Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/Japanese battleship Yamato/archive1


 * The following is an archived discussion of a featured article nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured article candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The article was promoted by Karanacs 01:36, 14 April 2010.

Japanese battleship Yamato

 * Nominator(s): Cam (Chat) 22:05, 28 March 2010 (UTC) and Ed [talk] [majestic titan]

The lead ship and namesake of the Yamato class, the largest battleships in the history of maritime warfare. This article has been in the works since January 2009. Passed its GAN in January 2009, passed its MilHist ACR February 2009, and has just undergone a substantial copyedit courtesy of EyeSerene and The ed17. I have the entire subsequent week off from school, so I should be able to deal with any concerns promptly. Respectfully nominate for FA Status. Cam (Chat) 22:05, 28 March 2010 (UTC)
 * Comments. A dab link to Okinoshima. No external links. Alt text is currently not part of the featured article criteria, but the text in this article is probably on the long side; consider removing some pieces that are chance details of the picture rather than essential parts of what the picture conveys. Ucucha 22:21, 28 March 2010 (UTC)
 * Fixed the dab link. I'll look at the image texts and see what I can do. Cam (Chat) 02:06, 29 March 2010 (UTC)


 * Comments. I've already read this recently, but I'll give it another go tomorrow if I get time Cam. But at the moment.... well, I'd hope to see information about the wreck, its discovery, the museum, the significant memorials in Japan and at least a passing reference to the recent movie in the prose.  I think the movie especially worthy of inclusion in this instance.  I've been going off popular culture sections myself (was never too keen on them), but I do think there's room for legacy in an article - and the movie had a significant impact in Japan, being one of their first big budget movies that described their nation's sacrifice in the war.  It provoked a great deal of interest in the ship and it's mission (bolstering reporting and attendance of the museum in Kure) and importantly it's been responsible for breaking down taboos in a country that has always been fairly quiet about the war previously.  I don't have any reliable sources for all of this I'm afraid, but if you want to look for them the Mianichi Daily News, the Daily Yomiyuri and the Japan Times sites are good places to start. The Yomiyuri certainly had a lot in its print paper when the movie was released about all of this (although I sadly note far less online), and this really was very well reported back in 2005/2006, on the news and in the papers.  I know that you can only work with the sources available, but I feel that without the stuff mentioned above this article is failing on 1b (comprehensive).  Anyway, I'll have a proper read and let you know, but thought I should mention this early.  Cheers, Ranger Steve (talk) 23:18, 28 March 2010 (UTC)
 * I'll see what I can do. I should note that we have quite a bit of that stuff on the main Yamato class battleship page, and it can easily be moved over to this page as well if need be. The difficulty with the stuff on the wreck is that I don't possess any reliable sources dealing with the wreck itself and its discovery. There was something at one point, but the sources weren't considered particularly reliable. If I can find anything that meets RS with regards to the wreck discovery, I'll definitely add it in. Cam (Chat) 02:00, 29 March 2010 (UTC)
 * Cam that looks really good already. Bit pressed for time today, but I'll give you a few more comments in a day or two. Ranger Steve (talk) 20:16, 29 March 2010 (UTC)

 Nearly Support. The article looks great Cam (and everyone else who's worked on it), although I do have a few niggles:
 * There are some discrepancies in the size of the main guns. It's usually correct but on one occasion they're listed as 18 inch instead of 18.1 (first sentence of armament) and the ammunition is listed as 18 inch in Trials and Initial operations, when most of the time the metric version is used to describe the guns.  I'd have adjusted them, but because a template is used I'm not sure what's wrong with it.
 * I'm not sure what's going on there. I may have to manually convert a few of them. It actually only occurs once, and I've manually converted it instead. Cam (Chat) 22:56, 2 April 2010 (UTC)
 * Ah, I assumed the ammunition example was a template as well (but didn't check and thinking about it there is only one measurement, so blatently not a conversion!) I've adjusted it to metric though. Ranger Steve (talk) 09:42, 5 April 2010 (UTC)


