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Hawaii
Highly detailed article with mmuch reference and factuality. Dbertman 16:06, 21 June 2006 (UTC)


 * Object. Lead is too short, see WP:LEAD. Lack of footnotes and proper referencing, see WP:FOOTNOTE and Template messages/Sources of articles/Generic citations for help with citations. Lists need converting to prose, and some subsections are too small and should be expanded or merged into other sections. — Wackymacs 16:15, 21 June 2006 (UTC)
 * Object - only one reference and no inline citations.  Pagra shtak  16:16, 21 June 2006 (UTC)