Wikipedia:Editor review/Dac44

dac4444
Hello. I'm a very big jazz fan -a player as well- and I created this page for the great jazz guitarist Assaf Kehati. He's a prominent guitarist in today's jazz world, playing with major artists, all over the world and I felt he deserved a page. I want to be reviewed because this is my first Wikipedia page and I'm not sure if I'm doing things correctly Dac44 (talk) 02:50, 20 April 2011 (UTC)

 Questions


 * 1) What are your primary contributions to Wikipedia? Are there any about which you are particularly pleased? Why?
 * This is my first contribution and hopefully I'll have more in the future
 * 1) Have you been in editing disputes or do you feel other users have caused you stress? How have you dealt with it and how will you deal with it in the future? If you have never been in an editing dispute, explain how you would respond to one.
 * I'm not quite sure of what's wrong with the page
 * I'm not quite sure of what's wrong with the page

 Reviews  Currently, you only have 10 edits, so I am going to review the article you have written, as all but one of your edits were made there. The article is rather good. It is well written, neutral, and well organized. The only thing I would suggest would be to add additional references and possibly expand the career section. Alpha Quadrant   talk    16:07, 24 May 2011 (UTC)
 * Review by Alpha Quadrant