 * Related to that, is there a reason for so many Japanese ships' guns being listed metric first? It might just be the books I read but I usually see imperial first (which is also in line with most WWII British, American and German ships on wiki), and as this article appears to be British English....
 * Mostly because the Japanese used metric units when designating their guns. The big ones, for example, are known officially as the 40cm/45 calibre (even though they were actually 46cm!). It's a wee bit on the confusing side, but it's how they roll. Cam (Chat) 20:05, 2 April 2010 (UTC)
 * Thought that would be the case. No problem then. Ranger Steve (talk) 09:42, 5 April 2010 (UTC)


 * Given that two anime shows and a film get a mention, I think the Yamato Memorial Tower really deserves to be included at the end of the article as well.
 * I've added something. Cam (Chat) 04:51, 6 April 2010 (UTC)
 * Looks good. I though about just adding it myself but thought I'd let you decide where to put it! Changed my vote (and well done, it's a great little article). Ranger Steve (talk) 12:16, 6 April 2010 (UTC)


 * Is there anything about the survivors? Who picked them up etc...
 * I'd assume the destroyers that then limped back to Japan. I'll add that. Cam (Chat) 22:56, 2 April 2010 (UTC)


 * Battle of Leyte Gulf - the description as the largest naval engagement in history is a little subjective (and not really supported by the article itself). Could I suggest either "one of the largest naval battles in history" or "the largest naval battle of WWII"?
 * In terms of number of ships in the combined orders of battle, it was the largest naval battle in history. I can find a cite for it (likely in Steinberg or Swanson) if you want. I am willing to change it but I'll see if I can find a citation for it first. Cam (Chat) 20:05, 2 April 2010 (UTC)
 * Added clarifier. Cam (Chat) 22:56, 2 April 2010 (UTC)

Otherwise, looking good! Ranger Steve (talk) 11:07, 2 April 2010 (UTC)

Brief comments
 * Conversions are needed in the infobox for displacement, weapon size and armor thicknesses.
 * Conversions are done. Cam (Chat) 19:33, 29 March 2010 (UTC)


 * The conversions in the armament section are presented English units first, but those in the infobox use metric units first, as did the Japanese themselves. Some of the manual conversions are incorrect.
 * Fixed all the ones I found. Cam (Chat) 19:42, 29 March 2010 (UTC)


 * The coordinates in the infobox seem a bit redundant since they're also at the top of the page.
 * Removed Coordinates. Cam (Chat) 02:15, 29 March 2010 (UTC)


 * You're using both English and British spellings, pick one and stick with it. Conversion templates default to British English. You can change this by adding |sp=us to the templates if you like. And don't forget to hyphenate adjectival forms of units when the unit is spelled out.
 * Converted everything to British spelling. Cam (Chat) 02:15, 29 March 2010 (UTC)
 * That was my fault. Sorry Cam; I don't know how to write Brit English! :-) — Ed   (talk  •  majestic titan)  05:10, 29 March 2010 (UTC)
 * Just add a lot of "u" and "re" to your words. In fact, you could say that the armoured cruisers of the British were of a very poor calibre compared to those of the Japanese. Cam (Chat) 18:10, 29 March 2010 (UTC)

More later--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 23:24, 28 March 2010 (UTC)

Cleaned-up extraneous refs, added  as needed for gun sizes. Deleted unnecessary conversions; my rule of thumb is once in the infobox and once in the main body otherwise it gets too distracting. Maybe we need for formalize rules for conversions in the the MILMOS to prevent people from wasting time on this sort of stuff--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 21:01, 3 April 2010 (UTC)?


