Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/David A. Johnston/archive1


 * The following is an archived discussion of a featured article nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured article candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The article was promoted by SandyGeorgia 13:16, 30 April 2010.

David A. Johnston

 * Nominator(s): Carcharoth,  ceran  thor 23:55, 12 April 2010 (UTC), Awickert

I am nominating this for featured article because I believe it is a well-written, comprehensive, engaging, and well-illustrated account of Mr. Johnston. I mentioned this as a collaboration to Awickert, knowing it would take a lot of work, and thought it would be an impossible task. But the invaluable work of Awickert, Carcharoth, and several others has improved this article to a very high quality.

It was a difficult article to take on, and a very sensitive one at that. Johnston's shortened life was still one full of vitality, and I think this article reflects that. We have worked (more Carcharoth and Awickert) to acquire high-quality sources and fine-tune the prose so that the article met a featured article quality. Because of our determination to create a high-quality account of Mr. Johnston's life, I think the article has turned out well. I hope that anyone who reads it will agree.  ceran  thor 23:55, 12 April 2010 (UTC)


 * Addendum: Carcharoth and I are participating in the WikiCup.  ceran  thor 11:22, 18 April 2010 (UTC)
 * Additional addendum: After checking with Ceranthor, I left notices on the talk pages of the three WikiProjects that seem most relevant to this article . I think this would normally be done at the peer review or earlier review stages, but I've done it here because those earlier reviews haven't taken place and I think getting input from other editors active in the relevant topic areas is needed here to make sure the article is as good as it can be. I've also asked anyone who comments here due to those notices to say how they became aware of the article. Carcharoth (talk) 12:22, 18 April 2010 (UTC)


 * Comments. No dab links or dead external links. Ucucha 01:37, 13 April 2010 (UTC)


 * Comment . Was still adding some more material and quotes and tidying a few things, but have finished that now. Will be available to help address any concerns raised, especially if it relates to parts of the article I worked on (mainly the images, memorials section, and copyediting in various places), plus suggestions made on the talk page. I do have some ideas on some rearrangements that could be done in the text, but will wait and let people review the nominated version first. Carcharoth (talk) 03:27, 13 April 2010 (UTC)
 * Support - well written, referenced, illustrated, timely and comprehensive. Fixed a couple minor bits - spelling and links. The authors are to be complimented, well done. Vsmith (talk) 17:20, 14 April 2010 (UTC)
 * Thank you very much. We have worked hard on this article. :)  ceran  thor 19:19, 14 April 2010 (UTC)
 * Thanks for taking the time to look it over, Awickert (talk) 23:48, 14 April 2010 (UTC)


 * Comment: "The eruption blew more than 1,000 feet (305 m) of rock off of the volcano..." is unclear. Does it mean the peak of the mountain is now 1000 ft lower than prior to the eruption? The current phrasing almost implies a volume of rock being removed from the mountain with a value that has mismatched units. It also needs to be referenced; I can't find it in the citation at the end of the sentence. -Atmoz (talk) 21:39, 14 April 2010 (UTC)
 * I believe it is mentioned in the latter half of the reference. I will fix the phrasing.  ceran  thor 22:18, 14 April 2010 (UTC)
 * ...and per the ref, I just made it more precise to 1313 ft. Thanks for catching that, Atmoz. Awickert (talk) 23:48, 14 April 2010 (UTC)


 * images File:Sign_for_Cascades_Volcano_Observatory_on_Open_day_2005_(USGS)_cropped.JPG should be tagged as Template:trademark, otherwise fine Fasach Nua (talk) 23:01, 16 April 2010 (UTC)
 * Added Template:Trademarked (the commons version) to it. Thanks for the look-through. Awickert (talk) 07:19, 17 April 2010 (UTC)
 * Yeah, thanks for spotting that. I tried to add that template myself last night, but things froze. I blame that new skin that is now the default on Commons. Carcharoth (talk) 07:30, 17 April 2010 (UTC)


