Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/Operation Anthropoid/archive1

Operation Anthropoid
reason for nominating the article: very important and interesting event —Preceding unsigned comment added by Prague Fuser (talk • contribs)


 * Object for the following reasons:
 * "Trivia" and "The operation in popular culture" sections should be made into prose and merged elsewhere.
 * Short, choppy paragraphs and one-paragraph sections proliferate. These should be fixed.
 * The referencing is inadequate. External hyperlinks should be changed over to footnotes using the cite web template, etc., etc.  Citations to printed material would also be nice.
 * The copyright status of Image:Assassins hiding place.jpg should be resolved, and if it survives speedy deletion, the file should be renamed. Assassins have hidden in lots of places. ..
 * The prose needs a thorough copy edit and style shakedown. Anville 14:50, 21 May 2006 (UTC)


 * Object not quite ready yet:


 * Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at WP:LEAD. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.


 * Per WP:MOS, headings generally do not start with the word "The". For example,  ==The Biography==  would be changed to  ==Biography== .


 * This article is a bit list-weighty; in other words, some of the lists should be converted to prose (paragraph form).


 * Generally, trivia sections are looked down upon; please either remove the trivia section or incorporate any important facts into the rest of the article.


 * The article will need references. See WP:CITE and WP:V for more information.


 * Please provide WP:CITE information for references/footnotes. See also WP:CITE/ES; templates like and  may be useful here.


 * Thanks, AndyZ t 15:19, 21 May 2006 (UTC)