Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/Nebular hypothesis


 * The following is an archived discussion of a featured article nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured article candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The article was promoted 18:14, 29 April 2008.

Nebular hypothesis
Self-nominator. I'm nominating this article for featured article because it has been significantly expanded and now, in my opinion, is FA ready. This article is about the currently prevailing theory on formation of the planets. Ruslik (talk) 09:58, 23 April 2008 (UTC)

Comments


 * All other links and sources look good. Ealdgyth - Talk 16:53, 23 April 2008 (UTC)


 * Support I did not give it a thorough reading, because the topic is extremely dense, but from what I have read, it appears to be well done. Ottava Rima (talk) 21:23, 23 April 2008 (UTC)
 * Support&mdash;It's a fine article and appears to meet the FA criteria. I may be seeing the occasional missing article or hyphen, but I'll let the grammar experts check that. =) &mdash;RJH (talk) 22:17, 23 April 2008 (UTC)


 * Support This is an excellent explanation of the hypothesis. Despite the necessary astronomical terms, the prose is engaging. I enjoyed reading the article and I will enjoy reading it again. It is a fine example of those few and far between articles that engage the reader enough to make return visits. I usually spot problems with grammar; there are none that I can see. Well done. --Graham Colm Talk 19:14, 25 April 2008 (UTC)
 * Comment. I'm sorry, Ruslik, I did not get to this during PR; not editing much. Please can you deal with the excess bluelink problem? The same terms are linked over and over again. Marskell (talk) 17:38, 26 April 2008 (UTC)
 * I removed excessive bluelinks. Now every long subsection has only one wikilink for every term. Ruslik (talk) 18:08, 26 April 2008 (UTC)

I suspect there are some missing hyphens throughout the article, but I'm not a grammarian: perhaps ask Tony1 to check?
 * producing 1 cm sized particles.[10] ... The accretion process, by which 1 km planetesimals grow into 1,000 km sized bodies, ...

Sandy Georgia (Talk) 17:48, 29 April 2008 (UTC)
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