 * Comment - Cam, don't forget about the discovery of the wreck! (didn't combinedfleet have a page on it?) — Ed   (talk  •  majestic titan)  05:12, 29 March 2010 (UTC)
 * These ought to help, but you're right&mdash;there isn't much here to go off of. — Ed   (talk  •  majestic titan)  05:22, 29 March 2010 (UTC)
 * I've added some stuff about the wreck. Thanks for the links. Cam (Chat) 06:27, 29 March 2010 (UTC)

Support All of my issues noted below have been resolved. --Brad (talk) 02:36, 7 April 2010 (UTC) Oppose Comment Since there is such a heavy reliance on combinedfleet.com what makes this source reliable? --Brad (talk) 21:27, 29 March 2010 (UTC)
 * Reliable_sources/Noticeboard/Archive_18; it's also written by published authors, I believe. — Ed   (talk  •  majestic titan)  21:31, 29 March 2010 (UTC)


 * 1-C The article relies upon a secondary source for the majority of references. 17 books appear in the bibliography yet are hardly referenced in comparison to combinedfleet.com. At least two books are listed which aren't even cited in the article. The book The Battleship Yamato, entirely devoted to the ship is cited once.
 * Alright; a few things in response to that. Firstly, relying on secondary sources has never been an issue with regards to WP articles. Relying overly on primary documents, according to WP:OR, should be avoided where possible. Secondly, I would add that many of the instances with regards to combinedfleet are double citations. If you wish, I can remove the combinedfleet one and simply keep the other one. Thirdly, it's all a case of what's accessible. I'll do my absolute best to get my hands on The Battleship Yamato, but if combinedfleet - which is incredibly detailed and exhaustive - is the best that I can do, then it's the best that I can do. It's been relied on extensively for many other articles that have gone through the FAC process and become featured articles. I'm a bit confused as to how relying on one exhaustive source instead of another constitutes a huge issue. That said, I'll do my best to fix what I can. Cam (Chat) 04:37, 30 March 2010 (UTC)
 * Alright. I've cut down on its usage as much as I am able to (ie where other sources were capable of fulfilling the same role). Cam (Chat) 04:41, 30 March 2010 (UTC)
 * The other difficulty, as Ed and I are discovering pouring over our sources, is that very few sources deal with the Yamato in any great deal. I have seven books that mention the leviathan of a warship, but very few of them do so for more than a sentence here and there or a paragraph. The only fully comprehensive source I have access to, unfortunately, is combinedfleet. To be honest, it's one of the few exhaustive sources actually available on the nit-pickings of ship movement of the IJN. Cam (Chat) 05:51, 30 March 2010 (UTC)
 * "hardly referenced in comparison" - Garzke and Dulin, p. 54 are referenced 18 times alone...add in pp. 56 and 57, and it rises to 31.
 * AFAIK, unless the tabular records themselves have been published, the kind of information they give aren't directly in print. — Ed   (talk  •  majestic titan)  05:55, 30 March 2010 (UTC)
 * Brad, CombinedFleet is the only source in English that I know of that has published a TROM for Yamato with that level of detail. I have most of the books printed in English that present the history of the Imperial Japanese Navy, and I just checked them all to try to replace some of the CombinedFleet citations.  I was able to replace around four of them, but the rest of the CombinedFleet citations appear to have information that is contained in no other source in English, especially exact dates and the names of Yamato's skippers.  What do you expect this article's editors to do, learn Japanese, then travel to Japan and visit the war history library of the Defense Ministry to personally scrub the Senshi Sōshō for the same information? Cla68 (talk) 12:10, 30 March 2010 (UTC)
 * Cla68, Brad brought up a perfectly reasonable point. In my experience, adopting even a mildly combative tone, such as that seen in your last sentence, doesn't do anyone any good. It may be that the replies Brad has received, from you and other editors, as well as the recent changes, will satisfy him; would you take it amiss if I suggested you strike or recast your last sentence and await his return? All the best, Steve  T • C 13:05, 30 March 2010 (UTC)
 * I struck it, but I don't agree that his objection is reasonable. The editors pointed out that the site has been accepted as a reliable source and it is the only source for the information in question. Cla68 (talk) 22:47, 30 March 2010 (UTC)
 * Well, I think it's a reasonable point to raise that an article uses a lot of one source, while seeming to ignore others, even if one accepts the subsequent explanation as to why (i.e. the others don't carry the necessary information). Still, thanks for the strike; your previous comments stood convincingly enough without that sentence. All the best, Steve  T • C 23:16, 30 March 2010 (UTC)
 * Let me make it clear that I know that being an FAC reviewer is an onerous and thankless task, and I appreciate that Brad is willing to be one. If I could, however, say something to all FAC reviewers in general, please be careful not to pull out a hammer to pound the protruding nail, as in the Japanese proverb, "The protruding nail must be hammered down."  In this case, the high number of CombinedFleet (CF) citations stuck out very visibly and so earned itself extra attention, and unnecessarily in my opinion.  If this article's editors had combined all their citations in a single footnote at the end of each paragraph, like I usually do, then the number of CF citations wouldn't have been as visible and probably wouldn't have been noted. Cla68 (talk) 03:39, 31 March 2010 (UTC)
 * The problem with the sourcing can be summed up quite elegantly in the last paragraph of the class article:
 * "On the eve of the Allies' occupation of Japan, special service officers of the Imperial Japanese Navy destroyed virtually all records, drawings, and photographs of or relating to the Yamato-class battleships, leaving only fragmentary records of the design characteristics and other technical matters. The destruction of these documents was so efficient that until 1948 the only known images of the Yamato and Musashi were those taken by United States Navy aircraft involved in the attacks on the two battleships. Although some additional photographs and information from documents that were not destroyed have come to light over the years, the loss of the majority of written records for the class has made extensive research into the Yamato-class somewhat difficult. Because of the lack of written records, information on the class largely came from interviews of Japanese officers following Japan's surrender."
 * Since the documents for the ships - all of them - are largely missing other sources must be adopted to fill in the gaps so that these articles can comply with WP:RS standards. As for this article, I agree with Cla68 that we have no need for heavy artillery to settle this dispute. It appears that combined fleet is a reliable source, and that the information in the article is well cited to a vareity of reliable sources. From where I sit, opposition on 1-C grounds is unwarrented in this article, although I intend to take a closer look at all aspects of the article before I cast a !vote on the matter of this article's FAC. TomStar81 (Talk) 23:16, 31 March 2010 (UTC)