 * One event I became aware of this article via a message at Wikipedia talk:WikiProject Geology. I agree that the article is well-written, comprehensive, engaging; however since Mr. Johnson was really only notable (that is, generated significant coverage in secondary sources) for his death, it tends to run afoul of Notability (people).  While this doesn't detract from the article's style and flair, it makes it a poor choice for a featured article. --Bejnar (talk) 17:06, 18 April 2010 (UTC)
 * Correct me if I'm wrong, but doesn't 1EVENT only apply to people with marginal notability? Johnston became quite famous for his involvement with the eruption and his legacy is almost as famous among volcanologists. I believe that the amount of sources support this.  ceran  thor 17:10, 18 April 2010 (UTC)
 * 1EVENT only results in merger (or deletion) where the individual is of marginal notability. Here I am not proposing merger, just that this type of article should not be showcased, since it has a very real problem. 1EVENT always applies where an individual is significant [only] for their role in a single event. --Bejnar (talk) 18:48, 18 April 2010 (UTC)
 * In this case, the subject (whose name was Johnston, not Johnson) was a geologist who had gained his PhD two years earlier and was employed by the USGS at the time he was killed in a volcanic eruption, hence the usual approach of a career retrospective is difficult to do here. What has been done is a summary of his career from published memoriam articles and obituaries, an account of how he died, and a look at the legacy that resulted. Not a normal sort of biographical article, because a normal biographical article is difficult to do here for obvious reasons. Johnston clearly wasn't notable at the time of his death, but if there is a legacy then that can provide the basis for an expansion of the article. Most articles of those known only for the manner of their death will never be expanded, but some of them have possibilities, as I hope this article demonstrates. I have more to say about WP:1E articles resulting from natural disasters, but that is getting off topic, so I'll go to your talk page. Carcharoth (talk) 22:57, 18 April 2010 (UTC)
 * I don't think that WP:1E applies here. Rationale:
 * WP:PROF #1 ("The person's research has made significant impact in their scholarly discipline, broadly construed, as demonstrated by independent reliable sources") and #7 ("The person has made substantial impact outside academia in their academic capacity.") The obituaries, etc. talk about the importance of his studies of the gas phase in volcanic eruptions, and he was highly involved in warning the public about the danger posed by Mt. St. Helens.
 * Per WP:1E: "The general rule in many cases is to cover the event, not the person. However, as both the event and the individual's role grow larger, separate articles become justified." The event clearly was large. Dr. Johnston's role was, per my research, also large, because he worked to quantify the volcanic hazard and keep people away from the volcano, and he was often interviewed about this.
 * Per WP:1E: "If the event is highly significant, and the individual's role within it is a large one, a separate article is generally appropriate." (See my comments on his role above)
 * If you don't buy that, WP:1E says that, "On the other hand, if an event is of sufficient importance, even relatively minor participants may require their own articles,"
 * WP:TOOLONG and WP:UNDUE: David A. Johnston is 50 K, Mt. St. Helens is 51K; they couldn't be combined without deleting a lot of the info that we've assembled, which would be sort of a bummer; I think that a forked article on Johnston is a much better solution in this case.
 * Awickert (talk) 16:34, 19 April 2010 (UTC)
 * Actually, on further thinking about this, I'm not entirely sure that his publications alone would meet WP:PROF. But I do think that there are quite enough other factors that make this individual notable, and following his death, there were many things named for him (which can't necessarily be said for the other individuals who died). Awickert (talk) 20:35, 21 April 2010 (UTC)


 * selected publications who selected these and why? Fasach Nua (talk) 17:50, 18 April 2010 (UTC)
 * Either Awickert or Carcharoth. We thought it was a nice touch to show that he had work published.  ceran  thor 17:55, 18 April 2010 (UTC)
 * Awickert started the section here and if you click through the next few edits, that pretty much covers that section. I suspect it is "selected" because it would be difficult to get a complete list of publications. I suppose it is a question of whether you include an incomplete list, have criteria for selecting the papers to be mentioned (e.g. only those mentioned secondarily), or leave the list out altogether. Carcharoth (talk) 22:15, 18 April 2010 (UTC)
 * It is a list of his major publications (i.e., everything not including conference abstracts). What is the reason for concern? (Is it the section heading?) Awickert (talk) 16:17, 19 April 2010 (UTC)
 * Fixed to "major publications", hope this is better. Awickert (talk) 08:35, 25 April 2010 (UTC)

