Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/Fugazi (band)/archive1


 * The following is an archived discussion of a featured article nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured article candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The article was not promoted 04:31, 7 December 2007.

Fugazi
This is a well-written, well-sourced article about an influential band. It meets the criteria of a featured article and contains information on history, genres, ethic, albums, etc. There accounts on each member and there side-projects and much about the band themselves. There is also much in this article about the history of Fugazi and accounts of them. W123 (talk) 22:12, 29 November 2007 (UTC)
 * Object. Many concerns with the article (I've contributed to the article in the past during the alt. music collaboration):
 * Stub sections. "Campaigning and activism" comprises one sentence: "Fugazi have campaigned and engaged in activism." See the Pearl Jam equivalent.
 * Lack of sources. "Business practice and ethics" is almost completely unsourced.
 * "Hiatus" is full of one or two-line paragraphs, which isn't acceptable for a potential FA.
 * Lead is insufficient. It doesn't summarise the history of the band or its campaigning and activism for instance.
 * The article, while it's a good start, needs quite a bit of work still. CloudNine (talk) 22:36, 29 November 2007 (UTC)


 * Object. The 'Campaigning and activism' section only has one sentence. Martin B 18:54, 30 November 2007 (UTC)
 * Comment. Nominator appears not to be addressing objections; his only edit subsequent to nominating this article has been to remove the Activism section, which will no longer make the article comprehensive. CloudNine (talk) 21:23, 5 December 2007 (UTC)
 * The above discussion is preserved as an archive. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured article candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.