 * 2-C There is no consistency in the references. Some have missing page numbers and are out of continuity.  Smith 2007, p. 1.  is the example given @ Featured article criteria. References should appear as [1][2][3] and not [2][3][1] etc. --Brad (talk) 00:09, 30 March 2010 (UTC)
 * From my viewing of it, there aren't any inconsistencies with regards to dates and pages format that are out of line. All of the refs are now in order numerically. Cam (Chat) 04:25, 30 March 2010 (UTC)
 * They are nowhere near complete. The author Thompson is not referenced but is in the biblio. Skulski references have (1988) while in the biblio, (2004) is given. References are missing publication dates, have outdated or missing retrieved on dates. Again, look at  Smith 2007, p. 1.  layout. Your refs should be inline in that manner. Notice commas and periods and where to use them. --Brad (talk) 21:08, 31 March 2010 (UTC)
 * Alright. I've removed the unreferenced book. I've added the earlier publication date for Skulski (my guess is it was a later republication), while all retrieval dates are now on the web references. As to the consistency of the print references, I'm slightly confused as to what your objection is. I've used the format of - to continue your example - Smith (2007), p. 1. in each one of my four previous FA articles. So long as they're formatted consistently, it shouldn't be an issue. As to the lack of periods at the end of some of them, I have begun to clean that up and will finish doing so tonight. Cam (Chat) 23:55, 31 March 2010 (UTC)