I hope my contributions and comments have and will continue to help build an article that does justice for this brave man. – Juliancolton  &#124; Talk 03:57, 24 April 2010 (UTC)
 * Doing some copyediting... will post questions along the way
 * Why "Mt. Augustine" in some cases but "Mount" in others?
 * The gas phase is extremely important in propelling volcanic eruptions; Johnston therefore mastered the many analytical techniques required to tease information about gases present during eruptions out of glass-vapor inclusions in phenocrysts embedded in the lavas. I'm not sure how "therefore" applies here.
 * Refs use inconsistent date formatting (day month year and month day year).
 * The "Final signs" and "USGS team" sections seem a bit disorganized with regard to Johnston's death, especially since the first section, which details his situation, doesn't explicitly state that he died.
 * What road were the workers building when they found Johnston's trailer?
 * Dr. Stephen Malone described Johnston as a "fire dog"; he agreed that Johnston died in a way that he would have preferred, and that he "was very good at his work." - The wording here seems a bit... I don't know, I just think "preferred" isn't really a great word choice.
 * Glicken was being mentored by Johnston, who relieved Glicken of his watch at the Coldwater II observation post 13 hours before Mount St. Helens erupted. Glicken was leaving the post to visit the University of California graduate school, but after the eruption he missed the flight in a frantic search to determine whether Johnston was alive. - It seems like this information was already presented previously.
 * Thanks for the comments Julian. Don't want to break up your comments, so:
 * Mt. Augustine: I'm confused as to what to do, but I changed them all to "Mount" as per my best guess. My gut says "ah, they're the same", MOS:ABBR (which trumps me) says that things like "Mount" and "Saint" should be spelled out, but the highly-relevant Mount St. Helens article has "St." instead of "Saint". Ah, well, I think making them all "Mount Augustine" will work.
 * "Gas phase": wow - this was one confusing sentence (and I wrote it!). Separated it into three sentences, hopefully it is easier to read now.
 * I'm still not sure I understand the correlation between the two ideas ("Because of...") – Juliancolton  &#124; Talk 15:31, 25 April 2010 (UTC)
 * The idea is that these inclusions can show what gas phases are present. I brought it back to two sentences to hopefully connect this better, The gas phase is extremely important in propelling volcanic eruptions. Because of this, Johnston mastered the many techniques required to analyze glass-vapor inclusions in phenocrysts embedded in lavas, which provide information about gases present during past eruptions. If it still doesn't make sense, let us know. Awickert (talk) 19:51, 25 April 2010 (UTC)
 * I think I see now. Perhaps a bit complex still, but I won't hold anybody up. – Juliancolton  &#124; Talk 20:12, 25 April 2010 (UTC)
 * Well, the gas=important --> study evidence of gas in past eruptions thing seems very clear to me, but if it doesn't to you, then maybe it is a real problem. Would you (or any other watchers of this page) have a better way to say this? Awickert (talk) 21:18, 25 April 2010 (UTC)
 * Possibly the disconnect is not making clear that gases coming out of the molten rock makes it explode and turn into ash? At least I think that is what happens. And some of the gases left in the rock can be analysed by volcanologists before, during and after eruptions to find things out about the volcano and its magma? Or maybe, the question is why analysing the gases helps? Carcharoth (talk) 05:21, 26 April 2010 (UTC)
