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The article was promoted by Ian Rose 12:58, 2 May 2012.

John Sherman Cooper

 * Nominator(s): Acdixon (talk · contribs) 20:48, 20 March 2012 (UTC)

Since my next Kentucky governor FAC is still undergoing an A-class review, I bring you U.S. Senator John Sherman Cooper. The son of a local political family, Cooper held some minor offices and ran unsuccessfully for governor in 1939. Later, he served under George Patton in World War II, earning the Bronze Star Medal for reorganizing the Bavarian judicial system. He served two partial terms in the Senate before being appointed Ambassador to India by President Dwight D. Eisenhower. During the Cold War, he tried to steer the new Indian state away from Communism. After his third partial term in the Senate, he was finally elected to a full term in 1960. He became one of only a few Republican voices in the Senate that opposed escalation of the Vietnam War. His final act of public service was as Ambassador to East Germany in the mid-1970s.

This article successfully underwent both a GA review and a MILHIST A-class review. I look forward to responding to comments as quickly as possible. Acdixon (talk · contribs) 20:48, 20 March 2012 (UTC)


 * Support I thought that this article was of FA class when I commented on its A class review and am happy to see that it's been nominated; great work. Nick-D (talk) 10:28, 21 March 2012 (UTC)
 * Thanks for your comments both here and at the ACR. Acdixon (talk · contribs) 14:02, 21 March 2012 (UTC)

Comments. Some of these are explained at WP:Checklist. - Dank (push to talk)
 * "to the time": I'd go with "up to that time".
 * "a partial term the Senate": a partial term in the Senate
 * "recently-independent": recently independent
 * "Newly-elected": Newly elected
 * "advocating for": usually a transitive verb
 * "He died in a Washington, D.C. retirement home on February 21, 1991 ...": a two-fer. See WP:Checklist.
 * "of the seven children born to": of seven children born to
 * "who were active in": active in
 * "worked delivering newspapers, in railroad yards, and his father's coal mines": See WP:Checklist
 * "that the could not": that he could not - Dank (push to talk) 03:50, 23 March 2012 (UTC)
 * Fixed all these. I know you will have more. Always appreciate your thorough reviews. May not be on-wiki this weekend to respond to comments. Will hopefully be watching the Cats play their way to a second straight Final Four. :) Acdixon (talk · contribs) 13:37, 23 March 2012 (UTC)
 * See you there. - Dank (push to talk) 13:51, 23 March 2012 (UTC)
 * Tough break for the Heels with Marshall's wrist. Before all that, I indeed had a Cats and Heels title game. Not sure they can do it without Marshall, but you guys were fortunate to get Ohio as your first game without him. Good luck to you folks as well (for the next 3 games, anyway!) Acdixon (talk · contribs) 14:05, 23 March 2012 (UTC)
 * "and was formerly the law partner": Better is "and had been the law partner" or "and the former law partner".
 * "Lexington circuit court judge and former Congressman King Swope": Some readers find this easier to parse: "King Swope, a Lexington circuit court judge and former congressman"
 * "Even though at 41 years old, he was well above the draft age,": Look for opportunities to remove forms of "to be" and synonyms per WP:Checklist. "Even though well above the draft age at 41 years old,"
 * "an immediately-offered officer's commission": sounds more Germanic than English to me
 * "Patton ordered ordered": a no-no.
 * "hotly-contested": search for "ly-" throughout
 * "Washington, D.C. proved": Check for second commas throughout. Use "Washington, D.C.," or "Washington D.C." since those still have more support in relevant style guides, although I admit second commas are waning, certainly in journalistic prose.
 * "war surplus material": material or materiel?
 * "veterans injured as prisoner of war": prisoners
 * "In the area of organized labor, he opposed bans on industrywide collective bargaining ...": More common is "He opposed bans on industrywide collective bargaining for organized labor ..."
 * "vocally opposing ... and resisted ...": vocally opposing ... and resisting
 * "At the end of his partial term in the Senate, he had voted with the Republicans just 51% of the time – the lowest average of any member of the party. Despite his party independence, Cooper headed the Kentucky delegation to the 1948 Republican National Convention.": Although he had voted with the Republicans just 51% of the time during his partial term – the lowest average of any member of the party – Cooper headed the Kentucky delegation to the 1948 Republican National Convention.
 * "that created North Atlantic Treaty Organization": that created the North Atlantic Treaty Organization
 * "cautioning that "Many ... ": cautioning that "many ..., or cautioning, "Many ...
 * "U.S.-India relations": At FAC, U.S.–India relations
 * "file a formal protest to": file a formal protest with
 * "the largest sale of surplus agricultural products by the United States to any country to that time in history": I'd go with: "the largest sale ever of surplus agricultural products by the United States to any country". Bad suggestion on my part, I fixed it.
 * So far so good except as above. My comments cover two-thirds of the article, down to John Sherman Cooper, and this is all I have time to do on this one.  I've asked for help finishing up at WT:MHC. - Dank (push to talk) 15:51, 23 March 2012 (UTC)
 * Should all be addressed. Acdixon (talk · contribs) 18:28, 23 March 2012 (UTC)
 * Yep, all addressed. - Dank (push to talk) 21:18, 24 March 2012 (UTC)
 * "The measure failed by three votes but increased congressional scrutiny": How did a failed measure increase scrutiny?
 * "alternate delegate": Fine like it is ... for the doubters, 185K ghits, not "alternative delegate" (12K hits)
 * Support on prose per standard disclaimer. - Dank (push to talk) 03:05, 29 April 2012 (UTC)

