Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/Jon Huntsman, Jr./archive1


 * The following is an archived discussion of a featured article nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured article candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The article was not promoted by GrahamColm 11:09, 27 October 2012.

Jon Huntsman, Jr.

 * Nominator(s): Grammarxxx (What'd I do this time?) 04:45, 16 October 2012 (UTC)

I am nominating this for featured article because I have put a lot of work into this article and it meets all criteria. The article is about the former Governor of Utah and US Ambassador to Singapore and China, and most recently a 2012 candidate for Republican nominee for President. Grammarxxx (What'd I do this time?) 04:45, 16 October 2012 (UTC)
 * Suggest a more enticing nom. So who is he anyway? Obviously he's notable or he wouldn't have an article. Johnbod (talk) 13:13, 16 October 2012 (UTC)
 * Done Grammarxxx (What'd I do this time?) 18:07, 16 October 2012 (UTC)

Source review - spotchecks not done Oppose and stopping - citations/sourcing needs significant work before review can proceed. Nikkimaria (talk) 15:42, 17 October 2012 (UTC)
 * Source for 2006 Cato Institute eval? Added
 * Source for "largest budget in the state's history"? Added
 * Source for children? Added
 * Source for Distinguished Eagle Scout Award? Check for other material missing citations Added
 * In citations, be consistent in what is wikilinked when, what is italicized when, etc
 * Web sources should consistently include publishers
 * FN4: who uploaded this image?
 * What makes this a high-quality reliable source? Replaced
 * Be consistent in when you include access dates
 * Be consistent in whether you include locations for newspapers
 * FN18 and similar: formatting
 * Fn21: formatting
 * Several titles use hyphens when they should use endashes
 * FN41: formatting

Comment by Jesse V.
 * I noticed that this article has some deadlinks and other redirect issues. Please see its Checklinks entry. &bull; Jesse V.(talk) 00:36, 21 October 2012 (UTC)

Comment about 15 duplicated links, the first of which occurs in the second para of the lead  Jimfbleak -  talk to me?  09:57, 27 October 2012 (UTC)


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