 * What it is is a positive feedback in which decreasing pressure as the magma rises allows gas bubbles to expand, further decreasing the density and increasing the buoyancy of the magma, and so on until the eruption. Tephra are actually the small bits of material between these bubble walls, which is why they are so sharp. I'm not actually sure if it's the gases themselves, or simply products of the gases, that are analyzed after the eruptions. But I do know that volcanologists use such studies to find the gases present in previous eruptions to understand what caused them. I'll try to see what fixes I can make in the morning, Awickert (talk) 07:33, 26 April 2010 (UTC)
 * Dates: Made them all YYYY-MM-DD
 * That's all I've had time for now; I'll ping Ceranthor and Carcharoth right before I go to bed (in say, 5 minutes...). Everything I haven't yet done will be fixed up within the day. Awickert (talk) 08:48, 25 April 2010 (UTC)
 * OK - some more, signing individually to keep discussion together better Awickert (talk) 21:28, 25 April 2010 (UTC):
 * "USGS team" and "Final Signs" sections: The USGS team section is anachronistic (in its first paragraph) because we organized that part thematically; it seemed to me at least that it was better to separate the larger scale of the eruption from the individual stories than to put everything together in one big section (which IMO would be pretty messy and more difficult to logically navigate). As far as not actually saying that Johnston died, we do write that, Before being struck by a series of flows that at their fastest would have taken less than a minute to reach his position, Johnston managed to radio "Vancouver! Vancouver! This is it!" to his USGS co-workers. Seconds later, the signal from the radio went blank.[20] Initially, there was some debate as to whether Johnston had survived; records soon showed a radio message from fellow eruption victim and amateur radio operator Jerry Martin, located near the Coldwater peak and further north of Johnston's position, reporting his sighting of the eruption enveloping the Coldwater II observation post. As the blast overwhelmed Johnston's post, Martin declared solemnly, "It's gonna get me, too." before his radio, too, went blank.[21]. I thought that his death was pretty obvious here, but do you think that adding on a sentence that says that he died would improve clarity? Awickert (talk) 21:28, 25 April 2010 (UTC)
 * It's not that it isn't clear, but it just seems a bit odd to me to state his death more clearly in the subsequent section than in the initial one. – Juliancolton  &#124; Talk 21:53, 25 April 2010 (UTC)
 * Named the road that was under construction. The source just says that it was the road leading to the Johnston Ridge Observatory, but there is only one road leading there, so I took the liberty of giving its name. Awickert (talk) 21:49, 25 April 2010 (UTC)
 * Changed "preferred" to "doing what he loved" . Good point; I wouldn't particularly prefer to be scorched to death by extremely hot rock fragments; poor guy. Awickert (talk) 22:02, 25 April 2010 (UTC)
 * Repeat info: Removed the second sentence, but kept the first, because it contains the core of the cruel irony. Awickert (talk) 22:02, 25 April 2010 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the copyedit, Julian. I've copyedited the copyedit to fix a few things, but most of it was a real improvement in wording - thanks. I've also looked at Awickert's changes, and agree with them, and hopefully those changes address your comments. Carcharoth (talk) 05:17, 26 April 2010 (UTC)


