Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/Columbine High School massacre/archive2

Columbine High School massacre

 * Nominator(s): AceAlen (talk) 21:44, 21 July 2019 (UTC)

This article is about the Columbine shootings. It has been edited a lot and fully meets the criteria for FAC nomination. Has all the information on the background, shooting and aftermath. Including on Eric Harris and Dylan Klebold. It is a good nomination. AceAlen (talk) 21:44, 21 July 2019 (UTC)

Coordinator comment - This hasn't received any commentary yet, but I'm going to archive the nomination as premature. There are some obvious deficiencies in the article including numerous unsourced statements and a lot of choppy prose that needs work to form a cohesive narrative and avoid WP:PROSELINE. I'd recommend going through a peer review process or working with someone at Mentoring for FAC before renomination. -- Laser brain  (talk)  16:44, 23 July 2019 (UTC) -- Laser brain  (talk)  16:44, 23 July 2019 (UTC)