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 * The following is an archived discussion of a featured article nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured article candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The article was not promoted by 10:01, 16 May 2013 (UTC).

Immaculate Conception Church, Farm Street

 * Nominator(s): Pjposullivan (talk) 21:32, 13 May 2013 (UTC)

I am nominating this for featured article because I feel that it is a very detailed history of the the foremost Jesuit church in Britain. It is very significant in the history of Gothic Revival architecture and was described by Simon Jenkins as "Gothic Revival at its most sumptuous". Pjposullivan (talk) 21:32, 13 May 2013 (UTC)

Delegate's comments - Thank you for engaging in our Featured Article process, but the article does not satisfy the FA criteria. The Lead does not provide an adequate summary. The article is not comprehensive and the sources given do not comply with WP:RS. Two of them are dead links ("The page cannot be found"). There are other issues, which include a promotional tone. I suggest the nomination be withdrawn and, after more work, nominated for Good Article status first. This FAC is premature. Graham Colm (talk) 22:06, 13 May 2013 (UTC)

Graham Colm (talk) 17:55, 15 May 2013 (UTC)
 * The above discussion is preserved as an archive. Please do not modify it. No further edits should be made to this page.