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Tyw7
Hi. I am User Tyw7. I have been previously editing as. I have made over 268 minor edits and major on Wikipedia as both Tyw7 and Troop350. I have worked on two artiles Norton Internet Security and Norton 360, which are now listed as Good Articles Tyw7 ‍ ‍‍ (Talk  ●  Contributions) Leading Innovations >>>  12:05, 28 May 2009 (UTC)

 Reviews 

Comments from TechOutsider Proofread anything you publish to Wikipedia. Watch for spelling, and more importantly, grammar. Sometimes, the way you phrase things is awkward. Here is an example-your reasons why Norton Internet Security should be a FA...

I am nominating this for featured article because Norton Internet Security is a popular software made by the world's leading security Symantec. I think this article have all it takes to be a feature article. It is long, informative, contain good grammar, and is a Good Article.I am nominating this for featured article because Norton Internet Security is a popular software made by the world's leading security Symantec. I think this article have all it takes to be a feature article. It is long, informative, contain good grammar, and is a Good Article.


 * For starters, I do not understand "world's leading security Symantec". Maybe "security company"? But then, what is a security company? Securities as in finance? Technology?


 * "this article have all it takes to be a feature article". Best way of phrasing: "This article has all it takes to be a featured article," or something along the lines of that.


 * "contain good grammar". Correct: "contains good grammar"

Good luck on your adminship. TechOutsider (talk) 03:30, 13 June 2009 (UTC)

 Questions


 * 1) What are your primary contributions to Wikipedia? Are there any about which you are particularly pleased? Why?
 * My best contributions to Wikipedia I have to say are the articles Norton 360 and Norton Internet Security, particularly Norton 360. This is because both of these articles are now listed as Good Articles. In addition, I have made many edits so I consider all my work good contribution to Wikipedia.
 * 1) Have you been in any conflicts over editing in the past or do you feel other users have caused you stress? How have you dealt with it and how will you deal with it in the future?
 * I have so far not encounter any edit conflits with other users. The only users I have edit conflict is with myself. For example, I was editing two pages and on one of the pages require me to login. When I did that, when I tried to save the page I edited with an anonymous IP, I have an edit conflict with my logged on account and my anonymous IP account. Therefore, I can say I have not have any edit conflicts with other users. When I encounter any edit conflicts with another user, I would cancel my edit. Then I would consider both sides and solve the conflict calmly. I would consider the information that user wishes to add to Wikipedia.
 * I have so far not encounter any edit conflits with other users. The only users I have edit conflict is with myself. For example, I was editing two pages and on one of the pages require me to login. When I did that, when I tried to save the page I edited with an anonymous IP, I have an edit conflict with my logged on account and my anonymous IP account. Therefore, I can say I have not have any edit conflicts with other users. When I encounter any edit conflicts with another user, I would cancel my edit. Then I would consider both sides and solve the conflict calmly. I would consider the information that user wishes to add to Wikipedia.