Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/Falun Gong/archive1


 * The following is an archived discussion of a featured article nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured article candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The article was not promoted by GrahamColm 00:00, 29 September 2012.

Falun Gong

 * Nominator(s): TheChampionMan1234 11:10, 28 September 2012 (UTC)''

I am nominating this for featured article because it is a very complete article about a very important topic ''TheChampionMan1234 11:10, 28 September 2012 (UTC)


 * I was thinking it would be ready for GA nomination soon, but who knows, maybe a FA review is in order. I'll try to finish the citation cleanup I volunteered for in the next couple of days, and make myself available to respond to any other suggestions that come up. — Zujine |talk 15:21, 28 September 2012 (UTC)

Delegate's Comment - Found un-transcluded and added at this time-stamp. Graham Colm (talk) 23:11, 28 September 2012 (UTC)
 * Oppose for now, withdrawal might be needed: multiple unreferenced parts, numerous one sentence paragraphs, numerous referencing issues (including a big tag) — Crisco 1492 (talk) 23:13, 28 September 2012 (UTC)

Closing comment - I agree. This article is not ready for consideration for FA status. There are numerous other issues, including poor prose and balance. I suggest a GA review followed by a peer review. Graham Colm (talk) 23:58, 28 September 2012 (UTC)


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