Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/Michelangelo/archive1


 * The following is an archived discussion of a featured article nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured article candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The article was not promoted 21:24, 28 April 2007.

Michelangelo
Michelangelo was one of the greatest artists of his time. Nyla1 20:44, 19 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Comment. You don't appear to have edited the article at all. Are you sure it's ready for FA status; have you asked the article's major authors? CloudNine 20:50, 19 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Comment, there are only haf a dozen inline citations, half of which come from one book. -Phoenix 22:48, 19 April 2007 (UTC)


 * Oppose. Only four sources used. Please review the FA criteria. That Michelangelo is one of the greatest artists of his time is irrelevant to the FAC process. Oran e  ( talk  &bull;  cont. ) 03:45, 20 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Oppose The article is difficult to at times - it needs a thorough copyedit. The lead needs to be totally revised, particularly the first paragraph (see WP:LEAD. The article needs to be based on reliable sources, that is, scholarly sources - there is a lot of material written on Michelangelo by art historians - use it! (see WP:RS and WP:ATT). Awadewit 07:15, 20 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Oppose Needs more sources, I didn;t even bother to read the entire text due to that. Aaron Bowen 09:54, 20 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Oppose per all above.--Yannismarou 18:53, 20 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Oppose- needs a copyedit and not a wide variety of referenced sources Thunderwing 14:08, 21 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Comment After this FAC is over I might help source it. Give me a notice and I'll help. Aaron Bowen 01:38, 27 April 2007 (UTC)
 * The above discussion is preserved as an archive. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured article candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.