Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/Chevalier de Saint-Georges/archive1


 * The following is an archived discussion of a featured article nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured article candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The article was archived by Ian Rose via FACBot (talk) 15:44, 18 January 2015 (UTC).

Chevalier de Saint-Georges

 * Nominator(s): –– ♫ Mara ♫  10:50, 18 January 2015 (UTC)

Chevalier de Saint-Georges was one of the first remembered composers of African heritage, and was one of the best. Composing in a style similar to that of Mozart, he became the conductor of the leading symphony orchestra of Paris. –– ♫ Mara ♫ 10:50, 18 January 2015 (UTC)


 * I can see some issues after a quick scan. Despite having 48kb of readable text, the lead is a mere paragraph (see WP:LEADLENGTH).  I also see lots of punctuation issues: curly quotes used throughout, MOS:LQ, etc.  This article really should go through a thorough copyediting.  If this is your first time at FAC, I strongly recommend you withdraw, have the article copyeditied, take it through the WP:GAN process at the very least before resubmitting.  You may also want to stop by the Guild of Copyeditors and possibly Peer Review (though the latter tends to be quiet these days, I think it's important to get some feedback on the article where you can). Curly Turkey ¡gobble! 11:24, 18 January 2015 (UTC)

Note - The nominator does not appear to have contributed to the article. Graham Beards (talk) 14:08, 18 January 2015 (UTC)

Closing comment -- Beyond the issues identified above, there are a good many uncited passages in the article. I'm afraid it's been nominated prematurely, and will archive it shortly. Pls consider the recommendations mentioned here and note that, per the FAC instructions, there is a minimum period of two weeks before you can re-nominate here. Cheers, Ian Rose (talk) 15:43, 18 January 2015 (UTC)

Ian Rose (talk) 15:44, 18 January 2015 (UTC)
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