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Blue Man Group
Informative article about a group that not many people know about. Most remember them from the Intel commercials, and people need to be informed. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Tripod2282 (talk • contribs)


 * Object: The lead isn't an overview.  References.  Would refer to WP:PR.  Kaisershatner 15:11, 16 March 2006 (UTC)
 * Object: The main image has no copyright tag (image now tagged to indicate this fact); no references given. Schutz 15:15, 16 March 2006 (UTC)
 * Object, not enough referencing.--Fallout boy 00:22, 17 March 2006 (UTC)
 * Object: "A total ripoff of the Smurfs if you ask me" – Homer Simpson. OK, back to serious mode. All above objections, plus the whole thing is rather uneven. Has too much of that "indiscriminate collection of facts" feel to it that we should absolutely avoid putting the gold star on. As I say elsewhere, this is a beginning, not an end. Daniel Case 04:14, 17 March 2006 (UTC)
 * Object, as above. Specifically the "indiscriminate list of facts" thing.  "Appearances and other work" is particularly a bad offender here, and really needs to be rewritten as flowing prose. Fieari 05:23, 20 March 2006 (UTC)