User Cwmhiraeth will be able to advance the discussion; however, I suspect that User Cwmhiraeth's reply sidestepped issues. I am aware that the WikiCup awards bonus points to nudge competitors to expand and submit certain articles; nevertheless, User Cwmhiraeth has submitted a lot of articles while accumulating a high score in the WikiCup. If User Cwmhiraeth's reply was taken literally, then to me, it would tend to indicate that she is happy with her rate of editing, that she has time to search for relevant sources, that she has adequate time to understand relevant scientific topics, has time to write suitable text for Wiki articles, and time to recruit assistance for anything that she cannot find the right words for. Snowman (talk) 10:25, 22 April 2014 (UTC)

Comment by Fram
More evidence is wanted that the problems, though not as common as Afabsbad claimed, are quite prevalent? Instead of recent DYKs, this time I took a random GA from his list on her user page: Tropaeolum. Reading it, I was confused by a claim, added by Cwmhiraeth and still appearing in this GA:


 * "The 16th century herbalist John Gerard, in his book "Of the Historie of Plants", called the plant "lark's heel". He wrote: "unto the backe part(of the flower) doth hange a taile or spurre, such as hath the larkes heele, called in Latine Consolida regalis.""

Strange. Why would he call the plant "lark's heel" and then, in the given quote, compare it to "larkes heele"? That would have been very confusing, and sure enough, that isn't what happened. here you can find the full quote, to make sure that it isn't the incomplete quote that causes the confusion. Nowhere does it call the plant "lark's heel" or any variation thereof, it calls it "Indian Cresses" or "Nasturtium Indicum".

Obviously, reading the text more closely, we encounter further problems with the same section. In her previous edit, Cwhiraeth claimed:


 * "The first nasturtium species was introduced into Europe in the 18th century and was named Tropaeolum minus by the Swedish botanist Carl Linnaeus."

But in her next edit, quoted above, she uses a late 16th century book which states:


 * "The seeds of this rare and faire plant came from the indies into Spain, and thence into France and Flanders, from whence I received seed that bore with mee both floures & seed, especially those I received from my loving friend John Robin of Paris".

Other sources, like also indicate that Tropolaeum Minus was probably not the first to be introduced, as other species like at least Tropaeolum majus were introduced in Europe already in the sixteenth century. It was common enough to be e.g. included in a 1699 Gardenere's Almanac, and can be traced to e.g. a 1636 catalogue of the French Royal Botanical Gardens as well. In short, there is ample evidence that the first nasturtium species was introduced into Europe one to two centuries earlier than what our article has claimed for nearly two years now, and as was indicated by the source used in thesecond edit, which contradicted the first edit. I hope the other sections are better than the History one, I haven't bothered checking any further as I'm basically done with this editor review. Fram (talk) 09:54, 22 April 2014 (UTC)
 * I took the liberty of correcting Cwmhiraeth's gender in your post, Fram. —  Scott  •  talk  13:40, 22 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Talk:Tropaeolum has some info on why the above "introduced into Europe" addition was made. "I own a copy of the book from which the history section is derived but it does not mention a date. As Linnaeus lived from 1707 to 1778, the date is bound to be in the 18th century so I have used that. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 09:31, 20 September 2012 (UTC)" Pure guesswork, and this was accepted by the User:Sainsf as good enough to promote it to GA! A prime example of what is wrong with too many of Cwmhiraeth's edits, and of what is wrong with our DYK/GA/FA processes as well. Fram (talk) 09:59, 22 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Excellent work, Fram. Would you mind fixing this mess? I could do it but since you are more familiar with the issue...-- cyclopia <sup style="color:red;">speak! 10:18, 22 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Note that the "Tropaeolum" article was entered in the 2012 WikiCup; see WikiCup/History/2012/Submissions/Cwmhiraeth. Note that it was awarded a total of 60 points (30 points for GA with a bonus multiplier of x2). I do not know much about plants, but I wonder if the article is also an example of what is wrong with the WikiCup processes as well as at least the DYK and GA processes. I think that the FA process can be adequate, because some FA reviews are extensive. Snowman (talk) 10:52, 22 April 2014 (UTC)
 * I have removed the offending section and started a GA review, noting another problem as well (haven't searched for more). Fram (talk) 11:27, 22 April 2014 (UTC)
 * I note what you say above. Tell me, Fram, do you have a Wikipediocracy account, and if so, what is your username (or whatever they call it there)? Cwmhiraeth (talk) 12:46, 22 April 2014 (UTC)
 * And the relevance of this is...? Were the issues I raised first posted there, and am I taking credit for finds by others? Wuold my comments become invalid if I was a member of Wikipediocracy, the ACLU, or the AA? Is it inconceivable that someone could find these problems and come to conclusions independent from that or any other website? Please enlighten us on what you are trying to achieve with this line of questioning. But perhaps first inform us of why you thought that "Linnaeus lived in the 18th century, so it is certain that the species was introduced in Europe in that century" was an acceptable edit to get an article to GA-level. Or why you don't know the difference between "called a plant X" and "compared a plant to X". Fram (talk) 12:58, 22 April 2014 (UTC)
 * A cleverly dodged question.
 * As to your substantive point, I have the book used as a source for my statement on Linnaeus. It states (about Trapaeolaceae) "The first species introduced into Europe was named by the great Swedish botanist Linnaeus. This was Trapaeolum minus, a non-climbing Peruvian annual with deep yellow flowers, purple-spotted in the lower petals." Cwmhiraeth (talk) 13:22, 22 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Yes, how clever of me, not wanting to respond to a question which I consider totally irrelevant. If you can't give me a very good reason why I should answer a question whether I am a member of an external website, and by which name, on your editor review, then all this is attempted disruption by poisoning the well from your side. You'ld do better to drop this attitude and these kind of questions. Fram (talk) 13:35, 22 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Do you claim that your source, and the above sentence, supports your statement "The first nasturtium species was introduced into Europe in the 18th century"? Fram (talk) 13:35, 22 April 2014 (UTC)
 * No, I shouldn't have mentioned the 18th century. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 18:01, 22 April 2014 (UTC)


 * Cyclopia is beginning to understand but I am afraid you just don't get it, Fram. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 18:01, 22 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Get what? That you basically make stuff up? No we get that now. Its become fairly obvious. Only in death does duty end (talk) 18:13, 22 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Yeah, agreed. I don't know what am I "beginning to understand", but Fram's work is excellently thorough in his review. -- cyclopia <sup style="color:red;">speak! 22:07, 22 April 2014 (UTC)
 * The point I thought you were beginning to understand Cyclopia was that selecting a so-called "random" article and pointing out its defects may achieve its objective of ridiculing me but does not prove anything. Proper sampling is needed to do that. InvertZoo's approach of making corrections when errors are spotted is far superior to Fram's approach and will be of much greater benefit to me (seeing them on my watchlist) and to Wikipedia in my opinion. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:10, 23 April 2014 (UTC)
 * So taking a GA (so an article you obviously felt was good), listed above among the most often viewed of your articles, is still not good enough? Seeing things on your watchlist is "far superior" to seeing them in your own editor review? Perhaps because it is less obvious that way to other people that there is a clear pattern in all of this, yes, but while that may be of benefit to you, it is detrimental to Wikipedia. Fram (talk) 06:56, 23 April 2014 (UTC)
 * selecting a so-called "random" article and pointing out its defects may achieve its objective of ridiculing me but does not prove anything. Proper sampling is needed to do that., nobody here gloats in ridiculing you. Nobody here wants to ridicule you. We are just pointing to problems. Now, what I meant above about the sampling is that I was going through the list, and I also listed the ones that I found with minor or no problems. So far however almost no article of yours I have took time to check is completely devoid of issues: the exceptions are Gastrotrich, where I haven't found any major issue so far, as stated, (but that needs a more thorough work), and the puffin one, where I perused a bit of your edits but (again so far) found nothing too worrying -didn't spend much time there however. Now, this is much less than 50% of the articles I've checked of yours, which means that most of your articles sampled so far have more or less serious issues directly related to your editing. Let's make it that I found an unfortunately defective sample, and so it is in truth, say, 50%. It is still a lot of trouble, given your raw article productivity. And cases like the one found by Fram only make this statistics worse: they show your pattern of editing and thought more and more, which is more and more concerning. -- cyclopia <sup style="color:red;">speak! 08:49, 23 April 2014 (UTC)

