Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/Melbourne Castle/archive1


 * The following is an archived discussion of a featured article nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured article candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The article was promoted by User:Ian Rose 10:01, 19 November 2013 (UTC).

Melbourne Castle

 * Nominator(s):  Jimfbleak -  talk to me?  07:03, 2 November 2013 (UTC)

This former royal castle was once used to imprison the Duke of Bourbon, and came close to getting Mary, Queen of Scots too, but ended its days being quarried for stone. Now, the waters of the Trent overflow its towers, as was prophesied. Thanks to Hchc2009, Dank, Nev1 and Anotherclown for improving this article to Milhist A-class before it came here  Jimfbleak -  talk to me?  07:03, 2 November 2013 (UTC)


 * Support on prose per standard disclaimer. I've looked at the changes made since I reviewed this for A-class. These are my edits. - Dank (push to talk) 11:35, 2 November 2013 (UTC)
 * Thanks for your edits and support  Jimfbleak -  talk to me?  12:55, 2 November 2013 (UTC)

Source review - spotchecks not done
 * FN25: verify title?
 * Compare work capitalization between FNs 23 and 25
 * I've never heard of Santa Barabara - is it near Santa Barbara? Nikkimaria (talk) 19:01, 2 November 2013 (UTC)
 * All done, thank you for checks  Jimfbleak -  talk to me?  19:32, 2 November 2013 (UTC)

Image check - all OK (CC, own work, PD-old-100). Sources and authors provided.
 * Tweaked a few license tags to be more specific incl. source country situation (all OK). GermanJoe (talk) 10:27, 4 November 2013 (UTC)
 * Thanks Joe  Jimfbleak -  talk to me?  11:58, 4 November 2013 (UTC)


 * Support (having stumbled here from my FAC). I agree with quality of prose in assessment by, above. I would add in particular I like the style used for the referencing and citation sections. In addition, the overall structure is organized well, and the writing quality is succinct and eminently readable for our viewers. &mdash; Cirt (talk) 03:49, 5 November 2013 (UTC)
 * Thanks for support and kind words  Jimfbleak -  talk to me?  06:48, 5 November 2013 (UTC)
 * You're most welcome, &mdash; Cirt (talk) 04:41, 6 November 2013 (UTC)


 * Support from a literature perspective. It uses the available sources on this castle comprehensively. Hchc2009 (talk) 17:07, 6 November 2013 (UTC)
 * Thanks for support and for your help in bringing this up to standard  Jimfbleak -  talk to me?  10:49, 7 November 2013 (UTC)


 * Support Having looked at the article again, and being involved with the A-class process, I'm happy to support the article. As Hchc2009 says, it is comprehensive and on top of that, it is well structured and well written. Nev1 (talk) 18:04, 12 November 2013 (UTC)
 * Thanks Nev1, I appreciated your help preparing this for FAC  Jimfbleak - </b> talk to me?  20:00, 12 November 2013 (UTC)

Ian Rose (talk) 06:19, 18 November 2013 (UTC)
 * The above discussion is preserved as an archive. Please do not modify it. No further edits should be made to this page.