Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/Peerage/archive1

Peerage

 * Peerage - Partial self-nomination: several others have contributed, but I have just rewritten some parts of the article. I think that it provides a good, comprehensive consideration of the Peerage. -- Emsworth 22:44, Feb 14, 2004 (UTC)
 * Second. -- Kaihsu 20:20, 2004 Feb 15 (UTC)
 * Although I've worked on this article some, I think Emsworth's thorough-going revision is excellent, and this'd be a good choice for featured article. john 09:59, 16 Feb 2004 (UTC)
 * The body of the article is ready. The introduction needs work. The language of the opening parahraph needs to clearly lay out the concepts and history in easy-to-understand descriptions. If it takes two or three paragraphs to do so, that is ok. I'd help out, but I am naive on the subject at hand. Kingturtle 20:14, 21 Feb 2004 (UTC)
 * I have revised the introduction; please inform me if it is inadequate. -- Emsworth 21:51, Feb 21, 2004 (UTC)
 * OK, I support it now. Kingturtle 22:17, 21 Feb 2004 (UTC)