General comments from User:Invertzoo
Cwmhiraeth belongs to WikiProject Bivalves and so do I, thus I suppose I am not completely neutral, although I don't consider this editor to be a close wiki-friend or anything like that. Cwmhiraeth took the article Bivalvia up to FA status, and has written a number of bivalve species articles. I am not too familiar with her work on other topics, and am probably not qualified to judge it, so I will not attempt to do that. However, I am absolutely shocked and appalled by how viciously Cwmhiraeth has been attacked by certain editors, even though I do agree that her work (and there is a lot of it) is very often a somewhat less careful than is ideal for Wikipedia. I have found various things that needed fixing in her work, and have gone ahead and fixed those things as necessary. The level of arguing, fighting and confrontation that has gone on over this editor should be absolutely unacceptable here on Wikipedia. Those who have been the most vituperative should have at least a temporary ban imposed on them. Are we civilized? If so, please let's start showing some more politeness and control of emotions. A few established editors have said reasonable things in these discussions, but their voices have been drowned out by the extensive unreasonably rude behavior of the most vocal complainers. Invertzoo (talk) 16:50, 22 April 2014 (UTC)
 * To avoid your message being drowned out by anything I think that your comment above can be summarized to "You agree that her work (and there is a lot of it) is very often a somewhat less careful than is ideal for Wikipedia" with regard to Bivalvia. This could be interpreted to mean almost anything. It might be more helpful to User Cwmhiraeth if you avoided making sweeping generalizations without providing evidence. Perhaps, you could give some examples to demonstrate what you mean by your polite phrase "less careful edits". Snowman (talk) 18:43, 22 April 2014 (UTC)
 * At this point in time I am not convinced that doing that would be helpful to Cwmhiraeth, as all the general points that need making have already been made by the few non-irate people who are taking part in these discussions. With Bivalvia, anything problematic that I noticed, I fixed, as is the Wikipedia way. I don't wish to get drawn into stone-throwing, as this discussion (like the one on ANI) seems to have mostly deteriorated to that level. My comments here are not primarily intended to shed light on details of C's work habits or approach, more than enough of that has already been detailed, some of it exaggerated for effect, and some not. I am here to protest the inappropriately virulent attacks that she has garnered, many of which could not be more hostile if she had been paid to try to destroy the encyclopedia wholesale. I am requesting that these discussions be conducted with fairness, politeness and civility. This is not the Spanish Inquisition and we do not burn heretics at the stake. Invertzoo (talk) 00:20, 23 April 2014 (UTC)
 * No we don't burn heretics at the stake. We metaphorically burn productive content builders with vitriol. This is now a full scale Fram-style attack from three participants. It is a classic example of lack of perspective and the failure of our admin system to inject some decency and fairness into the discussion. Well done Fram, you must be very satisfied. --Epipelagic (talk) 01:05, 23 April 2014 (UTC)
 * We metaphorically burn productive factually wrong or unsourced content builders with vitriol. - FTFY.-- cyclopia <sup style="color:red;">speak! 08:51, 23 April 2014 (UTC)
 * If that is really what you think then you have a very serious attitude problem. We do not burn anybody, metaphorically or otherwise. This project is about building an encyclopedia collaboratively. If someone gets it wrong, then we calmly and politely correct the error and get on with project. Plantsurfer (talk) 09:48, 23 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Whooosh. (just in case, no, I do not want to burn anybody, not even metaphorically. I actually offered to help Cwmhiraeth, and I did when she asked.) -- cyclopia <sup style="color:red;">speak! 13:01, 23 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Don't be silly, everyone knows that everything that's wrong with Wikipedia is directly attributable to the slavering pitchfork admins and their burning hatred of the good, noble and flawless content builders. —  Scott  •  talk  09:50, 23 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Scott that is not helpful. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 13:17, 23 April 2014 (UTC)
 * In these discussions so far some people have apparently had carte blanche to make personal attacks and soapbox, without even the mildest censure. —  Scott  •  talk  09:05, 24 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Thanks Casliber. Can we please stop sniping at one another and bring the overall temperature of the discussion down to a civilized level. Plantsurfer is right: Wikipedia is above all else a collaboration. A collaboration does not involve fisticuffs, even when something appears to have gone wrong in some way. This is not "Lord of the Flies". Unfortunately it is sometimes the case that the level of testosterone on Wikipedia does lead to some unnecessary confrontations, and some head-butting, but we should be ashamed to be getting so emotional that we are hurling invective at one another. I am asking participants to use civility, decency and kindness here. This is simply a case where a well-meaning editor appears to have outreached herself to some extent, and repeatedly. This may be frustrating, but getting all worked up about it is counterproductive. In these commentaries I have observed a lot of unnecessary rudeness and vindictiveness, down to the level of poisonous contempt. This is really misplaced since, over the years, all of us have occasionally made small errors of the same kind that this editor appears to have made. "Let he who is without sin cast the first stone". Attacking someone does not elevate the stone-throwers, it diminishes them. Ganging up on someone over this kind of problem is childish. It is playground bulling behavior. I will repeatedly take the stage and ask for calmer, kinder, and more civilized behavior until we get some. Invertzoo (talk) 13:22, 23 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Apart from Afadsbad, who hasn't edited this in a while now, the major stone throwing, uncivilized behaviour, and hurling of invectives has not come from the people criticizing Cwmhiraeth's work, but from some of those attacking the people who actually identify the problems. While not reaching the ultra-low level displayed by ColonelHenry, who will not be editing here anymore, some of the comments by the people defending Cwmhiraeth are typical shooting-of-the-pianist. Luckily there are a fair number of more civilized and constructive people here who support Cwmhiraeth in general and have a more favourable view of his editing than others, but who don't feel the need to demonize those that don't agree that the good clearly outweighs the bad (to simplify the two positions a bit). Fram (talk) 13:39, 23 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Both AfadsBad and Cwmhiraeth are female. Apart from that, hear hear. —  Scott  •  talk  14:30, 23 April 2014 (UTC)
 * I would have thought that it would be best to analyse the evidence presented here as objectivly and farily as possible. People providing evidence are likely to have faults and make their own editing mistakes, but that does not necessarliy make the evidence less important nor bar them from saying anything here. I think that honest opinions are being provided with the aim of guiding User Cmw, improving the Wiki, and ultimatly being a kindness to a lot of readers. Snowman (talk) 22:33, 23 April 2014 (UTC)

What to do now?
Right, question is, has everyone seen enough to start to figure out what we do now? I plan to check some more, but do we want to start discussing what we actually do now? Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 13:58, 23 April 2014 (UTC)


 * I have two specific suggestions for action. One is the suggestion I made above of using a template or checklist for each family/class of species as a means of distilling the essential facts in standard language.  For example, perhaps Invertzoo could comment on how this might be done for bivalvia. My second suggestion is that the points used in competitions such as the Wikicup might provide better penalties or incentives to encourage the avoidance or finding of gross errors. Andrew (talk) 14:21, 23 April 2014 (UTC)


 * It is good to see a concrete suggestion, but I must confess I don't really understand what you are proposing Andrew? Bivalvia contains perhaps 100 or 200 basic facts about bivalves -- it would take me hours to tabulate them all. Did you mean that Cwmhiraeth should start an article by creating her own list of facts and then integrating them into continuous prose? And as for the WikiCup, I do feel that perhaps the competition has accidentally had the side effect of encouraging speed rather than thorough, in-depth accuracy. Invertzoo (talk) 14:30, 23 April 2014 (UTC)


 * (I took the liberty to make this a separate section, feel free to revert) I would ask Cwmhiraeth to ask for help before making descriptions or jumping to conclusions in her editing of science articles, and I'd ask to put on some organized check effort on Cwmhiraeth articles. I would also ask her to refrain from editing until she proves to understand how to properly do paraphrasing. I would also ask in general to check for errors by other editors in biology articles, because something that came out in the review is that similar errors are, actually, made by many other editors. Cwmhiraeth is probably just the tip of an iceberg.-- cyclopia <sup style="color:red;">speak! 14:40, 23 April 2014 (UTC)


 * Before you all come to a conclusion as to my unfitness to edit, I would like to point out that the chief critics make out that they have randomly selecting the articles in which they found errors, a claim that I very much doubt. In the section Are all my articles bad? I listed eleven articles, the "evidence" requested by Black Kite at the very beginning of this review. I list them below. All the ones so far reviewed have been found acceptable.


 * Formica incerta - Awaiting review.
 * Xyloplax turnerae - Awaiting review.
 * Adamussium - Awaiting review.
 * Cidaris cidaris - Reviewed and approved by Cyclopia
 * Glyptonotus antarcticus - Reviewed and approved by Cyclopia
 * Atlantic Puffin Cscr-featured.svg - Partially reviewed and approved by Cyclopia
 * Chameleon goby - Awaiting review.
 * Gastrotrich - Partially reviewed and approved by Cyclopia
 * Red-cheeked salamander - Reviewed and approved by HCA
 * Eurasian Wryneck - Awaiting review.
 * Crocodylus novaeguineae - Reviewed and approved by HCA and Faendalimas
 * Amanita nivalis - Selected, reviewed and approved by Sasata
 * Cwmhiraeth (talk) 17:49, 23 April 2014 (UTC)
 * I reviewed Poultry and found it 99.95% good, with only one-half a sentence that made me think it was not supported by refs. Binksternet (talk) 19:02, 23 April 2014 (UTC)
 * I would say that the three GAs and the FA are not "User Cwmhiraeth's articles", because they are products of the collaboration of the GA and FAC reviews. However, GA and FAC reviews provide a account of what amendments were needed to rasie the standard of the individual articles. Of course, the FAC reviews are much more rigourous than GA reviews. Snowman (talk) 21:24, 23 April 2014 (UTC)
 * I do not think Cwmhiraeth unfit to edit. I know there are many who edit in area where they are not expert and make some mistakes at some time; it happens all the time, and   I see it all the time even among experienced editors  I do think the wise, accomplished editor has to know when they are expert and when they are not, and must ask for a review by an expert if working in an area where they themselves are not expert. If this became a standard for all of us, this kind of review would be easier for the editor being reviewed. It is difficult to keep our egos out of this, and to remember that Wikipedia could not function as a project where anyone can edit if there was no collaboration.  We  must have the checks and balances in the form of other editors when anyone can edit anything. Collaboration means though, that criticism is given in a way that can be digested, and is accepted, not as a personal insult but as a necessary aspect of a collaborative environment.


 * I also believe the GA reviewers have to be more stringent on all articles, checking refs and the content against those refs. It is so difficult to get agreement on community changes and at the GA level, that would help ensure accurate articles all the time; so the onus is on each editor to take the measures necessary to ensure their work is as accurate as they can make it. And again, just my opinion, but we have to treat people kindly, all of us, and to critique in ways that ensure our editors grow in confidence even as they correct their mistakes.


 * In Cwmhiraeth shoes I might do the following:


 * Ask for a review when I feel I've done all I can on an article.


 * If asking for GA status inform the reviewer you appreciate the most critical view possible, a reminder to the reviewer that both, critical views are necessary and that you as an editor can handle the criticism.


 * Try to find a reviewer who is expert or knowledgeable in the article subject area.


 * And for myself I have to remember, we all live in glass houses here, and should behave accordingly.(Littleolive oil (talk) 19:22, 23 April 2014 (UTC))


 * I think that many be more than is really needed. Nonetheless, even though I feel that the accusations against Cwmhiraeth have been exaggerated, and probably many of her articles are OK as they stand, or almost OK, but because she is a high profile and extremely active editor, I do feel she should seriously think about agreeing to slow down her production of articles/DYKs/raising articles to GA or FA status, for just maybe two or three months, and use that time to learn a better way, a more careful way, less heuristic, to extract information from sources. I usually explain to editors that they have to read a source several times and think about it until they are quite sure they completely understand what the source is saying, and then they need to re-write the information from scratch. Any kind of paraphrasing is almost always a problematic way to approach extracting info from a source text.


