Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/Hatshepsut/archive2

Hatshepsut
Self-nom. The article is over the 18th dynasty Egyptian ruler, Hatshepsut. The article has been reviewed, at my request by others so it has under gone a peer review. If featured this article will become WikiProject Ancient Egypt example article. It has been nominated before in a somewhat confusing FAC. -JCarriker 08:02, 6 November 2005 (UTC)
 * I would like to support this nom, as featured articles desperately needs non-western, non-modern articles, but I think this article still needs a bit of work -  some of the writing needs better expression (e.g. "As women gained more equality with men, women in history were sought out and reclaimed." - this doesn't quite make sense). Also Civilization IV has already been released in the US market - the "known" part of that sentence should be taken out, and perhaps "AI" should be wikified. Anyway, after some cleanup, I would vote Support, as featured articles desperately needs more articles like this. Bwithh 07:51, 7 November 2005 (UTC)


 * Object, as before: The image Image:Hatshepsut.jpg is claimed as GFDL, but it's described as a cropped scan of a book cover. The only terms it can be used under are fairuse, and that only on an article about the book.  Use of the image in Hatshepsut is no more fair use than using an album cover with a dog on it to illustrate dog. --Carnildo 23:47, 7 November 2005 (UTC)