Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/Battle of Lissa (1811)


 * The following is an archived discussion of a featured article nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured article candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The article was promoted by User:SandyGeorgia 19:07, 22 June 2008.

Battle of Lissa (1811)
Self-nomination. An article on a little known naval action from 1811, I believe this is adequately sourced, well written and conforms to all other FAC criteria. It has passed for GA and undergone a Wikiproject peer review which generated a lot of comments. Any and all actionable suggestions welcome.Jackyd101 (talk) 22:25, 12 June 2008 (UTC)
 * Update: The article now has an excellent map created by User:Ruhrfisch.--Jackyd101 (talk) 21:32, 13 June 2008 (UTC)

Comments

Gary King ( talk ) 00:53, 13 June 2008 (UTC)
 * I agree with you on the splitting of the sentence in the lead, so have made the change. Adacore (talk) 03:40, 13 June 2008 (UTC)

Comments - probably should mention that the Oxford dictionary of National biography is a subscription database, not everyone has access to it online (this doesn't mean you can't use it as a reference, just that you need to say that "subscription required" or something like that in the reference). Otherwise sources look good, links checked out with the link checker tool. Ealdgyth - Talk 03:09, 13 June 2008 (UTC)
 * Done.

Comments


 * In background a sentence or two with broader scope than is given may be useful - the fact that this was in the context of the Napoleonic Wars, for example, is only explicitly mentioned in the lead and the infobox. I'm not sure where or how this should be integrated though.
 * I will get on this this evening.--Jackyd101 (talk) 07:16, 13 June 2008 (UTC)
 * I'm having a little bit of trouble with how to phrase this, I'll have to think about it. Which information do you think is most relevent here?--Jackyd101 (talk) 21:46, 13 June 2008 (UTC)
 * My only real problem is that there's no reference in the Background section to the fact that the annexation of the Illyrian Provinces, seizing of Lissa or the battle were part of the Napoleonic Wars. I realise this can be inferred from context, I just think a couple of sentences to make it explicit would be useful - I'm as much at a loss over how to phrase it as you though, unfortunately. Adacore (talk) 14:44, 15 June 2008 (UTC)
 * I've had a go, but I'm not sure if it makes sense. Let me know what you think?--Jackyd101 (talk) 16:07, 15 June 2008 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the review, I have either addressed your points, will address them soon or have asked for further information. Your interest is much appreciated.--Jackyd101 (talk) 07:16, 13 June 2008 (UTC)
 * Glad to help - I've provided what clarification I can. I hope it's useful. Adacore (talk) 08:30, 13 June 2008 (UTC)
 * I realise it's a pain, but the new map image that was added should ideally be in SVG format. This shouldn't really be a barrier to FAC, imo, but it's certainly something to put on the todo list. Adacore (talk) 14:44, 15 June 2008 (UTC)
 * I'm sorry but I don't know what that means. Is there any guideline I could follow in doing this?--Jackyd101 (talk) 16:07, 15 June 2008 (UTC)
 * SVG stands for Scalable Vector Graphics. The image format policy is given in WP:Image use policy, and there are links to a number of pages concerning SVG on Wiki at WP:SVG. Adacore (talk) 02:00, 16 June 2008 (UTC)
 * Thankyou for the links, but I'm afraid I'm still none the wiser. I understand why the image should be in SVG format, but I cannot figure out how to make it so.--Jackyd101 (talk) 08:07, 16 June 2008 (UTC)

Support: I made a few tweaks that might improve the flow for us on the other side of the pond. My only concern is the large format of the Order of Battle. Perhaps this could be re-arrange to reduce it's size? Other than that it's a great article, and I support FA even with the current OoB. Maury (talk) 21:25, 13 June 2008 (UTC)
 * Thankyou, I reverted one or two of your changes (mainly where you changed British spellings to American), but your edits and comments have really improved the article. I'm not a genius at tables I'm afraid, how would I go about shrinking the table to see what it looks like?--Jackyd101 (talk) 21:39, 13 June 2008 (UTC)
 * Geez, I wish I knew! I simply avoid tables whenever possible, which I'm afraid won't be terrible helpful. Maury (talk) 23:47, 13 June 2008 (UTC)
 * Actually, perhaps it should simply be moved to the bottom of the article? That seems fairly common in similar articles, and I don't believe it would effect the flow negatively. Maury (talk) 23:49, 13 June 2008 (UTC)

Support - excellent prose. I can find no definite problems at all. Only one thing I'm confused about, and that's probably just my ignorance of the subject: Erm, naval action? That's really standard terminology for a conflict at sea? Nousernamesleft copper, not wood 17:34, 14 June 2008 (UTC)
 * Yep. There are a number of terms that can be used (battle, engagement etc.), but action is certainly widely used in the sources. Thankyou very much--Jackyd101 (talk) 18:38, 14 June 2008 (UTC)

So would anyone be upset if I experimentally moved the order of battle section to the bottom? I think this may improve the flow, and it's not vital that it be where it is, IMHO. Maury (talk) 13:34, 15 June 2008 (UTC)
 * Please try it by all means, I had a look at what it would be like last night but I wasn't sure and rather than leave it and have to immediately sort out all the links that would have to be added, I decided not to save until I had thought about it some more. If you want to try please go ahead, I would appreciate your feedback on what it looks like.--Jackyd101 (talk) 14:08, 15 June 2008 (UTC)
 * It seemed to work. Does it look ok for everyone else? Does it improve the article, or make it worse? Maury (talk) 01:49, 16 June 2008 (UTC)

No objections?! Please, feel free to move it back if you don't think it's in the right place now. And I re-iterate my Support! Maury (talk) 02:23, 19 June 2008 (UTC)
 * I too was waiting for external comments before pitching in. I have to say that for my part, I quite like it in its new position and am happy for it to stay there.--Jackyd101 (talk) 08:55, 19 June 2008 (UTC)

Support This is a clear and coherent article - I felt that I understood both the details of the battle and its context after reading it. I think that the table was probably unnecessary, as it is a bit overwhelming, but otherwise everything was in tip-top shape. :) The article is well-written, well-sourced, and comprehensive. Thanks for your hard work! Awadewit (talk) 16:10, 22 June 2008 (UTC)
 * Image:Battle of Lissa 1811 Map.png - It would be best if the books mentioned in this image description could be fully referenced on the image page itself with title, author, and publication information. That way anyone looking through the images will understand the references. And, ideally, as someone already mentioned, this should be in SVG format.
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