Comments:
 * "While drydocked, Captain Nobuei Morishita—former Captain of the battleship Haruna—assumed command of Yamato." You know you've got a serious problem with your captain when he needs drydocking.  I'm mentioning this first, out of order, because I want to mention that the long dashes here are fine with me, because I can substitute parentheses and it still makes sense.  Also, if taking a breath where there's a long dash fits the cadence of your written English, that's fine.  There are other places where neither a breath nor parentheses would make sense, and I'd use commas myself in these places, but I've seen the YouTube video about dash Nazis so I won't oppose over this :)
 * Sorry that may have come across as snotty, I'm trying to say that a reader who is unclear about drydocking might assume that it's something the captain was personally involved in. As a general rule, to maintain clarity for the widest audience possible, phrases and clauses that modify something should modify a word that's somewhere close by, and in the same sentence. - Dank (push to talk) 03:00, 30 March 2010 (UTC)
 * It didn't come across as snotty at all. I looked at it again, and I'm struggling to figure out what I could have possibly been on when I wrote that sentence. Must have been powerful stuff :P Cam (Chat) 21:34, 30 March 2010 (UTC)


 * In case anyone cares, the first mention of "tonnes" in the text isn't converted. As long as conversion information is in the sidebar (and it is, though not to long tons), this isn't an issue I care about, but I know some people care.  Also, I don't like "Displacing over 70,000 tons", because "ton" can mean tonne, short ton or (in naval contexts, on Wikipedia) long ton; I don't think anyone will require you to give the conversions, but I'd prefer that you say which ton you mean.
 * I've changed it to tonnes, though it could also possibly be metric tons if that works better. Cam (Chat) 21:36, 30 March 2010 (UTC)
 * Since this is British English (not sure why btw), tonnes. "Metric tons" is for American English (since only Americans need to be reminded about "metric"). - Dank (push to talk) 22:24, 30 March 2010 (UTC)


 * Since this is British English, I'm out of my league here, but I would have thought "class's" was the possessive, not "class.
 * Ah. I'll fix that. Part of my problem is that Canadian English is sort of a variant of the two, so I usually end up having about half british/half American english. I'll fix this. Cam (Chat) 23:03, 29 March 2010 (UTC)
 * Hey, let's have more Canadian English articles, they're easier for me since Chicago has always been influential with Canadian journalists. - Dank (push to talk) 13:29, 30 March 2010 (UTC)


 * See Wikipedia_talk:Manual_of_Style_(dates_and_numbers) for a question about one of my edits. (more to come) - Dank (push to talk) 22:46, 29 March 2010 (UTC)
 * Yeah, I wasn't entirely sure what to do with that. From my perspective, it mostly just looked like a horribly convoluted number-system which was really irritating to read in a flow-like manner. Thanks for changing it though, because one-hundred sixty-two really didn't look that much better. Cam (Chat)
 * Okay, and was "increased" (instead of decreased) right? I guessed. - Dank (push to talk) 23:06, 29 March 2010 (UTC)
 * that seems to work much better, and yes, the number was increased almost sevenfold (not that it made a whole lot of difference, given the low quality of the guns!) Cam (Chat) 04:49, 30 March 2010 (UTC)


 * Hopefully we'll be working together on lots of articles, Cam, so say something now if you liked things better before I started messing with them. - Dank (push to talk) 20:48, 30 March 2010 (UTC)
 * No. That works excellently. Cam (Chat) 21:34, 30 March 2010 (UTC)
 * Thanks. When I get to the end, I'm going to go back (unless someone says something) and remove all the conversions on the gun barrel widths, since those are commonly used as the names of guns, and since we're having trouble with the readability of sentences like this one: " When refitted in 1944 and 1945 in preparation for naval engagements in the South Pacific, the secondary battery configuration was changed to six 155 mm guns and twenty-four 127 mm guns, and the number of 25 mm anti-aircraft guns was increased to 162." - Dank (push to talk) 21:45, 30 March 2010 (UTC)
 * P.S. Changed my mind on this. People ought to be able to see U.S.-friendly units in the U.S. and SI units in most other parts of the world, and that ought to be handled automatically by the MediaWiki software by surpressing any output of the conversion template that the user has said they're not interested in or isn't likely to be interested in.  I'm not holding my breath, but I'm not spending my evening compensating for missing software, either. - Dank (push to talk) 04:00, 1 April 2010 (UTC)