Sources and images but no spotchecks. Nikkimaria (talk) 14:33, 23 March 2012 (UTC)
 * No citations to Senate Historical Office biography
 * Moved to further reading. Acdixon (talk · contribs) 18:28, 23 March 2012 (UTC)
 * Watch for minor inconsistencies like doubled periods
 * Fixed. Acdixon (talk · contribs) 18:28, 23 March 2012 (UTC)
 * Captions that are complete sentences should end in periods
 * Fixed. Acdixon (talk · contribs) 18:28, 23 March 2012 (UTC)
 * File:John_Sherman_Cooper_bust.jpg: what is the copyright status of the bust? The US does not have freedom of panorama for sculpture
 * Not sure. I didn't know that a 2D representation of a 3D sculpture would have the same copyright status as the sculpture itself. The sculpter died in 1998, and the bust was installed in the capitol in 1987. None of these indicate any kind of PD status on account of age. That's all I know about it. Acdixon (talk · contribs) 18:28, 23 March 2012 (UTC)
 * Okay, based on that I'm afraid you'll probably have to remove it. Nikkimaria (talk) 22:20, 14 April 2012 (UTC)
 * Would you mind to nominate it for deletion at Commons, then? I'd hate for someone else to try and use it under the same false assumption of PD status that I did. Acdixon (talk · contribs) 13:46, 17 April 2012 (UTC)
 * File:Dwight_D._Eisenhower,_official_Presidential_portrait.jpg: source link is dead
 * Not sure what to do about this. I can't find that page in Archive.org, and I can't find anywhere else that indicates that it is his official presidential portrait, yet I have no doubt that it is, given the original source URL. Acdixon (talk · contribs) 18:28, 23 March 2012 (UTC)
 * File:JohnShermanCooper.jpg is tagged as lacking author and date info. Nikkimaria (talk) 14:33, 23 March 2012 (UTC)
 * It's from the Biographical Directory of the United States Congress, which seldom gives that info. I've looked for another image that I can provide that information for, but surprisingly, for someone who was so active for so long at the federal level, there isn't much. The few that are at Commons are all either from a good distance or from the side. Acdixon (talk · contribs) 18:28, 23 March 2012 (UTC)