 * Support and make the TFA for the 20th anniversary of the eruption on May 18th! I was going to copyedit this article but can't find anything wrong with it. Comprehensive, great prose, high quality references and all other FA criteria met. Great work! --mav (Urgent FACs/FARs/PRs) 20:19, 25 April 2010 (UTC)
 * Thanks! (30th anniversary, actually, but still thanks for the compliment!) Awickert (talk) 21:18, 25 April 2010 (UTC)
 * Damn I'm getting old! Lost 10 years there... :) --mav (Urgent FACs/FARs/PRs) 12:39, 26 April 2010 (UTC)

Review by Charles Edward
 * General
 * I agree with the above concerns about notability for a single event, and in that vein I am on the fence about the general notability of this article. That aside, I will review it anyway.
 * I did promise myself not to get into a discussion about notability here, but there are many examples of people who die, and get newspaper coverage, ending up with a legacy taking shape, leading to enough material for an article. The clearest example I found of this recently was Jack Cornwell. Where the line is drawn, I don't know. Carcharoth (talk) 04:48, 28 April 2010 (UTC)
 * Link geology
 * Done. --mav (Urgent FACs/FARs/PRs) 23:39, 27 April 2010 (UTC)
 * Link Michigan
 * Done. --mav (Urgent FACs/FARs/PRs) 23:39, 27 April 2010 (UTC)
 * I'm confused now because it seems it was already linked. Carcharoth (talk) 03:21, 28 April 2010 (UTC)
 * Link volcanologist
 * Done. --mav (Urgent FACs/FARs/PRs) 23:39, 27 April 2010 (UTC)
 * Again, this term was already linked. Carcharoth (talk) 03:21, 28 April 2010 (UTC)
 * They were linked in the lead, but not at their first use in the body, as is done with the other terms linked in the lead. &mdash;Charles Edward (Talk 12:58, 28 April 2010 (UTC)
 * Ah, I see. Thanks for explaining. I've corrected that now. Carcharoth (talk) 03:04, 29 April 2010 (UTC)
 * "In fact, seismographs were not installed until 1972.", remove "in fact", see WP:ALLEGED
 * Done. --mav (Urgent FACs/FARs/PRs) 23:39, 27 April 2010 (UTC)
 * The whole "Eruption section" seems to have very little to do directly with the subject of this article, and is in large part redundant with already featured 1980 eruption of Mount St. Helens. You could sum up that section as it pertains to this person in about four paragraphs and point users to the other article as a see also at the head of the section. This is my opinion.
 * That section could do with reworking to focus more on Johnston. I've looked again at the sources, and there was more he did here that hasn't been mentioned yet. I may try and tweak and slightly expand this section to address this point, unless someone else gets there first. Carcharoth (talk) 04:05, 28 April 2010 (UTC)
 * "Johnston's story was also featured in an episode of the 2006 docudrama series Surviving Disaster." - this is a single sentence paragraph, consider integrating it elsewhere.
 * Want to expand as follows, but needs sourcing. [...] I would mention the books, but that seems superfluous given that they are used as sources. Carcharoth (talk) 08:42, 28 April 2010 (UTC)
 * Now expanded this as best I could. I hope this addresses the original concern raised here. Carcharoth (talk) 03:04, 29 April 2010 (UTC) Post above redacted to remove block quote that is no longer needed.
 * Prose
 * "His parents both worked, his father as an engineer at a local company and his mother as a newspaper editor" - How about just, "His father worked as an engineer at a local company and his mother as a newspaper editor"
 * Done. --mav (Urgent FACs/FARs/PRs) 23:39, 27 April 2010 (UTC)
 * "After only 25 months, he graduated in 1978 with his Ph.D..." perhaps remove "only".
 * Done. --mav (Urgent FACs/FARs/PRs) 23:39, 27 April 2010 (UTC)
 * The "only 25 months" came from the source: Only 25 months later, Dave turned in his Ph.D. thesis, not on his nearly completed Cimarron project, but on Augustine. This was a remarkable achievement, since both studies were labor-intensive and of high quality. I think this should be noted in the article. Carcharoth (talk) 03:08, 28 April 2010 (UTC)
 * I don't object to the inclusion of the idea of "only" - but why is twenty-five months significantly less than normal? If so, it should say that instead of only. Most readers won't understand the point of "only twenty-five months" without context. &mdash;Charles Edward (Talk 12:58, 28 April 2010 (UTC)
 * "After graduation, in 1978 and 1979, Johnston led..." he graduated twice? I suggest a rewording to avoid ambiguity
 * Reworded here. Carcharoth (talk) 05:02, 28 April 2010 (UTC)
 * "Just before the Mount St. Helens eruptive activity began in 1980, Johnston was working at the Menlo Park, California branch of USGS. When the first earthquakes shook the volcano on March 16, Johnston was at the University of Washington, where he had pursued his doctorate." - Ok so, just before was he in Washington or California? I suggest rephrasing this to better explain the progression of events, rather than tying the timeline to St. Helens, many people will not know the dates when those events occurred.
 * Menlo Park was his main base, but he was travelling and nearby at the time the first earthquakes struck. I've clarified this here. Carcharoth (talk) 05:02, 28 April 2010 (UTC)
 * "...and soon became a leader for the USGS team..." "a" leader, or "the" leader? Sounds like there was only one team.
 * He was the expert on volcanic gas analysis. He wasn't the leader (but he was more senior than, say, Glicken and others). I've said a leader "within" the team to make this less of a problem. Carcharoth (talk) 05:02, 28 April 2010 (UTC)
 * Citations needed
 * "There was initially some doubt as to whether the earthquakes were precursors to an eruption."
 * Cited.  ceran  thor 19:24, 28 April 2010 (UTC)


 * "By March 26, more than seven earthquakes over magnitude 4.0 had been recorded, and the next day, hazard warnings were publicly issued"
 * Cited.  ceran  thor 19:24, 28 April 2010 (UTC)


 * "By late March, the volcano was erupting up to 100 times per day."
 * Cited.  ceran  thor 19:24, 28 April 2010 (UTC)

