Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/Harry and the Potters/archive1


 * The following is an archived discussion of a featured article nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured article candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The article was not promoted 03:01, 26 November 2007.

Harry and the Potters
I'm self-nominating this article for featured article because, it received good article status several months ago, and recently undergone a peer review. The article looks well presented, well written and well formatted. Hpfan9374 (talk) 03:26, 17 November 2007 (UTC)

Comment. I'm the editor who heavily revised the text and successfully brought Harry and the Potters through the GA process. I endorse 's nomination. I'm available to revise the article when and if necessary. Cheers! Wassupwestcoast (talk) 20:08, 17 November 2007 (UTC)

Oppose
 * MOS breaches - harry and the potters, wizard rock (bands and genres aren't italicised), Harry Potter, when referring to the book series, should be italicised, the quotes need formatting.
 * Prose - Very choppy; the lead is a mess - just one para, very poor prose; many small, stubby paras; unencyclopedic language: "the end is not in sight", "they are not alone", "the humor is readily apparent". Also there too many quotes.
 * Citations - For some reason, arbitrary fans' opinions gave been quoted. Many claims have not been cited at all.

Tommy Stardust (talk) 09:38, 20 November 2007 (UTC)
 * The above discussion is preserved as an archive. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured article candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.