Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/Paper Mario/archive1

Paper Mario
I think this is a pretty good possibility for a featured article.

I looked over the page, and I didn't see that much wrong with it at all. All of the party members and characters are listed there, without too much detail, the battle mechanics are described wonderfully, and I personally don't see any glaring errors. I edited a few names to fix their spelling, but other than that I think this is totally ready to become a featured article! This was a wonderful game to play, and I think it would be very welcome in the library of featured articles. Any way I can help make this even better if it's not ready, please do say. Toastypk 01:17, 5 November 2005 (UTC)
 * Object.
 * There is content for the plotline, but it shouldn't be in the lead, but in its own section.
 * It has no references.
 * It has no discussion on its critical acclaim, its sales figures or the Mario RPG series as a whole.
 * Characters section is too excessive. All NPCs should be merged into the plot section.
 * No mention of Princess Peach's playability. The playable characters should be unlistified, and made into a section about the partners and talk about how they work in and outside of battles.
 * No discussion about audio, and barely anything discussing the graphical style.
 * No discussion about the varying enemies, such as how a flying enemy is immune to most hammer techniques, or that spiked enemies will injure Mario or anyone who jumps on them when they attack. - A Link to the Past (talk) 04:34, 5 November 2005 (UTC)


 * Kind of short - refer to Peer Review. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus Talk 19:10, 6 November 2005 (UTC)