Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/Dan Bain/archive2


 * The following is an archived discussion of a featured article nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured article candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The article was archived by Ian Rose via FACBot (talk) 06:15, 15 July 2017.

Dan Bain

 * Nominator(s): Kaiser matias (talk) 11:41, 18 June 2017 (UTC)

This article was nominated back in 2013 by me, and failed then for a variety of reasons. Well after some delay I've brought it back, ostensibly as part of my goal to get the 1945 Hockey Hall of Fame class to FA (though since that project began its been shown there aren't actually 12 players, but that's not relevant). I addressed everything from the previous FAC, and added information from a recently published journal article on the life of Bain, which gives it a little more detail (though its still short at 1400 words). Kaiser matias (talk) 11:41, 18 June 2017 (UTC)

Comments. As always, feel free to revert my copyediting. - Dank (push to talk)
 * I like the goal to "get the 1945 Hockey Hall of Fame class to FA". I understand that to achieve a goal like that, you'll have to bring us some articles that are on the short side. It seems to me that people respond enthusiastically to your articles, and for as long as they do that, I don't want to hold you back. But in several respects, this just doesn't read like a Featured Article to me. One option I have as a reviewer is to say: okay, enough, this isn't working, please find a co-nom or an interested person to help you with these articles before they hit FAC. I don't think that would be an unreasonable request, in this case. I think on balance I want to wait and see what happens with this one before I take a position. - Dank (push to talk) 12:26, 18 June 2017 (UTC)
 * Is there anything constructive you'd like to add here, other than seemingly imply I'm incapable of writing/producing a FA-class article? If I'm reading that wrong I apologise, but it seems needlessly hostile and doesn't provide much, so I'd just like some clarification. Kaiser matias (talk) 12:26, 21 June 2017 (UTC)
 * There's no insult intended here. I'm trying to avoid an oppose if it can be avoided. But I've hurt my wrist, so I'll leave it there. - Dank (push to talk) 14:42, 21 June 2017 (UTC)
 * Sorry, just external issues coming and clouding my wording and judgement, which is inappropriate on my behalf. Terrible to hear about the wrist, as you're efforts are appreciated. Kaiser matias (talk) 02:44, 22 June 2017 (UTC)

Comment. File:DanBain1900.jpg: source link is dead; when/where was this first published? Nikkimaria (talk) 23:53, 18 June 2017 (UTC)
 * Updated the link to the original image on the Library and Archives Canada site, which notes the copyright as expired. Kaiser matias (talk) 12:26, 21 June 2017 (UTC)

Coord note -- With no activity for three weeks, I'm afraid this nom has stalled so I'll be archiving it shortly. I realise there was a PR in January that had no takers but I wonder if it might be worth another shot there, perhaps inviting related projects or individual editors to contribute, before a re-nom at FAC. Cheers, Ian Rose (talk) 06:14, 15 July 2017 (UTC)

Ian Rose (talk) 06:15, 15 July 2017 (UTC)
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