Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/Bloodletting/archive1

Bloodletting
Self-nomination. Was previously a good article and a good subsection of bleeding; with the latter merged into the former, I feel that this is now worthy of featured status. -Sean Curtin 06:10, 5 Aug 2004 (UTC)
 * Object - Its a good article but the writing is a little anaemic ;-) Sorry, a more serious objection is that some section headings would be a good idea (most obviously for the bit on modern usage, but an earlier section would be a good idea too). Also I would have thought there was a connection to trepanning to be made . -- Solipsist 13:23, 5 Aug 2004 (UTC)
 * It's a bit turgid. Couldn't it be broken up a bit with sections, images, etc.?   &mdash; Chameleon Main/Talk/Images 23:52, 5 Aug 2004 (UTC)
 * I've split the article into sections and added another image, as well as external links and a little more info. Any specific objections on the style, or other objections? -Sean Curtin 07:36, 6 Aug 2004 (UTC)
 * Looks good to me.   &mdash; Chameleon Main/Talk/Images 12:09, 7 Aug 2004 (UTC)
 * Great! -Sean Curtin 23:22, 7 Aug 2004 (UTC)