 * Obviously a careful analysis and rewriting takes quite a lot longer than just grabbing the info, quickly paraphrasing it and popping it into an article, but it may well be what is actually needed almost all of the time here on Wikipedia. This slower process is at any rate a technique much less likely to lead to problems. Of course it does sometime happens that the info in a source is written so poorly that it is not really clear at all exactly what it means; in those cases it is better to omit the info entirely, or quote directly from the source. That is far better than making a quick guess at what it "probably" means. Perhaps Cwmhiraeth would agree to work on developing a slower and more systematic technique, and then subsequently create a few articles in subject areas which a few of us know really well, so that we can see that everything is going well. Invertzoo (talk) 20:09, 23 April 2014 (UTC)


 * I see that Cwmhiraeth is currently competing in the WikiCup. Even though she is a good faith editor and a very prolific one, perhaps under the circumstances being in the running for the cup is a little inappropriate, as successful competing relies on racking up as many points as possible as quickly as possible, therefore not just strategy but overall speed is a valuable asset? I do feel that we should work very hard at trying to retain Cwmhiraeth as an editor, but at the same time I do feel (based on the articles I personally have seen of hers in my subject area over the last year or so), that her approach needs to be revised. Invertzoo (talk) 20:40, 23 April 2014 (UTC)
 * With regards the WikiCup, User Cwm denys that her participation in the WikiCup affects her mode of editing. It may seem logical that participation in the WikiCup would tend to tempt competitors to rush editing, but to me this is an unproven hypotheses at present. This editor review has not come to any conclusions nor a consensus about anyting at this juncture; nevertheless, if there is a fair consensus that too many of User Cwm's contributions have been unsatisfatory, then I would think that discussion on User Cwm's participation in the WikiCup would be based on that consensus and possibly regardless of whatever pace she has edited text or plans to edit text.  Snowman (talk) 23:09, 23 April 2014 (UTC)
 * I fully endorse Epipelagic's comments in the section "A key difficulty with this review" below. It's what I have been trying to say but he has expressed it so much better than I could.


 * I would like to suggest as an interim measure that I could write any new article I wish to create in my userspace and it could be vetted before it is moved into mainspace. If I wished to expand some larger article such as Isopoda, which I have already started working on, I could inform some "mentor" and they could ensure that I did not go astray. I had it in mind to improve/expand some of the higher level invertebrate taxa articles as I did with Gastrotrich. Cyclopia has partially reviewed this and stated "... Gastrotrich, where I haven't found any major issue so far". Also, I have taken note of criticisms of my editing in this review and accept most of them as valid. I can slow down, not select difficult subjects on which to write, adopt the approach suggested by Invertzoo and spend more time ensuring that everything is as accurate as I can make it. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:21, 24 April 2014 (UTC)
 * I admire User Cwmhraeth's determination. I think that User Cwm could also incorporate teamwork and liaison into an improved mode of editing for topics that she finds difficult to understand or complex topics that are new to her; however, I am puzzled why liaison and cooperative editing was omitted in the suggested interim measure. May I ask; Does User Cwm think she needs a mentor? Has she suggested this as a concession or bargaining chip? Is it an attempt to preempt a possible outcome? or is there another reason? These are not a trick questions. Snowman (talk) 09:52, 24 April 2014 (UTC)

You state that Cidaris cidaris was approved, but you seem to ignore that you wrote in the article that the species is "not common", while that was not supported by the source you used and completely contradicted by other sources which clearly described it as "common". That is hardly "acceptable" like you claim. You also wrote in the article that "The test has a diameter of up to 2 cm (0.8 in)" which has since been corrected by others to "The test has a diameter of 7 cm (2.8 in) to 8 cm (3.1 in)" (the intervening correction is probably why Cyclopia didn't notice it). Getting the size of an animal wrong by that margin is again not acceptable. Wrong size, wrong indication of commonness? No, your version of the article was not an acceptable version. Fram (talk) 07:59, 24 April 2014 (UTC)

No one has commented on User Cwm's role as a DYK, GA or FAC reviewer, so we do not know anything about this. Snowman (talk) 10:46, 24 April 2014 (UTC)

A key difficulty with this review
A key difficulty with this review is that Cwmhiraeth's detractors have not used statistically competent methods to assess her contributions. The process should have involved from the outset some process of randomly selecting a statistically useful but manageable sample of the considerable number of articles she has written. Instead her detractors have just cherry-picked passages that support their pre-conceptions. Some reviewers claim they randomly selected the articles they reviewed, rather than cherry picked them. That's not good enough. The review articles should have been publicly seen to have been randomly selected. That means they should have been randomly selected using some acceptable and publicly disclosed method, and then publicly listed before review. As it stands, all we have is a small number of problems that reviewers have cherry picked from the huge body of work that Cwmhiraeth has produced.

It is not possible in these circumstances to clearly establish on what scale there is a problem here. Given the difficulty reviewers are finding with establishing problems in the eleven articles that Cwmhiraeth's listed for review, it may be the scale of problems here is not very great. We have an ironical situation where the reviewers have used scientifically incompetent methods trying to support their a priori view that Cwmhiraeth is scientifically incompetent. All that has been clearly established is that there are some issues, mostly minor, with some of Cwmhiraeth's articles, and there are many issues with the methodology of her detractors. --Epipelagic (talk) 01:16, 24 April 2014 (UTC)
 * One positive outcome that could result from this review would be to start a guideline for how investigative editor reviews should be conducted in future. --Epipelagic (talk) 01:20, 24 April 2014 (UTC)


 * Incorrect in so many ways and indicative of the major problem with wikipedia. At the least opportunity you all focus in on individuals to blame for one thing or another. You all need to stop doing that, but I'm confident that none of you will. You have defective processes (wikicup) that make errors more likely to occur, and other processes (DYK) that ensure that these errors are promoted to the front page. The culture around these articles is insular and other processes are being used to drive away outside critics. This review has established that there are indeed errors in the articles written, that these errors weren't picked up by the current processes, that when errors in wikicup/DYK were first pointed out the person making the critic was told to get lost and accused of disruption. Additionally the errors being found can mostly be sourced to issues surrounding avoidance of close paraphrasing. It doesn't matter whether all the articles are affected, 10% or 1%. In all cases the issues trace to avoidance of close paraphrasing. This editor is not the only one so affected. One FA had for three years Richard II king of England in 1345, once again this was caused by reworking a paragraph from the source to avoid paraphrasing. Almost all the issues I see with WP articles are rooted in manipulation of sources such that the original facts are lost or distorted. As I said earlier I'm confident that as I've not blamed any one person you all will ignore this. John lilburne (talk) 06:55, 24 April 2014 (UTC)


 * Another offering from yet another Wikipediocracy insurgent. I'm not ignoring you John, but you have completely bypassed the issue I raised in this thread. Your sweeping comments belong elsewhere, and have nothing to do with the comments I just made above. Please make an effort to stay on topic if you can. --Epipelagic (talk) 07:52, 24 April 2014 (UTC)
 * No I've addressed the issue completely. You say that they didn't do some statistical survey of the articles. I say that is irrelevant as the errors being highlight are 100% traceable to issues of the culture surrounding close paraphrasing in the DYK/Wikicup reviews. It is the cause of the errors that you should be focused on not who did it or how many times they did it. What you are doing is perpetuating a blame culture. You need to get away from personalities, take the attitude that no one is doing bad things intentionally and work out what the underlying causes are that makes good people mess up. It is almost always process and culture. That is what you fix as it gives you the most bang. Example you don't put poisons in clear glass bottles, next to none poisons, and then blame someone who mistakenly picks up the wrong bottle. You fix the storage issues. Another example. One English Earl was present at the Siege of Calais 1346/7, and died in of plague in Calais in 1369. WP in manipulating the sources used to say that "he was present at the Seige of Calais where he died of plague in 1649". You fix the cause of a class of errors. In my job if we get a program bug we look to fix the reason that someone put the bug in, and why it is that as a group we didn't spot it earlier. That may be training, it may be a change in working practices, it may be a technological fix. Whatever it is the focus is on the cause not the personality, because although Fred did it today, Sally could do it tomorrow, and I could do it next week. John lilburne (talk) 08:51, 24 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Given that John is an editor in good standing with as much right to express an opinion as any other person involved with this project - as indeed am I, and numerous other editors, administrators, bureaucrats, oversighters, and former and current members of ArbCom who choose to participate at Wikipediocracy - your describing him as an "insurgent" is as inaccurate as it is distasteful. Indulging in that that sort of hyperbolic language does your argument no favors whatsoever. —  Scott  •  talk  08:55, 24 April 2014 (UTC)


 * Please try and stay on topic. None of this bluster is addressing the comments I made at the start of this thread. --Epipelagic (talk) 09:35, 24 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Please try not to write off other people asking you to moderate your language as "bluster". —  Scott  •  talk  10:17, 24 April 2014 (UTC)

"A key difficulty with this review is that Cwmhiraeth's detractors have not used statistically competent methods to assess her contributions." As compared to her supporters? Fram (talk) 09:40, 24 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Yes, that's a fair point. But the onus is more on the detractors if they are claiming the issues are serious. Remember this review was initiated to address gross insinuations made by AfadsBad. --Epipelagic (talk) 09:52, 24 April 2014 (UTC)
 * By the way, I'm not positioning myself as some sort of Cwmhiraeth apologist or "supporter". My concern is that Cwmhiraeth, as a content builder who has put a lot of hard work into this project, is treated in a decent and fair way, and that if there are issues of real concern that these are established in a balanced and considered manner. --Epipelagic (talk) 10:10, 24 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Oh, it is quite clear that you aren't here out of any concern for Cwmhiraeth but only to attack others who do the actual work of checking his articles. That you have done little but vehemently attack "content builders who have put a lot of hard work into this project" along the way, just because they happen to be at the same time admins or memebers of Wikipediocracy, doesn't seem to bother you. All you have contributed are variations on "not enough", "not good enough", "need more evidence", "not convincing", "cherry-picked" (even when the reviewed articles are GAs and FAs, not bottom-of-the-barrel stubs) and when the amount of evidence became too much to shrug of that easily, "not selected by a statistically competent method". Feel free to present us such a "statistically selected" sample of her articles, and join in checking them. Fram (talk) 10:28, 24 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Actually I've twice commended the involvement of some admins on this issue. And yes, the methodology has been inadequate, "not good enough", as anyone with a scientific or statistical background would be aware. Can we focus on the issues please. --Epipelagic (talk) 10:50, 24 April 2014 (UTC)
 * The issues at hand? "All that has been clearly established is that there are some issues, mostly minor, with some of Cwmhiraeth's articles, and there are many issues with the methodology of her detractors."? All that has been clearly established is that there are serious issues with many, even the supposedly best, of Cwmhiraeth's articles, and that she seems too often incapable of understanding what is wrong with her edits even after it has been explained at length. Then there are some people claiming that the methodology of the detractors has "many" issues (what's your statistical or scientifc basis to claim this?), without providing a better alternative (a real alternative, not some hollow request for one). Fram (talk) 12:00, 24 April 2014 (UTC)


