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Johannes van Damme

 * Nominator(s): WorldTravleerAndPhotoTaker (talk) 08:44, 16 June 2023 (UTC)

This article is about the first European to be executed in modern day Singapore, who claimed he was tricked into carrying a bag with hidden drugs but research showed he was caught up in an international DEA sting WorldTravleerAndPhotoTaker (talk) 08:44, 16 June 2023 (UTC)

Oppose and suggest withdrawal. Stubby, one-line paragraphs, unsourced material, lead too short, clearly lacks comprehensiveness. I'm afraid it's currently in breach of most of the FAC criteria. Revise and resubmit, please. Although the subject has got potential. Perhaps a FAC mentor might be a good idea? Ask at WT:FAC. Conversely, there may not be much point: with all the notices on your page and your inability to stop uploading tangential and poor quality copyright-violating photos, etc., you may not be here for much longer. Best of luck! SN54129 09:09, 16 June 2023 (UTC) (t &#183; c)  buidhe  02:56, 17 June 2023 (UTC)