 * Comments supported below Will try to do a full review in the next few days, before then, I noticed you have Closed shop double linked in the same paragraph. Mark Arsten (talk) 03:10, 30 April 2012 (UTC)
 * I noticed that once and intended to fix it, but the thought didn't stay in my head long enough. Thanks for reminding me. Look forward to your full review. Acdixon (talk · contribs) 13:38, 30 April 2012 (UTC)
 * Ok, back again, thus far this looks like it's pretty well written. I made a few minor copyedits as I went though. (Feel free to revert, of course). I've read through "Service in World War II".
 * "Although Centre was known as one of Kentucky's foremost colleges, Cooper's father wanted him to broaden his education, and after one year at Centre, Cooper transferred to Yale College." Might want to not that Yale is pretty prestigious, since some non-Americans may not realize that. Ditto for Skull and Bones.
 * See if I have addressed this sufficiently. Acdixon (talk · contribs) 13:27, 1 May 2012 (UTC)
 * "Cooper brought this to the attention of General Patton, who rescinded the repatriation order in the Third Army's occupation zone.[9] He received a citation from the Third Army's military government section for his action." Who received the citation?
 * Fixed. Acdixon (talk · contribs) 13:27, 1 May 2012 (UTC)
 * Missing a "p" "Schulman, p. 97–98" Mark Arsten (talk) 03:09, 1 May 2012 (UTC)
 * Fixed. Acdixon (talk · contribs) 13:27, 1 May 2012 (UTC)
 * "He was an alternate delegate to that body in 1950 and 1951." Should this be "alternate" or "alternative"? Mark Arsten (talk) 01:16, 2 May 2012 (UTC)
 * This is one of the rare times when WP:MOS (specifically, WP:COMMONALITY) will let you down. See my comment above; there's no such thing as an "alternative delegate" in AmEng (unless they're leading an alternative lifestyle!) There are other uses of the word "alternate" that can't be substituted by "alternative" or "alternating"; the only way to tell is by looking them up or searching. - Dank (push to talk) 01:22, 2 May 2012 (UTC)
 * Alright, thanks for the explanation, I'll file that in the back of my mind for next time. Mark Arsten (talk) 02:56, 2 May 2012 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the clarification, Dank. Your explanation was much better than mine would have been. Acdixon (talk · contribs) 12:23, 2 May 2012 (UTC)
 * I presume that his service as ambassador in Germany was fairly unremarkable?
 * Apparently. I haven't been able to find any sources that say much beyond "he was appointed and served X years". Acdixon (talk · contribs) 12:23, 2 May 2012 (UTC)
 * "Opposition to the measure developed in both Kentucky and Tennessee" Do we know why that was?
 * The LHL article quotes several people, all with different reasons that range from "it's always been called that" to "no other national parks are named after people" to "we already printed the brochures" (seriously). I've added that the opposition was for a variety of reasons. Acdixon (talk · contribs) 12:23, 2 May 2012 (UTC)
 * I think some people frown on starting sentences with "Due to", you do that one toward the end.
 * Changed to "Because of". Acdixon (talk · contribs) 12:23, 2 May 2012 (UTC)
 * Support A top notch article, very little I could find that wasn't very well done. Mark Arsten (talk) 03:20, 2 May 2012 (UTC)
 * Thanks for your review. Good luck with your MILHIST ACR on William T. Anderson. I assume that one will land here at FAC next. If so, drop me a line. I generally don't do FA reviews, but I after doing a PR on Anderson, I might as well weigh in at FAC, too. Acdixon (talk · contribs) 12:23, 2 May 2012 (UTC)
 * Support, pending a handful of issues:
 * The narrative lost me here: "Cooper returned to Harvard after his father's death, but soon discovered that he could not simultaneously pursue a law degree and manage his family's affairs. He was admitted to the bar by examination in 1928 and opened a legal practice in Somerset." The first sentence suggests that he left law school to manage his affairs. How then was he admitted to the bar? Can one be admitted to the bar without completing a law degree?
 * Yes, actually. According to Schulman, "he was able to win certification for admittance to the bar only by passing a Kentucky state examination in 1928, a procedure then proper but no longer allowed." I tried to convey this by noting that his admission was "by examination". Acdixon (talk · contribs) 16:12, 1 May 2012 (UTC)
 * "After being urged into politics by his uncle, Judge Roscoe Tarter" Tarter, or Tartar (mother's maiden name in Early Life)?
 * Ah, "Tartar". Good catch. Fixed. Acdixon (talk · contribs) 16:12, 1 May 2012 (UTC)
 * Service in World War II: I don't follow why he was offered a commission but then he turned it down, enlisted as a private, and went to OCS anyway. If he intended to become an officer, why did he turn down the initial commission?
 * The sources don't say, as far as I can recall. From what I read of him, it was probably a show of humility on his part, but that would obviously be WP:OR. Acdixon (talk · contribs) 16:12, 1 May 2012 (UTC)
 * Nice work, once again. I've read enough of your work that I think I know as much about Kentucky's political history as I do my own state's! -- Laser brain  (talk)  15:53, 1 May 2012 (UTC)
 * Haha. A jaunt through central Kentucky with me is either enlightening or painful, depending on how interested you are in the state's history. Always appreciate your comments. Seems like my FACs always come down to the wire, with a few editors swooping in with late reviews to save them from not being promoted due to lack of interest. Thanks as always. Acdixon (talk · contribs) 16:12, 1 May 2012 (UTC)
 * Excellent! I don't know who would visit a new state and not want to know its history? Anyway, good luck with the remainder of the nomination. -- Laser brain  (talk)  20:20, 1 May 2012 (UTC)

Delegate note -- Promoting without a source spotcheck, given that it got a going over at its recent A-Class Review, and other recent FAC noms of AC's have had such checks. Cheers, Ian Rose (talk) 12:55, 2 May 2012 (UTC)


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