 * Quantitative evidence is one thing and this topic being discussed here. Qualitative evidence is something different. Snowman (talk) 09:55, 24 April 2014 (UTC)

To answer your questions Fram, you can read about alternative approaches in any textbook on experimental design. A manageable and statistically useful sample size would be decided in advance. The type of articles to be reviewed and some method of randomly selecting them would be agreed upon. AfadsBad already mentioned a suitable method, although the actual sampling should be performed by an uninvolved party. Finally benchmarks by error type which set "acceptable error rates" would ideally be in place. Establishing benchmarks would be a lot of work, but would also be of huge value. Apart from more objective editor reviews, it would be a means of establishing what is happening to accuracy on Wikipedia over time, and comparing Wikipedia with other encyclopedias. None of this stuff is in place here, and we do not even know what "acceptable error rates" would look like.

Below is a summary of what actually happened so you can see why this is a dysfunctional review. Please feel free to add anything I missed or amend any errors.... --Epipelagic (talk) 20:37, 24 April 2014 (UTC)

Summary
Cwmhiraeth listed on request twelve articles for review, eleven of which so far seem unproblematic. These were listed by Cwmhiraeth above, and are relisted here for convenience. --Epipelagic (talk) 20:37, 24 April 2014 (UTC) AfadsBad listed for review six articles.
 * Actually, three of these Glyptonotus antarcticus, Atlantic Puffin and Chameleon goby were listed by AfadsBad and not me. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 10:52, 25 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Formica incerta - Awaiting review.
 * Xyloplax turnerae - Awaiting review.
 * Adamussium - Awaiting review.
 * Cidaris cidaris - Reviewed as having issues by Fram
 * Glyptonotus antarcticus - Reviewed and approved by Cyclopia
 * Atlantic Puffin Cscr-featured.svg - Partially reviewed and approved by Cyclopia. Snowmanradio reported historical error in image caption (wrong location).
 * Chameleon goby - Awaiting review.
 * Gastrotrich - Partially reviewed and approved by Cyclopia
 * Red-cheeked salamander - Reviewed and approved by HCA
 * Eurasian Wryneck - Awaiting review.
 * Crocodylus novaeguineae - Reviewed and approved by HCA and Faendalimas
 * Amanita nivalis - Selected, reviewed and approved by Sasata
 * Ancylomenes pedersoni - Awaiting review
 * Termitotrox cupido - Awaiting review
 * Cyclosalpa bakeri - Awaiting review
 * Phormosoma placenta - Awaiting review
 * Halophila decipiens - Awaiting review
 * Birth - Awaiting further review. Two problems seen by Snowmanradio

Fourteen other articles have been reviewed.
 * Atriolum robustum - Reviewed as having an unreliable source issue by Fram and Cas Liber
 * Bivalvia Cscr-featured.svg - Reviewed by Invertzoo as having had a number of issues, now fixed by Invertzoo
 * Boring clam - Reviewed as having issues by AfadsBad, cyclopia and Andreas
 * Conopeum seurati - Reviewed as containing several errors by cyclopia and starship.paint
 * Desert - Reviewed as having issues by Andreas
 * Millepora alcicornis - Reviewed as containing several errors by cyclopia and Andreas
 * Natterer's bat - Reviewed as having issues by GRuban
 * Philaethria dido - Reviewed as having a paraphrasing issue by cyclopia and starship.paint
 * Poultry - Reviewed positively as "an astonishing demonstration of what can be done with crappy vital articles" by Binksternet
 * Pteria sterna - Reviewed as containing several errors by Fram, cyclopia and others
 * Salt - Historical issues. Awaiting review of current article
 * Sea Cscr-featured.svg- Historical issues. Awaiting review of current article
 * Sugar - Reviewed as having an unreliable medical section by Snowmanradio
 * Tropaeolum - Reviewed as containing several errors by Fram, cyclopia and others

The articles that are marked as "awaiting review" are probably generally okay, since a number of reviewers must have cast their eyes over them by now and have not reported issues.

We are told that Cwmhiraeth has written or expanded 1300 articles. So let's sum this up so far. Out of 1300 articles, 32 have been submitted for review on this page. Of these 12 appear to have current issues. However, no procedures were used to establish in advance which articles were to be reviewed. Consequently, we do not know how many other articles have been examined and not brought to review because no issues were found. Perhaps all 1300 article were examined, and 12 were found to be problematic. We simply do not know. Hence it is impossible to determine, from the review as it stands, what proportion of Cwmhiraeth's articles are problematic.

All that has been established is that there are issues. Even if we did know what proportion of articles have issues, we don't have any benchmarks or yardsticks that can then enable us to decide how serious the errors are and whether a given error rate is acceptable or not. Instead, each editor is free to roll their own idea of what is acceptable. This is another face of the anarchy that makes debate so difficult on Wikipedia, and results in tedious and unnecessary drama. --Epipelagic (talk) 20:37, 24 April 2014 (UTC)
 * As you've asked for errors to be amended, I've struck through one. —  Scott  •  talk  22:03, 24 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Thank you Scott. I've unstruck the text because it's not an error. This is a key issue where you have already demonstrated you are confused. --Epipelagic (talk) 22:25, 24 April 2014 (UTC)
 * I'm not going to feed you any more, troll. —  Scott  •  talk  23:12, 24 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Troll? Who are you talking to? --Epipelagic (talk) 23:43, 24 April 2014 (UTC)


 * To me it is obvious that implying 1300 articles have could have been reviewed is inappropriate. I think that there is enough qualitative evidence in this editor review to indicate that User Cwm is prone to making errors on the Wiki. Snowman (talk) 22:42, 24 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Of course it is unlikely. The point is that the methodology was so defective that that extreme possibility cannot be ruled out. I've already agreed below that, despite the defective methodology, Cwmhiraeth seems error prone. --Epipelagic (talk) 22:57, 24 April 2014 (UTC)
 * It is so unlikely, it is a vanishingly small possibility. There is also qualitative evidence about the nature of the errors. To me many of User Cwm's errors would seem to be avoidable by taking more time and less short cuts. Snowman (talk) 23:17, 24 April 2014 (UTC)

I've corrected the above list somewhat. Only indicating which approved articles are GA and FA, and not which of the reviewed and problematic articles are in those classes, gives a slightly biased impression. Probably just a coincidence of course... Fram (talk) 06:40, 25 April 2014 (UTC)

And what to do now?
We could keep arguing forever about how serious or not the errors are in Cwmhiraeth's work and/or we could spend days or weeks trying to work out the best way to try to do a statistical analysis of her work, and trying to figure out who could be trusted to do the analysis, and in which content areas they might be expert enough to be able to judge what is OK and not OK, etc. I would say that in general the errors are not very serious, however in the articles I have looked at there seem to be one or more small (but fairly obvious to an expert) problems. Most of these look as if they were caused by hasty paraphrasing or not taking enough time to think carefully about the content of sources before entering info into the article. The problems I saw in her work a year or two ago were not quite serious enough for me to feel I had to tackle her on the question. So I don't think she should be "punished" for her carelessness, as we all have made a few similar errors over time. I do feel it is worth asking her to try to slow down and be more careful in considering the nature of info before adding it. I also feel rather strongly that paraphrasing is a slippery slope and that re-writing material from scratch is a safer way to add content. She knows she is under scrutiny now and we can check to see how she is doing. I am not sure that we need to do anything more formal than that. Invertzoo (talk) 17:55, 24 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Second that. FunkMonk (talk) 18:11, 24 April 2014 (UTC)
 * I agree also. Cwmhiraeth has acknowledged she should take extra care when paraphrasing and to ensure her sources are always reliable, and has agreed to liaise more with others on technical topics. Though there's a rub. Waiting for experts on a given topic to turn up on Wikipedia is like waiting for Godot. Cwmhiraeth is also, in the interests of balance, to be commended for the volume of her work that is well done. --Epipelagic (talk) 20:59, 24 April 2014 (UTC)
 * The various WikiProjects are a good place for anyone to attempt to find an editor who might be considered to be at least somewhat "expert". And yes Cwmhiraeth should definitely be commended for creating so much content that is good. Invertzoo (talk) 00:11, 25 April 2014 (UTC)
 * It seems to me that this editor review has enough qualitative evidence to indicate that User Cwm is prone to making certain types of errors. Snowman (talk) 09:15, 25 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Liaison is not about "waiting for experts to turn up", it is an active communication with relevant people. Actually, I would say that some of User Cwm's errors are serious and multiple historical examples can be seen in the "Sea" article, when it was at GA. I would agree that errors can be fairly easy for an expert to notice, and of course the errors that an individual will notice will tend to be in their own discipline. I think this is what can make the errors pernicious, because a general reader would not necessarily identify errors and could become misinformed or puzzled. Snowman (talk) 21:59, 24 April 2014 (UTC)
 * This complaint is an iteration of a general criticism that has been leveled at all of Wikipedia's content since it began. But over time Wikipedia is actually self-correcting; that is one of its greatest strengths. Correcting various errors of content is something that most of us are actively doing during a significant portion of our time here. Invertzoo (talk) 00:11, 25 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Nevertheless, this editor review has focused on one user and not the entire history of the Wikipedia. Snowman (talk) 07:54, 25 April 2014 (UTC)
 * The self-correcting part applies on both scales however. Invertzoo (talk) 13:51, 25 April 2014 (UTC)
 * This review provides examples of errors that have persisted into GAs, so clearly these errors were not corrected by GA review processes. Snowman (talk) 20:52, 25 April 2014 (UTC)
 * True, but that does not mean those errors will not subsequently be corrected when a more expert person reads the article and edits it. The kind of errors that Cwmhiraeth tends to make are often ones that can be very tough to spot unless you know the topic of the article well. What she says often looks plausible enough, and superficially seems to be well-referenced. Even if you know the subject matter reasonably well, I have found that trying to find the relevant sentences in the original and compare them with what she has written can sometimes be very time-consuming and require a lot of careful searching. Invertzoo (talk) 17:47, 27 April 2014 (UTC)

