Wikipedia:Featured Music Project/Syd Barrett


 * Lead: Too short, needs to summarize whole article
 * Comprehensiveness: Mostly good, but needs musical style
 * Pictures': Need fair use rationales
 * References: Inline citations, needs non-biography print sources
 * Format/Style: consolidate short paragraphs, especially under "Influence", also make "Influence more coherent as a section and less of a paragraphized list
 * Chart positions should probably be cited inline, discography looks good