Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/H.D.

H.D.
Self nom. Picked this article up as part of WikiProject Countering systemic bias. Our article on this key figure in 20th century English-language poetry was not much more than a stub when I started working on it, but now it is one of the better articles on women writers that we have, IMHO. Filiocht 11:45, Oct 27, 2004 (UTC)
 * Support: Looks pretty good.  I did a little copy editing.  I have my own views (feminists and specifically lesbian feminists have distorted HD to meet their own template to make her a "good queer" and a "good feminist"), but it's a representative survey of views and a comprehensive view of the poet.  My only suggestion (not objection) is that Imagism be reiterated to some degree here.  It's vital to the reader to know what Imagism was, since HD invented it more than Pound did and stayed true to it longer than he did.  Inasmuch as she alone among the major poets kept slugging in that vein, it's reasonable to assume that an educated reader doesn't know it well.  Also, I rather suspect the Imagism Detractors.  It either shouldn't be there, or it should be played out more fully.  There were plenty of folks who thought it was nonsense and quite a few (Edmund Wilson and Yvor Winters) who thought the entire raiding from the East of the Pound-group was misguided and useless ("a barbarian in a museum").  The superficial criticism that the poems are too short is almost a parody, and its appearance in The Egoist makes me wonder. Geogre 13:26, 27 Oct 2004 (UTC)
 * The criticism quoted was specifically of H.D.'s early poems, not of imagism itself. While I agree that the reader may want more background on Imagism, I think the material is best left in the article on the movement. Now the thing is to improve that article! Filiocht 14:08, Oct 27, 2004 (UTC)
 * Support. Zerbey 04:41, 28 Oct 2004 (UTC)
 * Bravo. Brilliant, as always. Ambi 08:49, 28 Oct 2004 (UTC)
 * Support. Mpolo 14:54, Oct 28, 2004 (UTC)
 * Support, excellent article.--Bishonen 17:53, 28 Oct 2004 (UTC)
 * Support. Minor point: could you add one or two adjectives to the word Imagist in the lead section? That would establish context and make the lead section more accessible to laymen. Not everybody knows the Imagists. BTW, interesting to note that H.D. had an affair with D.H. (Lawrence). Jeronimo 21:36, 28 Oct 2004 (UTC)
 * Done. Her thing with D.H. may have been platonic, but yes, it's a neat symmetry. Filiocht 09:45, Nov 1, 2004 (UTC)
 * Support ZayZayEM 04:08, 30 Oct 2004 (UTC)


 * Support, of course. Markalexander100 00:41, 1 Nov 2004 (UTC)