I wonder if User Cwm would gain anything from participating in a number of FAC reviews (not simultaneously). She might gain a more critical approach when looking at her own editing. Snowman (talk) 23:44, 27 April 2014 (UTC)

I have made a few edits to the birth article, and I am hoping to start a collaboration to expand the "Birth" article; see also my comment of 26 April 2014. My invitation extends to any interested editors, and I would anticipate that the collaboration would use the main page and the article's talk page in the usual way. I am interested in the basic science of a few sections of the article relating to mammals, but I am not a vet nor a zoologist, so I think that my participation could be somewhat minor. Note that I am not offering a "tutorial" nor "teaching". Snowman (talk) 09:54, 29 April 2014 (UTC)

A suggestion for what to do

 * I don't think she should be "punished" for her carelessness Requiring someone to stop screwing up is not punishment. If Cwmhiraeth is unable to improve her editing, and even more, if she is unable or unwilling to admit that there is a fundamental problem with her approach to paraphrasing - she should be required to cease editing until she does, rather than continuing to subject our credibility to the death of a thousand cuts. —  Scott  •  talk  14:49, 26 April 2014 (UTC)


 * Are you talking about a temporary block? Invertzoo (talk) 16:21, 26 April 2014 (UTC)


 * Nothing so harsh. I was thinking of a period of mandatory mentorship (i.e. no unaccompanied science article work) until the issue with paraphrasing is ironed out, that's all. —  Scott  •  talk  14:10, 27 April 2014 (UTC)


 * I am attempting mentoring right now on two draft articles she is working on. I agree that this suggestion on your part is a pretty good one, Scott. Invertzoo (talk) 17:47, 27 April 2014 (UTC)


 * Cwmhiraeth is criticised when she works from sources and so has to deviate from them to avoid close paraphrase. To avoid this difficulty, she might try working as Scott does in his article surgical tape — doing without sources altogether.  It would be difficult to get such work through any review process but it might be a useful exercise to produce a first draft from memory in this way, so that the language used is Cwmhiraeth's own and it flows in a natural way.  This was, I suppose, the original idea of Wikipedia and the fussy business of in-line citations came later.  Andrew (talk) 19:34, 26 April 2014 (UTC)
 * *golf clap* The award for pettiest comment in this discussion goes to you, in attempting to use a three-sentence stub I created in 2005 and never touched again as some kind of point-scoring device. That's truly pathetic. —  Scott  •  talk  14:14, 27 April 2014 (UTC)


 * I don't know whether or not you were trying to be snide, Andrew, but actually I think that is a good idea. If one first tries to write an account of something, without tying it to sources, one will discover if one really understands the topic or not. I feel it is essential to try to understand a topic quite well, before writing about it, not go ahead with composing a piece by proceeding from ignorance, and build the article like a wall, brick by brick, as you acquire one fact after another. I just feel the brick by brick approach is not an appropriate technique and will inevitably lead to problems. Invertzoo (talk) 17:47, 27 April 2014 (UTC)


 * As elsewhere in this review and the ANI which preceded it, Scott seems confused about what is actually going on. If he had done his homework he would know that Cwmhiraeth has clearly indicated in many places that that she is aware of problems with paraphrasing and is actively working on them. --Epipelagic (talk) 21:13, 26 April 2014 (UTC)


 * I am currently attempting to tutor Cwmhiraeth as she builds two articles in user space. We will see how that goes. As I said at the bottom of the page. I would be grateful if someone with the right skills and personality would like to help with this process. As to whether or not she should be restricted to doing only this kind of supervised editing for a period of time, I will see what others think about that idea. Invertzoo (talk) 17:47, 27 April 2014 (UTC)

About the WikiCup
Just in case the judges of the 2014 are not aware of this editor review, I have notified the three judges and invited them to participate especially with regard to discussion about the WikiCup. Note that User Cwm plans to continue competing in the 2014 WikiCup, as far as I am aware from her comments above. Snowman (talk) 21:59, 24 April 2014 (UTC)
 * I think that I have done the responsible thing to inform the three judges of this editor review. If the judges do not want to participate here, then perhaps that is understandable, so do not expect too much. Snowman (talk) 22:53, 24 April 2014 (UTC)

Actually I already informed all three of the judges yesterday morning. But let me repeat: I think the thing to do now is to stop the discussion of how serious (or not) all the various errors are, or were, and start talking about how we should proceed from here. I have already given my opinion about that at the top of this section, as have FunkMonk, and Epipelagic, who seem to agree with me, more or less. If others have suggestions as to what to do now, they might want to go ahead and give a carefully considered and realistic suggestion. Invertzoo (talk) 00:11, 25 April 2014 (UTC)
 * It seems that myself, User JohnCD and User Invertzoo have all independently alerted the WikiCup judges that this editor review in in progress; although, I was the first to provide feedback here. A number of reviewers have indicated a concern that participating in the WikiCup could have had an adverse influence on User Cwm's mode of editing. In addition, the WikiCup bonus points scheme appears to have steered User Cwm towards some "big topic" articles, some of which are discussed above. User Cwm has denied the possibility of rushing her edits in the WikiCup saying that a lot of her points were awarded by the bonus point scheme. It is appropriate that the WikiCup judges are fully aware of this editor review. Snowman (talk) 08:43, 25 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Thank you both for letting us know. We will need to discuss this and come back to you. Miyagawa (talk) 12:09, 25 April 2014 (UTC)


 * Although it is tempting to assume that competing in the WikiCup is what is responsible for Cwmhiraeth's approach to adding content (which looks superficially as if it is a result of rushing towards a deadline), I think we must consider the possibility that she might have developed these ways of editing quite early on in her Wiki work, and the fact that she could put together something rapidly simply predisposed her to assume she could probably do well in the Cup, which she won in 2012. I think it is probably rather easy for someone to think, when they approach Wikipedia as an editor, that all they need to do is provide plenty of references, and steer clear of copyright problems by never copying text verbatim. No-one actually holds your hand here and coaches you in the finer points of what you should or should not do over the first year or two of your editing on Wikipedia. Cwmhiraeth obviously learned how to edit pretty well, and how to put together a GA and FA, and no-one ever called her on the more subtle issues, as her articles look just fine if you are not an expert on that topic. She also learned strategy -- how to rack up points in the Cup by creating a lot of DYKs and focusing on articles that could be raised to GA or FA. I know it is tempting to want to "assign blame", either to the editor herself, or to the Cup, or some other one single factor, but I think real life is hardly ever like that; most unfortunate events arise due to a whole constellation of influences. And as I said, rather than assigning blame, we need to be concentrating on what we should do now. For example, I am prepared to work with Cwmhiraeth to teach her the additional skills she needs in order to become a really top-rank contributor. She is more than half-way there already.  Invertzoo (talk) 13:51, 25 April 2014 (UTC)


 * It is appropriate that this Editor Review has informed the WikiCup judges that some concerns relevant to the WikiCup have been expressed here. Of course, individuals can make suggestions about the WikiCup here; nevertheless, I think that it is not necessarily the role of this editor review to micromanage the WikiCup. I think that it is the role of the judges of the WikiCup to manage and adjudicate the WikiCup. It is possible that the judges may wish to liaise with a number of interested parties and stakeholders. Any comments? Snowman (talk) 08:53, 28 April 2014 (UTC)

Teaching?
I am currently trying to work with Cwmhiraeth, slowly, on two new drafts to try to see exactly where and how the problems creep in, and what can be done about it in terms of pointing out what she has to watch out for. I am trying to see if she can pick up some more careful techniques in extracting info from sources. I think perhaps that the effort to avoid duplicating exact phraseology has led her to make excessively large leaps of faith in creating new prose. And, I feel that with writing for Wikipedia, it is essential to make sure you properly understand the whole topic of your new article before you start to try to extract info about it from sources -- one can't assume that one will pick up sufficient understanding "on the fly". Invertzoo (talk) 20:35, 26 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Another point: I acknowledge that I have a tendency to add explanatory phrases like "for protection" when describing how a shrimp has a mutualistic arrangement with a sea anemone among whose tentacles it lives. It is clearly true (to me anyway) that it does this at least partly for protection against predators but this may not be stated in the source. Now I know that this fault comes under the heading "original research", I can do my best to avoid making similar mistakes. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:28, 27 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Yes... one has to be very careful about how one interprets any term or phrase in a source -- and yes, this can easily expand into OR. In science one has to be extremely careful not to step outside the boundaries of what has actually been stated in an original paper, into what "seems to be implied". Therefore, for example, "living in sand" is not the same thing as "living below the surface of the sand". Invertzoo (talk) 13:38, 27 April 2014 (UTC)


 * You know, I've got to say that Cwmhiraeth has a point - I frequently run across reviews where reviewers are asking us to explain things in simple layperson's terms. We do have to remember that wikipedia is written for general audiences, not specialist audiences. Yes, we should source everything.  However, there is also the blatently obvious per WP:POPE.  Montanabw (talk) 08:43, 27 April 2014 (UTC)

Looking for an additional tutor
Is there perhaps one other person who would like to help simultaneously with this tutoring process? It would be good to have one additional person working on this, but it needs to be someone who is patient, and knows how to be supportive when pointing out things that should be improved, as well as explaining clearly and exactly why and how things should be fixed, and also, of course, how to try to avoid these things happening in the first place. This process is not at all easy. It intended to be a teaching and learning experience, not just simply going in and fixing stuff. Is there anyone who believes that they have the necessary skills and personality for this kind of work? Please let me know. Invertzoo (talk) 13:32, 27 April 2014 (UTC)


