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Science fiction on television
I found this a few weeks ago and it impressed me with its lenght and coverage. Now I think I brought it up to our FAC standards (lead, references, etc.). There seem to be no further comments on peer review for almost 2 weeks, so I would like to hear what you have to say about it. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus Talk 10:55, 15 Apr 2005 (UTC)


 * Comment I see subheadings in the section on Japanese productions, but no subheadings under the much longer American, and even longer yet British production sections. slambo 11:17, Apr 15, 2005 (UTC)


 * Mild Object until the article has been NPOV'd (most importantly in the lead section). plattopusis this thing on? 14:03, Apr 15, 2005 (UTC)


 * Object - content coverage not balanced (detail-wise). Please create UK television science fiction, move the ==British television science fiction== section there and leave a 8-12 paragraph summary of that here. Subsectioning is also needed per slambo's comment (not too many though). --mav 14:18, 15 Apr 2005 (UTC)


 * Object - needs many more subheadings. The "US television science fiction" section is too large considering that there is a main article for that aspect and should be further summarised.  Needs NPOV (example: "As of 2005, there seems to be some degree of optimism for the future of the genre in the UK, with good reason"). Some comments need backing up with references (example: "The most significant US science fiction television series of the early 1980s...").  There are also many repeated links – I lost count on the number of times Doctor Who was wiki'd. violet/riga (t) 21:09, 15 Apr 2005 (UTC)