 * To deal with the objection above about references, do you mind if I add a few from Conway's All the World's Fighting Ships, 1922-1946? - Dank (push to talk) 02:37, 31 March 2010 (UTC)
 * Sorry, I don't know what "surface combatants" are. I'm imagining that means ships, or ships plus subs that have surfaced, or ships plus things that aren't ships. - Dank (push to talk) 20:48, 31 March 2010 (UTC)
 * Battleships/cruisers/destroyers. They are surface ships that don't use aircraft to attack things. — Ed   (talk  •  majestic titan)  21:30, 31 March 2010 (UTC)
 * I don't understand what "George" means in: "The intervention of a squadron of Kawanishi N1K1 "Shiden" fighters ("George") flown ..." - Dank (push to talk) 20:56, 31 March 2010 (UTC)
 * The Japanese called them "Shiden," the Allies called them "George." — Ed   (talk  •  majestic titan)  21:30, 31 March 2010 (UTC)
 * Does anyone know if the reference tells us whether the NaN° list was to starboard or port? - Dank (push to talk) 21:43, 31 March 2010 (UTC)
 * Nevermind, I can deduce from the next paragraph that it was port. - Dank (push to talk) 22:26, 31 March 2010 (UTC)
 * I'm not 100% clear on "strafing had taken a toll of the crews who manned Yamato's unprotected 25 mm anti-aircraft weapons, sharply curtailing their effectiveness". Are you saying there were so many casualties that not enough people could be found to operate the guns, or they had people available but they didn't want to operate the guns because of the strafing risk, or the guns were damaged? - Dank (push to talk) 22:24, 31 March 2010 (UTC)
 * Fixed. They were unarmoured, and thus their crews died easily. Dead gunners really aren't that useful. Cam (Chat) 20:44, 1 April 2010 (UTC)


 * Comment: I'm hoping that as I get better at this, I can change less when I copyedit for FAC. A really good copyeditor knows all the ways that will work, and so they can preserve as much as possible the tone of the author.  I'm being a little conservative and a little anal; the plan is to relax when I see more of what passes muster and what doesn't.  That's the plan :) - Dank (push to talk) 02:40, 1 April 2010 (UTC)
 * Sounds good. Cam (Chat) 20:44, 1 April 2010 (UTC)


 * I'm not sure what to do with the last sentence, "... thus the battleship's end serves as a metaphor for the end of the Japanese empire". I understand the desire to finish with a bang, with something that sums up the significance, but if you keep this, then I think it would be better to attribute this sentiment to someone.  In the previous sentence, I thought 4 adjectives was one too many; you might want to pick a different one to toss.
 * Yeah. Four adjectives is a little on the heavy side. In fact, it's a ridiculous and absurd, albeit highly loquacious and resourceful, method of writing :) Cam (Chat) 20:44, 1 April 2010 (UTC)


 * You might be asked for more consistency in whether SI or U.S. units come first ... but not by me. - Dank (push to talk) 04:21, 1 April 2010 (UTC)
 * Support per my usual disclaimer. - Dank (push to talk) 03:45, 1 April 2010 (UTC)


 * Comment Red links: Nomura Jiro, Gihachi Takayanagi, Nobuei Morishita, Chiaki Matsuda and Miyazato Shutoku is any of these people notable enough to get an own article in the future? If not they shouldn't be red links. -- Esuzu ( talk  •  contribs ) 16:16, 30 March 2010 (UTC)
 * I imagine some of them could be stubbed a little bit. Takayanagi in particular could possibly be a 2-3 line stub, but I somehow don't really think that's an option for any of the other ones. I'll delink them. Cam (Chat) 21:34, 30 March 2010 (UTC)
 * Still not done. Esuzu  ( talk  •  contribs ) 14:37, 9 April 2010 (UTC)
 * Now they are. Cam (Chat) 20:35, 9 April 2010 (UTC)