 * Re User:Cwmhiraeth/Species. Is this one of the teaching pages? I note that there are two contributors in the edit history. You will not be able to copy and paste this to a new location unless an administrator fixes the edit history. If you move it you will get loads of older edits moved with the edits concerned with the construction of the page, and again an administrator will need to fix the edit history. I would suggest joint work on a sub-page of the article's talk page (even prior to the article being created in the main space) and perhaps you could inform interested editors. Alternatively, I think there is a suffix that can be put before new articles, but I am in a hurry now and I have not got time to look for it. How has tutoring been done before? Snowman (talk) 17:25, 27 April 2014 (UTC)


 * I do not know if this kind of remedial tutoring has been done before, or whether there are guidelines as to how and where to do it. And yes, that is one page, and there is a second similar one. Some of the more general aspects of this tutoring are currently happening on my talk page. If there is a better way of doing this, then good, I am happy to hear about it. Right now it is an experiment -- I am just trying out this tutoring process in order to see if I can make it work between the two of us or not. I do not anticipate moving the drafts into article space for quite a long time and would ask others for input before doing so. Invertzoo (talk) 18:01, 27 April 2014 (UTC)
 * You might get some ideas from the help desk about tutoring and you might not need to reinvent the wheel. I do not think I would call it an experiment. I would call it a mutually agreed voluntary arrangement, but I might be wrong. May I ask if you have you got any qualifications in tutoring/teaching in real life? Also, please reply explaining how you are going to retain the edit history and hence attribution (an legal requirement for creative commons copyright) of the new articles. Snowman (talk) 23:38, 27 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Attribution is no big deal. Based on Copying within Wikipedia, all that's needed when transferring content from sandbox to article space is an edit summary along the lines of "text originally contributed by User:Cwmhiraeth and User:Invertzoo".  Adrian J. Hunter(talk•contribs) 00:58, 28 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Is that adequate to indicate which parts she contributed and which parts you contributed? Which section are you looking at on that page? Snowman (talk) 01:11, 28 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Copying_within_Wikipedia. Based on a list of all authors ... satisfies the licensing requirements if properly done, identifiying which author contributed which parts is not a licensing requirement.  Reusing Wikipedia content also supports that.  (It would be handy for the edit summary to include a wikilink to Cwmhiraeth's sandbox, though, for the benefit of anyone who did want to figure this out.)  Note it's Invertzoo, not me, who would be tutoring. Adrian J. Hunter(talk•contribs) 01:30, 28 April 2014 (UTC)
 * I see, I did not know that. Snowman (talk) 01:51, 28 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Nevertheless, I think that it would be much better for the new texts to be moved with the full edit history for transparent accreditation, which viewers are familiar with. Making new articles in the main space with the title in the format "Draft:Article name abc" would mean that it could easily be moved to it final position together with the edit history; see Drafts. Snowman (talk) 07:33, 28 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Frankly, as far as I am concerned, Cwmhiraeth is a saint. You two are so condescending and patronizing here that I'd just go puke in the bushes if I was in her shoes. That said, Invertzoo, you are not being this way elsewhere, I guess you are working on articles, and not just lobbing grenades, though your tone here is that of a grandparent talking to a 2-year old and if you tried it on me, I'd have to really resist the urge to slap you silly. But Snowman, given your issues discussed above on the "birth" article, where you inserted language not used in the sources cited, I think you need to step out of this discussion altogether, because you are clearly at about the same level of understanding on these topics as a college undergraduate of some sort, so really, before you criticize Cwmhiraeth for the mote in her eye, you really need to see the log in your own eye.    Montanabw (talk) 00:10, 28 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Is User Montanabw really talking about the word change I made from "vulva" to "introitus" in the birth article? if so, I think that it is a shame that User Montanabw does not know any better. Snowman (talk) 01:11, 28 April 2014 (UTC)
 * User Montanabw has noticed a mote (cookie grain) and a log. Snowman (talk) 01:19, 28 April 2014 (UTC)
 * You failed to review the sources cited, each of which specifically stated "vulva" and used it in the context of what an observer would view during an impending birth of an animal. Introitus is a slightly different term, and needed different sourcing if you wanted to use is. If you can't follow cited sources, you are engaging in WP:SYNTH as surely as anything you have accused Cwmhiraeth of doing. Your glass house is cracking and it is time to take this discussion elsewhere.   Montanabw (talk) 01:26, 28 April 2014 (UTC)
 * "Introitus" is a word commonly used in obstetrics to mean "vaginal introitus", and I had no idea anyone would have a problem with it. Perhaps, people are making a mountain out of it. Actually, I think that my change did not significantly alter the meaning given in the source. See File:Blue Wildebeest-001.jpg, where the introitus of a wildebeest is apparent. I can not really think of any circumstances when the introitus would not be apparent when the vulval zone was being inspected during the birth of a calf or dog. Is User Montanabw barking up the wrong tree? Snowman (talk) 01:46, 28 April 2014 (UTC)


 * While I would not object to having another tutor, I wonder who would want to volunteer? If there was any perceived error in an article written by me that slipped through into mainspace, the mentor would risk being ridiculed by AfadsBad in the Wikipediocracy forum or on her blog. AfadsBad seems to have chickened-out of this review process, prejudged the results and started up blogging again, with me once again as her principle target. Do you not think AfadsBad is a bit obsessive? Her apparent hate for me seems to have warped her mind and she is not beyond using lies, half truths and exaggeration to make her points. Welcome to the World of Harassment. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:18, 28 April 2014 (UTC)
 * I don't think you understand what the word harassment means. —  Scott  •  talk  13:23, 28 April 2014 (UTC)

Here are two of several barnstars awarded to me by Invertzoo over the years. She seemed happy enough with my work then: Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:10, 30 April 2014 (UTC)

Still looking for an additional tutor
Can I suggest once again that people cease with the bickering, complaining, sniping, and ridiculing on here -- it is extremely counterproductive. To be honest, it also demeans the people who are doing it more than it demeans those who are being targeted. Yes I am a qualified teacher and I have done a great deal of tutoring in my life too. And yes, I am certainly old enough to be a grandmother or even a great grandmother, so if I talk like one, maybe it is not surprising. It's extremely easy to bitch and moan about things, but let's see who can actually do something to help build an encyclopedia. Who wants to do something useful? Any volunteers? Or is that not what we are here for? Invertzoo (talk) 23:33, 28 April 2014 (UTC)


 * I gather that Cwmhiraeth is quite mature too and folk wisdom tells us not to teach grandmother to suck eggs. While veteran editors may still have things to learn, they are more suited to the role of mentor than mentee as there are many more editors operating at a lower level.  For example, when patrolling Article for Deletion just now, I noticed that there's a new article about workplace mentoring nominated for deletion there.  As I'd just been reading Invertzoo's call for an additional tutor, this seemed remarkably ironic.  Both the new editor who created that article and the new page patroller seem to be in more need of instruction than Cwmhiraeth.  It would be better for both of you to be giving grandmotherly advice to these editors than continuing to agonize over this review. Andrew (talk) 10:00, 29 April 2014 (UTC)


 * Pretty much my view as well, Andrew, this thing has gone on long enough and frankly, any of us who have been writing for wikipedia for awhile are always able to reach out to capable editors to ask for their views and reviews, and I am sure after this debacle, Cwmhiraeth has a pool of folks she can call upon who will act in good faith to give things a second look. I see no particular need to give Cwmiraeth "remedial tutoring," in fact, I think it's insulting, any errors she might make are easily enough corrected by normal review.  After this inquisition, I suspect she is going to seek outside reviews quite often anyway, if she doesn't, she will be subject to another round of hounding and harassment from the mob. Cwmhiraeth, I'm not a biologist, but if you ever want to ping me for a copyedit or a way to say something but not have a close paraphrase, I'd be more than glad to grab a handy thesaurus and trot over to take a peek at something.  ;-)   Montanabw (talk) 06:49, 30 April 2014 (UTC)

Let's examine the evidence before reaching a conclusion
It is a month now since this editor review was started and a week since those involved started considering what should be done next. I am keen that a conclusion is reached before long and the editor review closed. However the discussions of the past week have rather prejudged the matter and I am going to summarise what an unbiased outsider might conclude from the evidence provided during this review. First I look at the evidence and then provide a "Verdict" subsection in which there are four questions. I have answered the first three but leave the last question unanswered in the hope that those of you ready to look at the evidence dispassionately will provide an answer. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 09:45, 29 April 2014 (UTC)
 * I'm disappointed with the lack of responses to this request so I am pinging a few people.                  Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:29, 30 April 2014 (UTC)

