Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/Halo: Contact Harvest


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The article was promoted 00:25, 24 April 2008.

Halo: Contact Harvest
Rest easy guys... it's not about a video game, it's about a bestselling novel based on a video game. It's a shorter article again (I know, I know) but I feel that it exhausts all the good sources floating around out there. Hack it apart, Der Wohltemperierte Fuchs ( talk  ) 23:23, 12 April 2008 (UTC)

Comments I see, trying to trick me with a book about a video game??? Anyway, sources look good. Links worked. Ealdgyth - Talk 00:07, 13 April 2008 (UTC)
 * Don't worry... I've got some history articles in the works, but the next likely candidate is a straight shooter. :P Der Wohltemperierte Fuchs ( talk  ) 00:51, 13 April 2008 (UTC)


 * Support I am a little worried over half of the page being devoted to plot summaries and lacking third party references. Ottava Rima (talk) 17:29, 13 April 2008 (UTC)
 * Do you want citations for the plot? Der Wohltemperierte Fuchs ( talk  ) 00:43, 14 April 2008 (UTC)
 * I don't really know. Page numbers would help, at least to verify the details. Ottava Rima (talk) 05:07, 14 April 2008 (UTC)
 * Ok, I'll see about getting someone on that (I only have the audiobook.) Der Wohltemperierte Fuchs ( talk  ) 11:53, 14 April 2008 (UTC)
 * Haha. :) Btw, I will move to "support" if you can provide a section of third party analysis of how the work is different or the same to the video games. I would think 5-7 sources, two paragraphs, would be enough. Ottava Rima (talk) 15:27, 14 April 2008 (UTC)
 * I don't think there is info like that. Contact Harvest takes place before the games, and unlike Halo: The Flood is entirely original story, not an adaptation. Der Wohltemperierte Fuchs ( talk  ) 15:38, 14 April 2008 (UTC)
 * Then you left me without any more ground to complain. :) Ottava Rima (talk) 04:14, 15 April 2008 (UTC)


 * Support. Your FACs just keep getting shorter and shorter, eh, David? I thought the Spyro article was short, but this probably tops them. I don't see anything wrong with the article, images, citations, or anything else, it's written in your classic style.  bibliomaniac 1  5  02:18, 15 April 2008 (UTC)
 * I have a style now? Actually, DotA is the shortest FA article I've written at only 1098 words. Spyro 3 had 1984 words, and this has about 1600, just slightly less than Populous: The Beginning. Admittedly, that's less than the 3091 of Master Chief (Halo) and 2249 of Cortana, but then there's always the 1196 of Iridion 3D. So it's right in the middle :P Der Wohltemperierte Fuchs ( talk  ) 23:50, 15 April 2008 (UTC)


 * Support - Seems to meet the criteria, and David's efforts show us that we shouldn't shy away from FA when we have shorter articles. Judgesurreal777 (talk) 16:19, 15 April 2008 (UTC)

 Oppose —Not well written. Not comprehensive (and when you exclude the synopsis, it's very threadbare, including the lead). Here are a few random examples of prose glitches: And down the bottom: "Several publications believed that the story was biased against gamers and insulting.[17][18][19]"—No, it's the critics/writers who do that. Tony  (talk)  11:54, 18 April 2008 (UTC)
 * "Staten directed the cut scenes in the video games and is a major contributor to Halo's storyline"—"was"?
 * "Staten set out to pen a novel that not only appealed to gamers, but those who had never picked up a Halo novel previously." "To pen" in this context is a little precious nowadays, if not downright inaccurate. The not only ... but also is a tired, marked version of "and" that you'd use if a plus b was unusual or surprising. And the placement of "not only" is wrong. "Previously" is redundant.
 * "It is an "ensemble piece"—The quotes tell us that it's a particular usage of the item, but I still don't understand the meaning—gloss it briefly?
 * "and made multiple bestseller lists"—you make a list? Bit loose. "Multiple" is excessive and not one of the most sonorous words in English. "Many"? Or better still, be less vague ("more than eight"?).
 * I've fixed the above issues, just pointing out it made the NYT bestseller list since that's the one people would be most familiar with. As for "comprehensive" - it's frankly as comprehensive as it ever will be. I couldn't dig up any more reviews, and there's not enough reliable sourcing to discuss much of the content of the novel. Der Wohltemperierte Fuchs ( talk  ) 16:45, 18 April 2008 (UTC)

Comments. Mostly looks good. dihydrogen monoxide (H2O) 02:09, 19 April 2008 (UTC)
 * "Staten directed the cut scenes" - use "he" instead of his name (repetition)
 * "as well as those who had never picked up a Halo novel." - is this a quote? Otherwise, slightly jargonish with "picked up" etc...I dunno, not a big deal
 * "of story in games." - you mean in video games? And you mean stories related to them, or in game plots, or huh...?
 * "about writing action, Staten replied that he felt that writing action" - repetition
 * "offending weapon in the book, but justified the inclusion" - should "but" be "and"?
 * "Upon release, Contact Harvest debuted at #3 on The New York Times Bestseller List, as well as appearing on the USA Today bestseller's list;[11] the novel remained on the NYT bestseller list for four more weeks." - I don't like the wording here. Just mention all the NYT still, then USA Today, IMO
 * I've made the changes, thanks for the review! Der Wohltemperierte Fuchs ( talk  ) 02:26, 19 April 2008 (UTC)
 * Support. dihydrogen monoxide (H2O) 02:29, 19 April 2008 (UTC)


 * Support: Prose looks good to me, and I don't consider the seemingly short length to be an issue. I would echo Ottava Rima's above statement about adding some references for the plot section though, verifing key points with the page they happen should be sufficient. -- Sabre (talk) 22:53, 19 April 2008 (UTC)
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