I have to oppose for now, primarily because of the needed citations. I suspect those can be easily addressed though. The prose is my secondary concern, there are a few rough patches, but nothing terrible. If you can address these issues, I will give the article a second read and see if I can detect any more prose issues and consider supporting. This article is coming along very well, it is really interesting to see how his death had an effect on things. Good job! &mdash;Charles Edward (Talk 18:50, 27 April 2010 (UTC)
 * "he was called "an exemplary scientist" by a USGS dedication paper, which also described him as "unaffectedly genuine, with an infectious curiosity and enthusiasm." - uncited quotes
 * Cited. Carcharoth (talk) 05:21, 28 April 2010 (UTC)
 * "Co-worker Andrew Alden states that Johnston had great potential, declaring that he "had many friends and a bright future"." uncited quote
 * Cited. Carcharoth (talk) 05:21, 28 April 2010 (UTC)
 * "However, most of his colleagues and family asserted that Johnston died "doing what he wanted to do." " uncited quote
 * Cited. Carcharoth (talk) 05:21, 28 April 2010 (UTC)
 * "There have been several tellings of Johnston's story in documentaries, films and docudramas about the eruption." - this is also a single sentence paragraph. consider integrating it with the following one.
 * Expanded to lead into this section. Carcharoth (talk) 08:42, 28 April 2010 (UTC)
 * References
 * Reference # 3 is not following a punctuation point
 * I think you were referring to the mid-sentence references after "Pete Lipman". I think I've fixed this here. I'm not sure what the consensus is on whether references in the middle of sentences break up the flow too much (which is what I presume you mean when you say references should follow a punctuation mark), or whether it is better to put a reference immediately following the information it sources. In this case, the sentence is a combination of information from both sources, so having both sources at the end of that sentence seems a reasonable way to present things here. Carcharoth (talk) 03:29, 28 April 2010 (UTC)
 * Yes thats what I meant, sorry for the ambiguity. &mdash;Charles Edward (Talk 12:58, 28 April 2010 (UTC)
 * What makes http://sthelenshero.homestead.com/DavidJohnston.html a reliable source?
 * The site appears to be hosting (with permission) a newspaper article. See here: an article from 1995 that was in the Longview Daily News. The other page used (here) quotes from other newspaper articles. What should be done in cases like this? I've also taken the opportunity to double-check the other sources used, and I'm happy with all of them except this one, and since the information about the Hoffstadt Bluffs plaque is sourced to a newspaper article already, I will move the olywa.net reference down to the external links. Carcharoth (talk) 03:37, 28 April 2010 (UTC)
 * I noticed that the Brettman reference (the Longview Daily News article from 1995) was already being used elsewhere, so I combined the references and used the homestead.com site as a courtesy link - the questions remaining are whether to accept the "with permission" statement and whether the transcription was reliable. Ideally, someone would verify this, but I can't find the article online anywhere else, though I did find this. Carcharoth (talk) 04:39, 28 April 2010 (UTC)
 * I agree, you could just site the newspaper article directly, and cut out the middleman. Maybe put the link in external links? &mdash;Charles Edward (Talk 12:58, 28 April 2010 (UTC)
 * I believe this has been done.  ceran  thor 19:28, 28 April 2010 (UTC)
 * It has, and I've now included it in the external links as well and bypassed the other reference that was being used (it was to a summary of the news article, when citing the news article direct is simpler). I think the original concern raised has been addressed now. Carcharoth (talk) 03:04, 29 April 2010 (UTC)
 * Reference # 12 should only have the title linked, not the date and year
 * Ref # 14, 16 should be delinked - the link is at the reference entry
 * This is common I see. Only titles should be linked. Check out WP:CITEX for detailed examples. Consider using cite templates, as this will format the references properly by default.
 * First two points about the references I agree with and will aim to fix (sthelenshero.homestead.com can't be considered reliable, but it does provide its sources, so it can be verified and bypassed, and included in the external links as a courtesy). Regarding references 12, from what I can tell, cite templates have been used for this and other references, and what you are calling "date and year" are part of the title of the work. References 14 and 16 are courtesy links to the specific pages as displayed on Google Books. I am not sure what you mean by "the link is at the reference entry". Carcharoth (talk) 02:55, 28 April 2010 (UTC) PS. The reference numbers will change in a few minutes, so I will try and note which references you were referring to here.