Examining the evidence (by User Cwmhiraeth)
Summary above added by Cwmhiraeth (talk) - Currently this section reads as if the statements above have been made by an editor who isnt the subject of the review. Especially when followed by Fram's comment below. Only in death does duty end (talk) 18:41, 29 April 2014 (UTC)
 * 1) This review concerns the competence of Cwmhiraeth to write or make contributions to scientific articles, editor AfadsBad (the accuser) having asserted that there are "multiple mistakes in [her] every article" and that "every one of these articles needs [to be] extensively rewritten to be accurate."
 * 2) A figure of 1300 articles written by Cwmhiraeth has been mentioned. It is not clear where this number originated nor what precisely it includes but it can be used as a working total for the purposes of this conclusion. During the editor review, no attempt has been made to review all these 1300 articles.
 * 3) Although sampling has been mentioned, During the editor review, no attempt has been made to review a random sample of the 1300 articles in order to come to a statistically significant conclusion.
 * 4) 11 articles were submitted as evidence by Cwmhiraeth and the accuser. Some of these articles had been through a review process as part of becoming an FA (Atlantic Puffin) or a GA (Adamussium, Eurasian Wryneck, Gastrotrich).  Each of these 4 articles was judged to reach the required standards for promotion to FA or GA.
 * 5) Of the 11 articles submitted as evidence during this editor review,  3 were reviewed and found satisfactory, 2 were partially reviewed and found satisfactory, 1 was reviewed and found unsatisfactory and 5 remain unreviewed.
 * 6) Certain uninvolved editors with expertise in their fields reviewed 3 articles (Crocodylus novaeguineae, Red-cheeked salamander, Amanita nivalis). These articles were judged to be satisfactory overall (1 error was observed and corrected in one of the articles). (There is overlap between these articles and the ones mentioned in #5.)
 * 7) One section of the GA article Desert was criticised and Cwmhiraeth acknowledged its faults, mainly caused by her relying on an unreliable source.
 * 8) Boring clam, an article in the course of expansion, was mainly criticised because the animal's shell was described as being oval when the source did not state this. Cwmhiraeth asserted that the article should not have been reviewed in its unfinished state.
 * 9) The GA Millepora alcicornis was criticised and some small alterations were made to the article. A disputed tag was added to the article but the talk page gave no details of what was disputed though it did link to this page.
 * 10) Pteria sterna was criticised for muddling two species mentioned in a source and for other inaccuracies. Cwmhiraeth acknowledged that the article was bad.
 * 11) Conopeum seurati was mainly criticised for the fact that Cwmhiraeth had made the assumption that the "spherical colony" mentioned in the source was "unattached" to the substrate.
 * 12) Philaethria dido was at first criticised for faults made by a previous editor, criticisms which were later withdrawn. Cwmhiraeth explained that this butterfly species was about to be featured as "Today's featured picture" and she had endeavoured to expand the stub article a little in case viewers of the picture clicked the link to the article.
 * 13) Cidaris cidaris was criticised for having the dimensions of the sea urchin incorrect. Cwmhiraeth did not comment because although she had investigated, she had been unable to discover where the figure she had included in the article had come from.
 * 14) The history section of the GA Tropaeolum was criticised on the grounds of inaccuracy. Cwmhiraeth examined the source involved, a book by the RHS in her possession, and acknowledged that she may have incorrectly summarized the source material.
 * 15) The FA Sea was criticised for certain scientific errors which were corrected as part of the FAC process.
 * 16) The GAs Salt and Sugar were criticised mainly on the grounds of the medical aspects of consumption. Cwmhiraeth had not realised that the medical aspects were so important in such generalised topics and had not hunted out the latest research findings.
 * 17) A Nature study of December 2005  reviewed 42 hard sciences articles and found an average of around 4 errors per article.
 * 18) During the course of the review, several editors made statements in support of Cwmhiraeth's competence and a smaller number made statements on her incompetence. It is not apparent that these editors had reviewed any specific articles and therefore when coming to a conclusion on Cwmhiraeth's competence their views should not be given too much weight. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 09:45, 29 April 2014


 * "# The history section of the GA Tropaeolum was criticised on the grounds of inaccuracy. Cwmhiraeth examined the source involved, a book by the RHS in her possession, and acknowledged that she may have incorrectly summarized the source material." That may be what you acknowledged, but not what you did. You fabricated material out of thin air to satisfy a request by a GA reviewer. There was no "summarizing" in that aspect, no source said anything even remotely resembling what yuo stated. The second part you got wrong there, the confusion you had between something being named X vs being described as X, is perhaps what you had in mind, and was a rather serious error as well. But the 18th century introduction thing was much worse. Fram (talk) 10:07, 29 April 2014 (UTC)

Verdict (by User Cwmhiraeth)

 * 1) Has the assertion that there are "multiple mistakes in [Cwmhiraeth's] every article" been made out? No.
 * 2) Has the assertion that "every one of these articles needs [to be] extensively rewritten to be accurate" been made out? No.
 * 3) Has Cwmhiraeth made errors while writing articles? Yes.
 * 4) Have the errors Cwmhiraeth has made while writing articles been sufficiently serious and systemic that any further actions need to be taken as a result of this review of her contributions? ? Cwmhiraeth (talk) 09:45, 29 April 2014 (UTC)


 * I think that it would be interesting to hear what User Cwmhiraeth would think is an appropriate answer to point four, as part of her summary of the editor review so far. Currently she has put an emboldened question mark as the answer. Snowman (talk) 10:14, 29 April 2014 (UTC)
 * This is a difficult one - in the spirit of collaborative editing I would prefer that we engage in a collaborative approach in the first instance. I am thinking a three month period where Cwmhiraeth keeps a log of articles worked on, which would include articles that she has previously worked on that others find mistakes in, and prioritises fixing them and understanding/learning from errors made. I recommend all articles improved go through some form of review (peer review/GA/FA/DYK) and that reviewers are thorough. I don't think this is unreasonable (I try to get all my work reviewed so it would be something I'd do as a matter of course). This can be reviewed at that point and conclusions drawn. I have seen enough errors to make me uneasy to date but I admire Cwmhiraeth's enthusiasm and hope she can rise above this.  Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 10:22, 30 April 2014 (UTC)
 * I would be happy to work along the lines suggested by Casliber and am also continuing to work with Invertzoo. I have learnt a lot about my editing skills, or lack of them, during this review and see that I must slow down a bit, make sure my sources are reliable and that I have adhered strictly to the sources. I wrote an article Aleurodicus dispersus a few days ago which will be reviewed at DYK some time soon. Take a look and see whether you think it is satisfactory. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 12:29, 30 April 2014 (UTC)
 * I'll take a look soon. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 01:01, 1 May 2014 (UTC)
 * I admire User Cwm's determination. I have looked at the instructions for reviewers at Editor review, which says what an editor review is about. I far as I can tell, it not within the remit of an editor review to adjudicate on any dispute happening on this Wikipedia or elsewhere, and I do not see the appropriate apparatus on this page to adjudicate. As far as I am aware, the tutoring/mentoring exercise that started during this editor review is a mutually agreed voluntary arrangement between two Wikipedians and is not subject to any formal request of this editor review. What I think is humbling and interesting to me as a reviewer is how different people respond differently to her work: some people can give praise for the volume of work, some people may see a few errors as minor issues, experts can see errors as diabolical, some people may start a blog, and so on. Everyone is different. I think that everyone could be humbled from seeing the wide range of responses. Without making any conclusions, I note that User Cwm is planning to write more slowly and has replied positively to an organized approach for collecting feedback on her editing over the next three months. Without making any judgements, may I request blogs are closed down (deleted) within the next seven days and that bloggers liaise with Wikipedians on the Wikipedia.  Snowman (talk) 00:24, 1 May 2014 (UTC)

More from Jim
I saw the ping above. I restate my views
 * I have had no concerns with Cwmhireath as an editor in the areas where I have seen her edits, which include jointly writing an FA
 * A complaint about unpleasant and persistent harassment by User:AfadsBad, which looked well-founded, has been perverted into a show trial of the victim
 * Everyone makes errors, but this process started on the basis of made-up "evidence" (3000 bad edits, Wikipedia's worse vandal). When will we see the list of the 3000 bad edits?
 * This attack on the victim was orchestrated by an off-Wikipedia cabal to protect their mate. Shamefully, the gang includes an admin User:Scott. Incidentally, you can see why they keep discussion off Wikipedia, they don't like |to talk in the daylight <b style="font-family:chiller; color:red;"> Jimfbleak - </b> talk to me?  05:55, 30 April 2014 (UTC)
 * No, I just choose not to indulge histrionic claptrap on my talk page. —  Scott  •  talk  09:45, 30 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Why is this still dragging on? <b style="font-family:chiller; color:red;"> Jimfbleak - </b> talk to me?  05:55, 30 April 2014 (UTC)

More from Montanabw
Yes, Somebody close this thing and end it. Montanabw (talk) 06:30, 30 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Verdict: NOT GUILTY
 * As Jim stated above, this started out as a very legitimate complaint by Cwmhiraeth about off-wiki bullying and on-wiki harassment. Instead of becoming a disciplinary action against that editor, it turned into a mob scene attacking Cwmhiraeth's worth as a wikipedia editor.
 * A small group of people joined in a vicious dogpile along with the original harassing editor and would not let up for any reason, often nitpicking totally inane things.  I was, frankly, shocked at the vitriol that was permitted. Where on earth were the rest of the admins on this?
 * A few legitimate errors were found. They were fixed.  Cwmhiraeth expressed willingness to correct any legitimate errors
 * Most other complaints were unverified by any diffs or evidence. The chief accuser failed to produce actual evidence
 * Cwmhiraeth behaved with surprising grace throughout. Though asked to fall on her sword by her accusers, she appropriately did not, she asked reasonable questions, sought clarification of the concerns raised, and defended herself and her actions in a reasonable way.
 * Several of the most vitriolic rants were over issues of style, not content.
 * As far as I can tell, while several more or less neutral editors have done some article reviews and small corrections, few who had any criticisms of Cwmhiraeth actually have done any real work in fixing the things they are complaining about.
 * In one situation where I was alerted via a wikiproject post to look at an article for errors, I found that the editor who was questioning Cwmhiraeth was "fixing" the material in question to say something other than what the cited source stated, SYNTH at best, OR quite possibly. Not a huge deal except that this individual was also being highly critical of Cwmhiraeth.  Illogical.
 * Frankly, this whole situation gives me the chills. What Lord of the Flies realm has Wikipedia become that a small clique (not even a cabal, really) was allowed to engage in hounding a good faith editor and engaging in a vendetta over issues and errors that were, in the cosmic scheme of things, relatively minor, and some not even clearly attributable to Cwmhiraeth. A few of the people in this clique appear to be obsessed with harassing Cwmhiraeth and she is to be commented for not just quitting wikipedia entirely.  Kudos to her for courage under pressure.

