Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/Albus Dumbledore/archive1

Albus Dumbledore

 * Nominator(s): Jkaharper (talk) 14:20, 18 April 2009 (UTC)

I am nominating this for featured article because


 * The article is interesting and contains enough information to meet the criteria of a featured article.
 * Is grammatically correct and I believe everything to be set out appropriately and neatly.
 * All information featured in the article, requiring sources seem to be backed up.
 * The article contains good quality non-copyrighted pictures which are relevant to the sections, albeit another image or two would seem more appropriate in the future.
 * The article fully details just about everything there is to be said about the character's life, including everything not featured in the books but mentioned by Rowling herself.

Thanks. --Jkaharper (talk) 14:20, 18 April 2009 (UTC)


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 * Comment: instead of saying "It is revealed in X", as you have done, just write "In X". Sceptre (talk) 18:48, 18 April 2009 (UTC)


 * Removing FAC, see WP:FAC instructions regarding consultation with significant contributors. Sandy Georgia  (Talk) 19:37, 18 April 2009 (UTC)