 * Sorry - I should be more clear. Titles are the only parts of references which should be linked to the work. Authors, page numbers, and years should not be linked to the source, but possible to other things. I won't haggle on this, but what is customary is for the reference in the list of books to be linked to where it is available online, but to not link the individual shortened citations. In short, only full citations should be linked to the source, because the shortened citations do not contain a title to link from. WP:CITEX provides many examples of how this is done. &mdash;Charles Edward (Talk 12:58, 28 April 2010 (UTC)
 * I think I get this now. I've made changes here and here. It does mean that people have to go and look up the reference themselves, but that is needed here as some of these previews are limited and not all page are available online. There should really be links from the shortened references down to the list of books, but that is fiddly so I'll leave that unless someone asks for it to be done or does it themselves. There was also one book (the Harris one) listed in the references but not in the bibliography, but I've fixed that now. Carcharoth (talk) 03:04, 29 April 2010 (UTC)
 * Images
 * File:Mt st helens Johnston ridge 25 years later.jpg - the source of this image is not clear
 * Source looks clear to me. A photograph from 30 July 2005 by User:Colin.faulkingham (last edited in 2008, so requesting OTRS confirmation may be problematic). Is there more needed here? Carcharoth (talk) 02:55, 28 April 2010 (UTC)
 * It is clear that the uploader thought that person took the picture - but how did the uploader get that information? The link showing were he got it points back to the same page. &mdash;Charles Edward (Talk 12:58, 28 April 2010 (UTC)
 * Excuse me if I'm wrong, but it does say "from en.wikipedia [1] 16:31, 9 August 2005 . . Colin.faulkingham (Talk) . . 2580x1932 (2706781 bytes)". Doesn't that indicate that it was originally uploaded to the English Wikipedia and the user just moved it? I could of course be wrong.  ceran  thor 19:30, 28 April 2010 (UTC)
 * I think that is probably the case, yes - but I can't be certain. If it was renamed there, where is the original? There is no link back to the original, and it is not clear why it was moved - is this a deritive, or an exact copy of original? There is no page history.. looking I see it was moved over before the current move to commons method was available, so the page history is lost. You are probably right though.. so I will strike it. &mdash;Charles Edward (Talk 20:58, 28 April 2010 (UTC)
 * The image page history is here (probably an admin-only link). I'm not sure if that history should be undeleted or not to allow a proper transfer, but I can confirm that the original upload was on 16:31, 9 August 2005, by User:Colin.faulkingham, and that the history is still there if needed. Carcharoth (talk) 03:04, 29 April 2010 (UTC)
 * The size of some images are forced, WP:IMAGES discourages this unless there is a good reason because it overrides user preferences.
 * Done. --mav (Urgent FACs/FARs/PRs) 23:39, 27 April 2010 (UTC)
 * Alright, I will try to address your concerns asap. We must be ready by May 18, or else we'll be in trouble. Thank you very much for the suggestions.  ceran  thor 21:46, 27 April 2010 (UTC)
 * I went ahead and fixed some of the easier prose-related issues to honor my promise to copyedit this article. --mav (Urgent FACs/FARs/PRs) 23:39, 27 April 2010 (UTC)
 * I've struck off the ones that are resolved. The reference issues are the only ones that are preventing me from supporting. :) Good job. &mdash;Charles Edward (Talk 12:58, 28 April 2010 (UTC)
 * Thank you very, very much Mav. I have been limited this week in terms of freedom in general. Your help is greatly appreciated. I am going to try to fix the remaining concerns tonight.  ceran  thor 19:13, 28 April 2010 (UTC)
 * I believe we have resolved the majority of your concerns, Charles. Correct me if I am wrong, of course!  ceran  thor 19:30, 28 April 2010 (UTC)
 * Conditional Support yes you have! And I am glad to support this article. Let me note I think it meets all the FA criteria - my conditional support is based on the general notabilty of the subject; I think that is still open to debate but, so long as consensus is that it is notable, you have my full support. As an article it is excellent! Good job. &mdash;Charles Edward (Talk 20:58, 28 April 2010 (UTC)
 * Thank you for the support, nonetheless. :)  ceran  thor 21:14, 28 April 2010 (UTC)


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