Add from Olive
Cwmhiraeth has decided to take steps to have her work reviewed for a while and I think that's not only fine, but good. I see that as an intelligent action any of us could take at any time to improve our editing /writing skills. Everything else I have to say I've said earlier and have no desire to say more, beating a dead cow. Given Montana's (above) area of expertise I figured dead horse would be in poor taste...:O)(Littleolive oil (talk) 14:57, 30 April 2014 (UTC))

More from Epipelagic
The Wikipedia tradition is to hang content builders out to dry when it comes to issues of substance like this one. I'm reluctant to spend more time here, because there is little community will, and certainly little will within the admin community to deal with matters like this in a professional and balanced manner. Little more is offered than individual whim by admins who are supposed to "have clue". But as we see everywhere, including in this review and in the ANI which preceded it, some admins have no clue at all. There are no guidelines such as a constitution or mission statements for admins and content builders to follow on Wikipedia, just the anarchy and clash of ad hoc opinions. In the past I have made statement like the one I'm making right now in an attempt to sting admins and the wider community into responsible involvement. But little that is useful ever happens, and there is no reason to think anything useful will happen here. As Montanabw said earlier, you need to be a saint to function as a non admin content builder on Wikipedia. I'll award you a special barnstar of saintliness if you like Cwmhireath, but it's just tinsel. Your predicament cannot be properly addressed unless the review is restarted with an appropriate sample of articles agreed upon in advance, as set out above. Even then the results of such a review will be have little meaning unless benchmarks concerning article problems have been established. Any responsible admin system would ensure that appropriate procedures like these are followed. But the necessary professionalism and will seems absent within the admin community. Comments like these are now a tired liturgy I have chanted with monotonous regularly around Wikipedia. But it falls on barren ground. That's just how it is on Wikipedia, a playground for admins and a graveyard for the content builders. Yes, just close this mess. --Epipelagic (talk) 06:52, 30 April 2014 (UTC)

More from FunkMonk
Nothing has really changed since my last comments on this issue. A few actual problems with articles were pointed out during this process, the rest was nitpicking over trivialities. Nothing at all like what was implied by the Wikiocracy gang. Cwmhireath cooperated with reviewers throughout the process, and that's how this place should work. I am sure if any other FA writer was reviewed this way, plenty of similar issues would be brought up. Cwmhireath was just unlucky enough to have a weirdly obsessed blogger latch onto her for some reason. Perhaps because Cwmhiraeth's work is spread over a larger variety of subjects (which makes her work more traceable and noticeable to bystanders), whereas many other writers almost solely work within a somewhat narrow field. AfadsBad will likely keep complaining about this on her blog, and try to disrupt further, instead of actually helping out in a civilised manner. There were some legitimate concerns from users, and people like Snowman were able to present these in a civilised way. But people like AfadsBad and Scott wasted more space on ridiculous attacks than actual suggestions for Cwmhireath to follow. They've managed to pepper almost every single one of their comments with snide remarks and lack of good faith throughout. This makes Scott a very bad example for other editors, and therefore not fit for adminship. Civility is after all one of the "five pillars" of Wikipedia. Close this, Cwmhiraeth has already acted on all the criticism. FunkMonk (talk) 09:39, 30 April 2014 (UTC)

Boring claims
Not guilty, I totally agree.

The case made against Cwmhiraeth by AfadsBad has not even remotely been substantiated. Even where problems with articles have been identified it has not been clear that Cwmhiraeth is the sole editor at fault, so it is unfair to single her out. If one considers the balance of her enormous input to Wikipedia against a relatively trivial number of errors then  her contribution must be judged hugely beneficial to the project. Nobody expects all contributions of every individual editor to be perfect. Instead, Wikipedians must work collaboratively to make them so. That is what makes the negativity of AfadsBad so irksome and damaging. Her MO is to sit on the sidelines, not contributing herself but sniping and undermining wherever possible. In addition her case is bogus, fabricated, made up (in this, she is the pot calling the kettle black). That is not acceptable. It is totally contrary to the spirit of this project. I also rebuke those editors whose first instinct has been to jump on AfadsBad’s bandwagon and attack Cwmhiraeth. Your instincts should be the exact opposite. We need to foster an atmosphere of mutual support for those who edit in good faith. We also all need to reflect on the disgraceful, shameful anarchy of the processes of complaint resolution and editorial review. They reveal that there is no concept of legal process here, no sense of natural justice, no understanding of how to conduct an investigation without bias, prejudice or conflict of interest.

In my view, Cwmhiraeth should be set free to edit without imposing any kind of restrictions or penalties on her. I think it is unfair and demeaning to suggest (as some have done here) that she should be mentored or refrain from editing science articles. That kind of pressure is counterproductive. The way we operate is to moderate each other’s excesses by mutual interaction and support, end of. In my view, the damage caused here by AfadsBad warrants a long, even permanent ban. She cannot be allowed to return to that kind of behaviour. She is clearly Wikipedia:NOTHERE to contribute. Plantsurfer (talk) 14:25, 30 April 2014 (UTC)

More from Andrew
This is an editor review not a RfC/U and so a quasi-judicial verdict is not expected. The main idea of an editor review is to provide feedback to the editor which they may find helpful in developing their technique. But if we take this in the spirit of a movie review then a rating might be a good way of providing a summary. As five stars are commonly used and Wikipedia has 5 pillars, I will rank Cwmhiraeth accordingly:
 * Wikipedia is an encyclopedia. ✅ Cwmhiraeth's work seems quite encyclopaedic in most ways - stylistically, tone, content, &c.
 * Wikipedia is written from a neutral point of view. ✅ Cwmhiraeth's work does not seem to have any blatant spin and the content is backed up by reference to reasonable sources.
 * Wikipedia is free content... ✅ The relevant issue here is respecting copyright. Cwmhiraeth sometimes sails too close to the wind in close paraphrase but seems well aware of the issue and has to balance this with concern for accuracy too.
 * Editors should treat each other with respect and civility. ✅ Cwmhiraeth is perhaps over-sensitive to criticism but it is difficult to ignore comments of the sort that we see here. Overall, she seems to respond to her critics and other editors in a reasonably civilised manner.
 * Wikipedia does not have firm rules. ✅ The relevant issue here is boldness and Cwmhiraeth is commendably energetic in producing content.  This pillar firmly mandates that we "do not agonize about making mistakes" and so, in that spirit, Cwmhiraeth is right to press on despite the occasional slip.

So, by this tally, we might have a five star rating. Nobody is perfect though and so, to avoid complacency, I will conclude with a rating of. Andrew (talk) 17:41, 30 April 2014 (UTC)

More from Faendalimas
I saw the ping and have returned to comment. I am in agreement with the later comments here, I don´t think Cwmhiraeth is guilty of anything beyond normal minor errors that we all make. I agree that this should be permitted to end, I think she has been through enough. What issues there are have been addressed not only to mine but clearly to others saticfaction. I think there is a clear concensus that this should be done with. cheers Faendalimas  talk 18:15, 30 April 2014 (UTC)

Comment from JohnCD
I am responding to the ping from Cwmhiraeth. I have been slow to respond because, not being familiar with the background, I have had to read again the AN/I thread and all the material above. A deeply depressing read because, as so often in these discussions, important issues get buried in quarrelsome accusation and counter-accusation. The one bright spot is that Cwmhiraeth initiated this review: thank you, that was exactly the right thing to do.

I believe that Afadsbad has done a valuable service in pointing to inaccuracies in Wikipedia's coverage of science, and it is extremely unfortunate that (no doubt frustrated at being ignored) she has begun to focus on this one editor and to adopt a shrill tone and exaggerated claims which have made it too easy to shoot the messenger while ignoring the message.

To the key question of this editor review: is there a systematic problem with Cwmhiraeth's articles? I think I must reluctantly answer: yes. The issues raised above by Cyclopia, Choess, Fram, Snowman, Andreas and others cannot be brushed aside as trivia, as an unrepresentative sample, or as an attack by a clique.

Yesterday I happened to read this in a review by Freeman Dyson in the NYRB: "'The information that [Wikipedia] contains is totally unreliable and surprisingly accurate. It is often unreliable because many of the authors are ignorant or careless. It is often accurate because the articles are edited and corrected by readers who are better informed than the authors.'" That is true for main-line articles, but less so for the more abstruse, low-traffic ones, and some of the examples above show errors staying on view for a long time. If there is a known source of errors, we should try to do something about it, not rely on errors being picked up and fixed by chance readers.

I do not want us all to be back here in six months' time. What I suggest Cwmhiraeth should do as a result of this review is:
 * If she is not sure she understands an issue, ask for advice, from a WikiProject or (as suggested above) from the author of the source article. Use peer review. That may take time, but my next point is:
 * Go more slowly. There is no deadline. One accurate article is a much better achievemt and more helpful to the encyclopedia than three inaccurate ones.
 * It would be a very encouraging gesture for Cwmhiraeth to withdraw from the Wiki Cup (giving someone else a chance to win it!) because, although she says above that competing does not affect the way she works, I find it hard to believe that competition deadlines do not have some effect on her willingness to take the time to make further checks or get another opinion.
 * For each new article she writes, make a careful check on one of her old ones, to see whether it needs modifying in the light of this review.

We are all, in our different ways, trying to help make an encyclopedia. An encyclopedia is good, a comprehensive encyclopedia is better, but an inaccurate encyclopedia is no use to man or beast. When something has gone wrong, it is good practice to ask not merely "How can we put this right?" but also "How can we change our way of working so that this does not happen again ?" I think there needs to be a serious reappraisal of initiatives like DYK and the Wiki Cup which encourage haste and a "never mind the quality, feel the width" attitude, but that is beyond the scope of this review. JohnCD (talk) 11:10, 4 May 2014 (UTC)

Closing the review
JohnCD sums up the position very fairly. Some of the errors I have made that are mentioned in this review have made me feel quite disappointed in myself, and his advice to me to go more slowly and carefully is good. I have taken note of the criticisms levied against me during the review and am continuing to work with InvertZoo on improving the way I write articles. In the past, in an effort to avoid close paraphrasing, I have sometimes rearranged things in a way that may have distorted the original meaning and I have sometimes drawn deductions from sources that I should not have done. I also need to stop using sources that may not be reliable, a thing I have sometimes done in an effort to make an article more comprehensive.

As regards the specific suggestions JohnCD makes, I go along with the first, second and fourth. With regard to the third I will make no commitment to withdraw from the WikiCup at the moment, but I will alter my approach to the competition and concentrate less on scoring points through DYKs and more by other means.

I am now closing this editor review. I would like to thank everyone who has taken part in it and I hope that the standard of my contributions to Wikipedia will improve as a result of it. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 08:04, 5 May 2014 (UTC)