 * Comment One unmentioned cultural reference is the Yamato cannon in the Blizzard game Starcraft. I can't be sure it relates to the ship, but it is the most powerful weapon employed by the battleship - http://starcraft.wikia.com/wiki/Yamato_Cannon Neumannk (talk) 20:24, 30 March 2010 (UTC)
 * That's a thought. That seems like a bit of a stretch, given that the connection would be difficult to establish on anything more than speculation. For now, I'm leaving it out. Cam (Chat) 21:34, 30 March 2010 (UTC)
 * I feel these trivia (simply "X appeared in Y"s), aside from usually being impossible to get a reliable source, are not encyclopaedic. The project should not become indiscriminate in its information; context is key.  Jappalang (talk) 03:34, 31 March 2010 (UTC)
 * Per WP:MILPOP there are some occasions where such an appearance is encyclopaedic, but you are correct that I do not feel as though the current appearance that is mentioned complies with this section of the WP:MILMOS which is a part of the WP:MOS. -MBK004 04:03, 31 March 2010 (UTC)
 * I agree - the Yamato Museum in Kure has an entire gallery dedicated to various representations of the ship in popular culture and its shop has a range of artifacts from these appearances for sale (though I settled on a Yamato snow dome). From memory, Space Battleship Yamato received by far the most attention in the museum. Nick-D (talk) 07:33, 1 April 2010 (UTC)
 * The point is not simply that mentioning the existence of the referenced item is not encylopaedic; it is the manner of presenting such items (and more importantly their context) that becomes an issue. Compare this (with context) and this (the original form).  Jappalang (talk) 01:28, 2 April 2010 (UTC)


 * Support Comments : per Wikipedia talk:Featured article candidates/Japanese battleship Yamato/archive1, I have some issues (more serious are the confusions in content) I would like to be addressed before I am comfortable in making decisions on this article. Jappalang (talk) 03:23, 31 March 2010 (UTC)  The ed17 added a citation needed tag here; is anyone tackling this?  Jappalang (talk) 11:42, 6 April 2010 (UTC)
 * Fixed it. It was the wrong number, as it turns out. Cam (Chat) 17:17, 6 April 2010 (UTC)
 * As of this version, I find this a comprehensive, well-written, illustrated article about one of the iconic battleships of WWII (at least to me). It does seem to go into too much detail at times, but I think that can be easily trimmed if someone deems it detrimental to the general reader, so it would not affect my support.  Jappalang (talk) 03:18, 7 April 2010 (UTC)


 * Image review: all images are either in the public domain or appropriately licensed. Jappalang (talk) 03:30, 31 March 2010 (UTC)


 * Comment - I've backed up statements and added a few sentences based on Whitley's work in Battleships of World War II. — Ed   (talk  •  majestic titan)  04:55, 3 April 2010 (UTC)
 * Comment There seem to be over a hundred instances of "fireroom" (not including other instances of "fire room") on Wikipedia, but no explanation of what the heck one is. Could we pretty please either make a stub, or... is there a page giving a list of naval terminology or describing warship features... or something!... and start making some wikilinks Tks• Ling.Nut 01:50, 10 April 2010 (UTC)
 * I'll add it to the Glossary of nautical terms for now, then possibly stub it off later. Cam (Chat) 04:14, 10 April 2010 (UTC)

Support--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 01:21, 14 April 2010 (UTC)
 * Support I've been over the article twice and did not see anything that warranted an oppose. My only objection to the article is that it could have been so much more if the IJN had not anhilated the paperwork on these mighty sisters so thoroughly, but that is beyond the scope of our ability to adequately adress. TomStar81 (Talk) 02:28, 13 April 2010 (UTC)


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