Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/Le Quang Tung


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The article was promoted 21:25, 13 May 2008.

Le Quang Tung
Commander of the Army of the Republic of Vietnam Special Forces. A bit of an obscure fellow, I've included everything in the books...  Blnguyen  ( bananabucket ) 05:54, 29 April 2008 (UTC)

Comments Sources look good, no external links to check. Ealdgyth - Talk 14:00, 29 April 2008 (UTC)

Support Comments: all about prose. Otherwise fine.
 * Early life: the first three sentences, each introduced by a subordinate clause, read strangely. Recast?
 * "As pilgrimages to the pond became larger" Clumsy? "As more people made pilgrimages to the pond"?
 * "Nhu would then use the scare to round up" > "take advantage of the scare"?
 * "They officials mined the pond". They > the? Mined > blew up?
 * Check for EngVar? Criticise and organise (BE) but maneuvred (AE)
 * -- R OGER D AVIES  talk 09:58, 5 May 2008 (UTC)
 * Fixed I think.  Blnguyen  ( bananabucket ) 02:11, 6 May 2008 (UTC)
 * Yes, -- R OGER D AVIES  talk 07:28, 6 May 2008 (UTC)

Support My concerns have been addressed. Thanks for an interesting read (and a quiet hurrah! for an article that does not rely on any online sources). Maralia (talk) 19:18, 8 May 2008 (UTC)
 * Support looks good and meets the criteria. Well done. TomStar81 (Talk) 18:05, 12 May 2008 (UTC)
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